Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2021 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Jus ðŸ˜ðŸ˜. im loving this
Reviewer: Tania (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2014 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful story really enjoyed it. I had to read the story again to refresh my memory
Author's Response: Thanks som much Tania *Hugs you* - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2013 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
Very twisty plot. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: I am so happy you read it,and thank you so much for commenting darling *hugs you* ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2013 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm sorry I'm only now getting to this story. The plot is intriguing. I'm already invested after only that first taste, TAG.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2013 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6
That was great! I'm so glad Keller was caught without any harm to Justin, and they both lived happily ever after... Ha, ha, ha...
Author's Response: Yaaaay,you popped in here to read this and left a beautiful comment!!! *Hugs you super tight* Thank you so much Kathleen :)
I'm going to try my hardest to not let really bad things happen to Brian and Justin in my stories from now on,I don't like being the cause of my fave men getting hurt too much,I think Justin could handle being slapped because he is strong (but even writing that didn't feel nice to do).
Love you ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
Please clear something up for me. Were Brian and Ryan fucking on a regularly bases as Keller said or was it just a one-time thing. If it was a regular thing you will have to do an epilogue and kill Ryan off for me please. LOL Didn’t Justin have any money as he was a successful painter and wouldn’t he have had an insurance payout on Brian or at least his money and loft? My head almost exploded with this chapter; a nice Joan, OMG. LOL Thank you for the entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: I imagine Brian did fuck Ryan on a regular basis as Keller guessed (there will be no epilogue to Ryan being killed off as he's played by Nicky from the Irish boyband Westlife and I love him lol)
Justin had his own money yes, but I don't think Brian would have taken any of that from him. I mentioned in the start of the story I think, that Justin couldn't live at the loft without Brian so he would have put it on the market I imagine but I don't think he would have got any money for that, probably Gus would have gotten that.
I think it would have been important to Brian to make amends with Joan in this story. He was locked away for a good portion of the time and would have reflected on how he wished things could have been different with her. And when she showed up at Debbies she too was willing to try again, so I just wanted that for him I guess.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2013 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
I'm a tad bit confused about the timeline. I'm assuming since Gus is only 6, Brian "died" at the end of season 1?
But I like the epilogue, as I felt the previous ending was a bit rushed and missed out of having Brian reunite with his family. Apart from Brian making up with his mom, I really liked the rest of it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Yea, I timed it to take place at the end of season one.
I guess when Brian was away one of the things he may have thought about was his mother. Everyone wants to be loved and excepted by their parents and since Jack had died Brian didn't really care about him anyway I imagine. But when joan showed up at Debbie's I thought straight away that since Brian was changing his life,if his mom accepted him, then he would give her another chance too. It just seemed to fit for this story I guess.
Thanks again for reading and commenting ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2013 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great story.
Author's Response: Really? Did you like how it ended up? ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2013 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow!! so much excitement! I loved it!
Can't wait to read Debs and the gang's reaction.
Author's Response: It should be good lol. Thank you for reading and commenting hon ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow; you wound that up quickly. I loved the fact that I never knew who was good or bad, but I was a little disappointed by the lingering kiss at the end. However, thank you for the entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: To me that kiss was nothing more than a thank you from Brian to Ryan. I think the reason he let it linger a bit was because he was very grateful to him for everything he had done. It was nothing more than that.
Thank you for reading and commenting - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2013 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5
Good story! I thought I knew who was the trader right up until the end. that was awesome. However good the story is it feels like it is missing stuff. Like how will Brian cope with going back to work, family, and friends. How will he cope starting his life over again? Now that he was declared dead?
Author's Response: I may do a sequel,not sure when tho. Thank you for reading this darling - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
Need more story.....starting to experience withdrawals.....only you can help by writing a sequel~JP
Author's Response: I think a sequel could well be in the works very soon. Thank you for reading darling - Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2013 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 4
I’m so pleased I was wrong with my guessing in the last chapter as I don’t like things to be predictable. I’m still not sure about Ryan but I have my fingers crossed David might still be a good guy because I can’t see Brian getting into Toulouse and finding the hotel room in time to save Justin. Please hurry back as I am worried about Justin predicament.
Cheers
Author's Response: Darling,I can assure you David is not the bad guy. He just comes across that way because of the way he got Justin into the car (with the whole false kidnap thing lol) Ryan is.......you'll have to continue reading to find out what Ryan is. I hope you do and I hope you enjoy how it all falls together in the end.
Working on chapter five now. Thank you so much for reading and commenting darling ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
Thank you for repairing your summary panel. Good luck with your story.
