Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 35: It Doesn't Look Good, Gentlemen
I didn't know Lenny was a lawyer. Please don't let Melvin take Gus away!!!
Author's Response: Hi, YumYumPM: No Lenny was no lawyer. Melvin's he lawyer. Did I make a mistake somewhere and said Lenny was the lawyer? If so I need to go back and fix that.
So, glad U joined me on this one, and here's 11 more chapters. Later , Delores.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 34: You Think We Should Get Married?
That was a long time coming. so glad you posted this all in one go.
Author's Response: Still got a few more chapters to go. Had originally hoped I could post the entire story in just two postings but didin't turn out that way because of so many obstacles including I had a much bigger editing job to do to this than I thought and I still haven't gotten all the bugs and kinks out. I even find myself going back to chapters aleady posted here and ironing out some typos and some problems with chronological order.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 33: I Heard A Baby Cry
Finally the truth comes out. Where oh where are those divorce papers?
Author's Response: Some truth though, lol! Scaryyyyy!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
Twins!!! For someone who couldn't have kids, Justin really manages to do it up right. lol
Author's Response: Twins!!! That's really something, huh!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 31: You Get Out Now!
No, no. Sundays too long. Wake up and go talk to Justin tonight!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks U so much, YumYumPM. I'm so glad U R enjoying this story like this.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 30: Kiss Him Or Strangle Him?
I knew Justin should have told Brian about Gus.
Author's Response: Up-oh. Let's see what happens now.
Thanks so much, YumYumPM... it's a real thrill.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 29: It's Not The Same Kid, Mel
What is Melvin looking for? The divorce papers perhaps?
Author's Response: Huh-huh
Thanks agian, YumYumPM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 28: Where's Everyone? MIA?
I'm surprised that Michael didn't pass on the news about Melvin. where is Brian?
Author's Response: I think Michael's quiet because he just didn't know what to make of that incident.
Thanks again, YumYumPM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 27: Believe It Or Not, This Kid Is Still Alive
Oh boy, the shit is about to hit the fan.
Author's Response: Heart beats fast... doesn't it? LOL!
Thanks again, YumYumPM.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 26: Time For A Scavenger Hunt
Oh no...(hides eyes) This could be really, really bad.
Author's Response: Ohhhh, so so so eerieeee isn't it.
Thanks so much YumYumPM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 25: See You In Court Too, My Son
I knew Melvin would cause trouble.
Author's Response: Let's hope the old saying that every dog's day will come is actually true LOL!
Thanks so much again YumYumPM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: Why Not Name Him Richard
Nice that Brian wants to do right by both his boys and he doesn't even know that Gus is his.
Author's Response: Amazing isn't it. LOL!
Thanks, YumYumPM. I'm so glad U R enjvying this so immensely.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 23: I Don't Want Another Dead Kid
There goes the angst factor again.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, LOL! thanks so much, YumYumPM
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 22: Welcome To The Domesticated Life
Well Brian took that rather well. Now I can calm down.
Author's Response: Well, Brian took that rather well. Make U kind of wonder though, lol! Recall when Justin lied the first time and told Brian that he had taken the test and the results came back negative, Brian didn't quite jump for joy at that news... Hmmm, I wonder why.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 21: What Did The Doc Say?
okay how soon do we see a fix for this mess? I have to know how this ends!!!!
Author's Response: I'm hoping I can wrap this baby up in about 50 to 55 chapters. So glad U are still aboard and still having fun, LOL!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 20: Thrice As Sure
Can he sue the doctor that misdiagnosed him? Maybe Melvin will be able to help with that. LOL
Author's Response: Melvin would help? LOL! Love it, YumYumPM.
Thanks so much for having so much fun with this story. I'm eating it up BIG TIME!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 19: Gus Is The Only Baby I'll Ever Have
Looks to me like the first doctor was wrong. The truth will surely come out soon, right?
Author's Response: 'Looks to me like he first doctor was wrong...' Something isn't it! Can't always put all your faith in expert, can we? And U R so right.... the truth will surely come out soon LOL!
thanks againi YumYumPM... hav fun!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Kid Is Not My Son!
