Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2021 05:51 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Aggrrr I thought I was reading a happy ending of a beautiful story, but ... *sigh* poor Gus. But I also make a happy dance, now you will continue this lovely story.
I think at the end Gus and Cass will be a couple, I hope.
* hugs *
Author's Response: If it had been a character that we had all learned to love, I wouldn't have done that but the story came to me and I had to put it down. I hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2021 09:15 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Wow so many emotions in this my heart went all over the place. This has really set us for what's to come in the next part of the series. You did an incredible job with this.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2021 12:43 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Looking forward to this new part of the continuing story.
Things going so good the other shoe had to drop and drop it did. All at the cost of heartbreak.
Author's Response: I was going to stop at the end of that one but it was like an idea came into my head and I had to write it.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 11:43 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Oh wow I was reading the epilogue and assuming all the loose ends would be happy endings. Then wow Cass in DV then OMG Gus and Marley. So does this mean we have another series yay
Author's Response: There will be one more story in this series. One more story for this crew popped into my head so I am writing it.
Reviewer: CdnFotoGirl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 07:20 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I have really enjoyed this series. I have my suspicions about what is going to happen next...it will involve his first love.
in this chapter you stated that Gas changed his last name to Kinney when he turned 18 but in the last sentence you call him Gus Marcus?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that. I made a change and forgot to change it there.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2021 10:05 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
This was an incredible story from beginning to end. I felt for Justin feeling that way is horrible and hitting out at those you love makes you feel even worse, I felt for Brian as well knowing nothing you were doing was helping. Gus meeting that girl is like fate I hope it goes somewhere. There time up in the cabin all of them was like magic. I'm sad this bit is over but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2021 01:21 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
That was amazing as always. I'm worried for Justin that kind of pain is like death it's horrible. My heart went out to Gus he knows what he wants for his future and yet they bloody Mel sticks her ore in. I'm loving this so much.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2021 02:50 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I'm so over the moon to see Raymond get comfortable with the boys that brought a tear to my eye. Poor Aiden hurting his ankle and Gus getting a fright over it. Gus is an incredible friend to JR. I wish Gus was gay as they would make a wonderful couple and good dads in the future. Brilliant work
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2021 10:05 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I smiled from ear to ear reading this chapter. Aiden was so amazing with spotting that boat and what came from doing that filled my heart with joy. I think this will be the start of something incredible for Gus. I want to be friends with this family so much. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2021 06:51 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Lovely chapter, thanks.
* hugs *
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2021 02:03 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
My heart really got a workout reading this chapter. Aiden was amazing in this as was Gus. They were so strong. Brian and Justin held it together so well. I would have been a mess through all that. I think I need a lie down now. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2021 07:34 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Gosh that creep and the even creeper creep in a suit with him. They better back off back Seattle. I'm dying to find out what Cal found out. You left us hanging lol. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2021 06:13 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Agrrr I need the next chapter NOW. Please. I also want to hear it too what Cal discovered.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I am working on it. I'm over half done with it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2021 12:28 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Gus' birthday was a good one and we got to see what Deb is up to.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Author's Response: Thought it would be fun to catch up with Debbie.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 01:29 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Gosh I hope Cal can find the dirt on that scum bag to help the boys. Gus's reaction to his gift was incredible and it shows how good a young man he is. Plus having his friend ask him what he did shows the trust and bond they have. Fantastic work
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:53 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I do hope the transfusion does not get used against them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2021 10:54 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Amazing chapter. With Mel's help Dakin doesn't stand a chance.
