Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 01:18 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Love the first chapter
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2014 12:01 PM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
I constantly feel like I am apologizing to you for my sense of humour. So once again I am sorry that you thought I was being serious when I wrote my last review. I actually enjoyed the parts I commented on. I know you and I have a very different sense of humour and maybe I should make it clearer if I am joking. However, in saying that I like that we are all different as it makes for a more interesting world. Well done on finishing another fic and I love the way you ended it giving yourself the option to return.
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2014 12:18 AM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
This was a fun fic to read. But it felt like it ended prematurely and the last chapter, partucularly the last paragraghs, seemed rushed.
And because the whole thing seemed to be needlessly hurried up, a more leisurly part two would be very fitting.
Reviewer: HarrisA (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2014 06:11 PM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
Oh please write a sequel to this story. I enjoy stuff with all the Queer people included. Also we need more Ben, and the Ben is this story sounds positively yummy (as Emmett would say).
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2014 04:42 AM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
“Here I come to save the day!” TAG
Author's Response: OMG!! Soooooo cute! thanks a bunch TAG! Where'd you get that? So...is this your way of saying you'd like more someday?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2014 04:38 AM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
I really hope you write another adventure with these people. I was sorry to see it come to an end just as it was really picking up steam.
Author's Response: No reason it can't pick up steam again someday. At least I didn't leave them all tied up forever huh? Don't worry. I wouldn t do that to you guys!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2014 02:34 AM · On: Ch. 6: The Bridge
Damn it! I really, really, really wanted to be review 69! Oh well! Congrats on finishing another story! TAG
Author's Response: Awwww sorry bout that! But I love that you rounded it off to 70 as well...Thanks for reading my stuff! I'll get to yours soon. Been watching a lot of TV and also went on a Star Wars bender for some odd reason.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2014 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 5 Michael
Well it looks like Mel and Lindsay are going to need to come to the rescue or will it be baby Gus?
Why is poor Emmy Lou dressing in men's clothing?
"A Mountie is NOT a toy!" since when? Please explain this statement. LOL Okay, I know I'm warped.
"How!! HOW!!!? HOW!!? HOW!!? HOW!!?" he screamed, jumping up and down". I love a childish bad guy.
Kudos to you for taking on two fics at once. I've really enjoyed this one.
Cheers
Author's Response: Rescue is now up...Mel and Linds are NOT involved...
If you'll read back a few chapters you'll remember Emmy Lou is taking meds for a certain ....condition. At that time she looked like a man. (Cue Ms. Swann here...She look....alike a man!!) hence the men's clothing.
Emmett was being overly flirty with the new Mountie. That s all I meant by Mike being treated like a "toy"
Otherwise...glad you enjoyed the fic.
Reviewer: tiff (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2014 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 Michael
I have been enjoying this story and love the cliffhanger. Sorry to hear you might let this one go, and on the afore mentioned cliffhanger no less. Whatever happens, I really ,really hope you get back to this tale, either now or later. It just wouldn't be fair to leave three men tied up forever.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 5 Michael
I hope your not winding down this story now. Just when things are really starting to get interesting with three cute guys tied up and in peril.
Author's Response: I m not sure of the fate of the story right now.... This was an experiment to see if I could do more than one WIP at a time. It failed miserably. So I've been mucking along very slowly with both stories and I'm really wanting to get back to my main...Red Hoody. So not sure what I'm gonna do here.
Thanx for the compliment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2014 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 Michael
Oh, no! Justin and Brian are hanging up. Do they have telephones? Michael finally shows up and gets captured by lumberjacks? What more could happen? How will you get them out of this?
Author's Response: No spoilers! :P
Reviewer: birdie (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 Michael
I have just found this fic and I love it. Mayors can't be crazy. A Canadian would probably know a thing or two about that.
Author's Response: I think I'll add a quote from the next chapter... "Anyone can be crazy.....AAANNNNYY--one!!"
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2014 08:44 PM · On: Ch. 4 The Woes Of Emmy Lou
So how's everybody doing? Everybody enjoying themselves? Sorry I've been away for so long, been catching up on programs and such and Once Upon A Time is coming back next week so I don't know what's going to happen then.
Also switched and have been working on next chapter of Red Hoody, which I'm sorry to say has been coming out much much slower. It looks like doing multiple WIPs is just not my bag. So i may "finish" up Mountie so I can switch back to the other and finish that up for a while. I don't know how you guys do it.
Any ideas on what peril you'd like to find our heroes in next? Leave a REVIEW or message me.
And yes Kim....I AM doing this to get more reviews....
