Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Tinkerbell25 (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read the rest of this story.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2013 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

I would continue. If you're having fun with it, that's reason enough. I'm quite curious as to what s wrong with Edward. I mean if he had a broken arm or was bleeding from the temple well that's one thing but there s just nothing. And it needs to be fleshed out a bit past 526 words or so and maybe tell a bit from Ed's POV or something as the doctor is coming across as a little pervy.

Also, it's been a while since while since I watched a Twilight movie. Which one was Carlisle?

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