Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 22
how wonderful.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 21
I have to tell you this is the most informative and well written M-Preg fic.. I have ever read and I've read them all...lol... in most of them Justin is always the pregnant one and Brian is always the one not exactly thrilled about it...except once the baby is born... then he accepts the idea.... this is the first fic where not only are Brian and Justin crazy about each other..but.. are extremely happy and totally in love with their "Peanut".... Excellent Job.. Thanks.......
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I do research as I as I'm writing. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 21
thanks for the update and more to come!!!!!!!!!!!
when i started to read it, it can already in chapter 26!!! and i finished it in one seating!!!!!! cant stop reading it...............
really like the story.... thanks again
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 21
anxious to meet the little girl who will have both brian and justin wrapped around her little finger in a matter of seconds after she's born. can't wait.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 20
"There is only so much time one can spend watching Justin paint shirtless." ~ Oh like an Eternity!!! Ha, ha, ha
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 20
nice chapter. i think it's a bad idea to have deb there now and especially after taylor is born. betty is there for them.
Author's Response: Yeah Deb isn't going to last long. She and Betty can not share and although he loves her Brian is only going to get crankier and the slap to the back of the head she gives is sort iof counter-productive-especially for someone who was beaten as a kid? No fear Deb will be moving on soon, she is going to have other fish to fry.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 20
WOW.... Brian keeping a journal for "Peanut" is AMAZING.... I could picture her reading it when she gets older..and knowing everything her Dada thought and felt before she was born....Priceless.... I just hope Brian will be able to stand having Justin and Debbie fuss over him while he is home without going nuts!!!! lol.... Thanks...
Author's Response: yeah he loves his peanut. And deb won't be around for too long.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter.
lindsay and her high horse. i would love to ban her from ever being with them when gus is around.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
You go Justin!!! Smack Down...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 18
Waddle... You better not let Brian hear you say that... ha, ha, ha
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Brian knows it he just won't accept it yet.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
WTF... is wrong with Lindsay??? she doesn't want Gus to call everyone by the names he wants because she is still waiting for them to break-up.... talk about being delusional....... I am so glad that Justin set her straight and that Melanie stayed out of it..... and I love the idea of Emmett being the "Fairy" Godmother.... lol.....
Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 19
I loved this chapter. I love how both Brian and Justin dealthwith Lindsey. Her jealous is so obivious. I also like that Ted and Emmett are seeing a different side of Brian. I look forward to reading more.
Rie
Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 19
this is truly a different kind of story. wouldn't it be wonderfully precious if men were to carry the next generation. i thought if anyone got pregnant it would be jus. waiting for the big day. i imagine he will endure the pain well-as he was used to pain for a long time. next chapters will be juicy. you go debv3.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
wowww love this story so much, it's so beautiful.
I wish I could gove more than a 10 * grinns *
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate it. I am stii trying to get over the number of times it has been read!!!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 18
informative chapter. i really like how you're handling all this. brian is taking everything in stride and justin too. hope justin is smart enough not to mention the waddling to brian. don't think he'd handle it well.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
she will be his 'aunt' so why shouldn't he call her that? i don't think mel will mind and lindsay i could care less how she feels.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 16
I'm getting excited about Taylor, can't wait to meet her...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
OMG.... I could just picture Brian waddling.... Mr. no carbs after 7.... and afraid to gain an ounce....I think it's too funny that they got thrown out of Yoga class..because Brian kept grabbing Justin's ass.... LOL.....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 17
Adorable...... Justin was thrilled that Gus called Molly.... Aunt Molly.... one question if Brian is supposed to be 30 at this point... how old is Justin??
Author's Response: I played with the everyone elses ages a bit, I admit. But I kept Justin pretty close to the same age, he's 22 in this tale. I don't recall ever really getting an age for Molly so I figured 11 was a good age for her. It alsways seemed to me like Molly was much younger than Justin.