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2014 02:51 PM · On: Ch. 4 The Woes Of Emmy Lou
Oh no, Ethan is a bad man. Yay, Emmett and Emmy Lou, a match made in a small mining town in the wilderness of British Columbia, Canada.
"And I wear special panties that hide my penis from Ethan." Okay, I'm going to need a visual on these panties please. ;) Question; how does he/she hide it when they have sex?
Well it looks like it's time for Ted and Michael to be the rescuers, since Emmett and Emmy Lou are have a little afternoon delight.
Nice update Jon, I don't think I've read a B/J fic where being a hermaphrodite has ever been mentioned. I like original ideas.
Cheers
Author's Response: Yes, in this fic, Ethan is a bad, bad man.
The panties, I'm afraid...will have to be visualized only in our memories. I was just making sh!t up! In my mind tho, it was like a flesh colored tube top only for the middle that would go over the penis and scrotum. Got the idea from TAG's Prego Stud where Brian was wearing the flesh colored baby band so he didn't have to close his pants. Hope that clears things up.
Sorry Ted cannot be rescuer as he is still in Emmett's bed, tied to the bedposts after being fucked into the mattress by a super limber and secret karate/judo expert. Oh...didn't I mention that? OOOOOPPPPPSSSS!!!!
Thanks for the kudos.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 01:56 AM · On: Ch. 4 The Woes Of Emmy Lou
Got to admit that that was not what I was expecting. Only in the great Northwest or where ever this is could this happen. At least Emmett wasn't surprised by seeing Emmy Lou. Loved that. Ethan on the other hand deserves to be hung up by his balls and left to rot. Not only was he cruel to his loving wife, but he tattled to Stockwell!! Dare I hope that Emmett and Emmy Lou, along with Candy Boy come to Brian and Justin's rescue?
Author's Response: MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyybeeeee
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 01:47 AM · On: Ch. 3 A Question of Gratitude
Emmett and Ted to the Rescue!!! Too perfect. So now everyone is safe and sound and happily occupied. Now we just need to know what's happening with Emmy Lou.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2014 02:12 PM · On: Ch. 3 A Question of Gratitude
I thought when Emmett picked Justin up in a fireman style lift Brian was then going to pick Emmett up; carrying both to safety. lol
"More honey for your tea?...Oh thank you, what nice drapes!....Oh by the way, I'm a black belted killing machine!" Who would have thunk it; Emmett's a killing machine. xD
Emmy Lou WT??? I hope she is undertaking hormone treatment to become a man; then Ethan and Emmy can live happily ever after. I so want this poor woman/??? to get a happy ending.
I wish to express my gratitude for the update.
Cheers
Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2014 01:15 PM · On: Ch. 2 The Mine
this story is great fun
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:32 PM · On: Ch. 2 The Mine
You've still left us hanging. How will you get them out of this one? What's wrong with Emmy Lou Gold and just what are Ethan and Kip up to? Shame my memory is not what it use to be.
Author's Response: I know...but next chapter is done and will be posted soon. I wanted to post when the virus hit. Soon....All yur questions will be answered
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 02:07 AM · On: Ch. 1 At the Bank Part 2
Oh no. It's a trap, Justin! Like the interaction with Emmett and Ted, especially the comments about the speargun. snicker. Good thing I know that Brian's going to save the day - almost.
Author's Response: Not just any trap LUKE---oh, I mean, BRIAN...It's a trap! IT'S A TRAP! MMMMPPHH! Hehehe! Thanks for commenting about Ted's excellent Caribbean adventure.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 02:04 AM · On: Episode 2 The Woes Of Emmy Lou Ch 1. At the Bank
First off I know I left you a comment before MW went down, but I forgot what I wrote so here goes.Ted and Emmett in trouble, only to those two could it happen. Love the combination to the safe. Hope you have something wicked planned for Oscar the fink. Chuckled when Brian explained how he let it slip that he and Justin were gay to Stockwell.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the kudos More to cum!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2014 01:42 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
ACk ! I didn't get caught up with my reading yet and you've already got a new chapter. Don't worry, though - I will persevere and get to them all. Aren't you glad MW is back? TAG.
Author's Response: I m a few chapters ahead. And yes...I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Glad!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2014 02:27 PM · On: Ch 6 The Lumberjack and the Snooty Suit
OMG, is Emmett going to take Ethan up on his offer to have a little fun. Or is Emmett going to seek out Ethan's wife/man and have a little fun. Either one of those Emmett, but just STAY OUT OF THE BANK. LOL Loving Stockwell and his thugs "I wanna rob the bank and roll in the money" will that be paper or coins; their lucky they aren't around today or they might just have to roll around with a little piece of plastic. Thanks for the update.