Can things get any more complicated?
Author's Response: Phew! Wiping my brow, LOL! I agree with you somethinig has to give and things must get easier
Thanks so much, YumY...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday To You
Wait until Brian finds out!!!! All the lies are going to come back to haunt Justin.
Author's Response: Oh, yeah, lol. thanks YumY....
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 16: Happy Birthday, Justin
I thought Justin couldn't get pregnant. More complications in the works. At least Brian was super sweet to Justin for his birthday.
Author's Response: Hi agaiin, Yum... Awwww, Brian as super sweet on Justin's birthday, LOL! So, glad U are commenting often, and please forgive me for being slow to respond, but certain unanticipated obstacles go in the way. Thansk again. Rushing along now. Plz continue 2 enjvy.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 14: What Am I Going To Do Now!
Very good question. What will Justin do now???
Author's Response: Sure isn't an easy decision for him, LOL!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: Why Are You So Tight?
I'm kinda surprised that Brian didn't see through all of Justin's excuses and actually went through with this.
Author's Response: I know what you mean, but like everyone else he's so heavily influenced by the fact that Justin is so devoted to the baby Gus.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 12: Where Are Those Documents?
Looks like with Melvin in the picture there is going to be trouble!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, old Mel's one hellraiser, isn't he?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2013 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Kid Is Your Son
Sadly Brian is sinking deeper into losing the thing he wants most.
Author's Response: Awww, poor Brian, lol! If he only knew.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: It Doesn't Look Good, Gentlemen
Wonderful story. Read the chapters in one swoop, hence my commenting only now. Interesting storyline and though I am not a fan of mpreg, as it s not the center of the story, it doesn t really bother. Funny idea the "only male planet" ;). Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hi, Reiselust:
Only male planet! I always feel I have to explain the MPREG thing, so I took the easy way out this time, LOL! And, I'm so glad readers responded well to my all male planet, lol!
So glad U R liking this story. I meant to post it in it's entirety in just a couple days however certain obstacles just prevented that from happening. Also, I've been holding out for a better content as well. So I'm posting at least 11 chapters today 8/13/13.
Thanks, Reiselust.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: What's Up, Pops?
Jack and Jonas. What a pair.
Author's Response: Jack and Jonas... LOL!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 9: What Was That KIss For?
That Justin is so sneaky. Will he ever tell Brian that he thinks Gus is his?
Author's Response: Let's hope he does before it becomes too late.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 8: Who's The Other Daddy?
Trying to keep the truth from Deblin sure is difficult.
Author's Response: Deb is as nosy as he can be, LOL!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 7: He's Nobody To Put In Full Charge Of A Baby!
Interesting to see Ethan running into Justin and all the remarkable coincidents surrounding Gus. At least Justin gets to take Gus to work with him.
Author's Response: Hmm, hmmm... so very interesting points you're pointing out here Thanks again, YumYumPM. So glad U R still w/me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 6: Totally Selfish Act
So Justin doesn't know that Brian is Gus' dad? Brian's really an old softy isn't he.
Author's Response: Terrbily interesting huh? The only one that doesnt' know Brian is an old softy is BRIAN! LOL!
Thanks you so much, YumYumPm for taking to time and let me know how much you are immensely enjoying this story.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: They All Look Alike!
Mikey seems to have a one track mind and it leads to Brian.
Author's Response: Someone is SO JEALOUS, LOL! Wouldn't be QAF worthy if Michael wasn't jealous of Justin.... and in this story he's jealous of Gus too, lol!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: Justin's Baby
Awwww, Brian really has taken to that baby, hasn't he?
Author's Response: Oh yeahhhh! Love at first sight lol... just love the little pint-size prince to death!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Well, He Must Be Mines Too Then
Somehow I knew Justin would end up with the bedroom. How did he end up with Gus? did I miss that part.
Author's Response: No. You didn't miss it. It's going to be a mystery for a while, lol, but the truth about Gus will inevitably come to light.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Is This Twink Hot?
