Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2024 06:11 PM · On: Washed Away
I'm sad this story is unfinished because it's really good. But I'm glad it ended with Gus and Justin addressing that issue. It didn't end with a lack of closure.
Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2024 12:27 PM · On: Avoidance
😢
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2023 08:42 PM · On: Washed Away
Another masterpiece of a fiction
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2023 03:15 PM · On: Washed Away
Another masterpiece of a fiction
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 12:43 PM · On: Washed Away
I enjoyed your series so much. It would be great to read an update. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2019 07:38 AM · On: Washed Away
Just read the series for the first time......why didn’t you finish it?..
Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2016 01:45 AM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Just finished reading the series and I love it. Please update soon. :-) Thanks ~Ally
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 12:35 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
I have just finished re-reading this whole series and am reminded how captivating it is. I really hope you update this story again soon:-)
Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2016 03:57 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Hi! When 're you going to update? I miss this fic you know... Ii's so beautiful... Happy new Year by the way. I hope to read you again soooooon!
Author's Response: I plan to get back to this story soon! Real life has gotten in the way, but hopefully you will see an update within a month or so.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2015 09:56 PM · On: Washed Away
Your "One Heartbeat Away" series is wonderful. I just discovered them yesterday and immediately wolfed them down.
It's touching to see Gus maturing and reconnecting with Justin. I do worry about angst ahead with Gus and drugs. I'm wondering if Sap will reappear or if Hobbs will be involved.
Can't wait for more when RL permits. Many thanks for this series!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you've been enjoying the series, and I appreciate the review :))). Gus's issues will be addressed as soon as I get a chance to write the next chapter. I hope to get it done soon, so stay tuned!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 09:03 AM · On: Washed Away
A wonderful update. I love how perfectly you depicted feelings between Brian and Justin – they understand each other right away, from a single glance alone, without words. It’s good that they shared with Gus a story about what happened at the prom. It was undoubtedly painful but necessary – Gus’s reaction proves it. Maybe now he’ll feel even closer to Justin.
Brian’s guilt still haunts him, obviously – it’s heartbreaking. So many years have passed, but it hasn’t changed the way he feels. Maybe with Justin and Gus he will finally find his peace?
It’s upsetting that Justin had a nightmare – I guess it’s because of the conversation in the evening. It’s understandable but still sad. I’m glad both Brian and Justin assured Gus he isn’t to blame – I like Gus more and more, he finally opens up a little. And – he wants to bring someone home? Wow!:) I *love* when Brian embarrasses him, even though it can be so uncomfortable.
I’m still a little angry with Brian for how he treated Justin in the past – how he ruined everything between them when Justin was in NY. I look forward to seeing what he will say to Gus!
Thank you for a great chapter!
Author's Response: So much angst, I know, but it's all coming together. Will it stay that way? I'm happy you're enjoying it. Thanks for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2015 09:59 AM · On: Washed Away
I'm glad they explained things to Gus. And that he is excepting Justin. Great chapter. Thanks for the update. Btw I love asparagus, gonna eat the white one tonight. Yummie.
* hugs *
Author's Response: LOL! Hope you enjoyed it. As always, thanks for your nice comments, Marny. Hugs!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2015 08:56 AM · On: Washed Away
Just so you know, I'm with Gus, I hate asparagus too!
It's been a couple of hard chapters for the boys, I'm glad you included their love and strength also.
Author's Response: I hate it too LOL! I thought it would be funny. The chapter needed a little relief. Thanks for your kind review!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2015 08:27 AM · On: Washed Away
Oh what a wonderful chapter Brian and Justin actually sharing with Gus the horrific events after the prom
Author's Response: It was so hard for them, but I'm glad they shared it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2015 01:39 AM · On: Washed Away
Finally...our boys are making some real progress toward healing.
Author's Response: Yes! Thanks for your comments, Jazz :)
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2015 01:20 AM · On: Washed Away
i like the Brian and Justin told Gus about the prom but what I liked the most was Gus and Justin talking at the end that was just a special moment they won't ever forget
Author's Response: Yeah, I enjoyed writing that one. They're getting more comfortable with each other, and that can only be good! Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2015 11:49 PM · On: Washed Away
It's so wonderful to see this story again. Very nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Dian Kilborn (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2015 12:14 AM · On: Memories
I can't wait for the next installment. Gus's reaction to Justin being bashed...Gus getting in trouble with drugs & what Brian & Justin do about it...It's a lovely story about the continuing love between Justin & Brian. Thank you for thinking of it.
Author's Response: No, thank you for reading it! It's a lot of angst, I know, but the boys can handle it :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 05:27 PM · On: Memories
I hope Ashley can talk Gus out of doing something stupid. Pff boys.