Author's Response: I seem to have to have something exciting going on at all times. LOL
Author's Response: I seem to have to have something exciting going on at all times. LOL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2021 09:07 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Another incredible chapter of this story. What could Dalkin possibly have on them my heart is pounding for them. I'm sure though that Mel can pull off this and win. Gus is such an amazing big brother to Aiden. Go Victor, I pray what he did works out. Fantastic work can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 07:47 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Still loving these series so much. I often read MW in bed before going to sleep. Then I'm too tired to leave a review. But keep on writing.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I enjoy writing them so I am glad people seem to enjoy them. I try to add a bit every night and try to post as often as possible.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2021 07:26 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
You will find a way to spike whatever plans Daklin might have. It's great that JR and Raymond have Ted and Vic. It will be enjoyable to see them going back to where this all started for the holidays.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2021 10:18 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Gus is such an amazing friend to JR and that I'm sure helped more than they both even realise. Aiden with Ray as well is so sweet and that friendship will blossom. The few days the boys had on their own from the kids was very sexy and comforting and that poured off the page. You did a fantastic job with this. Plus Ted and Victor wowed me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2021 02:49 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
I am so jealous. I would love a spa day.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2021 02:41 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Fantastic work Ray is such a wonderful child looking out for his friend like he did. They will definitely be forever best friends. Gus and those at the office were fantastic at setting up that spa day for the guys, they truly needed that time together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2021 12:07 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Looks like Ray has a good friend in Aiden. Glad Justin foot is better.
Author's Response: I figured it would be fun for both boys to have a buddy.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2021 07:15 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Gus is such a wonderful big brother to Aiden and good friend to JR. Will they end up boyfriends? I hope so. I can feel the anxiety Justin is feeling over the situation and I'm worried for the whole family. I want to jump in and support them all. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 05:05 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Wow. What an eventful chapter. I hope things work out for Little Ray. Aiden will enjoy a new friend.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 08:33 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 4 Aiden's Plight
Such a fantastic start to this next bit of the story. Brian was either brave or stupid for doing what he did but I think meeting that police officer might help his case. Those kids are amazing and I love how much they care for each other. My heart is going out to JR over his brother I pray what he is thinking didn't happen. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2021 08:22 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Love these series so much. Please hurry with the next one.
* hugs *
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2021 06:59 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Oh wow that was such a perfect last chapter. That trip back to the cabin was fantastic. I loved how JR felt like family that poor boy needed that and I hope he opens up more to Ted and Victor I think he needs to. I could feel the shock on everyone's face when Aiden did what he did. I can't wait to see what kind of cabin the guys build. We definitely need tons more of these guys. Incredible work as always x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2021 04:23 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Back to the cabin they go, but if Aiden thinks for one moment that his dads will let him out of their sight, he is gravely mistaken.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2021 02:21 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
That was so good, I'm glad Gus is getting on well at his cooking class and making a new friend already. Maybe Gus will realise something about himself with him. Ted and Victor are so incredible for doing that for JR I think this will give him a new lease on life. I felt sorry for Aiden when Justin reacted how he did but understood why he did. I am looking forward to seeing how they get on at the cabin. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2021 10:18 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Looks like the boys are both being helped. Shame Aiden is sooo tired.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2021 05:00 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
That was brilliant. I'm so proud of Gus on how he stood up to his mums they needed that. As for Gus and the boys, Ted and Victor looking after JR was amazing it moved me so much. I think JR should move in with one of them. Victor what a man offering that opportunity to JRs Mum. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 11:50 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Gus is back home and he cares for Aiden but hasn't realized that Aiden will be the one to help him continue to see Cass. Give them three more years and I see them getting back together. How will the fight between Mel and Lindz turn out. Mel is certainly vindictive.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 08:10 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I loved every bit of this. I could feel Gus's pain jump off the page. Justin was so fantastic with him and their talk was a fatherly one to the fullest and Gus knew that. I hope Gus chooses a hobby that will be fun for him and maybe he will meet a girl there. Aiden melted my heart once again that child has such a huge heart. As for the twits at the party I swear they need to grow up. I have a feeling Brian has a taxi called as he marched over to them.
Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 03:38 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Gus blew it. He started acting like a kid which he is. Cass working for Justin to help with Aiden will make a perfect time to spend together.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 12:12 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Ted is my hero. Without him and Victor things would have been so much harder. Aiden has a lot of adventures to tell.
Author's Response: Can you tell I have a crush on Ted?
Author's Response: Can you tell I have a crush on Ted?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:53 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
You do like to leave us with a cliff hanger. I was on the edge of my chair the whole chapter.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:42 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Will Mel and Lindsay ever get their act together?
Great chapter!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:35 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Poor Gus. He never intended to lose Aiden. But two days? Wasn't that a bit much?
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 11:25 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Will Mel and Lindsay ever get their act together?
Great chapter!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 10:50 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Omg never a dull moment at a Kinney Taylor party! Gus is trying to survive the pain of the teens and we all know how hard our lost first love is.
