Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For 300 Pound Beauty
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 06:25 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Love it

Reviewer: Luvqaf (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2014 07:14 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Hy.
I really love your story.
You must write more often.
You're so talented!

Reviewer: apipsc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2013 06:18 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Wow. I don't have words to this. It's so well written . Congratulations :D You had an amazing plot, and you did well . :D*



Author's Response: Your words made me speechless. That's so sweet of you my dear Ana. Thanks much for the compliment. I am so overwhelmed that you like the story as much as I do. {{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 03:06 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Once u started posting the story, i went to youtube to watch the movie, i knew that movie a long time ago but never a fan of korean movies. There were some points that i could related to the plot coz i was once an overweight girl.

I like how u do some slightly changes, Brian would be completely OOC if he didn't have a taste of sweet Justin *grin* Great job, June :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the review. I do appreciate it much!

I did choose this story since I can also relate.

I am happy knowing that you did like the slight changes I made with the story. Thanks once again!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 02:30 AM · On: Confessions & Revelations

It's ok if the story is posted. A beta (with your password) can edit your text online without dominating the Most Recent page.

Also get a beta first so they aren't slammed with a lot of chapters at once for a new story. Just send them one at a time or two at the most. Depends on the beta who may be busy for others as well.



Author's Response:

Okay, thanks for all the infos my friend!!!

I will try to look a beta for this story at least. so that it will be more okay for future readers.

{{{hugs}}}

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2013 03:01 AM · On: Deception – Part 1

I was out of town all day and just got time to write back.

You can put up a story panel asking for a beta. Realize you won't get the rapid posting since you have to give a beta time to redo your work. Post a Request for Beta. There is a subcategory for that.

A beta will greatly help you with learning English too. Since you know English, just ask for a beta, not a translator. Here is one person's attempt for help. It shows you how to basically write your request and post it.

EXAMPLE

 

bob



Author's Response:

Thanks super much Bob! I will surely post a request once I have made the fic.

Is it possible also to ask for Beta even you have already posted the story?

Once again thank you so much for all the kindness, advises and all the support!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 02:25 AM · On: Misfortune

Congratulations on finishing your first story! Thanks for writing! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much TAG!!!! I am so overwhelmed for the support that had been given by all the members and admin of MW.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 02:06 AM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

My emotions were all over the place. Great Story!



Author's Response:

Hello Al! Thank you so much for reading and for the review. I am happy that you enjoyed the story.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

That was a perfect song to use! I'm so sad that it's over but it was a great story! 

Tori x



Author's Response:

Hello Tori! Thank you so much my friend for all the reviews you had made throughout the story till the end.

I am so much thankful for everything! i was sad likewise but I needed to end it. I was even having the trouble ending it the right way since I was so busy with work, that so much things I want to add but I am not sure if I will find the right time. I dont want to prolong the story and left it behind.

I love that song too, actually the music intro was played in the movie but they have not shown the whole song. I loved the lyrics so I decided to let Justin sing the song after his revelation, it was perfect because Justin is so much inlove with Brian and everything went like heaven for the two of them.

Once again thank you so much!!!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:35 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Hi, Sweetie!   Very unique and entertaining story!  I'm glad that Michael was put in place and the boys were able to resolve their problems.  As usual, too, Brian manages to win over all his most influential clients and convince them to stay.

I'll be looking forward to your next story.

Oh, and BTW - your story is YOUR story.  If you want to have it translated into another language, it belongs to you, not to the site, so I don't see a problem with having it posted in another language.  Most authors post in more than one place, anyway, and while it's great that you're posting on here, you are free to post it wherever else you want.  I think that's a great honor that someone would ask you to have it translated, in fact.

Thanks again for the story, Cindy.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hello Kim! First of all I would like to thank you once again for all the support you have showed me. i guess I will never stop thanking you!

You are very sweet and kind. I started to write because I was inspired by you.

I am trying to work for another fic, I had the plot but not yet started the story. Soon I will if RL will permit me.

BTW, JTSecrets advised me to get a Beta, I hope I can get someone on my next story. I was not able to reply him right away.

"I was really having troubles with my net for the past days that's why I was delayed in ending the story.

