Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Pistol Packin' Mama
Oh my goodness - still loving it! When these two finally get together, I may just spontaneously combust right along with them! Is it too much to wish that we find out where Ethan has gone, but keep him there - far away from the electric attraction between these two?''
favorite line this time..."They say the eyes are the windows to the soul. I preferred the shades drawn whenever I met another's gaze. I didn't like the way this kid was peeking through my drapes." - - - genious!
Author's Response: Nice to hear you are still liking this read. I agree their heat is always so intense I almost feel it's firey rays through the tv when I watch or my computer when I read! :p & no, It is not too much to hope for at all for Ethan to maintain his distance, lol. On the outside looking in to Brian and Justin is Right where I like him. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2011 04:52 AM · On: Pistol Packin' Mama
Well well, just when I think you can't possibly outwit yourself, you go and write a chapter like this one! This story is marvelous. Cheatin' Ethan doesn't deserve Sunshine's love. Great Chpater! -Benny
"Carl Horvath as I live and drink."-lol
Author's Response: Thanks as always for taking the time to let me know your thoughts, as you know I appreciate it. I try my damndest to be witty, sometimes it works. ;p I'm glad you like my humor. Yes, Sunshine deserves the best, and the best is Detective Kinney. :)
Reviewer: Lexxie (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Pistol Packin' Mama
I love this little noire.
Author's Response: Hello Lexxie! I love that you love this. It's always so nice to hear from readers, so few people ever review, so I thank you so very much for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying this. *hugs*
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
I loved Gus in this and Brian's snide remarks to Mel. HA! This is so much fun! Please update soon! :o)
Author's Response: I agree, Brian and Mel's dialogue was fun for me to create, as was Gus. I'm a big fan of the little guy, he's in a lot of my stories. Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's nice to hear you're having fun with it. *hugs* ~Mandi
Reviewer: Babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
Well I just devoured the first four chapters. What a romp! The dialogue is so clever and surprising at every turn! I'll beg - more please......
Author's Response: 'Devoured' is such a nice way to hear of someone reading my work. It makes me glad to have given you something you found tasty! :P. Next chapter coming right up. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. *hugs*
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2011 04:07 AM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
still loving it - still can't wait to read more - most entertaining!
Author's Response: So glad to hear you're still interested, next chapter coming very soon. Thanks again for taking the time to review, it makes me smile. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
This was AMAZING!
"That's shocking." "No wait, what's that thing that's the opposite of shocking?" :)
This story is just a great read and I am really looking forward to see this crime unfold even more. We know Ethan is no good. Time for Brian to prove it.
Keep up the great work-Benny
Author's Response: As always, such a pleasure to share my writing with you. It's nice to hear when reader's are really enjoying my work. Yes we are just gettign started, there's lots more for Detective Kinney to...detect lol. *hugs to you my friend*
Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
i absolutely love this story!!!!!!!! you are a very talented writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your encouragement really prompts the writer in me. :) Hope you keep on loving it. *hugs*
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
Another great chapter! Awwww, I loved Mildred Pierce.
Author's Response: I love her too! :) I'm happy you like this chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Shoo Shoo Baby
I love reading more of this! :-) I was surprised at Brian's reaction to Gus; telling Lindsey she could count on him. That made me happy, coz' he can be such an asshole sometimes. We're starting to see little glimpes of humanity in him! LOL
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: Yes, Brian can definitely be an ass, but I love his lighter, kinder moments that we all know are there...no matter how deep, deep , deeep down he tries to hide them. Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying the read. :)
Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 10:16 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
I'm so diggin' this girl! It's great. You really can write anything, Lucky for us readers. :D Congratz on the ribbon, you always deserve them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review & congrats. I don't know if I can write anything, but I'm willing to give any style a shot. :P
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 06:43 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
Congratulations on your ribbon!! It is so richly deserved for this splendid tale!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweetheart. :)
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 05:01 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
Congratualtions on another well earned Ribbon! This story just gets better with each chapter. Your clever lines never cease to astound. You're one clever cool kitten. ;) -Benny
Author's Response: Thank you for the congrats, and as always your vote of confidence in my writing, a nice review. *Big hugs*
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 03:09 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
I love this Brian! He's got a crush lol it's so fun to read in this style and your writing it wonderfully. Please update soon! :o)
Author's Response: I'm happy you like this 'crushing' Brian. :) Hope you continue to enjoy this fic. *hugs*
Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:59 PM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
Your talent is phenomenal. This just keeps getting better and better! I think Brian Kinney was born for this era! lol This is so fun to read, I almost forget I'm not watching it on film.
