Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Walker Raid
Im glad you killed lori never liked her lol I choose neither lol I want Daryl with me
Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: Walker Raid Part Two
hope that Justin will be saved really fast
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2013 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 14: Meeting the Prisoners
I would include Andrea'd POV with things if I were you. It'll help make your chapters a bit longer. They're pretty good length anyway but ...ahh well, a little more might be nice. Also, if you are still going to try and follow along the show.....well...she doesn't go away. That's all I can say without spoiling. Keep watching....You'll see.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2013 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: Walker Raid Part Two
Never for a minute thought you killed Justin. And his being at Woodbury should be a twist to make it much different from canon Walking Dead.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 14: Meeting the Prisoners
Why are they even bothering with the inmates when they can elimanate them all.
Like this version of curing Hershle a lot more than the cure they had to use in the show.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2013 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Meeting the Prisoners
Liking this story. But it's almost too bad we have to have women in it.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 13: About Eight Months Later
I enjoyed your update very much. You will see the third season has a very different feel to it as they are not really "scared" of the walkers anymore. Anyway have fun with it!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Leaving the Farm
http://www.free-tv-video-online.me/internet/the_walking_dead/
Here...Walking Dead, all 3 seasons...FREE! Just make sure you have a good pop up blocker and if they do come up, just don't click on any ads. But that's just me, I'm paranoid that way. vid players putlocker, sockshare, and vidbull are the best.
As for the chapter, very well done. I like the fact that they kept the RV, I thought that was very sad that they had to leave it, it was like the show was erasing all traces of Dale and he was such a sweetie pie. Nice development overall.
HOWEVER... A word of warning: OK I'm really liking what you are doing myself, but be careful, because writing a fanFIC story and largely regurgitating an ongoing copywrited series/story are two different things. Just be careful. I don't want to see you find out you've been breaking a rule somewhere and have this story deleted. I'm not going to narc on you, but just be careful, hon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the warning:) ill keep it in mind and thanks for showing me where to find WD3:)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 9: The Search for Sophia Comes to an End
One thing I'm sorry about was how Sphia was found so quickly in this chapter and then moved onto the next section. I remember that episode and it was really emotionally devastating to both Herchiel... and Carol after it was revealed that Sophia hadn't made it. But nevertheless it was a good chapter and the 'Nebraska' section (WD fans will know what I mean) was very well done with interesting changes as the QAF charachters were there.
Reviewer: mityfine (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Another Loss
Poor Dale.
Shane is an ass.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Another Loss
I love this story.
Reviewer: brittnicole57 (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2013 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: Another Loss
Good story, but when will Gus get to spend time with his daddies?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2013 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Another Loss
Poor Dale. Just as sad as in the show.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2013 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Everything's About to Change
Zombies and lots of gay romance. What more could you want.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Everything's About to Change
Gotta say, not to thrilled with the way "the rules" have been broken and Justin didn't die from his zombie bite. But at least he's still alive.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2013 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: Everything's About to Change
Everybody's gay in this version of TWD.
Author's Response: That's kinda the point lol:p
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2013 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: Everything's About to Change
Wow, this is getting tense! Glad to see an update on this great story!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2013 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Search for Sophia Continues
Oh No! Not Justin!
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Search for Sophia Continues
Great chapters and story!!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2013 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Meeting Hershel
Daryl is a sexy beast.
Author's Response: AMEN!!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 6: Things CAN Get Worse
Oh you'd better do everything! Don't make me send a walker after you!
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Truths Come to Light
I likehow this ended, better than the show.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 4: Walker Raid
Good, glad Lori got bitten. I didn't like her character in the show. I'm fine with the Rick/Daryl couple. They seem to have more chemistry on the show than Daryl/Glen. But, whatever you choose will be fine.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
Daryl is gay or bi? Alright! Wow, too bad Shane wasn't gay friendly, I would love to read about him lusting after Justin. No problem, enjoying this the way it is.
All the best!
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: One Month of Hell
Love The Walking Dead. Cool crossover. Enjoying this very much.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
I love zombies! Must eat brains! Good start.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2013 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 5: Truths Come to Light
Wow that was kind of a time jump there. What about Merle? You forgot to give him a hand. The guy who was bit. And quite a bit more.
