Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2014 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
It's great to see you publish your second chapter. I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the seemingly irresistible presidential candidate. Maybe Justin can leave the car with his morals intact. :D
Cheers :)
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
I like the way you're relating Justin and Brian. Justin a idealistic and Brian the opposite of everything the that Justin advocating , nevertheless the lure is irresistible to them.
Does Justin will leave their ideals to be with Brian? Brian will risk their reputation and the image he created to be with Justin?
Very interesting how you are conducting the your story.
Comme j'utilise également le traducteur de Google à écrire (je suis brésilien), j'ai décidé de traduire mon commentaire dans votre langue. Désolé, une erreur. La faute à Google.
J'aime la façon dont vous concernant Justin et Brian. Justin idéaliste et Brian le contraire de tout ce que les défenseurs Justin, si l'attrait est irrésistible pour eux.
Est-ce que Justin renoncer à leurs idéaux pour être avec Brian? Brian va risquer leur réputation et l'image qu'il a créée pour être avec Justin?
Très intéressant de voir comment vous menez cette histoire.
Un câlin!
Fatima.
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
Does Brian get elected? You've captured a politician right on, IMO.
Author's Response: You will see that soon ;)
Oh, and sorry for didn't reply at your last comment, I was pretty busy and I still need google translate so I need to use my computer to reply...
Thank you for reading and commenting on the chapter! I hope you like it!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2014 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was wondering if maybe you would consider writing your story in French also, as there is a French category. It may give some people the opportunity to read a story in a language they are more familiar with. It's just a thought. You could write it in English and French. :)
Cheers
Author's Response: I just see your comment. I don't know if there a lot of french fans... I'm gonna see because it's a good idea :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2014 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey it's good to see you have published your fic again. Sorry you lost so many reviews. Don't forget to take the word "say" out of this line. "Did I say tell you that I love you?" I have been away, however you can send me the next chapter whenever you are ready. It may be a good idea to let your reviewers know you are studying and you will update when you can. Also I know English isn't your first language so you might like the reviewers to know this and they will understand if you just reply to them with a thank you. It's great to see you are back and I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2014 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a letch.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2014 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm, Brian is running for president and hiding the fact that he's gay. Will Justin go home with him? Is Brian leading the straight people on until he's elected? What are your plans and when will the next chapter be written?
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2014 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
:) Good to see you writing
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