Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2013 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
interesting story. Go, Justin :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
I know I reviewed this before but I could help myself. That slap was long time coming. He should have gotten it for that blond boy piece of ass comment. Ionely the show as written this way.
I love this.
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just. Wow.
Reviewer: Swallow (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2012 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I don't find it so hard to believe that Justin would slap him--he did punch him in the face, twice--once after Brian specifically asked him not to. But it pissed me off when Debbie punched him in the episode where Vic dies.
Great little fic :)
Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful story! Chock full of angst in so few words... poor boys.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
I definitely like how Justin didn't pull any punches in this confrontation. Very good sumation of the situation as it was at that moment. This is very good.
Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was an excellent gapfiller. I always thought that original scene didn't quite feel right. Now it does :)
Reviewer: skywriter (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting perspective. I thought you did a good job with the dialogue and the story. My only question/concern is that I find it very out of character and surprising that you would have Justin slap Brian. It just doesn't seem like something Justin would do to anyone especially Brian. I always dislike it when writers have Brian or Justin hit one or the other in a story. I run into this every once in a while and it just seem odd.
Outside of that this is a well done story.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
And yeah, I was debating that as well while I wrote it. I see your point, yet I don't think it's that much out of character. And this one is just... say a desperate measure because Brian is drunk and Justin's wants his attention. It's not like he really hits him but just... well, gives him a slap to get his attention.
However, I'm glad you liked it nonetheless.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great fic I really enjoyed it thank you
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was heartbreaking. But really good! Just what Justin should have done.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Completed??!!! NNOO! This was so good! It was perfect! I wish Justin would have said this to Brian in the show!
I'd love to hear Brian's thoughts after this encounter.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Yep, complete. However I just posted a kinda-sorta sequel to it.
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, I thought this was excellent! You had their characters' dialogue so perfect - I could just see this in my mind after that episode. I always hoped they would talk after Justin saw him there. You did such a great job on keeping them in character. Thanks for sharing this!:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I never quite understood why Justin just stood there. But at least, it made me start writing fanfic for the fandom :)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
more please.
Author's Response: Just posted a kinda-sorta sequel to it ;)
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