Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Don't play games

I was really into your story. Please consider updating for us.

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2015 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: Don't play games

Don't leave us hanging .... Come back finish the story please

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2014 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Hustling

Hey, where are you? Did you abandon your story? It would really be a pity, I enjoyed it a lot. Please write a new chapter soon :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2014 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: Don't play games

Read the first 5 chapters. Interesting, OOC Brian (he eats real food). Nice banter between Brian and Justin. Good writing, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Don't play games

I like how they are not smarting off as much. Brian went out of his way to discourage the creep and Justin thanked him nicely. Got him so worked up he forgot his omelet. Haha.

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: I don't need to be hurt again

It's going to be a good story, I'm sure! Can't wait to see the sexual tension.. released :) Please don't make us wait too long.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: I don't need to be hurt again

Sometimes Justin can outBrian Brian. Will he jump Brian?

Reviewer: kfan (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2014 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: I don't need to be hurt again

I WANT TO SAY I AM ENJOYING BOTH OF YOUR STORIES. THE ARGUMENTS BETWEEN THEM AND THE SEXUAL TENSION IS ALMOST AS EXCITING AS THE ACT ITSELF. ONE SMALL DETAIL IF YOU DON'T MIND, I THINK YOU MAY HAVE MEANT TO SAY BRIAN TOOK JUSTIN PACK OF CIGARETTES INSTEAD OF A CARTON. ( 1-CARTON= 10 PACKS)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Games

And here I thought I was the only one who didn't read what they'd written. lol. You've got a nice way with banter. I'm thinking that Brian won't be leaving soon?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Class A-asshole

I'm disappointed in Deb, afterall Brian offered to let him stay the night, feed him and to get him tested. If he didn't care for Justin's safety he wouldn't have done that. But I like that she took Justin in without trying to contact his parents. Nicely done

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2014 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Hustling

I like this. However Justin is not very smart, free advice and food are not something to sneeze at. One question - you have him standing up and pulling his pants up, when did they come down?

Author's Response:
OOPS :P I worte this part in two separate days and didn't go back to read what I already wrote. Sorry :-/

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2014 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Hustling

Nice touch. Justin as a hustler with an attitude. Can't get no better. Always a pleasant to read a good story. Please continue.

Reviewer: hrisi235 (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2014 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Class A-asshole

A really nice begining of your story, hope you continue it. I read the first two chapters of it together and enjoyed it very much, although some moments seemed to me a little bit unrealistic. Nevertheless, I find the fic very interesting and would love to read more of your work ^_^

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