Author's Response:
I just wish I knew to do that sooner.
Thank you ~ Yvonne xx
Don't sweat the small stuff ~ bob
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2013 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 4
Will Brian be able to save Justin? Waiting to see.
Author's Response: *Shrugs* Oh of course he will lol,I'm only trying to drag it out while I write up chapter five hehehe ~ Yvonne xx
Ps,you comments mean alot to to me,thank you so much Marion xx
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
I am notorious for issuing good natured spankings my dear, and I'm afraid you've earned yours today lol.
Please don't let our Sunshine suffer too long, he and Brian have just gotten the chance to try and reconnect.
Update soon please~JP
Author's Response: *Stomps feet* Ok,but I was enjoying a little polaying with the readers minds for a bit. Will not let anything bad happen to sunshine and he and Brian will bw fine,I promise ~ Yvonne xx
Ps,thank you for reading and commenting x
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
Tres bein on the French Mon amie. It looks like our little Sunshine might be in a bit of trouble here, I think Don slipped something in Justin's water while he was away.
This isn't going to fair well with a certain hot tempered brunet.
Update soon please~JP
Author's Response: Why,thank you darling hehehe :)
I hope you enjoy the rest,working hard on chapter four so should have it up soon ~ Yvonne xx
Ps,thank you for reading and commenting x
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG I don’t like Ryan. What is he to Brian now since he is the only constant contact he has had in six years? So worst case scenario; Ryan is jealous which makes him a bad guy. Don is a bad guy; that’s a given, so let’s say David is too and Keller’s men are after Brian and maybe to get to him they will hurt Justin. Pessimistic I know but if I’m wrong I will be happy. How did you make my head go here as I thought they were all good guys before this chapter? Thanks to the entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: You are wrong on a few things darling,you'll find out what those are very soon. Thank you so much for reading and commenting ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
Happy to see a new chapter so soon.
Author's Response: The thing with me is I'm very imaptient and can't be bothered waiting for people who beta to get back with my stories,that's why I dive in head first and just throw them out there lol. Thank you for reading and commenting darling ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 3
Just when things looked like it was going good...Has Don been a bad guy all along? I can't even imagine the chaos this is going to cause.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you for continueing to read and comment :)
I guess time will tell who the rat is (no,it's not Ethan this tme lol) ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh no.don betrayed Brian.he will pay
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting,darling. More very soon and you'll find out what's actually happening ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Seriously, Vonnie! You're going to end it there? Are you trying to make me pull out what little hair I have left? LOL! Angst and a cliffhanger - I'm proud of you, girl - ha! Looking forward to the next installment. I was going to say I'm glad the boys are back together, but now I'm not so sure they are again - ack! Hurry back. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hahaha, sorry about the cliff hanger. It falls into the next chapter alot. I'm so happy you liked this chapter. I was very impressed myself at how I manged both the angst and cliffhanger in this chapter lol. I'm working on chapter four right now ~ Yvonne xx
Ps,thank you so much for reading and commenting,it really made my day x
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just read the first two chapters,and I think there great. Waiting for more. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much darling,im gonna post chapter three today ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
I know it was only to help someone out but Brian working at a pizza place still makes me laugh. I’m pleased Ryan isn’t looking for anything from Justin and I like the fact Brian had a way of staying connected with Justin. I know I didn’t want you to hurry with the next chapter as it gives the men more time to catch up but I think they have had enough time now so please hurry back.
Cheers
Author's Response: Your reviews to both chapters have really made my day darling,thank you so much. Should have chapter three finished tonight ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
I’m so sorry you lost all your reviews as you had so many for just two chapters. I can’t remember exactly what I wrote but I did love the start. You packed so much into the first chapter and set the story up wonderfully. You’ve got to love Google for translations. LOL I hope the software is kind to you with the following chapters.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so much honey,I was really gutted about losing the reviews. I still am. Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter again,that really made me smile :)
Yea, google is great for translations I think,and if someone who speaks French properly says "hey you didn't say that correctly" I will be able to say back "I got it from google translate" lol ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
Thank you. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Wow,thank you so much darling ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
Actually I think the software messed up the chapter count, and this was not an error of the writer. I've never seen this event before but I'm glad a re-post seems to have cured this issue.
For anyone wondering what this is about; before - the story started out at Chapter 0 and skipped to Chapter 2 without a Chapter 1. That put them out of count and order. A re-posting of the story has corrected the problem.
bob, admin, whispers
Author's Response:
Hi Bob,
Thanks so much for clearing that up. The repost was the only solution it seemed.ahwell. Thank you for taking the time to help me with it ~ Yvonne xx
|