Gus is actually being more responsible than his so called mothers!
Author's Response: Yes, oh those horrible teen years.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 10:40 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Could it be that Mel or Lindsay might be jealous and make a play for Cassie? At least the Kinney-Taylor's had a great day visiting a treehouse and going down in a rollercoaster.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 08:59 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Gus needs Aiden to keep him on the straight and narrow. Love the cabin, though leaving one cabin for a smaller one seems a little strange.
Author's Response: Their cabin is really a vacation home. The cabin they are going to is much more rustic. Kind of like taking a day trip when you stay at a resort.
Author's Response: Their cabin is really a vacation home. The cabin they are going to is much more rustic. Kind of like taking a day trip when you stay at a resort.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 08:28 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Aiden is a good little brother. Gus is a different boy when dealing with him. The thought of a getaway for Gus is interesting. But Brian's question was shocking.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 07:53 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Aiden seems more grown up than Gus. Goes for the girls too.
Author's Response: Gus is at that age where he thinks he knows everything but needs help with everything.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2021 03:51 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
My how time flies. Adien in kindergarden. Gus is certainly having problems. Will Brian and Justin be able to get him back on track? Mel and Linz are in denial. Is JR in this tale?
Author's Response: JR is not in this one. This is slightly off Canon as Brian and Justin didn't meet until after Justin was out of highschool.
Author's Response: JR is not in this one. This is slightly off Canon as Brian and Justin didn't meet until after Justin was out of highschool.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 11:58 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I think Cass is being smart. Gus is too young and immature for her at this point. Perhaps in the future things could work. Gus needs to get on the right track and living with Brian and Justin will make the difference.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2021 01:55 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I think Cass is being smart. Gus is too young and immature for her at this point. Perhaps in the future things could work. Gus needs to get on the right track and living with Brian and Justin will make the difference.
Author's Response: Yes, even though Gus is a Kinney, he is too young to be with a woman out of college. Cass is going to stay in the story line. I like her character.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 08:20 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Oh dear Gus is putting Cass at risk he is being a entitled little shit
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2021 11:53 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Poor Gus really is falling apart and his mother's just can't see it. Thank goodness for his dads and Cass and of course Aiden. He needs to go back to his dads place and make nee friends. Cass is the perfect girl for him I'm gutted their age difference makes it impossible. This chapter really grabbed my heart.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 06:08 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I just reread my comment for the last chapter. It must have self-corrected because what I meant it to say was you had ME crying through the whole thing!
I'm really happy you updated so quickly! This is a great story.
Author's Response: I knew what you meant. LOL I am glad you are enjoying the story. On the weekends I tend to get quite a bit of writing done and then during the week it gets slower, working full time and brain dead when I get home. My goal is always 2 chapters a week. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 06:03 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I'm not sure about Cassie yet.
Author's Response: I think you'll like her. I do.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 11:18 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
So emotional, they have all been through so much. Gus is so crushed I wish I could give him a huge hug. Aiden I think will need him nearby so I hope he moves back in. Ted and Victor are truly best friends with the boys and the help they provided showed that. I loved the staff that hospital all hospitals should be like that one. I can't wait for more of this. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2021 08:54 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Oh my. Great writing! You had be crying when reading this one!
Author's Response: I definitely was. There were several spots that I got choked up. The next chapter is with the Beta now so should be posted tonight or tomorrow.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 08:56 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Talk about intense. My heart is going to need a while to recover after reading this chapter. My heart is aching for Gus I can't imagine all that's going through his head. I love the wolves looking after Aiden and then Gus. They are so special aren't they. I'm so thrilled to see Ted and Victor thr guys need all the support they can get right now. Then you go and leave us on a cliffhanger, how could you do that to my heart.
Fantastic work x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 06:47 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Omg oh no come on Aiden you can beat this
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 07:24 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Omg please get him back to the cabin dear wolves
Author's Response: I hope I am keeping your interest with this one.
Author's Response: I hope I am keeping your interest with this one.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 03:14 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
NO! Nooooo! I need to know where they took him!!!!!! Cliffhanger!! REALLY!?!? NOW!!!!
Author's Response: I hope that is a good NO and not a bad NO.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 02:26 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
The wolf pack saved Aiden! Love it.