Cheers
Author's Response: This has to be the most FUN review I've ever gotten. I'm sorry to say all destinations lead to the BANK next chapter Dun! Dun Dun! And don't worry...paper or plastic...I'll make sure the thugs have a fun time! Thanks for the feedback.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2014 11:36 AM · On: Ch 6 The Lumberjack and the Snooty Suit
OMG. Thank heavens that the little lumberjack was Justin. Shame that Deb would not believe them. That's just like her. Hopefully Emmett doesn't put on his freshly cleaned lumberjack outfit before he goes to the bank. He might get mistaken for Sunshine. And Poor Mrs. Emmy Lou Gold, if she wore red might be ... nah, it would never work. Stockwell henchmen would have to be very stupid. Any hu, I'm enjoying this story very much!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2014 08:29 AM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
"Gay?? What do I care if he's happy or not?"
This is the first time I enjoyed reading about Stockwell. He makes the perfect villain although I thought it was going to be Ethan.
Speaking of villain. I know it was necessary, but it seems criminal to leave us that cliffhanger. I can see that saw getting closer and there's no one to save him.
Author's Response: Yes, my pretty! Our hunky handsome hero iis securely lashed down and unable to move with thick ropes and tight knots. He's straining against the ropes, sweat breaks out on his forehead! Just how I like my heroes esp. when they're wearing uniforms and or leather. And there's no one who can save him!! Bwa hahahahaha!'
Or IS there!!!?? Dun! Dun! Dunnnnnnnn!!!!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2014 08:20 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
"Never you mind what it is, Mr. Man..."
LOL! Emmett and Candy Boy are too much.
Author's Response: Thanx! I hope to include them more in storylines to come
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 12:31 PM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
Wow, Stockwell was Mr.X (I hope that contains the correct amount of surprise). LOL Let's hope little Brian keeps standing to attention, and then Brian might only lose one ball before Justin can save him. That won't be too much of an inconvenience as they are in a sawmill already, so they can just make him a wooden one. Hey, it was your idea that wooden balls could be used as prosthesis. xD Short chapter, but action packed. Return soon please.
Cheers
Author's Response: Well...not quite the way I'll be going with that but glad you're enjoying the story. I shall return shortly, this story is writing itself practically
Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 05:34 AM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
Evil, evil,evil. I think you're more evil than Stockwell. What a cliffhanger.....
That's torture...
Author's Response: I'm not so bad...really! It's kind of like that saying When I m good, i 'm very very good...but when I'm bad...I'm horrid! BWA HAHAHAHA!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 05:04 AM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
Well, I can hear the frantic, piano music and trumpeted theme of "Dudley Do-Right" in the background right now - ha!
Favorite lines:
"The bastard just sat there with a smarmy smile on his face that Brian wanted to kiss off with his knuckles." What a great way of putting that!
"Is it because he's gay? Is this some sort...some sort of hate crime?"
"Gay?? What do I care if he's happy or not?" Snort! LOL!
Okay, assuming you're going to let Brian live with his manhood intact, when does the dynamite in the mine come in?;) Or maybe a canoe about to go over the rapids, or a twig about to break, sending the boys hurtling down a rocky cliff? Such a fun read, Jon! Thank you. *Hugs*~Kim
Author's Response: Again.. yu picked some of my favorite lines... the Kis with his knuckles thing waas taken from a actual superhero/porno film tho....<giggle> still yur favorite? Imagine a red lycra clad hero facing off against foes....That weapon won't work on me...Kiss my knuckles!" says he.
And don't worry, more perils to cum...I'm not sure about the whole mine thing tho....I still have to find ways to introduce more of the gang and I have a lot of good ideas tho. Don't worry! This little party's just beginning! (god, I am relly stuck on the Wiz of Oz for some reason) Anyway....Stay tuned!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 01:22 AM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
Oh course, the sawmill - I can't believe I forgot about the sawmill. Boo Hisss~! Evil Stockwell! Boooo! Please save the beautiful helpless Mountie! TAG
Author's Response: Ahhh yes, the sawmill peril! Bwa haha! Can't forget that! How'd you like the twist? And isn t that a gorgeous image. A helplees hero, a tied up Mountie in all his red jacketed, leathered up goodness!! Mmmmmmmmmm!!!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 01:13 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
"Oh Brian!" . . . "My Hero!!!" or "No! Anything but that! You fiend! You'll never get away with this!"
Make up your mind, Justin! I personally love the slightly villainous Constable Kinney. He could tie me up and use those sexy slick sinfull leather gauntlets on my anytime. . . .*Whhooooooo, yeah, baby* . . ..
