Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2018 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
Please finish this story completely please
Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2018 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
Please finish this story completely please
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
this story is realy entertaining. Please consider updating it.
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 8
Could you update this story as soon as possible, please?
Reviewer: Dawn (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love this story! Please write more soon i wanna see what happens
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2015 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
You're forgiven LOL :) Loved that part...I can't wait to see the evolution in their relationship now that they're moving. Thanks
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Now a lot of fun things can happen, since they'll be in Pittsburgh together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2015 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love this chapter. How cruel can Craig be to welcome the person who almost killed his son into his home! Of course outing Emmett like that wasn't nice either. It seems that Brian and Justin are finally making headway in this relationship. Can't wait to see how they deal with Pittsburgh.
Author's Response: Yes Craig is an ass. But Emmett outed himself. He told Brian so in the previous chapter. There is definately a lower amount of antagonism between Justin and Brian at this point.
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2015 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh yes, I just love where you are going with this! So darn interesting.
I can't believe Justin's father siding with Hobbs over his own son.
Great chapter! :)
xoxo
Author's Response: Oh there is so much room to play in this story! It's hard to choose what to do next! Craig is definately not seeing how hurtful his actions are. Maybe Justin will eventually find a way to get through to him in the future.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2015 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ummmm...I'm confused here, Justin is going to insure the contract but doesn't want the best man for the job to work the campaign because he's worried about how Craig will feel when Craig obviously could give two shits about his feelings at this point. I mean really??? Forgive the young man who bashed your son in the head and invite him into your home to break bread like nothing ever happened? Why would Craig even think Justin would be okay with that?
Author's Response: I'm sorry if the way I have Justin's actions playing out here doesn't seem very plausible to you. I admit that he contradicts himself, but that's because I wanted to portray his relationship with his father as very complicated, not just black or white. In addition, I wanted an antagonist in this fic who was not written as purely evil. Craig justifies his behavior through his religious beliefs. I imagined that for him, it is easier to find forgivness for a (supposedly repentant) person like Chris, than it is to fully wrap his mind around not only Justin's homosexuality, but his lack of faith as well. And in this story Criag is really the only parent Jusitn has ever known, so even though in many ways he can't stand him, he still loves his father enough to not want to break all ties. Thanks Jazzepoet for telling me in no uncertain terms how you felt about this chapter. I do try to make my writing believable, so even though I'm happy with the story it does bug me that you didn't find it too realistic. Hopefully future chapters will be more to your liking.
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2015 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
The title put me off .. so I ve been slow to give this story a chance but I have to say its 'not bad'. Truth be told .. it's pretty damn good :)
Author's Response: Huh. I'd be interested to know what impression the title gave you? I'm of course glad that you tried it after all and that ou like it :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2015 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
Hi Sarah,
You have me wondering why stubborn Justin is going to change his mind...Can't wait for the next one as always
Author's Response: I have a scenario in mind, but it really won't be anything too huge. More like he has a tantrum with his father and agrees to go.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2015 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
A very interesting chapter. Love Cynthia 'sympathizing' with her boss, how Emmett let Brian in on something he should know, how Daphne makes Justin laugh. I'm hoping that Justin does go to Pittsburgh with Brian, but I can't wait to see how of if you make it happen.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopee it didn't feel like a filler. I wanted to take the opportunity to give a little more information on Justin's past.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2015 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
So, c'mon, Justin . . . Let yourself go with Brian to the Pitts and you can have your nice life without the family drama too! You have the chance for a new life away from Craig. Just stop being too stubborn to see it. Go for it! TAG
Author's Response: I know you'd think Justin would be jumping at the chance to move away, since he's so conflicted at home. He just doesn't like Brian and I think now he has to decide which is the worse of two fates, lol.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2015 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
This thing between Brian and Justin just keeps getting messier by the day. So who's going to give up what? In all honesty, it would serve Brian right to have to stay in Vegas but wouldn't that then turn him into the very thing Justin fears him to be anyway? Maybe Brian is right in this instance and being in the Pitts would be best for them right now...I don’t know though.
Author's Response: Justin is really the one who holds the power over Brian now, hehe. If he did decide to go to Pittsburgh, something would have to happen to push him in that direction.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 6
U got to update this as soon as u can.
