hahaha, Brian can't resist. I love it! I could totally see Brian weighing his options as he continues to fuck Justin. They are just so cute (and hot!) together!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you think it was in character for him, of course anything having to do with fucking is in character for him, isn't it?  Lol Thanks for reviewing!!! <3

Wow.  This is sooo fucking perfect, I can actually see and hear it.  What will you come up with next?

Author's Response:

Oh that's so good to hear!  Thanks so much!  And well...Some of my favorite rules are still to come.  <3

Hello, Jessie!

How this is perfect!

I'm impressed how you can create a climate like this using so few words.

Brian and Justin for everything is so wonderful!

Will we see Justin also doing something wonderful for Brian?

Eager for more.

A big hug!Fatima.    

Author's Response:

Oh thanks so much!  I'm glad you like it.  And so far I don't have anything planned for Justin...Maybe I'll try thinking of something.  <3 

I am really enjoying this but I want more lol

Author's Response:

Don't worry, I have about ten rules made up and when I run out I intend to ask for suggestions.  There'll be more.  :)  Thank you so much!

OMG I like the idea of this challenge.  If I can ever get my brain back to make coherent thoughts I might suggest we do it here.  500 words and the topics vary (even if we only did it for a few weeks); this sounds ideal since I have an aversion to using a copious amount of words.  LOL  I love it when they spend a day together; just for Justin.  It’s always romantic.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Yeah it is an interesting one.  Someone new picks each week's topic, then, everyone writes their submissions (On that site they just leave them as comments) and then the person who picked the topic chooses the winner, then the winner chooses the next week's topic and so on and so on.  It's fun!

And thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.

<3

I really liked this! Brian was sooo, Brian, in this, in his subtle romantic way that lets Justin know he is loved. 

sucks about the other site! some people think that because they aren't saying something to someone's face, it makes it alright somehow. it's awful that people think they can do this to someone else. If you don't like something, then choose not to do it/read it/follow it...not be a bully.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I really wanted to keep Brian and Justin very IC for this fic, so I'm glad to know you thought it worked!

That's exactly what I thought about everything.  It was really frustrating.  The mods stepped in way too late, they should have nipped the fight in the bud.  I'm glad we have active mods here who pay attention.  :)

Anyways, thanks for the review!  <3

I loved how you really showed Brian's way of saying I love you

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Brian's always been more demonstrative than vocal, so I was really trying to convey that.  <3

Hello, Jessie! It's great to see a new story yours.
I love when Brian is romantic and says with gestures as he loves Justin. It was beautiful to see Brian taking care of a very dull Justin fondly and without using sex as pain control.
I know you have new moments as sweet as this to present us. Looking forward to more.
As for what you wrote on the other site, I fully agree with you. I've also witnessed moments on other sites where people derespeitam other and act without the slightest consideration to the authors. I believe the postarmos a story we are exposing our feelings and this is very personal and intimate and the least we can receive is about.
I have a huge affection for WM because here I was received as much respect and affection. I also am a foreigner and my stories are written in my native language (Portuguese) and Predec2 in a gesture of immense generosity offered to translate them and it is only thanks to her that my stories are read and recognized. I will never be able to thank her enough for that.
I currently almost no access another site fanfiction, even I participate in my country (Brazil), because people hardly leave comments (which is very frustrating) or just read your story. This, fortunately, does not happen here (although I would like to get more comments for my stories), here there is always a word of encouragement and recognition for their work and this is most important for those who are writing. I totally sympathize with you.
Hope your honeymoon was everything and more than you expected. Shipping, again, my good wishes to you and your husband.
Sorry for any mistake, because I use the Google translator to be able to write in English.
A big hug!
Fatima.

Author's Response:

Yes, in case you can't tell with my recent stories I'm a big fan of a soft Brian.  :)  I always appreciate your reviews!  And I agree, this site has always been welcoming and far from the reception I received on other sites...

And my dear, you never need to apologize for using Google.  :)  The fact that you make the effort to do so is touching, so thank you!  <3

Hi, Jessie!  First of all, as one of the admins here I want to thank YOU for your ending comments.  Personally that means a lot to me to know how this site stacks up against others.  I know that as a writer, that is one of the reasons why I liked this site in the first place when I started posting over here as well four years ago; that, and the fact that overall it's the easier site to post on that I have worked with thus far.  And from a personal standpoint, I'm glad I was able to persuade you to post over here, because we have gotten some very entertaining stories as a result!  So keep them coming!  And yes, this site is regularly monitored for those who go well beyond the 'constructive criticism' point.  I personally don't see a reason to tolerate that and find it totally nonproductive.

Okay, enough of my soapbox!  Really enjoyed this one - very IC for both Brian AND Justin.  Love the way that Brian shows his man how he loves him w/o saying the words, and I enjoyed Justin's little 'queen-out.'  And I think it was nice how Brian didn't automatically initiate sex as an answer to Justin's problem, but chose another way to unselfishly show him how much he cares. 

Looking forward to more!  Hope you had a great honeymoon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Well you're welcome, hehehe.  I love it here, and am glad you convinced me to join.  :)  It was more than worth it.

Aso I'm gad you liked the first little bit, I thought Justin's little queen out was funny myself, but I'm the kind of person to laugh at my own jokes *shrugs*.

Thanks for the review!!  <3  (And I did!!)

Hi Jessie.  I’m a little confused.  This fic has nothing to do with the writer you are talking about at the bottom of chapter 1 does it?  What is the challenge?  I assume you aren’t just rewriting someone else’s fic, (sorry I have a real problem with people doing that).  I seem to be missing the point of what people are saying lately so please don’t take offence by my questions.

Congratulations on your wedding and I wish you all the joy and happiness life can possibly bring your way.  Twenty two, married and living in a new country; you must be a very strong person.  I love your updated photo; dare I say, it’s really cute.  LOL

Cheers

Author's Response:

No, no it doesn't have anything to do with that at all.  I only told that story because I thought you all deserved to know how much I appreciate how nice you all are and this was really the only way for me to do that.  Also, no...I'm not.  I would never just steal someone else's work...And as someone who has had that done TO them, I can say that I have a real problem with it too.  The challenge is just something I see on another site I am on (its actually a weekly contest there), and one of the rules is it can be no longer than 500 words and the topic varies from post to post.  I was inspired to write for Brian and Justin though, so this is where I posted Lol.  Hope that helped!  :)

Thanks for the well wishes, I really appreciate it.  I'm glad you like the picture, lol, it was one of my favorites too! 

<3

Very good start, I can't wait to read more.

P.S. welcome back :)

Author's Response:

:)  Thanks so much!  <3  Glad you like the first little bit.