Author's Response: Thank you for such praise, and nice words. It makes me smile. I agree, Brian Kinney is pretty perfect for this role. Hope you continue to like where the journey leads. *hugs*
Reviewer: Kelly Reginald (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:53 PM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
"Brian Kinney Ma'am. Private Dick."
...
"The way I hears it, it ain't so private."
Hahahaha I almost spit out my drink when I read that. Your Brian is in character even in the 40's. You're amazing.This story is incredibly creative. You have such a great sense of humor!! thank you for sharing it, I can't wait to see where they go next.
Author's Response: THank you for the kind review, I am glad you find Brian in character, I always try my best no matter what situation I stick him in. ;)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 11:21 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
"Under the collar I was sweatin' like a Madam at midnight mass."
I LOVE IT! Delightfully entertaining!
Author's Response: I love that you love it! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. :)
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 10:34 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
i know i'm reading and reviewing somewhere.
man do i love this.
a purple zoot suit? omg i can just picture it.
now he has a clue, let's see where it leads.
Author's Response: I'm happy you always take the time to review no matter where you read it. lol. Hope you have fun following the clues with the boys. *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:38 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
Under the collar I was sweatin' like a Madam at midnight mass.
Best line! lol Omg, could I love this story any more! Great chapter. Love how you wrote Daphne. PERFECT!
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile. I'm grateful and thrilled that you are loving this, hope you continue to do so. :)
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:22 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
This was just amazing, Mandi. And, I must say - this has to be my favorite new story right now. It's so creative in such a unique flavor and originality. I'm positively hooked. I feel like I'm back in another time, watching it play out upon the screen - of course waiting for the 'private dick' to swoop in for his dramatic kiss. *Smiles* Your terminology is simply brilliant! An interesting blond book my cock and I both wanted to read. -----brilliant! Thanks so much for this update. I am simply amazed and totally entranced!! =)
Author's Response: It makes me incredibly in awe that this is a fave of yours, thank you!!! I wish gale and Randy really would act this out on screen, lol. But I'm positive we have them memorized enough to imagine it ourselves...delicious. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:08 AM · On: You Call Everybody Darlin'
Okay, Mandi, you did it again! This is so hysterical! My favorite line for some reason in this chapter is the one about "many a kitten had come to me beggin' for milk I wasn't servin'." This is so incredible, girl! I am so jealous of your talent! I will be anxiously awaiting where your little tale takes this!
Author's Response: That's my favorite line too! :) My tremendous gratitude for the ribbon suggestion, but now I'm nervous. :P I hope I can continue to keep it worthy. Thanks again for always being so supportive of my words my friend. *hugs*
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:45 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
I love the slang and the classic lines. I miss the old detective movies and novels.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying this. It's certainly fun to write. Hopefully I can continue to be creative with the lines. :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 02:44 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Absolutely loved this!
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
What a delightful read this story is! The lingo and fast paced wit are amazing! I wonder how long it takes Justin to forget all about Ian. lol i'm guessing not long at all. Please update soon! :o)
Author's Response: thank your for reading and reviewing. I too love the simplicity and dry wit of the style, it's a blast to create. LOl yes, I know I certainly would forget all about ...'whatshisname' after meeting Detective Kinney. :P
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 09:03 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
I LOVE this so much. It's like Brian Kinney was born to be in a Noir detective role lol. You write this so perfect that I can easily picture this as a b&w movie in my head. Great start!
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2011 12:18 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
Haha, what great lines you have cleverly come up with! This story gets better with each word. I couldn't possibly choose a favorite line but I must say I may have laughed the most at this one: "I decided instantly that I'd keep a close eye on it. You know, as a public service." Great stuff, please keep it up! -Benny
Author's Response: Haha YES! that is my favorite part too. Sometimes, I manage to amuse myself. :P I'm so happy you like this. More soon.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
I can see I will be anxiously awaiting each chapter! This story is such a welcome departure to all those "I know just what's coming next' stories that are so common. And, of couse, I am still so enjoying the 'old PI' genre! You really have such a wonderful spin with words, some of your noir zingers make me step back and say...wish I'd said that - it's so clever!
from ch1 - 'My eyes had just been introduced to his ass, and already my cock was pleading with me to arrange a play date.' - precious
ch 2 - 'Then I remembered I was Brian fucking Kinney, and when I found a new ride I wanted to take for a spin, I cared very little about it's previous owners' - so very 40's, yet, so very canon Brian
and... 'Gold's name rang fewer bells than Santa's sleigh in July' - classic (and for those of us who are no fan of 'Ian' - a real hoot!)