A million thanks to MW admin and members for the never ending support you have given me for my very first completed fanfiction story.

{{{Hugs}}}

 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:10 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

I really like your unique ideas!So will you keep on writing?I'm looking foeward to your new fandictons!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that wonderful comment.

Yes, I will keep on writing. I am about to start another fic....soon I will upload it.

Thanks once again for reading the story!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 08:46 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Yay, everything worked out well. I think it's really cool that the fans all accepted Justin, despite the plastic surgery. It's better than real life where the stars always deny getting work done. But in the end Brian and Justin happy is awesome. I think you did really well with the whole story, especially how you wrapped things up and had the guys make up. Great job!

Author's Response:

Hello Jenn!!! Finally it ended. After all the struggles they had been through, they are now together so much in love.

Thank you so much for all your support my friend! I do really appreciate much!

{{{Hugss}}}

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 07:35 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

hey great ending loved the story kim



Author's Response:

Hello Kim! Thanks much for the review. I am happy knowing that you loved the story.

Thanks for the continuous reading till the end.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

Dear Cindy

My name is Aileen, I come from China, I'm a big fan of your fanfictions ,especially this 200 Pounds Beauty.

There is so many what ifs in life, I was touched by your unique ideas about life , though I haven't read all your stories, but I know all your fics will be fantastic, I think I should share them to my Chinese friends.

So could you please authorize me to translate all your fics into Chinese?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours,
Aileen



Author's Response:

Hello there Aileen. I am so honored that you have loved the story to the extent that you want to translate the fic into your own language.

Who am I to deny that. In the first place, I did not own the characters as well as the plot of the story.

I am even so overwhelmed knowing that this story inspired you that much to even share it with your chinese friends.

Thank you so much!!! You are much welcome to make your chinese version with this one. It will be my honor.

But the only thing I am not sure of are the policies here at MW regarding translating the fictions.

Kindly drop a mail to JTSecrets to check on that.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 05:38 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

I have to say, I liked it, but I feel there were some things left unresolved.  Like the amulet, for example.  Did that make Brian fall in love with Justin?  Or did it have no effect and Brian's affections were all real?  I feel like that should have been explained better.  But like I said, I did enjoy it, and I look forward to what else you bring.  :)  Also, I've been waiting to watch the movie until your story was finished because I didn't want to ruin anything, so now I get to go watch it.  Hopefully there are subtitles!  XD



Author's Response:

Hello Jessie! Thank you for reading the story and for the review.

Brian did fall for Justin with Amulet or not. The start of the story was Justin's faith that one day Brian will fall for him. And like most people we do try to believe that there will be things that can help us obtained what we desired.

There was a part of the story where Daphne was asking Justin if he does believe in the amulet given by Mysterious Marilyn. And Justin did reply that it is not the material thing he was believing but the faith he is having with it.

Watch the movie! It was fantastic, and there were subtitles, no worries. Some of the highlighted words in the movies were used to express here in the story itself.

Thanks once again for your support and I am so happy that you did enjoy the story.>/p>

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Honesty Will Set You Free

You nailed it. Your first attempt at a B/J fic; the fact you were writing it with your second language and you had us all so intrigued from the start what can I say but bravo. I hope whoever gives out the blue ribbons see this as a definite contender. Even if you get a beta to tidy up some wording etc. you still had us under your spell and it is evident the movie you chose as inspiration was certain different to anything else posted here. I look forward to your next B/J adventure.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Flossee!!! I will never forget all the kindness and support you have given me! I can't thank you enough!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 02:43 PM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

I love this story I read is in one go. Te last part made me cry



Author's Response:

Thanks much for reading and for the review. I do really appreciate knowing that you love it.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 07:14 AM · On: The Star Is Born

I think the word you want is fond, not fun - a couple of times. Thank you for writing this.



Author's Response:

Hello there my friend....sorry for late reply, I was having net problems. Many times I tried to reply and even uploaded my last chapter but all I received were network errors. I was looking for your previous review, I cant find it anymore.

You are right my friend, I badly needed a Beta! I am just wondering how to get that? hehehehe.....Anyways....thanks for all the concern, I am so much thankful for all the support I had from you guys here in MW!