Oops, Where was I? Oh yes, admiring your newest cliffie. Great job. I vote for option #3. - You can do this over and over and over again with the same basic plot just different settings and lots more sex. Yes, please! Pretty pleas. Will it help if I bat my eyelashes and simper?
TAG
Author's Response: don t worry, i m hoping for #3 myself but was to get feedback as well. Thanks for your input. I have to admit, a Mounties gauntlets are the biggest turn on for me too. Look forward to a lot of descripton about them in the story to come.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 12:42 AM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Now that's a REAL cliff hanger for you. Yes, he went there. And he did it proudly! I'm so impressed! I even have fake tears in my eyes reading this. Carry on Mr. Storyteller Extraordinaire! Bwa ha ha ha! TAG
Author's Response: Yup, I went there...So was anybody like....I cannot believe I got suckered into reading the old tied to the tracks routine? Don't worry....better cliffhangers to follow I hope
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 12:14 AM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Oooooo! Are we going to see poor Justin tied to the train tracks while Studly Dudley - I mean Brian - clings to a tree branch above a huge cliff as the EVIL villians light a keg full of dynamite nearby to blow up the local bank? Please! Pretty Please! Come on - you have the chance here to do an actual, real cliff hanger! I'm so excited. I can't wait. Oh, you might also want to have Justin batting his eyelashes more. And simpering. He he he.
TAG
Author's Response:
Well, part of this and a running theme in my stories is equality. Even though Justin is beta and bottom (for the most part, I still am going to stubbornly maintain that they were versatile in the show) he was in no way effeminate. His voice was masculine, he didn't simper , he danced like a man and is he needed to he fought like a man. That's why he made such a good match for Brian. And that's why I'm having him be a dude in distress...and I have evil plans for Brian too! BWA HA HA!!!! Wrap your head around that!
Now Emmett....there s a batter and and a simperer. And worry not, you will see, he's in the story and hugely effeminate. So....maybe I'll put him in a cliffy...I was actually watching an episodde for research purposes and I was thinking....DAMN! All the boys would look hot in the ropes....Mikey, Ted, even Big Ben. So we'll have to see what happens. Thanks for all those great ideas though!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 11:42 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
"There's even a few moose. And squirrels."
I knew it! It is all because of ze Moose and Squirrel! Come, Natasha, we have verk to get done! Quickly, before Pearl Pureheart arrives!
TAG
Author's Response: Ding! Ding! Ding! I think that I forgot all about the clues to reference Rocky and Bullwinkle but that was the third one. Congrats to TAG!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 11:00 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
'Hey Rocky! Watch me pull a rabbit out of this hat *Roar from lion's Head* . . . And now here's something we hope you'll really like. . . . . '
I think we watched the same cartoons growing up. Hehehehe.
Off to read. TAG
Author's Response: Hurray! glad to have you aboard!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 10:47 PM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
Arrrgh. This can not be happening. Well of course it can, but its tooooo, I can't say. Evil? How will the mountie get out of this?
Author's Response: Evil!? Oh my, I'm just getting started!
HOW will our hero escape? Will balls be rolling? WHO tied those ropes so tight? WHAT will they be having for dinner? WHO really cares? For the answer to some of these questions and many others....Don't touch that dial!!!! Stay Tuned!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 09:43 PM · On: Ch 5 Mr. X
OMG...could you be more evil ;)
Author's Response: Is this a request that you want more evilness? More cliffhangers that will have you up at night biting your nails pacing your living room that are even more devastating? More mind blowing sex? Well.....OK then...I'll do my best :P
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2014 08:57 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
I personally would like to see where this goes and how it ends.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2014 07:00 PM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
Now you have explained it I would like option 3 please.
"Then he was pulled off again at 9" Jon, I'm shocked you went there. LOL No I'm not, that's funny. I know, my sense of humour is warped.
Cheers
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 12:43 PM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
Wow, torture Justin much. First Mr.X, then Brian, now Emmett gets to play with him. LOL OMG, what was Justin thinking, a Mountie would never run away. The lad cracks me up. Maybe he thought the motto was "a Mountie...OCCASIONALLY gets his man".
As for concluding this fic, it's your decision and I will be happy with your choice. My two cents worth: A novel is normally 80,000 to 100,000 words. Please don't make the mistake of writing beyond that as it then becomes a soap, and I have only seen a few of them worth reading, as they become boring quickly (that is when people make the mistake of describing, meals, rooms, clothing etc. just for the sake of a word count and it doesn't actually move the story along). You do have the option that if you wrap it up you can revisit it by making a series of the Mountie Brian and damsel Justin's adventures. I'll be happy with whatever path you elect to take, just please don't finish it until Ethan finds out he is sleeping with a man. Pretty, pretty please.
