Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2014 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
I've read and re-read this and each time just loved it. I'm off to read more of your stories. I just can't get enough of them
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2014 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Let's see where you are taken this story. Please continue.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2014 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Another missed opportunity for Brian to say it. If a 2nd chapter is written please include Brian beating the hell out of whoever he is, although I so disliked everything about the Ethan arc I hope it's Ethan he beats up.
Author's Response: :) I'm working on a second chapter, hope to have it posted soon. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like the way this starts out as if it were from the series, then turns into something else. It's a shame that Justin is hurt, but so good to know that he and Brian are okay.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review.
It does start the night that Brian is waiting for Justin to come home, after the bowling game. It just naturally went off canon from there.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
So Sad... Beaten and bruised, but at least he's home now in Brian's arms...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
I truly hope you add another chapter to this wonderful fic, there is so much more to be told.
Author's Response: There just might be. I intended this to be a quick little story. This was not quite the ending I'd planned so I do believe there will be more.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2014 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
there needs to be one more chapter. one where the fiddler or whomever did this gets just what he deserves.
poor brian, so hurt and worried.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
I admit I wasn't going to read this as I don't really like "what if's" useless they go off in to an AU. However, I was pleasantly surprised as this did go in the direction of an AU. I know it sort of symbolizes the Ethan arc, but I liked Ethan and although I understand why the writers had him cheat I was hoping they would kill him off. Could you imagine the turmoil Justin would have faced if he had to admit he didn't really love Ethan, after Ethan had died (dead people are usually held in high esteem by people close to them). However, that wouldn't have fitted the whole purpose of that arc. Sorry, I digress; two things that stood out to me with what you wrote; "while Brian had been home being angry with him" that is such a normal reaction, and "a nice couple's house who found you on the street" this is exactly how you would probably describe someone who helped you. I love the common wording as it gave a realistic feel. Well done.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
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