Author's Response: Yep. Working on it.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2015 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
LOL I LOVE your story and I can't wait to see them together after this, especially Justin! He is going to be so mad ;) Great job. Can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Hey, so happy to hear that you still like where it's going. More drama to come, and I'm afraid that yes, it will continue to piss poor Justin off.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2015 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
I don't have time now to read this chapter, but I will later.
Happy new year and the best of wishes for 2015.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Okee dokee. Happy new year to you too dear!!
*hugs right back*
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2015 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 6
At this point I'm not sure how or if our boys will ever grow sweet on each other. Needless to say, the Judge really surprised me...but in a good way.
Author's Response: It's gonna take a lot of work, that's for sure. But hey: they DO have some court-mandated therapy coming up, lol.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2015 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love this. Thank you for letting the Judge be so impartial. So glad that Cynthia has shown up. Maybe she can be the voice of reason. Dearly want to know what you have up you sleeve for Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: I;m glad you like it. I wasn't too sure about how realistic the legal aspects were that I wrote, but I'm pretending they're completely realistic, since they will be driving the plot in the direction that I want it to go ;) Cynthia is Brian's bud. She's there to make sure he's not ruining his life, despite what she says.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
I thought this was going to be another typical drunk and married in Las Vegas Fix, but it is anything but. You did write Brian as amoral as your premise described. And Justin is floundering without a Daphne or anyone else he could count on. I don't know who is more despicable, Brian or Craig.
I can't wait for more of this delectable pic.
Author's Response: Oh I'm so pleased you like it! Yes Brian starts off quite a baddie in this one. I like an imperfect Brian, especially an unapologetic one. I agree that it is a hard situaation for Justin wiithout any figure of support, but that should help illustrate just how isolated and unhappy he's always felt at home.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
You've got me wondering how this is going to play out. How does Paster Honeycut come into it? I have to agree that letting Hobbs any Hobbs go through Justin's luggage was uncalled for.
Author's Response: Emmett was an unplanned insertion into the story. I'm not entirely sure just how much of a role he'll have. As it is, Craig runs a household that focuses heavily on church, so any pastor would be a marked figure in the family's life. Emmett coming uot at church was a big part of what led Craig to be a little more accepting of Justin's sexuality. You'll see that Hobbs Sr. is an employee of Craig's, and later I'll write more about how Chris ties into it all. Craig wouldn't know a boundary if it smacked him in the forehead. Thanks for sharing your take on this chapter!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
All I can say is, 'What a MESS!' More please. TAG
Author's Response: A huge mess for Justin. So far so good for Brian.
Reviewer: Dan Kardecck (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2014 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
Eu estou realmente ansioso para ler o resto desta história, então por favor não me deixe 😘😘😘
Author's Response: Okay so I figured out that this is Portuguese :)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. More coming soon.
Reviewer: Dan Kardecck (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2014 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Nossa eu Estou amando o Seu Trabalho, continue ASSIM, NÃO Pará e de escrever e Muito obrigado por me dar essa historia 😘😘😘
Author's Response: Not to worry. I am very much attached to this story and will not put it on hiatus or anything like that.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2014 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm still enjoying this story and looking forward to more.😀
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
Okay...I have finally gotten my jumbled thoughts together and now know what to say.
First, I must say how impressed I am with how well Craig is handling everything. It's refreshing to have a substantially more understanding Craig for a change. Secondly...try as I might, I just can't picture Emmett as a pastor, it just seems too out of character for him to be in such a position. I guess the question I have is, is Emmett like Reverend Thom? Or is he a completely straight heterosexual Pastor Emmett? Either way I still love him no matter what.
Now on to Mr. Kinney...at the risk of sounding all holier-than-thou lol, as much as I've tried to forgive Brian for his transgressions, I just can't...at least not right now. I know he will redeem himself at some point but we'll just have to cross that bridge when we get to it ;) I really hope I haven't offended you in any way with my review as it is not my intention. So please feel free to tell me to back the hell off if I have stepped on your toes or crossed the line.
