Reviewer: chenlixiang (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2017 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
great idea and story
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: thank you for reading
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 5
Okay I'm totally confused. Is Sebby a he or a she?
Author's Response: lol he was born into a womans body but he is a man
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hey Jeremy :)
I love your fic, but I am a little confused. Is Gus the only one that knows Sebby is a girl? I ask because you still refer to her/she as him/he.
I like your ending as it really does depict the first move in to an apartment from the family home.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: i really just had to end it cause i had no idea of where to go after the last one so i just let them move in together and have a happy ending
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
I LOVE this. What a great message. It is who you love and the gender doesn't matter, it is how you feel about the person. I absolutely love the way you have portrayed this and although Gus was a little slow at picking up on the fact Sebby is a girl it just seem to make the realization even less important to him. Bravo.
Also, although I don't want this to end I think your message is clearly received so it is great that you know when to end the fic. Thank you so much for writing this.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: thank you so much and i'm so happy that you love it as much as you do the last chapter will be up some time next month
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 4
So Sebby is Sabrina? Nice!
Author's Response: i never saw anyone ever do this so there we go
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2014 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hey Jeremy
I admit, I got a little confused with all these new players, although I haven't had the chance to read the earlier fics so I'm not sure if it's just that I need to catch up.
Hey, what's wrong with girly handwriting, wide kind of loopy quality; okay, loopy not only applies to my handwriting. LOL
OMG, Sebby is the typical teenager when dealing with his mom. Is she really crazy or is she just been seen through teenagers eyes?
Looking forward to your next update.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: the girly handwriting.....happy you like it
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2014 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice to see you back - and now with a multi-chapter fic. Can't wait to start it! TAG
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2014 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Didn't know that Justin knew Seb. So, Seb's in school and has a mom who's crazy? He's a genus and needs to work out? Loves sweets? Gus seems to like him.
Author's Response: yes yes he does
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2014 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is a nice beginning. Can't believe the guys Brian had him set up with. I'm looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: you'll get one
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, that is good. So, Gus is going to fall for a comic geek. Classic role reversal. LOL
Brian is trying to be helpful, yet I have never read a Brian that is portrayed as being so clueless. Parenthood is definitely not his forte. LOL
Nice update Jeremy, thanks.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: i'm happy i am able to make some people happy
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
So Brian's been trying to set Gus up. Looks like Mikey's guy might have a chance if they manage to hook up. At least Gus wasn't obsessing over not having anyone.
Author's Response: fingers cross
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Jeremy :)
The last fic you published prompted me to go to your page and see who you are and what you have written. I was happily surprised to see that your review count increased somewhat so I went to read them to see what kind of work you do. Haha you can guess I was a little surprised. G/J WT? LOL
You probably don't know that I don't like cute Gus fics, but I love teenage or adult Gus fics. So once I had read the reviews I decided to wait for your next installment and I must say I really enjoyed it. I hope to go back when I have time and read some more of your work. I think this fic is very believable as parents don't always have helpful advice and sometimes they have none or make things worse.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: thank you and i try to be unlike others so yeah i did gk/jt but i'm happy you like this one i will update it as soon as i get chapter 2 back from my beta
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Gus. He just wants someone to care about him. You write this so well one can feel his depression and pain.
Author's Response: i know right now we will see what is next for gus
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