Don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment, I can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are liking this story and taking the time to let me know your thoughts. it means so much. I hope I (or rather Detective Kinney) can continue to amuse. :) *hugs*
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
omg I so love Brian in this role! He's perfect! I'm falling in love with 'this' Brian in a whole new way, and I never thought that could be possible!
Loving every minute of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you Gina for your thoughts. Yes, I think Brian was a perfect character to try in this kind of role. His disregard for opinions, dry wit, rough edges and sexual intesity does a noir detective make. :P Happy you're liking this so far. more soon. :)
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2011 08:21 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
you had from the second sentence, great fist chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm pleased you like it. I'm grateful that you've taken the time to review. Hope you will continue to read and enjoy. *hugs to you*
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
i can picture these settings in my mind-a black and white movie. i love your english slang of that era. so fitting to the story -good and amusing at the same time. back seat driving-haven't heard that one for awhile. good story. my peeps are enjoying it also.
Author's Response: A huge thanks and big hug to both you and your peeps! :) I'm so pleased that you are having fun reading it, as i'm having fun writing it. It's great to hear that you're picturing this in black and white, that's exactly how I'm hoping to portray it. I would love to see Gale and Randy really act this out...but that could easily be said about every fiction I've ever read. Lol. :P
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
You know, I didn't think you could outdo the first chapter - but what do you know? You did just that. I was smiling and ahhing through it all, hating for it to come to an end. Maximum cabbage, minimal bullshit - loved that! So utterly Brian Kinney - you write him so well. I'm anxiously awaiting more of this so cleverly written story! =)
Author's Response: I can't tell you how it makes me smile that I'm making you smile with this story. Thank you for reading and as always for reviewing. I really am trying to keep Brian kinney true to himself in this. So far so good i think, hope it stays that way. More soon. *hugs*
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 07:14 AM · On: Moonlight Cocktail
Ah, Mandi - This is absolutely BRILLIANT! All those snappy one-liners - I am so in awe of your writing. "My cock invited him to sit down; he didn't oblige" - hysterical! There are too many witticisms in this chapter to be able to do them proper justice here. How in the world you can come up with these - and from the 40's, no less - is beyond me.:) I am so jealous of your talent, my dear! You've even got me running to the web to look up snappy comebacks, like this one: Let's get out of these wet clothes and into a dry Martini. See what you've done to me?? I am so glad you have found time to get back into writing, my friend...now I'm almost afraid to write any more of my own because they will pale in comparison...(have I laid on the praise thick enough now? LOL!). It is so well-deserved, though - extreme kudos to your skill.:)
Author's Response: Haha, yes my lovely I believe you've laid it on quite thick enough. :) But I thank you for every bit it. You yourself though deserve the thickest of thick praise for your works! You are a fantastic author. I'm so happy I'm making you laugh and that I'm eliciting the desire to research snappy lines, too funny. LOL I hope i can continue to be witty for the rest. :P More soon. *Big hugs*
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 11:11 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Love, love love this! It's fresh and exciting! It reads like a Micky Spillane Novel. (so loved Mike Hammer!)
This really pulled me in! Great job, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's so wonderful to hear from you Gina! :) I'm happy to have pulled you in, hope I didn't tug to tight. :P Yes! I completely love the spillane spin, it should be fun to write. Hope I can do it and continue to entertain you with this one. *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 10:55 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Wowza my dear girl, this is a great start to a classic noir style fiction. I studied Noir Films at the University. Many years ago lol. I am excited to see your writing talent tackle this creative story. -Benny
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like this. eek! I'm a little nervous, that so many readers are well versed in noir...it's tough but I'm excited to do it. I hope I can do a good job, it should be fun, I'm happy you'll follow it with me. :)
Reviewer: kinnetic_bliss (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 08:31 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Hello, dear. I must say it's fabulous to see you back writing again. What a spectacular new story. I was riveted. I guess it doesn't matter what scenario - Brian is always our Brian - and you write him so well. I'm excited for this one & so looking forward to reading more.