Author's Response: Craig is a very competant man in some ways, and very incompetant in others. He is good at business and therefore at taking control of situations and fixing problems (hence his relatively cool head when Brian comes in announcing that he's married Justin). But Craig can also be illogical. He makes a mountain out of a molehill with Justin's decisions regarding school and travel, yet he minimizes the real problem (this marriage) because it bothers him less than other things. In this fic, Craig is a person who is not mean or bad on prupose, but often is disliked by other characters because of how he reacts to things. Like other characters in this fic, he is... complicated.
Emmett is a flamboyantly gay pastor in this. He hasn't been around enough yet for you to see that, though it was mentioned that he was gay in a previous chapter. I'll admit Emmett was inserted on a whim. He is not one of the more complicated characters.
I am not upset by your feelings about Brian. I've done nothing to make him seem sympathetic to the reader so far. He really is not being a noble person right now. This thing he's done to Justin marks the lowest of the low that he's ever done for personal gain. There is nothing redeeiming about the way he's acting now, so I'm making no excuses for him. If I'm a good writer you'll start to like him later, but right now it is definately not required or expected for anyone to be on TeamBrian.
Thanks for your thoughtful and honest review! It's much appreciated :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2014 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hi Sarah, me again, just to say I'm sorry if I appeared to be too eager to know what comes next, you should never have to apologize for my impatience! It's just that like you already know, I really love this, but that' s not an excuse. Take all the time you need and write it the way you want. I know firsthand how RL can be time consuming. And BTW, I like Craig here. He's different from the show and that makes this story even more interesting to me. Thank you again
Author's Response: No worries. I compulsively respond to every review I get and try to actually adress whatever the person is saying. I'm glad you like the different portrayal of Craig though!
Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2014 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 5
sigh... I love this! Emmet as a pastor LOL you're evil! And I absolutely love the scene with Craig. One thing I hate... It's too short :) thank you for this great story
Author's Response: I could not resist sticking Emmett in such a role, lol. Craig is very unusual person in this one, who acts in very unusual ways. I hope he isn't too unbelievable for most readers as this fic goes on. Sorry it was too short for your liking. The ending was abrupt, I'll admit. But I'm on to writing the next chapter.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2014 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hmmmm...not really sure what to say...I'll have to ponder this chapter a bit more and choose my words carefully.
Author's Response: Okee dokie.
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2014 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
I am really interested to see where this goes!
What a great story so far.
Keep it up! ;)
xoxo
Author's Response: I can't wait to show you what happens! I'm glad you like how it's going. Thanks!
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2014 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
I fully support.Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2014 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hi Sarah! Oh, you're evil lol. I love this chapter, the humor, Brian is such an asshole but he is irresistible at the same time. Justin's reaction when he finally understand what's happening is priceless. He sure is in for a good adventure ;)
I really love your style, but you already know it. I'm eagerly waiting for your next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hey Alois, thanks for another review and for checking out this new story. Brain reeeally pushes the limits of morality in this fic. He's done the most outrageous thing! So yeah this relatively normal guy Justin is now going to have to deal with him. Their relationship is off to a very interesting start! I plan for them to go through a lot more (the marriage is only the beginning in this fic), so sit tight and see what's to come. I hope everyone who reads this can suspend disbelief for a little while with some of the plot elements. This whole story is an outrageous circumstance, so nothing is meant to go typically. Glad you're reading this story too :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2014 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 4
Aha! Brian admitted he married Justin for his father's money. Is tell Justin's father the right thing to do?
Author's Response: Yeah, weird huh? Who would expect him to admit so soon what he's up to? How will he get away with this? Why would he ever want to go now and see Craig? Brian's behavior is certainly at an odds with what you'd expect, but you'll see more how things play out in the next chapter. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2014 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
This was a fun read! At first, I thought I would be outraged by Brian's behavior towards Justin, but I'm not. You have made this very entertaining. Brian's response and Jusin's outrage is great! I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Funny how we always allow Brain to get away with stuff that we'd kill others for. huh? Lol. That happened all the tiime on the show. I just tried to picture how each of these two would react in the QAF 'verse while writing the "morning after" scene. I'm glad you found it entertaining!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
Honestly, I'm not liking this Brian too much. I really thought he would reconsider taking this road and bamboozling Justin into marriage. And to add insult to it all, he was completely sober while taking advantage of a intoxicated young man.