I am planning another story and definitely I will look for a beta-reader for that.....and I might need your advise whom I will ask for.

Thanks so much once again my friend!!!

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 07:46 PM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

What was the hospital thinking letting Michael take Jennifer? Michael just keeps making things worse for himself in the long run. I’m so pleased Brian has let Justin know that he has figured it out. Now I can stop holding my breath and wait for them to sort though there feelings and hopefully along the way there will be Michael’s downfall thrown in for entertainment. Another fine chapter; thank you.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Hello Flossee! Thanks once again for the review.

Love for one another will solve everything.

In time our boys will sort out things. And for Michael, he will never succeed in any way.

I do appreciate all your support my friend.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 06:50 PM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

I want to slap them both. Yet I wish I was there to fix it for them.

Author's Response:

Ouch, hahahaha! Thanks for the review my friend, good thing you are not in the bus now! :)

Thanks for your never ending support with the story.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 10:20 AM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

So this is what happens when Brian learns the truth...great...not. I mean, can't Brian be human for a little while, I guess not. So when will Justin tell Brian he heard all the nasty things Brian said to Michael about him and that is a reason he left? Can't wait to see how Brian justifies all of this.

Author's Response:

Brian was also hurting when Justin left. They both are. All they need to do is to have a heart to heart talk. Justin already did his part. It's Brian's turn to do so.

Thanks for all the support throughout the story Jenn.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: TTFBarnett (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 06:50 AM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

So many emotions in this chapter! I'm agnry at Michael for bringing Jennifer, I feel sad for Justin and Brian but also so fustrated over the entire situation! 

Great chapter, 

Tori x



Author's Response:

Thanks once again for the review Tori!

It was a heartbreaking for me while making this chapter, since I cried so many times when this part happened in the movie.

But true love will keep them together.

Thanks for all the support.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Misfortune

I like this chapter. I think Justin is playing the hurt card so well that he couldn't see that all his lies and his own deception have hurt Brian a lot. And I don't think Brian should take the blame for this mess up - not this time.



Author's Response:

You are right my friend. Brian is likewise hurting when Justin left without Brian knowing that he had been hurting Justin. Well it's time for Brian to really sit down and talk to Justin.

Thanks for the continuous reading! I do appreciate much.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 05:06 AM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

Ouch! Brian is sometimes really a pain in the ass! I'm curious about how he will fix this!

:)



Author's Response:

Their true love with each other will fix everything :)

Thanks for the review my friend. I appreciate it much.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 04:51 AM · On: The Truth behind Every Lie

Oh, such stubborn boys!  Just tell each other what is in your heart!  So much grief could be spared by just talking it out.  Ugh!  And Michael; what an inconsiderate jerk to bring Jennifer to the party as a sort of bargaining tool.  I know you will patch the boys up before you are done, Blanca.  I'm actually enjoying the angst in the meantime.  Looking forward to your next installment, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hello Kim! Thanks once again for the review.

I am trying to make the final chapter for this one. I just don't know if I will wrap it up in one chapter only.

Miscommunication is really leading nowhere. They loved each other but pride and the heartaches are always keeping them apart. But at least now Brian accepted to himself that he really do love the fat Justin.

Thanks for all the support my friend, for giving the time to read this story. I can't imagine how you do it knowing that you are so busy yourself.

I can't thank you enough. {{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 02:24 AM · On: The Performing Artist

I looks like Brian likes Justin in spite of his size.

Author's Response:

Well as what JTSecrets just said "Cupid's arrows have no weight limit."

Thanks for the comment. I hope you are enjoying the ride. More is yet to come.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 02:21 AM · On: The Job – Part 2

that was funny and sad at the same time.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was a terrible fall. But knowing Justin, he can handle it with face up! :)

Thanks for continous reading and for the comment.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 02:16 AM · On: The Job – Part 1

I loved the phone conversations.

Author's Response:

Thanks for loving it and for the comment. I likewise love it! :)

(((Hugs)))

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 02:11 AM · On: Misfortune

This was an excellent first chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for that wonderful comment.

