Update soon please. I'm really enjoying this so far :-)

I agree with what LP said about Brian and Justin and they should be loyal and committed partners to each other. And be each others one and only true love. Maybe they can get married legal or have a marriage commitment ceremony.  And become not only life partners but legal domestic partners. There should be some more jealousy for Brian, we like him getting that way over Justin.

If you do a sequel or a lot more chapters in this story maybe you could do somthing that happens to Justin that he needs comfort from his partner Brian. Maybe he gets attacked or stalked then attacked by one of the admirer s that Brian was jealous of. I know I am nuts lol

Hope you give us more chapters asap. We love your writing and we want it -----------CJ

I just finished reading chapter 4. I love this story. I hope you will add a lot more chapters. I hope when you update you can instead of one at a time you can give us a few at a time or all the chapters at once? I hope that you write it that Brian realizes that he loves Justin and that he is his only true love the only one in his heart and his soul mate. And that Mark was his first relationship and that he thought he loved him but he didn't it was all to new to him the relationship stuff and love stuff and didn't want to be lonly. Just like all of have our first relationship termoil all he only was with him a year. I hope you make Brian and Justin in a monogamous loving committed relationship that they deserve. When they are monogamous please don't make  the mistake that other stories did by having them still use condoms lol. I like Brian jealousy though. Can you please put them back together ein one of the quickly coming chapters.Mark would be just 

I think if Brian have a relationship, at least he need to be responsible to it, to Mark, it is any human common sense. 

thinka bout it, if your husband or wife like Brian, meet someone and love and dump them,  because they fall in love with another, and do this again and agin, did you still think it could be put up with. 

human at least have self control, let along a grown up man

Cynthia is a big nose, even she think Brian is her friend, I think she at least could respect Brian' s choice for his love life. keep her mouth shut, did not need to tell him which one is better for him. 

I did not know you, but I did never did this to my friend, at least I know to respect to their own choice, even I did not agree with. 

Author's Response:

thanks for your review, as you can see here, this story is very long from finish.. I have to make Cynthia as a strong character, I believe she is, I mean she gets along with her boss so well and their relationship as friends is natural, if you have a friend like her, she would say that , more or less, it's something that you might find unexpected, as your take about Mark, well I respect your view,  when you are falling love with someone, you heart doesn;t have any defense to protect it, you just have to let it it flow, and Brian has so many reasons to like Justin even he loved Mark.  thank you.

Oh, I wish the jealousy (I love a jealous Brian) had gone on a little longer.  I hope Dan, I mean Mr. Muller, flirts with Justin at Ted's birthday celebration; making it clear to Brian that he is not holding all the cards in this currently platonic relationship.   Have I got that right, they didn't have sex the previous time they met; did they? 

I hope RL allows you to update soon.

Cheers :)

Author's Response: omg you can read my mind ! is it too easy to predict what will happen next? haha ... thanks for reading! I will update as soon as I can! :)

So Justin wouldn't mind hooking up with Brian if it weren't for Mark?  And Brian wouldn't mind hooking up with Justin.  Have I got it right.  I'd say straight but this is a gay story, no straight people involved.

Author's Response: Hello there! I don't know how to answer this haha..but thanks for reading, I really appreciate it! :) so you know I'm a rookie here, I'm trying to build the plausible plot for our boys, meaning Justin still has to deal with in-relationship Brian and Brian will stay as dominant as he is I hope you like it so far :)

Yeah, there are weird symbols, it's hard to read! But what I did read I loved! Of course. I like Dan - will Brian be jealous now?

Author's Response: we will see about that ;) about the weird characters,I don't know about that, i have tried to check it with different computer but sI can't find them, but don't worry I have already asked for help from the admins of this site. thank you for reading!

 

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Bonjour,

J'ai lue les 3 chapitres, l'idee de base est bonne (faire que brian rencontre justin alors qu'il est dans une relation), c'est interessant.

Mais il ne faut pas oublié que brian est un etre complexe, il est direct et froid avec ces coups d'un soir mais avec justin c'est different, il le destabilise et le fragilise le rend vulnerable dans son comportement habituel aussi.

Il doivent etre attirés l'un par l'autre de facon tres physique, palpable mais conscient aussi que brian est ds une relation, justin comme brian doivent luttés dans une atmosphere sensuelle, chaude voir suffoquante  pour ne pas ceder a cela.

Si je te dit cela c'est parceque je trouve que Brian ce revele trop a justin dans son desir de la posseder. C'est presque trop facile.

Fait les jouer au chat et a la souris, il faut quil ce cherchent ce seduisent, ils doivent en meme temps resister.

Ne prends pas mal mon com j'ai tendance a dire ce que je ressent je sais comment fontionne brian kinney.

Bon courage pour la suite. J'attends le prochain chapitre.

Author's Response: Thank you Lily, my french is not that good lol, okay, so yeah they are playing cat and mouse for a while, both men have power to resist yet they can't hide the feelings that they like each other, Brian is in relationship which is very hard for him to get close to Justin without stepping out the boundaries of his relationship with Mark, who wouldn't like/love Justin, even in-relationship Brian has major difficulty to resist or ignore him! thanks for your review

Like the story so far. keep on going. B/J forever.