I want our boys together but not at this level of deceit. I just hope the whole thing doesn't backfire on Brian. Suffice it to say that I will definitely keep reading to see how things develop.
Author's Response: I'm sorry my Brian in this story turrns you off. Personally, I enjoy writing a Brian with few and/or unusual morals. I like to make him do outrageous things and see how this makes others around him react. I think it makes for an interesting story. Of course the most awful part of what Brian has done is that he tricked Justin in to marriage WHILE SOBER. That act is nearly predatorial, I'll admit. But I don't intend for Brian and Justin to be best buds for the whole of this story. There needed to be be a fair degree of animosity between them to drive the plot forward in this one, and I dare say that I've created it ;) Hopefully as things go along, you'll come to like the feel of the story more. I appreciate your honest comments and the fact that you still took the time to leave a nice review, even though the story might not be going the way you want right now. Thanks Jazz!
Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2014 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
you never fail to surprize me do you?
first you surprize me with brian's marriage scheme... then wheni thought hes gonna play along you make Brian tell Justin the truth -_-
well no matter... i hope Justin is extremely hard to convince. Abd does'nt just agree with Brian .
Author's Response: Oh I didn't stop to think which direction you guys might be expecting this to go in. I'm actually happy that I surprised you again though :) Brian isn't so evil that he would fake loving someone. So yeah he's told Justin the truth. Doesn't mean he has to tell everone else the truth though *rubs hands together evily* Justin is mucho pissed off at Brian. He isn't about to sit back and just take this.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2014 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Loving the devious plot device. Although I suspect Brian's the one who's gonna get caught in his own schemes! More please. TAG
BTW, Las Vegas is in Nevada, not Arizona - in case you want to change that in your story. 😉
Author's Response: What's not to love about devious Brian? Lol. You will see soon how this all goes down for him...
And OH MY GOD!!! How did I type that mortifying inaccuracy AND THEN post it to the internet??!!! I will change it immediately. Oh my how embarassing.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love this! Can't wait for more:) thank you
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading so far!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow now this is a win at any cost Brian. This will be interesting
Author's Response: Yeah Brian is willing to do even this. You;ll learn more later about how obsessed he is with winning.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 3
Please tell me that Brian isn't really going to stoop this low...because unethical doesn't even begin to describe his actions if he does.
Author's Response: Um... maybe he... IS. Oh yes, just wait and see how low he can go, haha. Don't worry, Justin will tell him how terrible he is soon enough ;)
Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
O M G !! If thats what Brian is gonna do im gonna hate n love him ... awww my poor Justin . please update soon and please keep Craig a good father. its been a while i saw justin with an accepting father
Author's Response: Brian is definately not making good choices in this fic, but he isn't eveil either, which makes the ensuing drama so much fun! Craig is kind of liek a very misguided, yet somehow well-intentioned father in this fic. So you won't see Craig going all evil and nasty as he usually does.
Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2014 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
Another great update. I look forward to seeing how Brian pulls this off and what Justin does when he finds out. Bad, bad Brian.
Author's Response: I know I looove a wicked Brian! Bad indeed. It is actually very simple how Brian marries Justin, and Justin is... well you'll see his reaction at the very beginning of the next chapter :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
Like the turn this story is taking. I would guess Brian's loss of hearing was courtesy of good ole Jack? Boy is Craig going to be in for a surprise. Mayhaps Brian will decide to remake Babylon? Need to make this story one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Yes now the story realy kicks off! There will be some crazy arguing in the next chapter, get ready! I am surprised that you teased out the hearing loss thing so easily. But yes, that will be brought up again and you'll see why I stuck that detail about Brian's ear in there. It's just a way that I'm fleshing out his character in this story. Craig is going to be shocked, but it will be an interesting contrast I think, when you see his reaction vs. Justin's :) Please do feel free to favorite! Yay!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
As usual, you weave a very intriguing tale, Sarah, and you are so good at keeping them IC. I do look forward to your detailed, well-written stories.;)
I have to admit I sort of winced at the 'poor, black neighborhood' reference in the first chapter; I would have probably preferred just a 'low income' reference instead. I know; a minor detail, but it sort of made me pause for some reason. Hope you don't mind me mentioning that.