Poor Justin, his past is coming back grrr. But wauwww I need the next chapter, want to read what an angry Justin has to say.
Great story, thanks for writing.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Marny! I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2015 05:02 PM · On: Memories
Thank you for asking.
I think there are two main reasons I find it troubling.
First, I want happy endings, and, second, I like 'nice' people.
Drug dealers are not nice people, and to have Gus be one is upsetting.
And, it makes it harder to see where a happy ending could come from, short of a magical 'and it was all fixed and no one was hurt' scenario.
You even have Ash voicing concerns along these lines.
Author's Response: I can see what you're saying. I like to write about imperfect people, people with inner flaws. I like to poke at their demons and see how they react, and how they got that way. Justin and Brian have plenty of these, and Gus has some himself. As the story progresses, I hope to explore this. Why does he deal? How does he resolve whatever drives him? There's a reason for it, I promise. I admit that not everyone I write about is nice, but it's life, yes?
Thanks for responding! I appreciate your thoughts, and I hope you continue reading.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 08:07 AM · On: Memories
Darn that Chris Hobbs. I hope you have something planned that will fry him good. It's nice to see Gus caring.
Author's Response: Beneath all that teenage bluster, Gus is a good kid. But he's not perfect, as you shall see. And Hobbs? We aren't done with him yet, I'm afraid. More to come soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2015 06:47 AM · On: Memories
This story troubles me, I find it hard to read.
That being said, it is well written, and the characters are canon.
I hope there is a happy ending.
Author's Response: Well, now I'm curious! What troubles you about it? If it helps, I never write a sad ending. I've read some very good stories that ended with tears, but I hate writing them. These characters live in my head, and I would hate to carry around that kind of sadness. I promise the ending won't disappoint.
I'm glad you think the characters are canon. I try so hard to imagine them ten years older and portray them accurately. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 05:50 AM · On: Memories
Poor Brian so much drama and emotion for him to handle. Luckily he and Justin have each other.
Author's Response: Yes! They are a pair of drama queens aren't they? LOL!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 05:39 AM · On: Acceptance
Happy to see that Gus is considering giving Justin a second chance as long as he and Brina keep their pants on. If Gus tays for very long he might see more than he wants.
Author's Response: So true! Let's hope Brian and Justin can be discreet lol! Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 05:28 AM · On: Grief
Great chapter. Justin really understand Brian and his demons.
Author's Response: He's still learning about them, since Brian's not exactly forthcoming. But he cares and that's all that matters. I'm glad you liked this chapter.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 02:40 AM · On: Memories
Wow what a brilliant chapter so much angst and now we have the debrief time together. I am looking forward to this chapter as much as I enjoyed this one
Author's Response: I am too lol! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 11:39 PM · On: Memories
Oh no....what an awful place to leave us lol. I wonder how Gus will react once he hears Justin’s story.
Author's Response: Sorry! I try not to leave cliffhangers, but it felt like a good place to pause. I hope you liked the chapter :)
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2015 12:05 PM · On: Acceptance
I loved this chapter as much as I did the previous one. The sex was probably amazing but yeah, rough if it left so many bruises on Justin’s skin. And still – this was what Brian needed. It brought him relief, it made the pain lessen. I admire Justin for his strength and his brilliant mind. Impressive, really.
I loved how Brian was feeling upset because of the bruises – protective Brian is my favorite :) Along with the jealous one. The next scene with Brian ‘apology’ was very hot – ah, I wish I could see it on the screen! Passionate and intense.
Brian’s conversation with Gus was heartbreaking but very much needed. You showed their emotions in an amazing way – I’m ecstatic to see that now Gus seems to soften to Justin.
Great update, as always!
Author's Response: Thanks for both your reviews, Sev! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I am. Wasn't sure people would understand about the rough sex scene, about what it really was about, but I think they did. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2015 11:56 AM · On: Grief
Very realistic chapter and very emotional – that funeral scene was really powerful, it shocked me. So intense! You are truly talented.
---you’re still gay? You’re still a thief?--- hah, that was hilarious!:) So ‘Brian’, I couldn’t stop laughing. Even to sad chapters you bring something funny.
Justin was wonderful, he knows for sure what Brian needs and what he has to do to support him.