Author's Response: Wolves have been known to do that.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2021 02:43 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Omg poor Aiden and Gus. I can't imagine the depth of guilt he is feeling right now. He is just a teenager and that has to be crushing his soul. I can't blame Justin's reaction and I'm glad that anger was only brief. My heart is pounding so hard reading this. What is really touching are the Wolves. Animals are so incredible we need to be thankful for them more.
Such an incredible chapter x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2021 01:44 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Aaagrrr you can't stop writing at this point. Where is Aiden?
Please come back and write some more.
Love this so much.
* hugs *
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 06:24 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
I read one of your responses to someone about the amount of conversations in this. I have to say that is one of the things I love about this story. Everyone is being open and discussing issues as well as attempting to solve them. I really like the closeness between Gus and Justin. Gus loves his dads and Aiden. I am interested in how the Cassandra part will work out.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 09:58 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Love this story, thanks.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it. I feel like this one has a lot more conversations than some and that might not be everyone's favorite. I am enjoying this one and trying to add other details to keep people entertained.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2021 08:50 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
What an amazing chapter. I love how Gus loves his brother and looks after him so well. Aiden looks after him just as much and that is so heartwarming. I loved their hike and seeing those animals if I could walk that far I'd love that as well. You are really moving me with the conversations between Gus and his dads they move me to tears. I can't blame Gus for being scared of his mamas reaction to his girlfriend I'd be scared to. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2021 01:41 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Loved this so much. Gus has so much pain inside him. I hope this trip heals him. I can feel the worry of Justin and Brian. I was feeling every emotion in this chapter.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2021 10:46 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Omg Brian ease into difficult conversations will you lol I am eager to see if Gus opens up
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2021 10:24 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
So Gus has a girlfriend. Somehow I think he's doing more than drinking, too. Justin is wonderful with Gus and Gus is a great big brother. I really enjoy this.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I thought the 10 year age difference is perfect for this kind of relationship. I hope it continues to hold your attention.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2021 11:55 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Such a difficult situation for Brian and Justin with Gus. He needs to be handled in the right way to help with his pain. I love how Gus is with his little brother it's the sweetest moments. They love each other so much. I look forward to seeing lots more of this. Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2021 08:27 AM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Gus really is spiraling fast isn't he. Mel and Lindsay are really not helping him. Plus Justin and Brian getting the caretaker to get them pot isn't very wise a drug free zone might have been better for Gus. Little Aiden is such a sweet child maybe he will be the one to pull Gus out of his trouble. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2021 05:53 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Nope! Not me! They wouldn’t be in the girls custody for much longer! Nope!
Author's Response: We both know Brian and Justin won't let it go too far.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2021 05:53 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Nope! Not me! They wouldn’t be in the girls custody for much longer! Nope!
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2021 11:40 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Great chapter. Curious who Brian is getting Justin back.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2021 01:32 PM · On: The Man I Hate? 3 Let's Discuss Gus
Gosh, Gus really is going down a wrong and dangerous path. I hope the boys can help him. As for his mum's they are a lost cause. Maybe Aiden will be the one to pull him out of it. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2021 09:27 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
That was amazing and made me tear up . My heart went out to them so many emotions for them all. I wanted to deck Dalkin I swear. Gus was incredible such a strong young man. Aiden is so lucky to have him as a big brother. I need more and more. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2021 05:14 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
You did work it out! Thank you!
Author's Response: I think if their lives were perfect it would be a very boring read but I do want them to be happy in the end.
Author's Response: I think if their lives were perfect it would be a very boring read but I do want them to be happy in the end.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2021 01:39 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
So glad that Daklin gave up on custody. Brian and Justin are happy together and they are forming their little family. I love this universe. Thanks for creating a new one to play in.
Author's Response: Working on the last chapter for this story. This universe will continue after I flip to another series for a time.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2021 07:32 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Omg everything coming down at once
Author's Response: Read on, read on. LOL
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2020 07:22 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Things were going so well. Then Daken showed up and Aiden got sick. sigh. How do you fix this?
