Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2016 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I so agree with the other reviewers. If only Brian had given Justin that rose bouquet. Both he and Justin would have like "who's Ian?" Great job on the way you handled this unpopular episode of the show.
Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
yes, brian should have done that to justin. beautiful story. thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I like that you all liked it, I intend to write something new soon.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2015 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was so great, just what Justin needed... Anything to put Ethan out of Justin's mind and bed...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: That was my intention :)
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2015 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
You know I always wondered what would have happened if Brian had of been romantic and bought the flowers for Justin. You created a lovely little scene.
Thank you for a nice read ;)
xoxo
Author's Response: It's pretty simple, every single thought of Ethan would leave Justin's mind immediately, which is what happened here. Thanks for your comment!
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2015 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you for the story, Astrid! Canon Brian had been so close to doing the right thing and I wanted to shake him when he walked away from the flowers. I'm so glad you fixed things. Love it!
Author's Response: Oh, nice to see you here! Yeah, I wanted to punch him in the face for not buying them, stubborn... twat. I was angry at him all the time during the last episodes of 2nd season for not doing a single little thing to prevent the disaster.
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
The pivotal to buy or not to buy moment. ;) This was sweet. Thank you for sharing and welcome to MW. *Hugs* -Mandi
Author's Response: Yeah, it was almost a life-or-death decision for him ;) Thanks for your welcoming, I've been here for quite a while as reader and I'm planning to stay, I became kind of addicted to MW :)
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice story! :) thanks
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2015 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah. Why couldn't the writers have done this? It ould have made all the difference to Justin. This was great! Time for you to continue with your writing!
Author's Response: Probably because the show needed much drama and cliffhangers and such stuff, to made viewers wait anxiously what happens next. And let's face it, we love B&J not because they were blissfully happy all the time, because that would be boring, but because they went to hell and back to be together. But in their dramas I still prefer things like cancer or Justin's coming out issues than this whole Ethan issue.
Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
First of all, welcome to Midnight Whispers. I hope you enjoy your time here with fellow QAF fans.
*Review edited by admin
To: Dido_MagnaCarta,
To the letter of the law, you didn't break any rules about reviews.
In the spirit of helping new writers, this review got way too heavy, and would have better served the author with a private message.
~bob, senior admin, whispers
Author's Response:
@Dido_MagnaCarta Thanks for your comment, I read it before it was deleted. I don't think it was inappropiate, it's actually good, I think, to get some technical constructive criticism especially because 1. I'm new at writing 2. English is not my first language so writing in it is not that easy for me, but I want to do it well. So I don't see any problem here.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aw sweet thank you very much
Author's Response: You're welcome ;)
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: These comments really make me smile :)
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, I loved it! Beautiful, rather realistic story, I believe this Brian, I believe it could have very easily happened this way in the show. This moment always breaks my heart, and you managed to show well Brian's inner turmoil, his confusion, his anxiety. He loves Justin so much, he doesn't want to lose him.
And Justin was amazing too - so real, so Sunshin-y, genuine and loving.
Thank you for a wonderful story, I hope to see more from you!
Author's Response: I tried to keep it as realistic as possible, not over-sweet, so I'm happy you see it in this way. I also think it could have happened on the show, I watched the scene by the flower stand once again and observed the expression on Brian's face then - he was internally struggling, and he seemed to almost have made the decision about buying the flowers when suddenly his inner guard cut him out from the idea. Too bad.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Like it? I loved it. If only this was the way it had played out.
Author's Response: I wish that too, but at least we can write our own versions. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2015 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Welcome to MW. We can always use new stories. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a great take on the non-expressive Brian. He didn't have to say anything or even go out of his way to make Justin happy. Hopefully he learned a lesson. Really enjoyed your story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I didn't want Brian to say too much, I thought it was definitely too early for the big three words, and what he said was enough anyway.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thanks for posting your story on Midnight Whispers, Astrid, and a slightly belated welcome to the site! Wish it had happened this way on the show.;) Enjoyed this; thank you. ~Kim
Author's Response: I also wish the roses scene on the show went this way, that's why I wrote it. Thank you for you feedback!
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