As for Lori...Wow, you really hate her! Not sure why but oh well...I for one found Shane the more annoying. He was thuggish and had a caveman-ish look to him and at the end of season 2 when he ....blank spoiler... and came to his climax I was more than ready for it ...he was being a real jerk. Ahh well, individual opinions I guess. Great story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2013 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Truths Come to Light
Everybody loves Daryl.
Author's Response: AHEM TO THAT!!:)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 4: Walker Raid
My only regret with Lori gone is that means there will be no Li'l Asskicker. Sigh
For those of you who don't know who that is....you haven't been watching the show! Shame on you!!! Bwa hahahahahahahaha!
Author's Response: LOL so true!! Oh well it's worth not having her in the story!! She's even annoying to type!! How she became a character we'll never know lol:p
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
glad to see you are still working on this story. I think I missed a chapter. Thanks to you, I ran through all 3 seasons of the W Dead. I think it was flawlessly done although the 3rd season started to get a little trippy and I was sorry for Andrea. (Not aying why tho, no spoilers frm me)
Good chapter and as for justin's power, how bout a Spidey type sense to sense Walkers just before they attack. Not too much of a warning just a few seconds so that they (or most of them) can escape. Well, just an idea.
Author's Response: Thanks for the idea:) I like it:)
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2013 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
Sooo glad you updated! Great story! Haha loved when you killed Lori and saved Amy. I can really see Darrel with both Rick and Glen or what if Shane is so anti gay because he has those feelings for Rick, Brian or even Justin???
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
this is a most interesting crossover which is saying a lot since I am very unfamiliar with the Walking Dead series. I looked it up and was astonished that it has been going for 3 seasons and I never knew!
So I know nothing of why everyone hates S n`L (obscure joke there, ask yur parents) and don`t really want to but will take for granted that you do.
Enjoying the story a lot, kinda wondering where you are going with this... are they just gonna become zombie killersÉ Try to get home to Pittsburgh. Cross the border into Canada and end up in TorontoÉ (snicker, another obscure joke there sorry couldn`t help myself) So...anyway, CanadaÉ Where such things like zombies would NEVER be tolerated. ROFL Anyway looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
Erg Lori!! She always has a stick up her butt!! Justin's tattoo was a suprise. Maybe he can now cure people who are bit with his blood? It makes Justin able to see into the future? Justin's touch can instantly kill a zombie by touch?
Author's Response: Lol those are some funny ideas but I like them:) I'll keep them in mind:)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
love it
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
Gasp!! Very good start! I must admit the cliffy has sucked me in. It s a bit violent for my taste but considering the crossover it s expected...I'm not sure I've seen the Walking Dead but I did see Day of the Dead (the B&W) and I remember most of it. I remember most of it was a lot of talking tho so the part withought the zombies was pretty boring. Also From Dusk to Dawn which I have to admit was fantastic.
Author's Response: You must watch the Walking Dead!! Its one of the most addicting shows ever!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
Lori seems to have problems
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: One Month of Hell
Thank god you got them together again.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
The suspense is killng me.
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
hate lori hope a walker gets her soon
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Meeting the Others
Sorry but I think you've got it wrong. Everyone hates Lori.
THis is certainly different. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Admin (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 2: One Month of Hell
I removed the 'challenges' tag from your subcategories listed. The 'challenges' tag for now is only being used for the upcoming Spring Is In The Air Fan Fiction challenge, and one of the posting rules is that it must be completed before posting. In addition, this does not appear to be in the genre of a 'lighter, angst-free' story, so it is assumed you did not mean for it to be included in the challenge.
Thank you for posting your stories on Whispers.
~Admin
Author's Response: i honestly didnt know i put that on there lol. i must have hit it by mistake so thank you for pointing it out:)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 2: One Month of Hell
love it
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2013 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: One Month of Hell
I'm so in LOOOOVVVVEEEE with your story!! Zombies & Brian/Justin are my favorites. The only real pairing I care about is Brian & Justin. Maybe Daryl will meet someone? He is a man's man! LOL
Author's Response: donc't worry I will NEVER separate Brian and Justin lol
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
This is about the craziest crossover I've ever heard of. But, it's definitely not going to be your same old tired rehashed fic, that's for sure. Good luck! TAG
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2013 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Just the Beginning
The two things I love most together - zombies & QAF!!!! Don't change anything, just keep writing!!!!
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