So Mikey wants to help out by having Brian's child? I can't picture it. Now Justin having the child I could sooo picture.
Author's Response: Yeah, wouldn't U imagine in a world where Mikey could get pregnant, he would be hounding Brian to father a child for him. It would be QAF worthy if he wasn't hounding Briani.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Apartment's All Yours, BoyZ!
Darn that Saperstein, charging them 800 for that apartment. Can he get away with that?
Author's Response: Can he get away with that" LOL, where I come from he could have gotten away with charging 1600 a month for that toilet, LOL.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Prologue
Interesting world. Brian, Mikey, Ted and Emmett, oh my. Poor Justin, wanting a child and unable to have one. Len and Mel <snicker> Even an Ethan! Len pregnant, sounds familiar. Shame about the car crash and that Brian thinks little Gus is gone. To think this is just the Prologue, can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Hi, YumYumPM. I think I might have heard from you before during one of my other story. And I'm so thrilled to be hearing from you now. And I so hope U like where this story takes U. Thanks so much for jumping on board and taking the time to let me know.
Hav Fun.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 35: It Doesn't Look Good, Gentlemen
oh my...I hope Lenny isn't able to take Gus away from Justin and Brian so easily
Author's Response: Hi, Jazzepoet:
Arghhh... that's scary, lol!
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Prologue
Hi, Anonymous:
Please note becasue of a script page error, I wasn't able to answer you the normal way so I had to do this cut and paste to respond:
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 02:14 AM · On: Prologue
You have certainly put a lot of effort into designing you alternate world. Most mpregs just drop a pregnant Justin into the middle of the regular Queer as Folk world with the only difference being that Justin can have children. It's commendable that here is a universe where male pregnancy is explained.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for letting me know I did a good job creating a realistic world where MPREG is quite credible - I certainly was trying hard to. I hope you stay and enjoy the story to the end I will resume posting additional chapters on Saturday, and hopefully get the full story up no later than Sunday.
Thanks again for taking the time and commending my efforst - IT WAS HIGHLY CHERISHED.
Sinc. Delores
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 12:26 AM · On: Prologue
Hi. JEN:
Please note I did not neglect to respond to your comment, it just that a script error blocked my first response. So, I had to do ths cut and paste to respond to your comment.
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 01:00 AM · On: Prologue
This looks like an interesting story but you’re putting way too many chapters up at once. This is already around 100 pages worth if you were to print it out. I can’t image anyone being able to read so much at once. If you would just put a few chapters up at a time every few days it would make it much more readable.
Author's Response:
Thanks you very much for your suggestion, but I'm pressed for time so I have to do this way.
Also, I'm confused about what you mean when you say that posting so many chapters at once makes it hard to read. I mean books that you get from a book store or library have all the chapters in them, and if a person can't read the book in one setting they usually mark their spot and come back later and read where they left off.
Also, some readers at this site expressed to me that they will only read a story after all the chaptes are up because they hate reading stories that never gets finished, or don't end with a happy ending. So people actually told me that they read the ending first to see if it's worth while reading the rest of it.
Thanks again for the suggestion but I have to hurry up and finish posting this one, so I can finish up all that incomplete stuff I have posted here.
Sinc. Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2013 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
I'm blaming you that Michael Jackson's 'Billy Jean' has been stuck in my head all day. . .🎶The kid is not my son🎶. . . LOL! I admit to guiltily reading this all day while I was at work whenever my supervisor wasn't looking. TAG
Author's Response: "The Kid Is Not My Son" Michael Jackon's phenomenal hit. You caught me, ROFLMAO! And there's a more chapters coming right up. Tahnsk TAG for joining me on this one two. I hope to finish posting the entire story today (Sat), but if not, it definitely will all be up by tomorrow (Sunday).
Later, and Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
This is going so good,can't hardly wait for the rest...........
Author's Response: Hi, Reader: Glad U jumped on board. Won't be long now. I'm just answering the rest of these reviews and then I'll do so more posting. I estimate this story to be approx. 50 chapters, and I hopefully I'll get them all up today... if not then Sunday.
