Reviewer: jarris (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2014 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
I know it's been awhile since this was written. But just have to say, Michael is still sruck in high school? Really!? He started out as a frequent clubgoer, but later the man had a house and was deeply involved in his child's life. While Brian was pretty much doing the same thing at thirty three that he was at eighteen. Brian was even trying to keep Michael an immature partygoer.
Author's Response: That's the great thing about fiction, it allows for vastly different of perspectives, and opinions...
Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
HI DARLING...... IREAD ALL OF YOUR STORY AND I LOVE THEM BUT BRATT KINY IS BETTER BUT YOU DO NOT COUNTINU
IKNOW YOU WANT IT A NOVEL BUT I OR ANOTER PERSON DO NOT LIVE IN USA AND WE CAN NOT BUY IT PLEAS COUNTINU THIS IN HERE
THANK FUL
Author's Response: You know I started reviewing and working on it yesterday after reading your reviews... It really means a lot to me that you commented on it and put a fire underneath me to get me back on track. Thanks for the push...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
Mikey so does need a time out and a stern talking to, lol.
Author's Response: I know I've said it a million times, but would Brian really still be best friends with Mikey... That part to me was so unrealistic, by the time your thirty you pretty much shake off all the losers in your life.
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
what a shame he won't take tristan's advice. just can't see him doing it.
great story though even if a fantasy.
Author's Response: Isn't that the truth... I can't help wondering why their still friends, I mean I just don't think its very realistic. They don't seem to have anything in common, I also don't think its very realistic that Ben would have found Micheal's conversation very stimulating to result in marrying him... He's still lost in high school...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
Loving this verrrrrry much! Who better to give "Mikey" a wake up call than his GA! A snarky one to boot! LOL
Thanks much!
Ro
Author's Response: Your comment bring a huge smile to my face... Yeah, I was pretty snarky, but he just drives me crazy and I want the whining to stop...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Pouty and Shouty…
Ilove all your story . this story is very nice but I thinck (mckinny) is very beautiful .why you do not countinu mc kinny
Author's Response: Thanks so much, It always makes me smile : ) when someone enjoys my writing... I've put McKinney on hiatus for the moment, I'm try to decide if I should try and get published. And if so I think McKinney is my one story that could easily not be a Brian and Justin story, with just a few changes...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
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