Knowing that you find it excellent motivates me to keep on going.

I hope you will enjoy reading it till the end.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 12:40 AM · On: Be Real

Cupid's arrows have no weight limit.



Author's Response:
I love that quote! Thanks for sharing and for the continous reading.

I will try to update as much as I could.

(((Hugs)))

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2013 12:00 AM · On: Be Real

I'm not in a hurry for Brian to knowledge his true feelings for Justin because it would be really strange if it's hapenning too soon.

BUT, I'm curious about what kind of humiliation Justin will be the target by Michael's doing. Most of all, what will be Brian's reaction about it ? Like it what said without Justin, Michael is nobody. If the truth comes out to the public he will lose his career. I have not doubt that Justin signed a close saying if he stop ghost singing for Michael, he can't sing professionally either.

Another thing, I'm wondering about Justin's salary. Does he get half of what Michael earn ? Does Justin write the songs too ? I'm surprise Brian didn't think about putting Michael in a boys band. The one who can't sing is in the back dancing and being pretty (Backstreet Boys : Kevin, Take That : Howard and Jason, Spice Girls : Victoria,...).



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the comments.

Of course it's too early for Brian to know what he really felt for Justin. Although, Justin is already working for him for a year, but it was just recently that they got close.

Yes, he has signed a confidentiality contract when he accepted the job. You will know more in the coming chapters.

And yes, Justin is paid well. But that is only the icing of the cake why he accepted the job in the first place.

Justin is not writing the songs. Michael is doing mostly revival songs popularized by famous singers. There will be some originals but only few.

Michael's dream is to be a pop star and that what Brian did regardless how he did it.

About the humiliation thing, soon you will know. :):):)

Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2013 06:30 AM · On: The Performing Artist

SO Brian is going to be a jerk/jackass about liking justin, sorry I just watch some of the moive and it's so good.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the comment.

Yeah, the movie is fantastic. For the first chapters of this story will be taken from the movie itself. But I am planning to make some twist and challenges in between that is most likely suitable in the characters of Brian and Justin. :)

Keep on reading! :) :) :)

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 04:29 AM · On: The Performing Artist

Well, Michael is being his typical, whiny self!  I can't wait for Justin to transform into a beautiful butterfly on the outside and promptly clip Mikey's wings - ha!  I like the fact that Brian is kind toward Justin, too, even though I can't imagine him being all that attracted to him in his present state.  But something tells me that's about to change...thanks for the quick update, Blanca.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hello Kim! :) Me too...I can't wait for that time to come; that is why I decided to pause my RPS story first just for another week and just work out with this one so that I can add more chapters the soonest :)

I am so happy that you are enjoying reading the story.

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 12:34 AM · On: The Performing Artist

Got a chance to start reading this.  I'm excited to see how it turns out, it's a very unique idea.  :)  Great start!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the nice comment.

This story is based on that Korean movie. I loved the plot of story so much that I want the QAF characters to be in it.

I hope you will enjoy reading it. :) :) :)

{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 11:39 PM · On: The Performing Artist

so michael is brian-obsessed and self absorbed too, why am i not surprised? he's gotta know that without justin, he has no singing career, right? and looks like brian already likes justin, YAY.

Author's Response:

Hi Jenn. Thanks for reading and for the comments.

Well, Brian always likes Justin whichever story we are in. But the nice part is the challenges in between their likeness towards each other.

Honestly, I dont like Michael much, so yeah....I want him to end up always obsessed to Brian and be neglected. Hehehehe!

And Michael is just a self-centered, conceited, egoistic type of person to admit that he has no talent over Justin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:33 PM · On: The Performing Artist

I look for the day Justin quits Michael and dumps him on his no talent ass.



Author's Response:

Hahaha!!! Believe me I want that soooo much too!!! :) :) :)

But what to do, we have a very kind and patient Justin in the story. Someone needs to provoke him to be bad.

Let's wait and see what happens next.

Thanks for reading!!! {{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:30 PM · On: The Job – Part 2

A mid chapter cliffie is always a brilliant idea.



Author's Response: Thanks much for that wonderful comment :):):)

I hope you enjoy reading the chapters.