*Hugs*
Author's Response: I'm glad to have finally gotten the time to write a bit and also to read your story. I'm super excited that you like this. Yes, I really try hard to keep Brian in character no matter what alternate universe I stick him in lol. I'm excited to write more I hope you'll like it! :)
Reviewer: Taša (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:51 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Very, very cool story and great writing...:)
Taša
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. :)
Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:53 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Oh, I savvy alright, and can't wait for this to be completed so I can read it! Kudos to you for such an exciting concept (and banner!). I'm a noir fan (just watched 'The Dark Corner' on Saturday), and will be waiting for this one . . . which I know you'll hit out of the park! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your vote of confidence in my writing ability. :) This style is a challenge but I'm eager to face it. Hope you will indeed enjoy it once it's completed. *hugs & smiles* Mandi
Reviewer: StuStuStudio (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:39 PM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
I don't often review stories, but this one is just too AMAZING to ignore. Noir films are sort of a hobby of mine. So this immediately drew my attention and then it wouldn't let go! You have really mastered the feel and narration of the genre, that is very impressive. I will for sure be looking out for updates on this fun story!
Author's Response: I truly appreciate you taking the time to review...just this once ;p It means a great deal as a writer to hear my reader's thoughts. I'm a little nervous to write this for so many noir fans, I pray I get it right. I'm happy you think I've done a good job so far, let's hope I can continue! lol :)
Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 11:35 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
There is no way to really express just how much i LOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story already. noir has always been one of my faves. With your incredible wit and writing I know this is going to be great.
Author's Response: Ya!y I'm glad you love this so far my friend, i do hope you will continue to do so. Noir is very fun, I hope I can remain witty enough to pull it off. :p Thanks again for your thoughts. ~Mandi
Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 11:32 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Oh this is so creative! such a fun and delightful read. You've really got this era down pat, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 10:16 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Absolutley amazing! The mood you set with your descriptions of the ambience is nothing short of brilliant! I could actually feel the night!
A few of my favorites:
His face:--He wore cheap leather shoes and an expensive smile.
The mood:--flooding the streets with sexual sin. My sin of choice.
The night:--Eclipsed by a rainbow of neon, cigarette clouds, and the heavy smog of lower class.
Those eyes:--they'd show you your future, if you were brave enough to look ... I wasn't.
--Those endless oceans that made me want to take up sailing.
Wonderful! Just wonderful! I can hardly wait for Chapter 2!
Hugs, Cindy
Author's Response: Brilliant? Well, that certainly makes me smile! Thanks so much. I'm very glad to have created something that you enjoy. I'm having a fun time with this style. Chapter two should be done VERY soon. Hope you'll like it. *hugs*~Mandi
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 07:03 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
Love this already. The old PI writing style is a fun diversion from the usual, and of course the little bit of canon thrown in with the lamppost make a fan take notice. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot. I couldn't be happier that you love it already. Yes, I thought a little diversion from all the angst of real life could be nice, and figured noir could be just the thing. :) I like that you appreciate the lampost, you're as big of a fan as me...that's enormous. :P hope you continue to enjoy it. *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:29 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
this is a very different take. i love stories about the thirties and forties. i understand all the lingo. cool this will be interesting to watch unfold.
Author's Response: Hi there! thank you kindly for taking your time to read and tell me your thoughts. I'm excited about the concept, I've never written this era but it's exceedingly fun. Hopefully i'll get it right. I really hope you continue to enjoy it. :) ~Mandi
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:28 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
liking the story already
Author's Response: I'm so glad!! Thanks for the review. *hugs* Mandi
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:48 AM · On: In the Blue of the Evening
What a treat, my friend, to see not only an update to your WIP but this new one as well! Love the middle animated banner, BTW, with Justin in black and white from the Season 4 EP - how perfect for this story! And I'm glad you included the dictionary at the end - LOL! Didn't need it, though, to figure out why Brian needed a 'play date!" As always, your writing astounds me. I will be waiting anxiously for any updates.:)
Author's Response: LOL Brian's Business always needs a playdate. ;)
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