Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2024 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Please 🙏🏼 update this it's so good need to know what happens
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2019 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
love it
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2012 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
could u please finnish it thanku kim
Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Plotline Synopsis
I just ran across your story - it is awesome! I can't wait for the rest. I really hope that you continue updating. It is so different from all the other stories out there!
Reviewer: britinmanor (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
OMG!!!! I JUST found this story! PLEASE tell me you DO have plans on continuing with this! I have NEVER read anything like this. PLEASE continue! It's SO Exquisitely Good!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
I love the whole idea and how you write it. Please update!
Reviewer: blklizard (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
I don't often read wip but this one had a very interesting synopsis so I decided to break my rule, take a chance and read this one. I caught up with all the chapters today and have to say this is a really interesting story. Clever plot and nicely done story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great story. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewer: sdsc50 (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Please update. This is a great story!!
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Lyndsay's really fucked up in the head! Seriously, stealing Justin's cum?? WTF?!? I don't know what you planned for the next chapters but I hope you're going to give the Munchers (well, Lyndsay at least) what they deserve!!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Please up date soon?!This is a great story especially since it is anti-Mel and Linds. :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Have so been missing this story. Hope the wedding and reallife going ok.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Unbelievable cheek how in the hell Linds and Mel ever thought they could get away with such a awful scheme. BTW how did they expect to explain the baby's birth to everyone? Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
oh so happy for an update, even with your busy schedule.
i want brian and justin to slam them to the wall. go for custody of gus and kyrie. michael can make up his own mind about jr.
wait until they tell everyone how it happened. whose side will the family will they stand with?
Reviewer: Jill (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
This story is really good please don'ttake like a another year before posting another chapther... ^_^*
LOve
Jill <<33
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 5- Life in the Gray
Squee!!! Love this story! Please Please Update more often! thnx! Happy Writing! =)
<3Alyse
Reviewer: cassy (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Plotline Synopsis
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon
bye kiss
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
that was awesome. hope you update soon
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
Hey, this is great. I'm enjoying the anti-Mel and Linds aspect. I enjoy pro-Mel and Linds stories, too, but sometimes is nice to hate, you know? I look forward to more. Does Lindsey still think that she used Brian's sperm and that's why she thinks the paternity test with Justin will turn out negative? Or is she just in denial or lying to Mel for a little longer? I'm curious, so write more soon, okay? Thanks.
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
This is great but please hurry up an update. It's a great premise and I'm totally into it.
Judi
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
Lmao! Go Tabitha! Haha! I still can't believe how stupid Lindsey and Melanie were and continue to be...oh well..
I loved that part where Justin was thinking how he would be lucky if Brian ever let him top again, lol! Aint that the truth! At least not without destroying all evidence of the experience immediately after haha!
Another awesome chapter, I hope we can get updates more frequently, that would be great! Either way, Happy Writing =)
<3Alyse
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
I love it
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
MORE!! soon please i love this story.
Hugs Buffytess
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
Well telling the family that they are married didn't go so bad. I can't wait for that paternity test to come back!
Reviewer: Vm (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 4- Even With Blowing Wind The Sunshine Prevails
I love this story. I hope that Lindsey and Melanie get exactly whats coming to them. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
Next chapter please!! I need to know what is going to happen. I can't believe they are still going with the whole sperm donor story. Can't wait for the blood test!
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
The munchers are sooooooooooo fucked. I love that!
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
I love this fic so far it has a very interesting twist going on :)
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Plotline Synopsis
I just love this, Go Boys!
"Cocksuckers 2 munchers 0" made me laugh out loud!
Author's Response: Lol. I have these spur of the moment cliches and whatnot that pop in the brain and exit the fingers. That was one of them.
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
Fun chapter! I liked Brian's “Hey carpet muncher," response! Not so nice to be called names, is it Mel? Can't wait til Justin holds the baby!
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
Haha! the munchers are gonna get theirs! yay! I always thought that lyndsie was a manipulitive bitch and mel is right there with her. I hope the boys get custody of Gus too while they're at it. :)
Awesome story so far, hope there are more updates soon! :)
Happy Writing!
<3Alyse
Reviewer: VM (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
I love this story. I cant wait to see what happenes next.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
I love this, please update soon
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
boy, i wish these chapters were longer.
"Cocksuckers two. Munchers zero." whoo hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 3- The Begining of the Sunshine Storm
I love it
Reviewer: cherub68 (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Plotline Synopsis
Oh how wonderful, so far has all the key ingredients for a fantastic fic. Can't wait for updates to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thank You
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
Lindsay and Melanie f*cked up BIG TIME!! That is the dumbest thing they have ever done. Not only do they have a pissed off Brian, but they have a pissed off Justin. And Jennifer is going to be in Waspy bitch mode. Let the games begin. Can't wait for Debbie to find out!!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter One- And So It Begins
WHAAAAAT!! I can't believe Lindsay did that and oops little did she know...it was Justin's condom and not Brian's.
Reviewer: VM (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
I loved this story so far. I can't wait to see how Lindsay and Melanie explain there actions,.
Author's Response: that is going to be fun to write let me tell ya.....
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Plotline Synopsis
This is absolutely delicious! Mel and Lindz should have known better.
Author's Response: I agree! Thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
Love It! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
I loved Brian's decisive action! The women's little plan was just mean!
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
What I don't get is why would brain even think about helping Lindsay and Melanie have another baby they are two sorry ass women in more ways than one.....now let them try to fuck with justin on this matter. by the way this is good..
Author's Response: Brian would have considered it before all of this happened as he was happy with Gus. The girls knew this but didn't want the custody battle with him again. Guess they screwed that up even worse this time.
Reviewer: deb@cape.com (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:33 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
How twisted is Lindsey...she and mel deserve to have Gus and the Kyrie placed with Justin and Brian. Its about time Brian gets to be a full time dad to Gus without Mel and Lindz getting in the way. can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks..... its coming along in my head. Especially since those two chapters came out in only the time it took my to type and post. So basically in about an hour and a half.
Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Plotline Synopsis
Love it!!! Great start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank You!
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
omgsh! wow! I totally saw that coming lol! sorry linds, the jig is up bitch. haha. Great job! can't wait till everything comes out. Maybe you should have Brian sue for custody of Gus at the same time :) that'll really go over well with them. Mel shoulda known better being a lawyer that it would never work. haha!! Love it! Great Writing and I hope you update again soon :)
<3 Alyse
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your thoughts.
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
OMFG! I love this story allready
Can hardly wait for Justin to meet Lindz, Mel and his baby.
Please update soon! Thanks
Author's Response: Throw in Mother Taylor and the party begins.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
OMG.... more i need more watch out lins and mel say bye bye to gus, jr and the new babby
Author's Response: thanks...... this is my first QAF only story..... I started a cross over with my other obsession harry potter but it fizzled fast and i am still blocked there.....
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:30 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
oh this is so good. i can't wait for the next chapters.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
OMG awesome plot xD
Can't wait to read more
Jill <<33
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter Two- I'm On My Way
I love it
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter One- And So It Begins
I love it
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