Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Brian Kinney vs. Blond Lesbian
Hi! This is a really good story, I know I'm probably pushing my luck..but I would love it if you could finish the story..it's getting better every chapter..and you do not write bad porn...and the weird thing is that the story you told about ur mom..happens to me too..haha..I just give her excuses each and every time. It was really fun reading your story and throughout reading your story I had this silly grin on my face all the frkin time..lol Brian's character is hilarious...Loved it.! :)
Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Brian Kinney vs. The Public
i know its been like a year since you last wrote.... but i love this story!!! you really have got to finish it!!!!
Reviewer: mary4angelus (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Brian Kinney vs. The Public
Great story and great chapter! ^^
Can't wait to read more!!
I'll be here waiting..... =)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Brian Kinney vs. The Public
Im a big fan of Brian and Justin dirty talking, rough in public sex, so dont change a thing on my account, lol. :o)
Yeah. You might wanna password your computer if your ma wants to read your porn fic, lol. Might be a really good reason for you to try and write something origional. I think sexually explicit isn't really too bad, unless your mom never read torrid romance novels. The whole gay man sex thing, hmmm. Have you watched the show with her? Check her reaction that way. Episode one was all it took for me to fall in love with our guys! I started watching the show with my daughter on DVD when she was fifteen, she is 17 now, (she fell in love with Emmett!) and I would find her writing fanfic to be okay.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I got password on my computer.
It's great to hear that you watched QAF with your daughter. I maybe something that I'll keep in mind; however my mom isn't so open about things.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Brian Kinney vs. Blond Lesbian
Its nice to see season one Lindsay again, giggling and teasing Brian over Justin. Before she realized a realtionship between them might actually mean Brian's attention will be less on her.
“Fucking Christ, do you want me to puke on you? I'll fucking do it.” I say, while I shoot her a glare. Instead of feeling threatened, she won't stop fucking giggling; like a high school girl with a boy crush. I cross my arms together while I force myself to listen to her giggles. It only gets worse when she thinks it would be wise to speak again.
They are acting like such kids, lol. Even us Hets find it soooooo an,oying when a friend cannot hold their tongue on their unwanted comments.
I think your Brian is commenting on sounding like a lesbian and on wanting to puke a bit too much. Your sentences are repeating - just thought I'd caution you a bit. :o)
Author's Response: About the reapeating sentences, yes I notice that too myself. I'm been trying to work on the next the chapter. :x
To be honest, I liked half of the cast better in season one. Espeically Micheal and Lindsey; Micheal in later seasons just annoy the hell out of me.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Brian Kinney vs. First
I am actually quite enjoying Brian's behaviour. The moment he laid eyes on Justin in the show, he went "out of character". He didnt do virgins. He didnt bring tricks to family events (like his son's birth) and he never did repeats. So who's to say he is out of canon now?
I think he is arrogant and snarky enough - to the other characters. AFTER he fucks him is when he becomes an asshole to Justin. Its just his response to feeling some kind of emotion for Justin.
Im definately going to have to google Scott Pilgrim comic. :o)
Bed time for me, I'll read some more later. Maybe I'll be lucky and be visited by BrianandJustin dreams?
Author's Response: That's always great to hear. 8D Thanks a lot for your input; they are very helpful to me!
Scott Pilgrim's also a movie now; it came out last month. Which I am planning to see it today with a friend. :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Brian Kinney vs. Money Talks
LOL. Brain a Sugar Daddy? (ok, seriously, wasn't he one the whole time he was living with Justin? Paying for his school? What exactly is a sugar daddy if not that?)
But NEVER tell Brian that, lol.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
Oh, Brian better get that Blonde twink off that stage! Sunshine needs to get his booty spanked until it is as red as those shorts!
ok. im jealous for a gai boi. whatever - take him home and ground him!
Author's Response: Sunshine needs to get his booty spanked until it is as red as those shorts!
I like how you think. :D
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Brian Kinney vs. Sunshine
We didnt get to see Brian at work often enough - throwing down a hot presentation in the boardroom. I like stories of him at work. :o)
Author's Response: Glad you like the little 'work' scene there!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
The only thing I might find out of character is that BK wouldn't bother to dwell on his dreams - except, as you wrote, these dreams keep happening over two months. Even he would notice.
Oh, and BK would never classify wacking off in the shower a waste of time. It's probably scheduled in like the rest of his morning routine, LOL.
Interesting premise. Looking forward to what else you will write. :o)
Author's Response: It's probably scheduled in like the rest of his morning routine, LOL.
I get the impression that, he'd have enough self-control to not waste an hour whacking off in the shower? Or maybe not. XD
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Brian Kinney vs. The Public
I liked the chapter hehehe. Please keep writing I want to know what happens. such a good writer!!