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:17 PM · On: The Job – Part 2

TO: Siren - To answer your questions:

Let's wait and see if Brian will be interested with the Fat Justin.

And...Michael will always be Michael, you know what I mean :)

Reviewer: sarafanjum (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 09:57 PM · On: The Performing Artist

Hope the story will be different from the movie in many ways. Really liking it & wish Brian's soft spot for Justin will continue to grow.

Thank you for updating so fast & keep'em coming :D

~Love & Kisses~



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks for reading and for the comment.

Well, the plot of the story is really based on the movie, but there are some additions and twist in between.

The movie is one of my favorites, so I really want Justin to play the role of Hanna.

I will try to update as quick as possible :) Thanks once again for liking it.

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 07:24 PM · On: The Job – Part 2

hmmm, maybe brian is a little interested in justin? i can't wait to see more about the characters in the story. will michael be a brian-obsessed brat?

Author's Response:

Thank you for following up this story. I appreciate it much.

And before I will forget, thank you for making this story one of your favorites. That motivates me to try my all best to make this story worth of your time.


{{{Hugs}}}

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 07:16 PM · On: The Job – Part 2

Ooh, can't wait until Michael is exposed for the fraud that he is.  This kinds of reminds me of the old movie, "Singing in the Rain," one of my favorites.:)  What a unique story idea, Blanca!  Eagerly waiting for the next part!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! Thanks for all the encouragement words and support you have showed.

Hmmmmm If I'm not mistaken; Are you referring to that 1950's musical comedy film "Singing in the Rain" or there is a new revival movie of that made after the 50's? I have not seen that one but I have heard of it. My all time favorite old musical movie is "Sound of Music". :) :) :)

I will try to work out some more chapters in this story then I will try to update my RPS story too. I was just hooked up with the fat Justin story since I can relate to what he is experiencing. Lovelfe wise ;)

{{{Hugs Back}}}

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2013 12:07 PM · On: Misfortune

You have me intrigued with the plot...I am curious to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it and for the comment.

I am glad that the plot made you intrigued because it only means you will read more :) :) :)

I will try my best to entertain you more in the next chapters to come.

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:14 AM · On: The Job – Part 1

Does Brian know that Justin is a ghost singer for Michael???



Author's Response:

Of course Brian knows; he is the one who hired Justin.

Thanks for reading and for your comment. The next chapter will tell you more. :) :) :)

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 08:14 AM · On: The Job – Part 1

yay! some insight into this justin, though I am sure more is coming. poor sunshine.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it and for the comment. No worries, there will be ups and downs of Justin's life in this story but everything will fall into right places. :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 04:08 AM · On: The Job – Part 1

Cute chapter however paragraphs would read better - just a thought.



Author's Response:

Yeah, you are right. Thanks for reading and for your thoughts. I appreciate it coz it will help me improve for the better.

I guess that's the only part I did not make in paragraph. I might as well edit it later once I'm finished with the next chapter. :):):)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 03:00 AM · On: The Job – Part 1

Hi, Blanca - well, I can certainly see Justin as a singer with Randy's beautiful singing voice.:)  I was amused by the fact that he's playing with his dog on the side while he's having phone sex with the customers - ha!  Kind of funny but also sad.  I know that eventually, though, our beautiful man on the inside will be beautiful on the outside, too, and will meet the man of his dreams.  Still enjoying your story, my friend; looking forward to your updates.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim! That's the reason why I choose this story for Justin since Randy really sings well. :) :) :) Thanks for enjoying it. Next chapter will be up shortly and finally with Brian on it.

{{{Hugs Back}}}

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 07:28 PM · On: Misfortune

it´s not that I don´t like the story just the picture seems so odd. But of course, necessary for the story. Keep on! 



Author's Response:

I understand your concern, it is really unusual to see Justin's picture to be fat.

But I admit, he still looks so HOT ;)

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 06:10 PM · On: Misfortune

I'm having a crappy day and the pictures of fat Justin made me laugh, so thank you for that.