When Brian interrupted the funeral… yes, it was something. I froze myself – a very real and chilling moment, it covered me with goose-bumps. Brian probably did the right thing – he had to say the truth at least in this very last moment, in front of everyone. Joan was a shitty mother and she knew it – I guess that is why she made up that bullshit about her protecting Brian against Jack. If she had really been doing it, Brian would have worshipped her! But he only feels betrayal and resentment. I almost cried at this, you described everything so beautifully, brokenheartedly sadly. Perfect chapter! Thank you for making me feel so much.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2015 04:37 AM · On: Acceptance
Yay! Finally Gus is wishing up.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, he is :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2015 01:17 AM · On: Acceptance
Really enjoying this story, and the emotion you evoke in your writing. Glad that Brian had Justin to rely upon, and that Brian and Gus talked. Also glad that Gus's feelings are changing regarding Justin's love for his dad. Looking forward to reading the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim :). Means a lot to me that people are enjoying this!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2015 10:51 PM · On: Acceptance
Just read the last two chapters. I'm glad Brian told Gus his story. Love how Gus will give Justin a chance. And that last sentence LOL.
Love how you write. thanks
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks, Marny! I hope it continues to be interesting.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2015 06:22 PM · On: Acceptance
Hi, I'm new to this series, just finished reading the older stories, followed by this one.
I am enjoying them. And, I look forward to seeing where you are going with this one.
Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you've been enjoying the series. More to come soon!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2015 05:01 PM · On: Acceptance
This couldn't be more perfect. Especially the last line.
Author's Response: Oh, I loved writing that LOL! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2015 03:27 PM · On: Acceptance
This was a great chapter. I'm glad that Brian was able to talk to Gus about his family and explain why he was so distant and clear up their misunderstandings.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jazz! I liked this chapter. Kinda wrapped things up before moving on.
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2015 12:18 PM · On: Acceptance
Gus is starting to get it not just his father but Justin with Brian and its a good thing
Author's Response: Yes, he is. Let's see how things go :). Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2015 11:26 AM · On: Acceptance
Oh that was great you had Brian break down hisain to Gus and Gus open to Justin I am so happy after reading that chapter 👍👍👍
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! After all the angst, we needed some happy, right?
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2015 06:55 AM · On: Grief
That was a wonderful chapter, beautifully written. The
balancing of so many opposites, acceptance vs anger, calmness
vs. action, plus all the other conflicts too many to mention
was amazing. Sadly though, It doesn’t appear that Gus gets it.
Happy though, Justin does and he is more important than
Gus.
Thanks for the terrific chapter and equally terrific story.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thanks David! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2015 08:09 PM · On: Grief
Very intense chapter. Maybe now that Gus has a little more insight, he can stop acting so spoiled and angry. Hopefully Ben and Michael can talk to him more about his father’s past.
Author's Response: Brian and Gus have a conversation in the next chapter, which I hope will help! Unfortunately, there's a lot that's going to happen during Gus's summer visit, so it's going to be a real up-and-down ride. Hang on! Thanks for the review, Jazz :)
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2015 04:19 PM · On: Grief
Very powerful and wrenchingly beautiful update. Don't know how you got through writing that, but I'm wrung out from reading it.
Author's Response: I actually enjoy deeply emotional chapters, although they also give the most trouble. I'm always afraid of making them too sappy! I'm so glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2015 03:22 PM · On: Grief
I like how you view things through Gus' eyes. The aunt he didn't know and cousins who he wouldn't want to know. I'm also glad the Brian got to say what he wanted to say before Joan was put into the ground. While it was great that Justin was finally able to get through to Brian, I can't help but feel sorry for Gus because he wasn't allowed. The thing is that Brian is always there for everyone else, that he doesn't know how to be there for himself.
Author's Response: Gus and Brian get their moment in the next chapter. I've always imagined Brian burying his childhood so deep, it has to come up sometime, and not peacefully. I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2015 04:12 PM · On: Avoidance
Hi! Even though the pause between the updates seemed endless, it was so worth it. Great chapter, I enjoyed every bit of it. Brian is being so cold and closed off, I wonder why he is ignoring Justin. Doesn’t he know by now that Justin is always there for him, that he’ll do anything – offer support or just go away, considering what Brian needs most in that moment? I wonder if Brian’s going to realize he’s wrong. Or how long Justin will manage to remain patient when Brian disappeared and Gus keeps attacking him.
I understand Gus, I do, but he still annoys me. Maybe that’s because I love Justin so much. Gus doesn’t know him, he’s naturally protective of Brian, but he should have really asked Brian about what happened before jumping to conclusions! I’d be mortified if my partner’s kid hated me, I have no idea how to even deal with it. I can’t wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi Sev! The next chapter should be out sooner since it's already with my beta. Thanks for being so patient!
I love Justin too, and I always kind of considered him to be Brian's savior. He helped Brian to see what real love is. He definitely plays this role in Second Chances, for both Brian and Gus, but I don't want to give anymore away!
