Reviews For Brian and Justin with a differance
Reviewer: Fergie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2013 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2013 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, that was short, however, it moved the story along as it seems the next chapter we will have a much older Justin. If I write a lengthier review it will be longer than the chapter, lol, so I’ll just say; update soon please.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2013 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hi Yaz. I never write negative reviews, so please don’t take this as one. It would be great if you could get a beta. I know they are hard to obtain as I can’t find one myself. I would offer to help you, but my punctuation is atrocious. I can fix some of the spelling mistakes, incorrect word usage, plus add capital letters and some of the punctuation that I can see is missing, if you would like. Let me know via email as you can contact me through this site if you want. I won’t take offence if you don’t want my help as I know I’m not the best person for the job. I love your story and I hope someone who is loving it, just as much as I am, and that can help you a little better, will volunteer. Please update soon as the story line is great. |
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