Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 03:51 AM · On: He Turned Me Around

He did buy the house for his prince, did he not? Lovely thoughts.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 11:55 PM · On: He Turned Me Around

Very nice.

Id suggest changing one thing:

Tricking? Whatever possessed me to believe only in fucking, in only one man a night?

It seems to imply Brian would have only one trick per night, instead try:

*in only one trick per man?* or *in only one night per man?*

:o)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2010 09:28 PM · On: He Turned Me Around

"How can he, my prince, make me feel like such a king?" it's called love brian.

great.

Reviewer: Sammy (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2010 09:09 PM · On: He Turned Me Around

This put a smile on my face. :)

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