Stay tuned :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2015 03:24 AM · On: Avoidance
you make us wait all this time for an update and than leave us with a cliffhanger. That seems pretty cruel. Great story, hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Sorry! I guess I didn't think of it as a cliffhanger. If it helps, the next chapter will be out sooner. The rough draft is already done. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review :)
Reviewer: Me (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2015 07:44 AM · On: Avoidance
I blame Gus mom's and his dad for his action
Author's Response: We shall see how he turns out! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2015 10:53 PM · On: Avoidance
Oh, Dear. Brian definitely needs to get his head out of his ass. I know he has mommy issues, but Justin can be long-suffering only so much. I have a bad feeling about Gus and the "drug dealer." Again, Oh, Dear!
Hope your life gets a little less chaotic, but the RL is what it is. Can't help that.
Stay well!
Author's Response: I have a bad feeling about Gus too! Teenagers can be so misled. All I can say is I never write a sad ending.
Thanks for your support and for taking the time to review. It's appreciated!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2015 04:59 PM · On: Avoidance
Poor Justin. Just what he needs, a sullen, resentful Gus and Brian is nowhere to be found, drowning in his misery and booze.
Author's Response: Brian's pain management leaves a lot to be desired, doesn't it? What he needs is Justin, but will he realize it? Stay tuned!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2015 04:54 PM · On: Avoidance
Where is Brian!? Boy this story is good and I want more!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! All the reviews about Gus have me wondering if people hate it. As for Brian, don't worry. The next chapter focuses on him. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2015 03:08 PM · On: Avoidance
I must say, Brian’s actions really are making Justin look like the bad guy and Gus better get over himself real quick before he finally says or does something to cause a major rift in his father’s relationship.
Author's Response: Hmm . . . teenagers. Always thinking it's about them! I hope Gus doesn't seem too unrealistic LOL. Thanks for your reviews, Jazz :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2015 09:10 AM · On: Avoidance
Argh Gus is such a little shit and that goes for Brian as well lol 👍😄
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for being patient with them and continuing to read!
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2015 08:44 AM · On: Family Matters
Hi, Brynneth! I finally caught up with this wonderful story. I was so excited to see you start a sequel – I usually don’t like stories about Gus, but this is one is increasingly interesting.
I loved how you portrayed Brian and Justin’s relationship. Somehow you made it clear that they’ve been apart for too long, that they had history and still love each other, but their relationship now is half new. They are getting used to having each other again, but the tenderness and love between them is palpable.
I was pleasantly surprised they chose to be monogamous! It’s time. But I think this issue might still prove to be problematic because Gus has brought a lot of negativity along with him, and some of it may result in problems between Brian and Justin. Gus reminded me of the reason I’m hesitant to have children. I’d be ready to kill such a brat! Coke, strange friends, disrespect, rudeness… oh my. He is beyond difficult. Poor Justin, it must feel awful to have your partner’s son hate you... and poor Brian – it’ll be unbelievably hard to remain calm and collected between two people who mean most to him!
Claire is a bitch, I was always astounded at how she was asking for help and insulting Brian simultaneously. It’s heartbreaking to think of a person like Brian growing up in that house. And he still hoped that his mother would come around… it’s sad. I hope Brian will let Justin help him – I’m angry at him for saying Justin shouldn’t come to the funeral. I understand why, but I’m still angry. The atmosphere in Britin is getting more and more tense.
Thank you for a wonderful story, Brynneth! I saw you mentioned you’ve written many Dragon Age stories – where can I find them?
Thanks again – I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi Severus! Good to hear from you again! Thanks for all your kind words :). I admit I'm making Gus look pretty horrible, but I promise there's a reason and all will be understood eventually.
All my works, including Dragon Age, can be found here: http://archiveofourown.org/users/Brynneth/pseuds/Brynneth. Most of my Dragon Age stories are M/M. I hope you enjoy them!
Hugs!
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Family Matters
great three chapters. so much anger everywhere. brian nneds to rebond with gus. smart justin for calling in the troops instead of getting hurt feelings
Author's Response: Thank you! It's going to be a difficult summer for all, but I never write a sad ending :)
Reviewer: Meme (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2015 04:45 AM · On: Family Matters
let me just say I can not stand a bad ass teen. Just saying, will comment more later.
Author's Response: I can't either, and they are everywhere LOL! Hang in there . . . you'll find out why out Gus is acting the way he is. Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2015 11:13 PM · On: Family Matters
Now I'm even more confused than ever...what is Gus' problem with Justin? I can understand a little teenage angst, but he's pushing it a bit...especially with that comment about Brian and Justin fucking.