Author's Response: of course I'm loyal and proud fan of Brian-Justin :) thank you so much for your support!

Hi there! 

I don't get a lot of reading time, but, something about this story caught my eye. This is very different, and, I don't have to say how much I love a predatory Brian. Haha! I like the direction and pace you are going; I think it fits with how Brian has been behaving. I am hoping he doesn't soften and make life changes too quickly, though. I don't think that would be likely with how this is set up so far. That being said, I'm really enjoying this, and I am looking forward to where you go with this. And... for a first story, I think you are doing an amazing job! *Hugss* 

Author's Response: wow thank you so much! I love the dominant Brian and for me you are the best when it comes to portray a dominant and predatory Brian, I love it! yes this is my my story, so nervous and excited hope people like my work and I'm glad you like this story :)

This is going to be great.  So Justin is from Vermont.  And he is trying to resist Brian?  Good luck with that.  Will he give in?  Perhaps, but not too soon?

Author's Response:

Hello! Yes Justin has attempts to resist Brian, but Justin is confused, I mean the feeling is mutual but Brian is taken. We need to know how Brian handles his feeling to our Justin.

Hugs!

"I remember my blond perfectly..."

This does not sound like a man in a committed relationship, LOL.

Author's Response:

Hey Sandra! yes Brian and Justin have met before, and they seem can't forget their last encounter. given the fact that Justin has sent a strong signal that he is liking  Brian, and the feeling is mutual, so Brian has special feeling for Justin even though he's taken  :)

 

Thanks for letting me know what you think!

Okay...now I'm intrigued :) The question is, who will make the first BIG move? And how will Mark take it when he finds out?

Author's Response:

Thank you! but first, we need to know how Brian manages his feeling and his plan for our blond, and Justin definetly has special place in Brian's heart even tho Brian is actually with someone else :) Thank you so much for letting me know what you think about this chapter!

I love Justin, I love this story and you are so cool more please .....Brian is cool I just like justin more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, we both love Justin/Brian and I will post more chapters soon!

I really hope you will like its continuation!

Ok .... so basically I'm sorta....kinda.... Confused. Brian starts as perfect monogamous partner (although Brian being monogamous with anyone except Justin pissed me off :( ... ) and then we have this bloody Mark being so perfect and totally in love with Brian . And we don't see even a bit of feeling  that Brian isn't happy. 

Then comes our boy Justin. Now here's a 180 degree change to what Brian is. He's offering to Fuck Justin. Totally seducing him . .. harassing would be a good word. And seems to not give a Fuck about Mark at all. Also openly wanting to Fuck an *employee* . 

I understand their attraction to eachother but doesn't this kinda makes Brian a hypocrite and he losing his credibility of being keeping his promises. Obviously he's committed to Mark... Who I'm hating with the bottom of my heart. I hope you won't make Justin a HOME WRECKER O_o 

Said that .. I'm addicted. I need more ASAP

 

Author's Response:

thanks for your review Sabbya! I hope you will like its continuation, next chapter is already written. No, I don't want to make Justin as ablond homewrecker either, Brian is a rookie in R world, so to speak..he has so many things to learn, but he will get there some time (like next chapters)

Hey Dony

Wow, Brian isn't making it easy for Justin.  I'm so glad Justin has principles, but I can see at some stage those principles are going to falter.  I love a strong Justin and I love that he is resisting for now, but that Kinney charm is sure to be his undoing. LOL

I like quick updates, thank you.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

our boys can't resist each other but Brian is taken and yeah Justin has principles so it's really hard at this point to our boys to admit it that the feeling is mutal but time will reveal it, thanks for your kind words! I do really appreciate it!

G'day Dony

Wow, you join and the same day you post your first fic and you have already written your first review.  Welcome to MW; it looks like you have made a great start to enjoying the site.  I enjoyed your first chapter and since I am an absolute die-hard fan of Justin, I hope the answer is yes, to "will Brian surrender to Justin's charm?"  Actually, I'm hoping the answer is; hell yes he will. lol

Britin is the best couple in the world! I couldn't agree more. :D

I look forward to your next update.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Thank you  for your kind words Flossee, I really appreciate it! you know this is my 1st story ever, I'm so nervous but MW has the best people to help me with this story, I don't speak english fluently but I really hope that readers can be satisfied with my work, and this story is already corrected by my awesome betas. 

I have been reading MW since 2011, then I made up my mind to make an account and contribute here hehe..

I'm proud member of Team Britin so I won't upset you!  :)

 

Hugs!

I love Brian-Justin, Mark or anyone else doesn't deserve to be with Brian! I ussualy don't really like Brian-Other but I hope this story will surprise me :)

Justin should do something!

Author's Response:

Thanks Loreta! Don't worry, I'm not planning to make you upset because I also belong to team Britin!

Justin will appear in next chapter, I can promise you that!

 

Hugs!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you Tash! more chapters will be uploaded soon! I do really hope you like my story!

 

Hugs!