Please don't get upset by my opinion if you disagree with what I've said; you did ask. LOL
Cheers
Note: You used meters, so am I correct in assuming Canada uses the metric system? I have been writing feet in my fics as I thought that's what most readers would understand.
Author's Response: Yes Justin's been through a lot. And I'm just getting started Bwa Hs Ha!
I think people have misunderstood what I want to do with this fic. As you can see from my stories, unless their shorts they are 50-100K words long. I've written novellas and novels. However they were different as they were following a pattern and had a middle and an end. However, this doesn't have to. I suppose I meant it could be a kind of soap but not like Days or The Young and the Hopeless where things are draaaawwwwn out and fluffier than clouds on a summer day. I was thinking more episodic stories kind of like...well, like Queer as Folk. This train peril story could be the pilot which ywould jump into the next peril which could then time jump a bit and explore the Emmy Lou situation which could be resolved and then sometime later have another story added with another scheme....followed by...etc etc
I hope this makes option #3 a bit clearer for all.
And yes, "officially" Canada uses the metric system. However from day to day use people use both things feet and centimeters and F and C etc etc. A good example of this in summer when it s hot I prefer to think in F since I know 72 is room tem and everything above that 80's 90's is uncomfortably hot. However in winter I think in C because I know freezing is 0 and that s easier for me to understand. Road signs are in kilometers a lot. Ex. Shit Creek.....60 (kms) NoPaddle Ville....235 etc etc... also speed limit 60 kms/hr etc...However in pools shallow ends is always thought of as 3 feet and the deep end 12 feet...and everyone s used to that.
According to my calculations...(and I NEVER thought I'd say that...and I mean never!!) 1 meter is APPROX. 3 and a quarter of a foot. (or 3 feet and 3 and a half inches) This means at 5 meters the train was (again approx) 16 odd feet away when Justin was pulled off. Then he was pulled off again at 9" (sorry had to go there)
Hope this makes things clearer. For further explaanation pls contact your local MENSA math nerd. This has about done my head in.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 10:08 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
So the rescuer turned captor. Who knew Brian was into bondage. You tease coming so close to revealing who Mr. X is only to stop. My guess is that Mr. X is Stockwell, but I'd really preferr it to be Ethan. When do we find out who Mr. X really is.
Author's Response: Brian's into all sorts of things in this universe. And...can't give away all my secrets now can I? At least not until I get one or more boys into a situation of heart stopping peril. The catch phrase for this story is: GET HIM! And TIE HIM UP!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 04:13 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
"Where is he, boy?" I kept thinking of Lassie during that line (Where is he, boy? Is he down in the well? - ha!)
And I laughed out loud at this: "You...you have the right to an attorney. If you cannot..." "Waived. I'm not into threesomes." OMG, that was great!
"Yell all you want, my pretty!" Oooh, some Wizard of Oz, too! Well, kind of, anyway.;
"I'll have him cleaned and pressed by then." Justin slumped in his chair, grimy hands in his grimy face. "Great! Now I'm laundry!" LOL!
So many lines I loved in this chapter, Jon! As for what direction to take, I for one want to know who it is, of course! And I'd probably vote for #2. I wouldn't mind this going on for a while now.;) Thanks for the very entertaining ride! You have the most wicked sense of humor and so imaginative. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I don't know how but you picked all my favorite lines! Thanks for all the compliments I ll think about doing one long one but I was hoping people would go for 3 since I still have Red Hood to do. I'm really trying to get the hold of this whole multiple WIP thing tho.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2014 03:53 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
My vote is for novel length. With loads of smut like what was in this chapter. Totally HOT!! Loved it every word. Seriously I've truly enjoyed this story it's just so much fun! Please by all means keep going!
:)
Author's Response: I'll do my best. Smut is hard tho But this story...I dunno, maybe it s the uniform...but it s driving me wild. So there's one more chapter to go before I want to work on The Hoody again.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2014 02:53 AM · On: Ch 4 Justin in a Bind
Hehehe awesome.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 11:44 PM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
"Will I experience some….police brutality!?”
I loved Emmett in this chapter and his dog.
"The train was coming."
It wouldn't be right if Justin wasn't tied to a train at least once, but as terrifying as that was, the sock was worse, LOL.
Thank you for my fix and this extra long chapter.
Author's Response: Your very welcome...looks like you're enjoying this a lot. Me too.
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2014 07:30 PM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Fist of all: Happy new year!!
While reading your story there is a black and white slapstick movie on TV. Woman tied to rails and a handsome men coming to the rescue. Brilliant to be reading about it and see the picture on TV.
