Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Eternal Refrain
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Memoriam

Wonderful! You have a way with pulling the reader in. Didn't really want to start this story since it isn't finished but now, I can't stop reading it! :)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear that you like this story. i apologize for the delay in updates, but I'm hoping to remedy that now. I do hope that you'll continue reading it. Thank you so much for your nice reviews. It means the world to me to know what readers think of my work. *smiles & hugs*

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Prologue

Hmm......... Not Sure.........



Author's Response:

I understand, Vampires aren't for everyone. Hopefully you continue, but I do thank you for giving it a try. :)

Reviewer: Ryin (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Autumn Rose

WOW!! This story is beyond amazing. It's romantic, sexy, and sad. I am worried for the downfall that is yet to come. Please continue soon. :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you awesome review. I am so happy you like this story. yes, an emotional downfall is on the horizon. I hope you continue with this story as i take you through it, and like where it goes. :)

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Autumn Rose

I just started reading this story yesterday and got caught up to Chap. 9 this evening.  It's a wonderfully written story; very intense with complicated stories and emotions on both sides.  

I'm so worried now that Brandon is back! How is Justin going to cope with this when he was already on the verge of madness with his feelings about Brian? Poor Brian, so happy and blissfully unaware right now makes my heart hurt!

I hope you update soon; I hate to leave Justin in this limbo.  :-)

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to have left Justin in limbo for so long. :( I am back to writing this now and hope to get it out fairly quickly. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. it means a lot to me. *hugs* 

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Holy Suspense! This is one of my favorite stories I've ever read, I'm so anxious and excited to see where it leads. You have such a creative imagination, and beautiful writing techniques. Please hurry to update as soon as you can. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you for your amazingly kind words. They truly do mean a great deal to me as an author. I'm thrilled you are enjoying this story and do hope you continue to do so. *hugs* :)

Reviewer: elsieboo (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Another beautifully flowing chapter. I really do admire your writing style.

This story is so great, so descriptive that I really feel in love right along with them. I fear I will also feel the angst right along with them as well. I trust you to carry this out to the end with grace and wonderful writing. I can't wait!

You're such a wonderful author and this is such a Such a WONDERFUL fic!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for complementing my writing style, that means so much to me. *Hugs*

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Autumn Rose

This is one great story, though I certainly hope you know where you


are going with it.  Most likely, Justin murdered Michael.  Now if this


were a different fic. you would get a standing ovation.  (Ok, just


kidding).  Justin did more than possibly kill Michael, he murdered


many other Michaels, peoples husbands, sons, lovers, and more.  I


too have never read a fairy tale with the title “Prince Charming and the


Vampire.” 


 


Good luck as you certainly are one courageous author taking us to a


point that is going to need some very logical explanations. I don’t see any.


 


Ethan?  I am not going to even comment.  I can’t handle anymore at


this point. I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter.


 


Again, thanks for this terrific story.  I don’t have a clue as to where we


go from here and that is good.  I think?


 


DavidR


 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you are reading this story. Thank you for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. No worries, I will NEVER start a story before knowing exactly where I am going with it. I have this outlined until the end and I am a hopeless sucker for happy endings. Even though you do not see plausible outcomes just yet, I do hope you will continue reading and that you will find my plot enjoyable. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Autumn Rose

OMG.... Brandon is back..... is Daphne involved in any way with him coming back for Justin???  I guess he won't  have another chance of being with Brian again..... this chapter is sooo beautiful and sooo sad... update soon... Thanks..



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support in reading and reviewing this fic. I truly do appreciate all of my readers and am grateful that you are enjoying this story. I do hope that you continue to take this journey with me, and like where it leads. *hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Oh NO! Brandon returns!!! I hope he doesn't hurt Brian to get to Justin! I love this story and the way you write.



Author's Response:

I love that you love this story. Thank you for the kind words regarding my writing. It makes me smile. :) I do hope you continue to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Autumn Rose

Again, Nothing short of fantastic! I've never read anyone who writes as poetically as you do. It's always so beautiful. Now, what is Brandon up to?! I guess I'll have to wait and see. Please update soon! =)



Author's Response:

Thank you! *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Autumn Rose

The back and forth play of 'this is our last time' was incredible, especially when you know deep down that they don't want it to be over.  Then you throw in Brandon!!!  Drat, now I have to wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm hoping that you will continue to follow our boys though until the end. *smiles & hugs* Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Autumn Rose

Angst overload; excellent command of prose, and a promise of intrigue to come.

Reviewer: Telly27 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Duet

WOW! What I wouldn't give for just a tiny portion of your writing talent. Really and truly your way with words is awe inspiring. I LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Wow, I can't thank you enough for your kind words. *hugs*

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Duet

Incredible... I really loved it. It was beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time. Really really magic!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading ans sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Duet

Wow! The beauty of this chapter simply took my breath away, eventhough it is heartrending.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your kind words. *Hugs*

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Duet

This whole chapter was MAJESTIC!!!!!!!!! Loving this story. Thank you.............