Author's Response: I swear there truly is a legitimate reason for the hostile demeanor, and it will be addressed, but not until later. He's being a real smartass, isn't he? I think you'll figure it all out before it's actually revealed :). Thanks for the review, and I hope you continue to follow!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2015 10:50 PM · On: Family Matters
Glad to see this again. I'm sorry to see that Gus had something against Justin. What a surprise to see that Claire showed up and to find out that Joanie was dead. Somehow I can't see St. Peter letting her past the pearle gates. So looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: I can't see it either, so we'll leave that aspect of the story to the imagination. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Family Matters
Wow this was a heavy chapter! Poor Brian! Justin will deinitely have his hands full with Gus. I havent quite figured out why Gus is hating him so much.
Author's Response: There is a reason for his animosity toward Justin, and it will come out later, I promise. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2015 06:41 PM · On: Family Matters
Brian sure has a lot going on in his life, dead mother, troubles son, worried lover. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you continue to enjoy it :)
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Gus
I hope you write more of this story your a great writer I would like see if gus and Justin become friends and brian and gus bond before he returns to Canada I like to how the rest of this story and see gus to learn a good listen and be a good boy again
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Gus
I hope you write more of this story your a great writer I would like see if gus and Justin become friends and brian and gus bond before he returns to Canada I like to how the rest of this story and see gus to learn a good listen and be a good boy again
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Gus
I hope you write more of this story your a great writer I would like see if gus and Justin become friends and brian and gus bond before he returns to Canada I like to how the rest of this story and see gus to learn a good listen and be a good boy again
Author's Response: Chapter three is being edited and will be out soon I hope :). Thanks for letting me know you're still interested!
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2015 02:04 PM · On: Gus
Just read the whole thing and I gotta say that it's really a good story and I enjoyed it immensely. Hope you can update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've been busy with the holidays, but they're over now, so back to work! Chapter three is partially done. Hope to update soon!
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 08:13 AM · On: Gus
Giod storyline. I like rebellious Gus. Sometimes he's just too good a teenager to believe so some rebellion is fun!
Author's Response: I guess from people's comments, he's not usually written as troublesome? In this story, he is! Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Gus
Wow a very different Gus from usual. Very interesting twist to the story. I'm anxious to see what the bad attitude is all about.
Author's Response: Gus, being the typical teenager, has issues LOL! Is he usually portrayed as being sweet and good? I swear I'm going somewhere with this :). Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 11:45 PM · On: Gus
Wow...I wasn't expecting that Gus resented Justin or that he wouldn't want to spend time with Brian...and really what 16yr old doesn't want to earn a little loot lol
Author's Response: True. I don't know many teens who aren't difficult at times, and Gus is no different! The real question is why does Gus resent Justin? It's not what you might think! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 06:35 PM · On: Gus
What an amazing chapter. Will we learn what Gus' problem is? I'm glad that Brian is acting responsible and hopes to be able to repair what damage there might be. Next chapter please.
Author's Response: More to come soon! Glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 10:46 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Interesting start! I like how you kept them IC while still showing how much they care for each other, although Brian was acting a little childish by running off so quickly like he did. I guess squealing the tires is his way of having a temper tantrum - ha!
I'm glad he came back home, and they worked it out. I'm intrigued about Gus, and what he's up to. I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks for posting. ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kim! Brian isn't as secure as he pretends to be, but Justin discovered that long ago :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2014 12:16 AM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
* claps hands * they are "married".
Hope they can Gus straight * sigh *.
Great beginning. Thanks
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Marny, and your banner is awesome! Love it!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 04:28 AM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Great start. Looking forward to more. Hope Gus's issues can be solved during his visit.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2014 11:31 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Thanks for continuing the story. Looking forward to the plot you're knitting ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment!
Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2014 09:50 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Wow I like this can we speed up to. Gus's arrival I think that will be very interesting. Looking forward to more very soon
Author's Response: Gus arrives next chapter. Glad you're liking it :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2014 09:16 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Intriguing concept. I'll be looking forward to each and every chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know there's been many stories about Gus, but hopefully this one is different.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2014 06:57 PM · On: A Nonconventional Marriage
Bodily fluid exchange as a symbol of undying love...very clever indeed. But in a way I can see how their removal of sexual boundaries holds a deeper meaning than brass rings.
And btw: little Gus better not be dealing or using drugs, if so then his ass is grass when his Da gets ahold of him.
Author's Response: I LOL when I read your comment about Gus! Thanks for reading, Jazz, and I hope you enjoy the rest!
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