By the way I love the way you described Candy Boy. He's just like my Jack Russel Terrier. Her mind is always on cookies, cookies and more cookies. But she is also known for bringing home a rabbit or a hare from time to time.
I sure hope you keep up with writing. Looking forward to the next chapter and a healthy dose of laughter.
XOXO
Soirsa
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2014 07:56 AM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
The picture was 'a little large?' Let's just use Emmett's word for Zach O'Toole and say 'gargantuan' - ha! But never fear; I fixed it.;) Loved the description of Emmett's dress and his cabin - laughed out loud at that one. And to think he has to use Emmett's dog to help rescue Justin - that was inspired. Of course, now with the jerky I keep thinking of that 'bacon, bacon, bacon' dog treat commercial.;)
And now, thanks to you, I can't get that Ray Steven's song out of my head now called "Along Came Jones," either - aaargh!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJPkJHmHdgE
Now my question is, will you have a buzz saw and dynamite - like he did? Ha!
Really enjoying this one, Jon! Keep it up! ~Kim
Author's Response:
Thank you for mentioning Emmett's house, you're the first, I worked hard on that part. And the bacon commercial! Yes! That's where I got it! I knew it sounded familiar! But I couldn t remember.
Thanks for the Along came Jones. That was hysterical. Just the type of vibe I'm going for. As for buzzsaw and whatnot...let s get Justin off those tracks first! But If you skim the first chapter again, Grizzly Hills DOES have a sawmill.....
Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2014 05:57 AM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
I wonder, who is Mr X? Mr Gold? The mayor?
Brian should have checked the town: the one, who is absent, is a kidnapper ;)
Author's Response: Ahhh but he needed to look for justin....As for the ID of Mr X....not telling.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2014 03:46 AM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Frist off that was cruel having Moose's sock stuff into Justin's mouth. Going to Emmetts to get Candy Bo..Andy...whatever to help was very smart, if only the dog didn't have a thing for jerky. Damn, I still don't know who Mr. X is!!!! I know that Brian gets to Justin in time, cause the story would be too short if he didn't. Next chapter!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 11:14 PM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Omg...let's hope Brian reaches him in time. As for the rest...LOL freaking hilarious.
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2014 09:51 PM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Haha haha! This should really go down as a classic, I love it! Poor Sunshine, I hope he gets rescued quick!
Author's Response: A classic huh? I wish yu'd say that over and over...Might get me a ribbon...Means a lot from the author of your great monster story
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 06:22 PM · On: Ch 3 Heroes and Villains
Emmy Lou has a frog in her throat, yay; I really hope you're going to go there with Mr/s Gold. Oh no, poor Justin is almost going to get run over by a train; sane giggles and laughter. The train part is great as you won't get that in any other B/J fic; love it, because once again you are being very innovative with these characters. Cool dog picture.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thought yu might like that. Thanks for the compliments
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2013 06:29 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
OMG, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Laugh; "the idea of having Emmy Lou a guy in drag and Ethan clueless and married to him/her". Cry; because you didn't do it. That is the funniest scenario I have read in fanfiction. If there is anyway of including it (twins maybe) I certain wouldn't mind the slight deviation as it would be hilarious. Please, please, please consider it.
Cheers
Author's Response: Well....let me mull it over for a few days...I'll see if I can come up with something...no promises tho
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2013 10:00 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Thank you for your dedication!! (My first dedication. Blushes scarlett!!)
I hope you had a lovely christmas.
Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Big hug..
Soirsa
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the gift! Merry Christmas to you too!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 02:04 AM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Oh, this is a hoot, John! It reminds me so much of one of the Dudley Do Right cartoons. I can almost hear Justin in the 'damsel-in-distress' role right now, not to mention the sex was hot, especially with the leather thrown in.;) Looking forward to the next part to see if you're planning on tying Justin to the railroad track now - or will that be preserved for the head of "E.V.I.L.?" bwa wa wa wa! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Keep thinking Dudley...or as I like to think of it....Studley Do-Right and keep dreaming. However the exact nature of the bondage peril will not be revealed until the next exciting chapter! So stay tuned!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 01:51 AM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
A Note from the Author:
Thanks so much for the links...I will be checking them out very soon. Also, my apologies for forgetting about the dedication to my fans, I was rushed to get this posted on Christmas. Dedication is now up!
I hope you will continue to enjoy the continuing adventures of Brian Doright and his sweet but spunky sweetheart! Keep reviewing! They make my fingers itch to type!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 12:46 AM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
"Mr. X lined out his evil intent and as he did someone giggled insanely..."
This reminds me so much of Dudley Dooright. You're doing a great job. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: You're getting the idea! <wink> Hope the next chapter is to your liking!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 11:51 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
"...just pure melodrama fun!"