Anyway, looking forward to their initial meeting, and the battle of wills that I suspect will soon ensue! Thanks for posting. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I hesitated at the 'poor, black neighborhood' bit too. I almost changed it to low income or something of that ilk to avoid the possibility of sounding racist or something like that, but in the end I went with it to showcase the fact that despite his chiding of Brian, Gardner isn't any more politically correct or big-hearted than his employee. I thought that Gardner's un- p.c. use of those words would show that he too is shallow and only cares about image, not truely about the costs of capitalism. I do apologize if this was disturbing to you. Hopefully you'll see througout my writing that the use of such phrasing is not typical for me.
I appreciate your honest comments. That really means a lot to me and definately makes me feel like you really pay attention when you read my stories. This is, of course, hugely flattering. I'm glad to see you're giving this new, bannerless fic a shot. I may have to ask Marny for ANOTHER banner. She's so good at them!
*Hugs* ~Sarah
Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2014 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting angle with Craig in this fic. I like it and look forward to the first interaction between Brian and Justin. 😉
Author's Response: Thank you. He definately isn't portrayed as the usual evil, conniving bad guy in this one. He has an odd personality and a complicated relationship with Justin.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
I can see I misspoke. I should have said I hope that Brian gets his promotion. Whether he does or not, I can see there is much to enjoy about this tale. So Justin will be in charge of Babylon? There may be changes that Craig might not approve if Justin does accept the position his father wants him in. Craig looks not to be a complete asshole. I will definately enjoy looking forward to your future chapters!!!
Author's Response: Hi Yumyum! I may have used an exclamation point in my last reply but that doesn't mean I was upset! I totally get your comments and always appreciate them! Justin doesnt yet know that he now has legal ownership of the Babylon, but even when he finds out that will mostly reamin a legal technicallity, which will be a central plot point later on! And if Craig is an asshole, it certainly isn't intentional! Craig is really just a misguided, rich bafoon in this fic! Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
I've said it already but I can't help but say it again. I LOVE the way you write. There is something unique that I can't quite identified, but what's sure is, I really can't wait for your next update. I'm begging you to hurry lol. Thank you
Author's Response: Thanks so much Alois. Your comments mean the world to me and it is very nice to hear that you're eager for the next chapter. I'll post as soon as I can.
Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
OKAYYY !!
so you've got my attention now ... now i want more *rubbing hands in anticipation*
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
Can Craig be any more pretentious or delusional? But what does his stellar memory really mean for Brian? Hopefully this is where Justin can help.
Author's Response: That's a good way of describing Craig in this fic. He doesn't always mean bad, but his ceerfulness doesn't make up for the way he winds up treating those around him. He's basically a big bafoon in this story. Justin is going to be the key to Brian's success, because Criag would turn Brian away just like the other man if he tried a direct approach.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2014 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing start! Love your writing style, and I've said it already, but I love your characterization. Thank you :)
Author's Response: I work hard on my characters so I'm pleased that you notice, and approve. Can't wait to give you all the next chapter, which will ratchet up the action and really get us into this story!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
This looks to be very interesting. Brian being refused his partnership until he gets the Taylor account. Deep down we know he'll get the account, but what sort of hoops will he have to jump through. Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: Um, you totally don't now anything! Lol, but really maybe this story won't go the way you think. And if it does, then yes there will certainly be many hoops. Thanks for reading YumYum!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2014 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start...hope the ride isn't too angsty ;)
Author's Response: Shouldn't be. I plan to make humor out of the angsty elements of this story.
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good first chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Your writing is very imaginative and detailed. Read the words and saw the images in my head. I loooove it when this happens. To me, that is the making of a good story.
Love
Soirsa
Author's Response: Oh wow, what a nice compliment. Thank you and I'm so happy you felt that way while reading.
Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a great first chapter! I'm looking forward to more. 😄
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the start.
Reviewer: toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh! A shiny new fic, YAY! Somehow, I don't think Brian is going to have an easy time getting that Taylor Hotel contract... and something tells me Justin is going to be the reason!
Nice start... looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Or maybe Justin will make it all too easy... Haha, can't wait to show you. Thanks for reviewing on the first chapter and I'm glad you like the start!
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