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing it makes me smile. I am happy you are enjoying this story <3

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Duet

WOW .... that was AMAZING....  I hate to sound stupid....but.... lol..... why can't Justin be with Brian again???.. is it because he can't trust himself to not hurt or kill him.... or is he not allowed to fall in love with a human.... please update soon.... I have to know where they go from here.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

I am glad you are liking this story, and no you don't sound stupid at all my lovely. Justin is going to think about and further explain his reasoning in the next chapter but...there are several reasons he wants to distance himself. The main one being that he is fairly convinced that he killed Michael and broke Brian's heart. He cannot bear the thought of him ever finding out and hating him. He is falling for Brian after swearing love did not exist and is terrified to go further emotionally because he can never tell him who he really is and it wouldn't be fair. Anywho, like I said he will be talking more about it next chapter. Thank you for reading ! *hugs*

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Duet

WOW! There are really no words great enough to describe my thoughts on this chapter....just incredible. FLAWLESS. This story is shaping up to be one of the best things I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Well,  the words you have used are making me happy! :) I am so glad to hear that you are enjoying my story so thoroughly. THANK YOU! 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Duet

The foreloding of angst for our new lovers is too sad to imagine. They are so ment for one another. Thank you for the new chapter.



Author's Response:

You are very welcome for the chapters and Thank you for continuing to read and review. YES they are indeed meant for each other. Seriously, what's an unatural un-death and a little blood drinking to stop Brian and Justin from being together?! :P Sadly, yes the angst is inevitably creeping upon them soon. I hope you enjoy where I take the rest of this. :) *hugs~Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Stars Align

Incredible story line here. I could see the internal conflict for Justin as Brian told all. Reading on for more.

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Duet

Oh My God! I'm speechless. This is the best thing I've ever read. You amaze me with the skills you possess. BRAVO! -Benny



Author's Response:

WOW thank you! Your reviews always make me feel a little unworthy of such praise. Nevertheless, I'll take it. lol :P I am genuinely happy that you like this story. *hugs

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Duet

Wow!  Oh, Wow!!



Author's Response:

Your 'wows' please me. :P I hope you continue to enjoy where the boys go from here. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my words, it means a lot. :)

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Stars Align

The biggest teaser I've ever known... =)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Stars Align

Beautiful continuation, fascinating exposition of their feelings! Can't wait to know what will happen at the next chapter.

Bet the boys won't be able to implement their 'performance'. You're the biggest I've ever known =)



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Stars Align

Wow you always write so amazingly. Literally. I just don't know how you manage to always word everything so ridiculously beautiful! This story is awesome, I really hope that Justin didn't kill Michael, poor Brian. Please update soon ! :)



Author's Response:

Aw, such an inspiring review, thank you!

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Stars Align

Once again I'm amazed with your talent. This chapter was wonderful, the star story was very sweet. I sure hope Justin isn't responsible for Mikey. I can't wait to see what stage they are going to "do it" on. Hurry Please? :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you for always being so kind and supportive.

Reviewer: justin (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Stars Align

this story is utterly fantastic!!!! your writing style is superb--such details and wonderful paragraphs.  where does this come from.  you should write a book, although, this could be considered one.  i am new to this site and hooked on vampire stories.  combining vampires and b/j is just putting the icing on my cake.  keep up the flow



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much for such a nice review. I am happy that you are enjoying my story. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. *smiles & hugs* ~Mandi :)

Reviewer: Kane29 (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Stars Align

This story is SO incredible. You have the most beautiful writing style I have ever read. Please continue soon, I can't even imagine what will happen if Justin killed Michael....OOOH I'm on the edge of my seat. SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for your kind review. *Hugs*

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Stars Align

OMG.... it would be horrible if Justin had anything to do with Mikey's death... especially since Brian trusted him enough to open up about what happened that night..... I can't wait to see where they go from here.... Thanks....



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving my story your time and thank you for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Stars Align

Love, love, love this!!!  So touching, I can't wait to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts. :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Stars Align

great story i look forward to reading the next chapter

i hope brian able to find justin

great job writting this story



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read my story, and for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Symphony

This story is bringing out my inner romantic, you write beautifully. Update soon!



Author's Response:

Give your inner romantic a hug for me :) I'm happy you are still enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Symphony

Beautiful...... the song fit perfectly with what Justin was trying to explain to Brian.... reading this chapter is making me want to go so see the play again.... lol....  please update soon...I can't wait to see what's next for them... Thanks......