My thoughts exactly. I'm loving this.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 09:36 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVPQa-10030
Your story reminds me of this silent series. And no I ain't that old. Love your humor!!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 09:33 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Here's information on the Perils of Pauline. A series where the damsel was always in destress and had to be rescued. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Perils_of_Pauline_%281914_serial%29
Author's Response: thanks for this I had a look and watched the first yu tube but it seemed to drag so much that I switched to a movie version circa 1967 which was highlarious! Pitfalls and perils for both the dude AND damsel in distress!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 09:29 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Oh no! Gasp. Who is that masked man? Oh sorry wrong story. Loving this expecially the mention of Emmy Lou Gold. You topped it by introducing the flaming Emmett!!! I've tried to guess who Mr. X is, but sadly I'm not sure. How will you rescue Justin? Will he end up, like Pauline, tied to the railroad tracks? When's the next chapter!!!?
Author's Response: Glad you are liking all the characters. They will come more into play later. All your questions are good but I must leave them till next time, which should be hopefully not more than a week. And I watched some of those Pauline things and did my research and Pauline was never tied to tracks. That came late in other shows. Neat huh?
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Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 08:50 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Damn it just when we thought it was safe...but will his secret be revealed now? And how will this affect the good Constable?
Update soon please
Author's Response: Just when we thought things were safe! Will they be pulled out of closet! Will they drag out and find that scarlet midriffless shirt that's been hiding back there? What peril awaits our handsome and sexy dude in distress!?
All these questions and more will be answered ...next episode! Don't touch that dial! Stay tuned!!
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 08:19 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Just wanted to tell you I'm loving this. It's so much fun and makes me laugh. Love seeing the boys being lighthearted since there is only so much angst a girl can read! Can't wait for more and I truly hope Brian rescues Justin quickly. Can't wait for more!!
:)
Author's Response: thanks for your great comments. Hope to keep things coming.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2013 05:04 PM · On: Ch 2 Dinner and Dating
Domesticated Brian, talking bout his day, eating ice cream everyday for two whole weeks and repeat performances in the bedroom each night; he may have to mount up and go looking for his manhood. LOL Hey you're getting more daring with the sex scenes, but I fear you are still holding back. xD Emmy Lou Gold; OMG I almost thought it was a female version of Emmett. I'm so happy he showed up in the forest. Insane giggles and laughter; it's always nice to have happy E.V.I.L villains. I'm thoroughly enjoying your humor in this; thanks for the entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: ahhh yes, I must admit, Brian's life has become rather "lesbionic" but as this is not modern times or the Pitts (or even Vancouver) he's having to adjust his policies on promiscuity. Besides as I glaringly put in all my disclaimers, they are all OOC and definitely NOT canon. I have a hard time with that. Dunno what else to say on that.
As for sexxx scene if you are refering to no butt sex, you are right I held back but on purpose. The scene was dragging on and besides, if I give you everything now you won't come back for it later ;)
Glad you liked Emmy Lou AND Emmett. I DID toy with the idea of having Emmy Lou a guy in drag and Ethan clueless and married to him/her but then I thought...nahhhhh...just too complicated later down the line and besides, it's Bri/Justin's story...not Ethan's...even tho that would have been hysterically funny.
Glad you' re enjoying it overall. Hope that clears some things up.
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2013 10:13 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Love it!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 07:59 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Perils of Pauline? Dudley Dooright? Mrs. Emmy Lou Gold? Theodore the Banker? Am I getting close?
Author's Response: what are perils of Pauline? Otherwise I love those ideas. If you want to brainstorm anymore up keep em coming! Yes, that s right Kim...I WILL do ANYTHING for those reviews! AAAAAAnything! Well....almost...
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 06:50 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
ROFLMAO I know I made some typos in my review, but yours was hilarious. Was it a Freudian slip? Are you trying to tell us that you look like Brian Kinney? Lucky you if you do.
I forgot to mention; I loved the horse ride. It seemed like fun for both parties. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: No....I wish I looked like Gale...but alas we are not twins...or even the hunky Mountie version of him I have in my head....SSiiigh. Glad you enjoyed the ride and the story.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 06:15 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
OK this is my last input on this chapter - ha! I think Stockwell is a good replica of Snidely Whiplash with the oily mustache. If that's not it, I'm just going to have to leave it up to the other detectives, because I'm right in the middle of a hot smut scene in my Christmas story and have left the boys in a, ahem, compromising position...
BTW, can you arrange to have Ethan tied to the railroad tracks and NOT have Dudley Do Right, uh, Brian rescue him? Just thought I would ask....