Author's Response: Trust me, I have a plan!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2020 11:23 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
I am in bits after reading this chapter. That Dalkin shit is 🤬 I wanna mess him up. I hope the judge sees how bad he is and go easy on Brian and the visitation stuff. My heart is aching for the boys poor Aiden I hope they can help him. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 03:11 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Victor is going to be important. Is Emmett going to be in this story?
Author's Response: Emmett is not going to make an appearance....unless it is just a quick one. Emmett will be a big part of the story I am picking up next. It will be a companion story to a Father's Love Hate. It will be a Mother's DevotionDistain. And of course James and Emmett will be in that one.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 02:44 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Gus is back and he's happy that Justin and Aiden are there. We have fighting, which is worrysome and a wedding with a small group at a water world place. How cool.
Author's Response: Our boys are going to make the best life possible for their boys and Mel and Lindz are trying, too.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 11:42 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Oh man I'm so worried about Aiden I hope and pray that it's nothing serious. Plus that Daik of whatever the shits name is doesn't get custody. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 03:24 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
First comes love, then comes marriage.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 03:24 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
First comes love, then comes marriage.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2020 02:01 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Gus Is just an amazing child his love for his dads shines through this whole chapter. You can feel Brian's nerves of the wedding. I am glad he got himself together and that things went well. Jenn was so sweet wasn't she. Fantastic story.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2020 02:16 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
An amazing chapter, I loved Justin meeting Victor and seeing how nice he is for Ted. Jennifer was so kind here saying all she did about Brian. She is right they are meant to be together they just had to learn to love again. Brian made me go awwwe when he was with Aiden so adorable. I hold Gus gets on with him. I look forward to seeing how all that turns out. Brilliant work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2020 04:26 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
This is working out very well.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2020 03:10 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Brian has it bad. Hope everything works out because Aiden loves Brian,
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2020 11:45 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Omg what an incredible chapter. I couldn't stop reading it. I loved Brian's excitement and How Jenn was with him. Their interactions made me smile so much. Then Justin and how he was I found to be on point. Their bond is getting stronger and stronger. I can't wait to see Brian to meet Aiden again. The house was wow wee perfect.
Amazing work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2020 08:20 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Another amazing chapter. Brian is really trying so hard to make things right. I love that Ted is helping him they really are good friends. I can feel Justin's feelings about Brian and his internal battles of how he feels today about Brian. I love, love how much Brian loves Aiden it's so adorable. I can't wait to see what's next for them all. Incredible work x
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2020 02:21 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
I am loving this follow up story that I also love....our boys better get and stay together this time
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2020 12:52 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
I loved this chapter. It was so good to see Brian being so loving to both Justin and Aiden. And I love GC!
Author's Response: Every boy needs a pet and every Justin needs a Brian.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 08:45 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Fantastic second chapter. Brian truly does love Justin with all his heart and now his son as well. Watching Brian interact with the child melted my heart so much. I hope and pray we see more of this. I'm loving this story so much.
Author's Response: I have some fun things ahead.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2020 08:34 PM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
This is working out perfectly. Hopefully there will be happy times ahead.
Author's Response: I love our boys and Aiden is something fun to add.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2020 09:27 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Excellent a sequel the first cabin story. This was brilliant, I kind of broke my heart my the sadness within it the pain both men are feeling. Even though Justin won't admit it there is a pull there drawing him back to Brian. Aiden is so cute and the dog loving him right away really touched me. I cannot wait for the next chapter. You have me hooked right away. Amazing work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2020 03:06 AM · On: The Man I HATE?2 A New Beginning
Amazing running into Brian. This could work out for the best. Hopefully?
Author's Response: I am sure by now you know I need those boys together but I will never make it easy on them. LOL
Author's Response: I am sure by now you know I need those boys together but I will never make it easy on them. LOL
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 10:19 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
I enjoyed the story. Will it contunue.