Author's Response:

Aw thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm happy you like the story. I listened to the soundtrack while I wrote most of this, perhaps we can go on an imaginary trip to see the play together! *hugs~mandi :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Muse

Brian is in bad shape....he can't stay away from Justin....but...he doesn't trust himself to be anywhere alone with him....I am glad that seeing Justin's piano and Mikey's anniversary.... made him decide to start playing again.... off to read next chapter..... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Phantoms

It looks like Teddy finally made his dream come true...lol.... Phantom of the Opera is a fantastic play..... I saw it years ago... and Justin is right... Brandon was as fixated on Justin's talent  as Erik was with Christine's voice.... but...Brandon was the worse of the two... because he also was jealous of Justin's talent at the same time..... off to read the next chapter...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:24 PM · On: His Song

The connection that they have is amazing...... they seem to know what the other is thinking and feeling...... off to read the next chapter....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Memoriam

OMG...Poor Brian was with Mikey when he was killed..... I hope it wasn't Justin that attacked him..... BTW...congrats on the Blue Ribbon... you deserve it.... off to read the next chapter......

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Prologue

WOW.... I love a good vampire fic...so far this looks AMAZING.... off to read the next chapter..... Thanks....



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs* :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Symphony

Glad to see you've got a blue ribbon.  Well deserved too.  Poor Brian he's got it bad and Justin isn't even using his powers to entrap him, at least not that I can tell.  Sorry to hear that Michael bit the dust so to speak, it does give Brian reason to be melancholy.  Ted as the director of Phantom of the Opera!  Perfect casting.  Does Emmett show up and what's become of Brandon?

I'm loving this story



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!! I'm loving that you're loving it! Yes I thought Teddy would enjoy that job :) Unfortunately, Brandon is still  lurking around the corner of this story... *hugs* ~Mandi

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Symphony

You may officially declare me hooked to this story. I hope more of the readers find this wonderful tale and take the time to comment, and honor you as a favorite author. You surely deserve it.



Author's Response:

*Officially declared* :P shall I dub your shoulders with my pen now? :D

WOW you have given me such WONDERFUL reviews, I'm all kinds of deliriously giddy. LOL I am thrilled that you are enjoying my work. THANK YOU for taking the time to review. 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Muse

Bravo! for this fantastic chapter so well woven together. Vampire love angst at its finest!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Phantoms

I do hope you don't torture us (and them) for too long.  Reading your work takes no effort and is such a joy to follow. Your word choices are perfect.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:49 AM · On: His Song

The mouse will soon catch the cat perhaps.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Memoriam

Reading your work reminds me of reading Mario Puzo. Amazing fun to do it. Great to see how our boys first see each other. And I'm a huge fan of a good vampire B/J read.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Prologue

Incredible beginning for an epic tale. I truly love your writing.

Reviewer: Teddie (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Symphony

So wonderful! This is such a romantic vampire tale, I am in love with your writing! please hurry I'm obsessed and impatient! Lol :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind review. *Hugs*

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Symphony

 great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

brian and justin belong together

wonderful job           



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review, I'm glad you are enjoying my writing. *hugs*~Mandi :)

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Symphony

Wonderful story and wonderful chapter... I really love it! Can't wait to read the following chapters!! =D



Author's Response:

I love that you love this story! I hope you continue to do so. Thank you for taking the time to review. *hugs & smiles* :)

Reviewer: Telly27 (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Muse

Damn girl you can write! I just can't get over how good this story is at only chapter five. I cant wait for more. Please keep Writing It's so awesome.! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Muse

One of the best stories I've ever read and it's only chapter five! I love it, So pretty!



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm so happy you are liking it. *hugs*

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Muse

This story i so f'in A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! It is completely unique, wonderfully constructed and beautifully written. I'm giving you my imaginary 'blue ribbon award of approval' :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for this amazingly supportive review. *hugs*

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Muse

I'm in awe of your writing. Seriously its so poetic, this story is beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Analyse (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Muse

Simply AMAZING!!!! Everyone should be reading this fic! Lol Beautifully written.



Author's Response:

Thank you Analyse for your kind words. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Muse

WOw Mind, BLOWN! You are such a poetic writer. This story is incredible!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I aim to blow your mind. ;P

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Muse

WOW! OH. MY. GOD. That was simply amazing. Incredible. I loved all chapters and I just can't wait to read the following ones! Update soon, please. **hugs** Jessikaa.



Author's Response:

Thank you Jessikaa for reading and sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Muse

That kiss had been his muse. That kiss had been nothing at all really. That kiss had been everything.---Beautiful! This chapter has practically left me speechless. Please hurry with more!  ;-D -Benny



Author's Response:

Thank you again for sharing your thoughts. *Hugs*

Reviewer: KAT (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Muse

Oh My, this story is so lovely. Your writing is like art. Please continue soon, I love this!