Author's Response: Thank you always!
I shall keep writing, since we haven't even got to the good parts yet. ;p
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Brian Kinney vs. Blond Lesbian
really good chapter--not boring at all. really cute actually like innuendos especially the one lindsey can give out with smirking references. looking forward to this story as it unfolds. we are enjoying it.
Author's Response: I love how your name is Brian. It amuses me in sort of ironic way.
Thank you for your feedback! <: I always see people writes Lindsey as the evil betch; that tries to break off Brian and Justin.
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Brian Kinney vs. First
I love this story and I can't wait to find out whats going to happen but I will. I dont want to cheat I'll follow your lead and find everything out when you want me too. But please update fast!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you~ I hope you won't have to suffer any longer to find out! >.<
Well, I am happy to say that I no longer have writer's block! :D
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Brian Kinney vs. First
thanks for the update and more to come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you~ I hope that won't be long from now either!
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Brian Kinney vs. First
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah You stop here?!? Don't do that to me! ;) I hope you'll update soon again
(Nope no disappointment on my side )
hugs
Author's Response: No disppointment? Yey! :D
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Brian Kinney vs. First
another great chapter keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. :D
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Brian Kinney vs. Money Talks
Wow that was such a great chapter. I loved it, but... Please dont make us wait 2 weeks for the next one. I might just go insane if I have to wait that long. I really can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Great chapter? Aww, thank you. :3
Yeah, I'll try not to makes you guys suffers? D: The next chapter is being beta at the moment. I'm not too sure how long she'd take thought. T_T But on the bright side, the next chapter shall be over 5,000 words long?
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Brian Kinney vs. Money Talks
Ah, this is perfect, so now Brian has to chase Justin! LOL Love this so far. My favorite line: "However, today Mikey's whining power isn't seem to be working so well." :D
Author's Response: It's true. Mikey's whining power seem to works on Brian everytime. XD
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
OMG...!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Brian Kinney vs. Sunshine
Hahahha loved this chapter, with Brian completely thrown for a loop upon seeing his dream man come to life in the diner. :)
Author's Response: Thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. <:
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
Great start, I love this idea of Brian dreaming of Justin in scenes us viewers know and love. My favorite line: "The great Brian Kinney can't even get laid in his own dream?". :D
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're loving the idea! <: Thank you~!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
great start, wonder what is going on thru justin's mind.... is he having dreams too?
Reviewer: Tack (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
Nice fic. Hope you update soon again. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you~! The next chapter is being beta right now. I'm not too sure how long that would take. T.T
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
Ummm... Lead me away... I'm loving this story so far, keep going.
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
marcus was certainly a surprise. into twinks huh? brian in boy toy? justin dancing in boy toy! bet that lap dance is going to be a doozy.
Author's Response: The idea of Brian going into Boy Toy always amuses me greatly. I'm not sure why.
Hohoho, we shall see how Brian's going to react to that. ;p
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
It will be interesting where you take the dreams; is it the past or the future... Or is it just a premonition of what he should avoid...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Without trying to spolier the story for you, I'll say that Brian can always finds the answers within his dreams for his problem. <:
Thank you for reading~
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
thanks for the update.
please try your best to update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!!!
be it longer or shorter chapter it is fine with me...........
Author's Response: Thank you for reading~ I hope that you guys wouldn't have to wait for long either.
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Brian Kinney vs. Boy Toy
Hey love the story. I can't wait to the new update. I really really can't wait!!!
Hope you have a great time on your trip but dont forget about us all waiting for more of the story
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for your wish! <:
Don't worry, I'd most likely end up working on my next chapter while I'm on plane; because lacks of better things to do. Lol. I really how that I'd be able to get it up soon though.
Reviewer: nancygirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Brian Kinney vs. Sunshine
really loving the story. I can't wait for the next update, hope it comes soon.
Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
I am really enjoying this story. All I can say is keep going, keep on going.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support! It means a lot. <3
Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
omg i love this beginning. new idea and different take on our boys. waiting for more chapters. this is going to be a good one. welcome to this site. we will all be waiting for the continuation of your story.
Author's Response: New? Really? Lolz, I though something like this already been done before.
Thank you~
Reviewer: Janey (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
Great start! Great idea! Great Chaterp! Great writing style! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you~!
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
Definitely keep writing... You are off to a great start. I didn't think that Brian was off character. It's just a bit more difficult to write in first person. More please... I like this storyline :o)
Author's Response: Thank you, your comment means a lot! <:
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
keep writing.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
Wecome to Midnight Whispers
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: audrey (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
more !
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
Good start ! Can't wait to read the rest of it...
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Brian Kinney vs. Wet Dreams
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