Later & Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2013 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
Okay....now I'm feeling better and ever optimistic for our boys now that the truth has been revealed :) I do wonder what's in the envelope though.....I mean besides the ultrasounds lol
Author's Response: Yeah, what is in that envelope, LOL!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2013 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: Thrice As Sure
Wow really???? For heavens sake.....first Justin withholds the truth about Gus and now he's going to do the same with his unborn child....
I really like the story and find it very interesting, but I am sooo not crazy about how Justin is being portrayed here
Author's Response: Hi, Jazzepoet:
I've consider everything you're saying here. However, give it a few considerations. For instance, Justin's a mere teenager; he's upset becasue he was told he was barren at that age; Also, we don't (specifically) know yet how he came in possession of the baby and what unique and special concerns that presents him with.
thanks, I hope as you read on it will start to become more agreeable.
Later, sinc. Delores
Reviewer: Kiddo (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2013 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
really interesting start
loved that you posted so many chapters at once :-)
hope the next parts come really soon
Author's Response: Hi, Kiddo!!! I'm really excited because I think I'm hearing from you the first time, and I get so thrilled when I hear from a reader for the first time. (however, forgive me if I mistaken about hearing from you the first time though).
So glad U like the story and yes I will be post really soon. In fact, as soon as I finish answer these last few reviews. So stay tuned.
later & sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 11:56 PM · On: Prologue
You have nine stories that are marked as not complete going back to 2008, many of which I took the time to read and then was left hanging. I wish you would finish those stories before posting new ones.
Author's Response: Hi, Lisa: Point well taking. However, the one I just posted "Truth About Gus" is completely written already and it might take only three days to post the entire story, so I was anxious to put that one for that particular reason. And, I'm as diasppointed in myself as readers might be in me that I have some many unfinished stories, so this story is the last NEW one that I'm posting, and thereforth I'll concentrate on just finishng up what's aleady posted here.
Thanks agian for your encouragement. Sinc. Delores
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
I read this in one go. Great story. Hope to see an update very soon.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny (sweetheart): So glad 2 Hear from U again. I'm glad U like this one. And you will see an update as soon as today (saturday), but first I have to answer all the reviews first. So you'll see the chapters shortly.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Prologue
Tell Jen,
That you can post the whole story all at once, no matter how many pages. She will just have to read a few at a time. Unlike some of us who have to read all at once, because the story is so good we can't wait to finish.
Author's Response: Hi, Me:
Thanks for the advice; and I most certainly will take your advance because I planned to post in a hurry anyway for several reasons. One I feel I have too much stuff uncomplete at the story and I'm anxious to remedy that flaw. Also, this story is already written, so I want to post it and get it out of the way quickly.
".... story is so good I can't wait to finish." I"m eating that comment and compliment up THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!!
Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Came After All
This is why I hate reading stories that aren't finished.
Please finish soon.
Crazy and creative story so far. Great job!
Author's Response: Hi, ME:
Thanks you so much for joining me on this one. But don't you worry, I have all this story written already and it shouldn't take me more than 3 days of posting to get the full story up. I will post some more this Saturday, and I if I don't get the entire story up on Saturday, I should defnitely get it up by Sunday.
Again, so thrilled you joined me on this one, and please stay and enjoy. Now, I going to complete answering all these reviews and then do some additional posting.
Later, Sinc. Delores
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 09:14 AM · On: Prologue
You have certainly put a lot of effort into designing you alternate world. Most mpregs just drop a pregnant Justin into the middle of the regular Queer as Folk world with the only difference being that Justin can have children. It's commendable that here is a universe where male pregnancy is explained.
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2013 08:00 AM · On: Prologue
This looks like an interesting story but you’re putting way too many chapters up at once. This is already around 100 pages worth if you were to print it out. I can’t image anyone being able to read so much at once. If you would just put a few chapters up at a time every few days it would make it much more readable.
Author's Response:
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