Thanks for the feed back
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 11
"Shit I should ask for more stuff." ~ I love it... I took the weekend off and you posted six chapters... Holey Shit is right, I love you...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I think Chapter 16 may be it for a day or so. The Well is empty at the moment. Although I think it is time for Brian and Justin to head to the birthing classes..... Glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 16
OMG.... poor Brian will have to start shopping for bra's at Victoria's Secret...lol...and Justin could be in a relay race with all the running he is doing when Brian.."Calls".... I love that you included Gus's POV... like he said he is one lucky little kid.......
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 16
the letter to taylor was so sweet.
the labor plan was smart and gus' pov was charming. great stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you. the Gus pov just sort of happened.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 15
Amazing.... they have it all planned.... I am sure once Brian goes into labor they will forget everything they agreed on...... lol..... I love these quick updates..... Thanks.......
Author's Response: thank you for commenting. I appreciate it. I know I can look at the read counter and see if I am being read but its nice to get some actual response to it. I will try to up date again tomorrow. But I need to sit down and make a time line for myself first I think. And let my inspiration take hold again.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
WOW.... Brian is writing a journal for "Peanut".... Priceless.......
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love the way Brian had a Drama Queen moment over Debbie's gift... and he picked out the perfect name for "Peanut".... Taylor Elisabeth Kinney.... Adorable.... lol...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
They made some excellent choices.... poor Brian.. his hormone's are kicking in and he is getting overwhelmed by everything...it's a good thing Justin knows just what to do to help him calm down..... I think 4 week increments are good... there are more noticable changes in that time.... Thanks...
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
great chapters. love the name.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Nice Car..... it looks like "Peanut" will have plenty of leg room... lol... I love the way Brian pretends to give Justin a hard time about everything...
Author's Response: Thanks. Brian is going to get a nice car himself. Thanks for your feedback.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 11
lucky justin. what's brian going to drive when he gets too big to fit behind the wheel?
justin has to ask all the questions because i think brian's too embarassed to do it himself.
Author's Response: Brian is going to hit that hurdle soon, I am leaning toward a luxury car. Something bigger than the 'vette but still sexy. Have to do some research.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
This was a very good and informative chapter.... due to the links you provided and the fact that Brian finally told Lindsay off.... but... I am slightly confused this is June... and you won't be updating till October?????
Author's Response: This is the last chapter that will take place in the month of September.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love how Justin is in his personal service announcement mode concerning the baby and her development... I like the domesticated Brian, but then again I'm all about the love...
Great Update...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
nothing is going to make her happy if brian is still with justin. just not going to happen. i feel so bad for mel because she'll always be lindsay second choice.
justin and his PSAs. can't wait for them to start thinking of names for their little peanut.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
OK... Mikey looks like he is starting to come around.... next up is Lindsay... I think it's great they are having a little girl.... Gus will have a baby sister...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 8
the exam sounds about right.... the doctor would do that during a sonogram... I think it's so sweet the way Justin has been so attentive and loving to Brian throughtout the whole pregnancy.... they are perfect together.... off to read next chapter...
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
sometimes i wish debbie would just tone it down alot.
michael's apology was crap. if he had meant it he would have stayed.
justin's hysterical.
Author's Response: Debbie is on their side. Michael will needs sometime and possibly a swift kick. I always liked the bouncy Justin. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 8
awesome.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
Pink is the new blue... ha, ha, ha
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 7
"One wants you to be the husband she will never have" ~ No I'm pretty sure they both want him to be the husband they will never have...
Great Chapter!!!
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
wonderful job keep writing.
Author's Response: Ch. 9 is already percolating.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
;) ;) ;)... and baby makes three!!!
Sweet!!! I'm loving this...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Ch.9 is already percolating to the surface. ;)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is starting out nice and sweet... Off to the next chapter.
Oh and on the new writter thing; my advise, write... Write what's in your heart and you can't go wrong. I just started writing last August, who knew... Best of luck!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
You gotta love Emmett...he is a true friend who knows and accepts Brian for "What" he is....not for what they "Want" him to be like Mikey and Lindsay... I figured Ted and Cynthia would be happy and practical about the news... This fic keeps getting better and better.... Thanks...