Author's Response: that WAS intentional to make him look like Snidely/general mustached villan but nope that's not in...I'll reveal the B&R reference in the next chapter. I have plans for Ethan...but not that...and shhhhh about the tracks...you'll spoil the next few chapters...hehe
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 05:46 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Are you sure this is only going to be PG ? It seems it has all the makings for a very steamy story.
Author's Response: WEll, thank you! And I think so too but it s mainly going center around the ciffhangers. However, I can put in some smut alerts and or change it if things get to sexy. Although, this is QAF right, If you're reading this, you've already seen waaaaay worse than what I'm about to do to you!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 04:59 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Boy, some people will do ANYTHING to get nore reviews - ha! Well, the part about "Here's Something I Hope You'll All REALLY Like!!!" is something that I think Rocky (or was it Bullwinkle) used to say in the cartoon, wasn't it? I know it was SOME cartoon, anyway. I'll have to think about the other clue. Is is the horse's name? Aargh! BD, BD, BD...that's all, folks! (sorry, wrong cartoon!). ~Kim
Author's Response: Yup! Clue #1 found! And you are right it was Rocky. And no, the other clue is not the horse's name.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2013 04:03 AM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Love the title, Jon. And as soon as I read 'Rocky' was one of the kids, I couldn't help thinking about Rocky and Bullwinkle for some reason - ha! Love the way you meticulously described both Brian and Justin in period dress, too. Looking forward to where your wild sense of humor takes us on this journey. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: good for you for thinking Rocky and Bullwinkle! However, you probably picked up on the other two subliminal clues I left around the story and summary. Ten points to whoever picks them up!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 09:34 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
I find this tale very, very interesting. Brian in red, drool worthy. The black horse, my first thought was does it fly. The characters Ethan and Kip, only time will tell how they turn out. Debbie of course, is perfect. Will you have Emmett and Ted? Reading how the mountie gets his man will be most enjoyable. You've done it again!!!
Author's Response: Alas it's not that kind of tale and Midnight does not fly. But that won't make him any less of a hero in times to come! Emmett will be hard to put in here as it s so backwater, he d be in much the same situation as if in Hazelhurst. I can try though. As for Ted, I can think of something.
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:56 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
Being home on an extensive sick leave I surf a lot on the internet.
Recently I (re)discovered fanfiction and became an obsessive lurker who's always on the look out for a new story.
I love your first chapter. You had me in stitches at the roleplay on the sofa. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Soirsa.
Author's Response: That was my favorite part to write as well...Thanx!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:30 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
I love this already lol...I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Great! Thanx!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 04:09 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
You can cancel my first review if you find it to soap-boxy and I will leave the commonplace review of great fic, I can't wait for more. LOL I won't be offended if you delete the first review or you can keep both.
Cheers
Author's Response: Below...that was meant to be: IT could be Brian....sorry bout that LOL
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 04:05 PM · On: PILOT Ch 1 A Ride on Midnight
OMG, once I saw the title I had to stop reading "The Red Hoody" to come and take a look. Yay, happy dance, yay, happy dance. This makes me extremely happy that you acknowledged my off-handed remark. One of the lines (colloquialism) I used, in the first chapter of "My Body's Keeper" was used 8 times by authors in the following week after I posted it and not one acknowledged even reading the fic by leaving a review. Around about the same time I had the year, date, month scenario from that series also used and the lesbian sex scene from POV copied, alone with other phrases and again these authors didn't every acknowledge reading the fics by reviewing them. I was really starting to get a bit peeved because if something is good enough to copy, then it's good enough to review. I know why they do it; it's so they can say it was a coincidence, but there can only be so many coincidences in the world. You have restored my faith by acknowledging this line so thank you very much.
If I review more than once do I get mentioned a similar amount of times in the second chapter? LOL I'm really pleased a Canadian is writing this, as you probably have more of an insight to the Mounties than someone just getting information off Wikipedia. I'm glad the world has come out of the dark ages with homosexuality, even though we still have some way to go; hopefully full equality isn't too far into the worlds future. Okay, I'm off the soap box now. However, in fics, I do love the extra tension of the men having to keep their sexuality a secret. I can't wait for the update, but for now I must head back to "The Red Hoody", where your OOC Brian is doing my head in. LOL
Cheers
I love the banner.
Author's Response: Thanx about the banner. I got the pic off the internet and I loved the way the face was in shadow. I could be Brian....right? And thanx for the great review. Yes we.ve made great striides but let's remember it's happened rather suddenly in the 60's Before that it was really taboo so there will probably be lots more in closet angst and bitching than I mean there to be. Sorry bout that...that s not what I want this story to be about.
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