Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2020 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm sorry that you lost your interest in the story, but I am still happy that it was concluded with a happy ending!!
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
good one
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Brian
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good job closing everything up! I hate when a writer just abandonds a story without word.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2015 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice sequel to the original and a great ending with the glimpses into their future together. You say you lost your interest in this story but please be assured it was still an enjoyable and satisfying read:-)
Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2013 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
nice story.
Mainly, they are happy. It is wonderful. :)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
i like this and blackout mybe another auther on this site can finish it kim
Author's Response: Thanks. Oh, I'll probably continue it again after I decide to rewrite it. I'll never just abandon a story like that but I take them down to rewrite and rework the plot before posting again. So, it will be back again some day. <3
Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love it!! poor Justin, poor Brian
Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love it!! Did not expect Brian to be the one hurt
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is really sad. I am looking forward to the story and where you're going with it, but I am going to wait till there are at least 2 or 3 more chapters. I do want to read this and I do hope you finish it... please update frequently :o) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. Real life has gotten in the way of updating like I want every other day. Thanks for reading. <3
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Hobbs had hit him and was about to do it again when I tackled him. We fought until Daphne showed up with a teacher and a group of students."
Interesting take. I can't wait to see how the whole family responds to the attack, besides Michael.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
The doctor cleared his throat and asked, "Family of Brian Kinney?"
I was not expecting that!
This was a very good first chapter! It will be interesting seeing the bashing with a different outcome.
Author's Response: Nobody really was. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
These are rough times, having a loved one laying helpless in a hospital bed and you are completely incompetent in providing anything to the one you love. And the guilt, when it finally arrives, it's almost impossible to handle.
Author's Response: <3
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Nice twist in the story! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
What The...?! Wow, I was not expecting THAT! Very intrigued for sure. Up date soon :o)
Author's Response: Haha, I don't think anyone was. <3
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
love it:)
Author's Response: <3
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
love the twist u made brian the victam keep up dating kim
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
with daphne and cynthis sitting on either side of him i knew it was justin. besides, if it wasn't why would the family be there? gives michael more reason to hate justin.
looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Haha, well Cynthia and Daphne would have been there if Justin was the one in surgery. Plus Jennifer was there too. But, meh, I did my best. <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2011 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice try to conceal the identity of the vic but hey it cannot be more than that, can it?
Is this gonna be a vice versa story with the bashing and the coma and the recovery of Brian? I wonder... I guess I will have to wait and see where your muse is taking you with this.
Cant wait for the update sweetie. *hugs* Marla
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