lah
Author's Response: Not now but maybe someday. Obviously I left it wide open. Maybe when I need a break from my CDLWY series I will continue it.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 07:40 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
This was such a great story from beginning to end. I loved the joint effort of Deb, Carl Daph and Ted, getting the two back together. The handcuff thing was clever.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 11:39 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Like how Daphne decides to do something about Justin's problem. Between her and Ted they fix things and now Brian and Justin have their happily ever after. Love that Brian bought the cabin that started their jouney to togetherness.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 11:37 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Brian is missing Justin and has no idea how to woo him back. Fortunately he has Ted covering his back. Won't Justin be surprised.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2020 07:55 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
I really liked this story where they get to know each other without the rumors. They protect themselves and help each other. GC2 is the icing on the cake. Thank you for this beautiful story
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2020 10:53 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Love it
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2020 08:34 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
OMG omg omg how incredibly fantastic was this. From the handcuffs which was genius by the way and so very Debbie to the boys reconnecting. The puppy melted me so much I teared up then you had me crying girl with the cabin then the surprise at the end. You can't end it there needs to more more more x infinity. Outstanding work 💕💕💕💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2020 08:20 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Oh boys you both need each other so badly. I think your feelings are even stronger now as you are missing each other. I did feel sorry for Steven so I hope he finds someone nice and let's Justin know he did the right thing. Cannot wait to see how Ted and Daphnes plan work out. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2020 02:15 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Oh the saying you can bring a horse to water but you cannot make him drink! I can see the boys both feeling silly when they realise they have been manipulated into this meeting.
Yay jolly good let’s the games begin
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2020 02:01 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Sticky situation!!!!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2020 12:47 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Omg Brian wake up and feel the sunshine lol
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2020 10:51 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
This made me so sad, you can tell they both want each other badly but with Justin holding back it's killing me. I hate seeing Brian so sad, I could feel every single emotion running through this. I feel sorry for Steven but Justin needs to be with Justin.
Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2020 12:42 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
😢😢 my heart was all over the place. I loved Brian and Justin taking about Brian’s past. The cub, why did that have to happen. Justin needs a dog now 😢. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2020 06:32 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Let's hope the next plane that spots their signal doesn't crash.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2020 09:02 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Oh so Mr Grumpy has revealed all and now needs to step back and build up his walls.
But little GC has gone back to his mum and wonder if the boys will be found soon
Author's Response: Yes, our little story will be coming to an end soon. And, yes, I hope I have Brian doing what Brian would do. Can't touch me....until he meets Justin Taylor.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2020 11:43 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
This gets better with each new chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2020 02:31 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Glad to see that things were improving for Brian and Justin but than to have them close to being rescued. That hurt.
Author's Response: But now they know the radio works so they will be listening more.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2020 04:47 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Oh Brian you poor thing. What teacher did was unthinkable he needs to be found and charged. I loved the scenes with the cub that so melted my heart. I love seeing the boys grow closer and closer. My heart broke for those on the plane. Cannot wait for more xx
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2020 07:21 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Awww, A baby wolf. I sure hope the parents don't come looking for it!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2020 03:39 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
I didn't want this chapter to end it was so good. Brian really is looking after him so well. I love Justin opening up to him as well. The wolf cub omg so freakin cute I'm in love. I bet Brian will be cuddling it next lol. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2020 12:33 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
It's so cold. You've given Justin frostbite and Brian a baby wolf. They are talking more which must be a first for Brian.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2020 06:40 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Poor Brian he is so scared and that runs so deep. Justin is great for being there for him and for not laughing at him he told him he was scared. I wanted to cry for how young Brian was treated. I hope Justin and Brian grow closer again. This is a brilliant story x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2020 08:24 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
Hmm fancy Brian thinking they shouldn’t be screwing around lol
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2020 12:34 AM · On: The Man I HATE?
That's twice that they've had sex. Justin is finding it hard to stay away. There is a big bad wolf in his bed.
Author's Response: He may have to decide which 'wolf' has the worst bite.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2020 10:48 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Loving this! Justin is the provider while Brian is a bit helpless.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 09:01 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
I think it is so funny Justin is the woodsy one in this story. Brian is floundering around and trying to follow orders. However he has got Justin into his bed lol so he has met his agenda but he is going to find out his has met his partner
Author's Response: I figured it was more likely that Justin had family with a vacation home than Brian and Justin was always very smart.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 12:20 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
Things were looking up until Justin got a concious. Wonder how long it lasts.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 12:02 PM · On: The Man I HATE?
I could feel Justin's stress build and build it's no wonder he did break down like he did. I'm so glad he found comfort in Brian, plus it was really hot so thank you. I hope they find a common ground and Justin can see that Brian isn't the monster he think he is.
Fantastic work as always x
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