I love the plot of this story and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I am glad that I had made you laugh. Thank you for reading and for liking the plot. I am editing now the next 2 chapters, hopefully I can upload tonight. :) :) :)

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:28 PM · On: Misfortune

poor Justin, WHO did the photos for the banner OMG! Maybe you go changing the pics over the course of the story :). Let´s see what the lucky charm is going to help! 



Author's Response:

I was the one who created the photos for the banner. I hope I am not offending you with the new looks of Justin. It is only made based on the story itself.

But aside from the fat Justin, in the banner there is also the gorgeous version, the pop star Justin!

As the story goes, I hope I can make you love him more :) :) :)

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 04:07 PM · On: Misfortune

more pls :)

Author's Response:

No worries, more will soon to come. :)

Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 12:30 PM · On: Misfortune

This is really a interesting storya281;

I love ita281;The banner is so funnya281;

I never see justin look like that beforea281;

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and loving it. Eventually Justin never looked like that before, it was just a pigment of my imaginations. :):):)

I can't even stop myself smiling while making the banner. Justin still so hot even being Fat! :)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 11:52 AM · On: Misfortune

WOO HOO!!!  This will be veeeeery interesting.  Can't wait for more.  An overweight Justin--hard to imagine.:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. Well, i know it is hard to imagine Justin being fat since he has a great body and awesome butt. ;) But it only took me a day to finally decide to start something different for a change. :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 09:11 AM · On: Misfortune

I’m sorry it’s a bit late but welcome to MW. I love it when someone brings a new idea for a fic and this looks really interesting. Beauty is only skin deep; let’s hope Brian learns that. I look forward to the next update. Will you be alternating between fics?

Cheers

Author's Response:

Nothing is late for a nice welcome :) :) :)

Thanks for your interest of the story! And you are right, beauty is definitely only skin deep. But what to do if in reality, lots of people still think otherwise.

Surely I will be alternating between fics.

Once again thank you for the welcome and for reading it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Misfortune

Excellent opening chapter.  I hope you write quickly.



Author's Response:

Oppps... I mean "MATCH" instead of "MUCH" in my previous response, hahaha.....silly me! :) :)

Wow!!! A comment "excellent" coming from JTSecrets, I'll surely treasure much, believe me! :) :) :) Super thanks!!! And I will try my best to update tonight! :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Misfortune

I resemble this Justin but I have another 50 lbs. on him. I have recently taken off 25 and still moving down the scale :)

How am I doing it? I eat very little solid food; I drink 11.5 oz. diabetic shakes 6 times a day and I'm dropping about 5 lbs. a week. A common diet for lap band surgery only I don't do surgery if I can help it. I am being monitored by a doctor too. After the first week your stomach shrinks and you don't feel hungry.

Good luck with this interesting story.



Author's Response:

I was supposedly gonna make him more fatter inorder to result for an extreme make-over surgery, but I am basing this story to that korean movie of the same title, so if he is more than 200 pounds, then title of the story won't much anymore, hehehe! <<>>

I am likewise overweight since forever. what to do? I love eating! To the extent that it is mostly high calorie foods I liked. But eating makes my day as always, but nevertheless I am still trying my best to stay okay, health wise. ;)

Thanks for the advice and the goodluck, I surely need it! :) :) :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:20 AM · On: Misfortune

Oh, this is wonderful, Blanca!  What a unique idea!  Never seen the movie, but this sounds like a lot of fun. And I love the photos of a fat Justin - what a hoot!

 

Eagerly looking forward to the rest of this.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I can't explain how happy I am knowing you find this story wonderful. You are one of my favorite authors, and knowing you find my work good is overwhelming.

i was really planning to upload this story earlier when i finished the first chapter and started working on the second one two days ago, but unfortunately no time to make the banner since RL work is kicking my butt out.

Finaly last night I had finished it, after decided the top three of Justin's 10 fat faces I created to use for the banner. Knowing you loved it paid off all the efforts I made.

Thanks much! {{{Hugs Back}}}

Reviewer: mat (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:18 AM · On: Misfortune

This looks promising!Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. I can't wait for more myself. :):)

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:15 AM · On: Misfortune

This is deinitely a different story line than I've seen before. I am really looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it and the interest you've showed. :) I will try my very best to update it soon.

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