Author's Response:

Art? Wow! Thank You!! *Big Hugs & Wide Smiles*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Phantoms

I loved this chapter. Our boys fumbling like teenagers, so cute. The Phantom parallels are so creative. more Please? -Benny



Author's Response:

I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Berriesncreme (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Phantoms

What a sweet chapter. These two are so ridiculously adorable. I'm in LOVE with this story. PLEASE update soon! 



Author's Response:

I love that you're in love. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Prologue

This story is so great! It's so unique and incredibly well written . I love your style. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Chris for the lovely complement. *Hugs*

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Phantoms

HI.......... this is one of the beautiful story about vampire ........... ithink it is very different too..... ican not wait for first sex between them



Author's Response:

Thank you sara for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:58 AM · On: His Song

This story is amazing! The blood song is a really neat idea. I must say that I myself have had hot sexy daydreams of being in Brian's bed. Please update sooooon! -Benny



Author's Response:

Mmm haven't we all had a sexy Brian daydream?! Expect in mine, he's a little more on the straight and narrow lol. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story so much. Thank you for your reviews. :D

Reviewer: Robstatic73 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:48 AM · On: His Song

This fic is really neat! I'm always impressed with your way with words. Keep it up! I'm very anxious to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the review. Next chapter coming as soon as I can. *hugs.

Reviewer: Carissa (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:40 PM · On: His Song

WOW! This is so well written & extremely creative. Love the idea of a person's feelings making their blood taste different and their hearts's song is so sweet. Please continue this as soon as you can! :D



Author's Response:

Hello Carissam thank you for reading and reviewing, i appreciate it. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Dasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:00 PM · On: His Song

Like very much that Justin in this story is gifted in different way and also that he but not Brian is a vampire. That makes them both equal mature and strong persons.

You're really good in vampire themes, the idea of 'blood song' is awesome.

Desperately waiting for update!!!!!!! *_*



Author's Response:

 THANK YOU. You always give the nicest reviews, it makes me all warm and fuzzy.I'm pleased you're enjoying this story. *hugs

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:40 PM · On: His Song

oh beautiful countinu please



Author's Response:

I am happy you like this, I am trying my best to get this story out of my head as fast as possible. *hugs

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:36 AM · On: His Song

Lordy I love this story already. You are such an artistic author.Eagerly awaiting more. 



Author's Response:

An artisitc author, wow, thank you so much! *HUgs*

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:32 AM · On: His Song

this story rocks.  love your style of writing-very detailed and special.  will be waiting for more chapters.  interest is piqued to the max.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review. I'm so happy to be interest piquing! :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:30 AM · On: His Song

Great job writting this story i can not wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, it makes me do this: :)

Reviewer: Dame (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Memoriam

This is awesome! I love your writing style. I can't wait for more. I feel so sorry for the boys, I hope they get happiness soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am pleased you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Teddie (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Memoriam

Such a wonderfully emotional story! Your writing is so artistic. More please ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad you like my writing. More soon I promise. :)

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Memoriam

Woah! That was great! I feel so bad for Justin. Your writing  is amazing. I can't wait for this tale to continue. -Benny



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for such nice reviews. I'm truly glad that you are enjoying the story. *hugs* ~mandi

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Prologue

love it



Author's Response:

I love that you love it! Thanks for taking the time to review. :) *hugs

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Prologue

Wow great start of a new fic. Looking forwards for more ... ASAP * blushes *.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It makes me smile. I'll try to get it out quickly. :D *hugs to you*~mandi

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Prologue

Sounds really cool so far. I'm very interested in reading Brian meeting his vampire student Justin. You have a really fantastic writing style. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you like it so far, I only hope you continue to do so. :P

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Prologue

Yummy.  Another tale of Vampires!!!  I can see I'm going to enjoy this tale, even though I mistakenly thought that Justin's creator was Brian.  Me bad.  Looking forward to the Present Day and hoping Brandon gets whats coming to him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I heart you for it. :) I truly hope you enjoy where I take this.  *hugs* ~mandi

Reviewer: Katelyn (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Prologue

Nice intro, I'm very curious as to where this prologue leads. Beautiful writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate your review. I hope to fulfill your curiosity in a positive life affirming way. :)

Reviewer: Analyse (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Prologue

Justin+Vampire=swoon. Engrossing start, can't wait for more. :D



Author's Response:

Happy to provide the swoon. Thanks for reading! :) 

Reviewer: CaseyJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Prologue

GREAT START! I'm veeeeeeery intrigued. I'm LOVIN' this idea. Please continue soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Prologue

What a great start! I already hate Brandon lol, bring on Brian! Great writing!!! Please update soon. -Benny



Author's Response:

I had fun writing villian Brandon. ;) Thank you for reading ans reviewing. :)

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Prologue

interesting opening.  good beginning for all hallows day.  will be waiting for ensuing chapters,  writers here are into vampires this quarter.



Author's Response:

I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I hope you enjoy the story. *smiles & hugs*

 

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