Author's Response: Thank you. Going to give Lindsey and Mikey a chance to say their peace and then moving on. I think its time for the fun to begin, after all they are having a baby!
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
just love this story. if mikey doesn't come around and be happy for them--it's his loss. lindsey is another matter isn't she. oh well--she can't have her cake and brian too. patiently waiting for more chapters--maybe they will have a sister for gus.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
so loving this story.
Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
This story is absolutely DELIGHTFUL!!!!!!! I have just smiled with every chapter. MORE soon, please. (your writing is outstanding).
Author's Response: Thank you I truly appreciate the positive feed back. Hope to post again tomorrow if I can work out some of the Lindsey issues I am having right now.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
WOW.... who would have thought that Melanie of all people would be the one who was happy for them.....Mikey needs to grow up and Lindsay needs to wake up.... Brian Justin and "Peanut" are a family and the sooner they realize it the better..... Great Chapter...... enjoy your vacation ....
Author's Response: I find that Mel is only as "rotten" as she is written. I kind of like the twist that Mel and Brian actually like and respect one another. Lindsey and Mikey may take some time to get with the program.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 5
I am glad they told the "Moms" , Daphne and Emmett and they were happy for them.... I am sure the Munchers and Mikey won't be thrilled at the news.... off to read the next chapter...
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
i am really enjoying this story,keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
i think they're going in the right order. if it were me, i'd make michael last to know as long as possible, and if he treats brian like the asshole we know he is then he and lindsay who will also not be happy about the news can go jump off a bridge together. deb's wishful thinking for her son is asking alot.
they really know who their friends are and will be by the time everyone knows.
Author's Response: Yeah I agree. I think you may be surprised as to who Justin and Brians biggest fan turns out to be. Thanks for reading
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
very good story
Author's Response: Thanks. I should have chapter 5 up soon
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
i sure hope the family is as happy about the baby as justin is. somehow i feel they won't be.
Author's Response: As usual some will be ecstatic others not so much. Chapter 5 soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
wonderful. glad justin is happy about it.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
very informative chapter for sure.
won't keep the 'vette for long because he won't be able to get behind the wheel.
how will he tell justin? will he tell justin? let's find out.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Justin.. I hope he can deal with a cranky moody Brian for 7 more months !!!! Thanks for the quick updates....
Author's Response: Chapter 5 soon. Brian is going to be fine I think, he will finally get to eat.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 3
:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Sorry the software is making me validate each chapter. I'm learning how to run this site. I did not intentionally withhold your validation. Eventually I'll get it right.
bob
I believe I just found my mistake. I think I got it right.
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
Can see Justin just vibrating with excitment,and Brian doing that shy sucky lip thing.
This is wonderful, just leaves me smiling.
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
God, just love Brian's reaction. Particularly "that would explain the 2 days every month that I am a BITCH to be around" can almost hear Ted and Cynthia saying only 2!
How it works seems just as likely as any other Mpreg explanations I've come across.
Author's Response: Thnanks.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
I am thrilled that they are both so happy about the baby...... and Justin is willing to come home...... I can't wait to see how Brian handles being pregnant... maybe Armani can make maternity clothes for men.... lol... Thanks....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
I think it makes sense.... most M-Preg fics I have read always used a C-Section and never explained anything...... your "this is how it works" section is as good an explanation as any.... and I absolutely loved Brian's reaction to hearing the news..... that he was a mutant that turned into a woman overnight.... LOL.... off to read the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ohh please continue xD
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG... leave it to Brian to know Armani and Prada by their first names!!!...lol... I love a good Mpreg fic..especially when Brian is the "Mommy"... I can't wait to see what happens next.... Thanks...
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Mmmmm Brian pregnant! great beginning of a new story.
* hugs *
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Really liking how this is going, you have a great voice and wonderful touch of humour.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think I struggle more with Justin than Brian. Justin is so much more thoughtful when he speaks. Brian just puts it all out there and doesn't censor himself.
Reviewer: CarolK1943 (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, I'll admit I'm a sucker for an mpreg... especially if it's Brian who's prego.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
i love it
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
wonderful beginning.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wellcome to Midnight Whispers.
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