Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For
I'm glad Gus did that for Tim. Now Tim is in love with Andy. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: It was Brian's son, Charles who fixed up Tim but I know what you meant. My hamster was grinning when he told me this plot. He's very fond of young love. Thanks again for commenting.
Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For
i love it
Author's Response: I can count on you girls to love the lovein. Thanks!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Hey doll it's been a while. I love how you always make me have to change my panties after reading your stuff. There's nothing better than a big ... Love it love it love it.
Author's Response: I wonder how the next chapter works for you. Thanks for commenting and I was more than happy to get some chapters out again. I feel like the old me is back.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed
This chapter is so hot I was moving around in my chair. Thank you for writing it and I hope to see more soon. How will this affect Craig now? You come up with the crazyest plot twists I have ever seen.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. We will have to see later how much this might change Craig for real or if it changes him at all. Exploring one's sexuality is common for teenagers to do.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
I am missing more of this story. When will you have time to update? I also like that you are having your stories translated into French ...great idea. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting. I have a chapter started and will finish it soon. At least one story is being done is French so far. Someone else may do Forever Yours.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers
I've missed this story! Great update! Love the family and the interactions between Daddy B and Daddy J. Charles is a sneaky devil, not sure his plan is going to work after that little hot interlude Craig and Tim just had. (Tim is the bottom I gather?) Loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
I have been neck deep in learning new software to improve MW. I did decide not to stop writing and hope to update better in the near future. I love this story and don't want to end it. I have a shocking change brewing in my hamster's brain as we speak :)
I forgot to say Tim will bottom, and Craig will not!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers
i love it
Author's Response:
Thank you Rainbow. I love how I can count on you for a chapter review hit.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set
Nice to see John get a second chance with Brian and Justin. Looks like the evidence case is wrapping up. Great story.
Author's Response:
I was having a hard day with car trouble on a 2008 for crying out loud; then I got all these fantastic review comments from you. That was followed with some good luck personally :P You brought up my spirits and gave me luck today! I have to decide how to continue this story or close it soon.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author
You get well, Bob. Stories can wait your health can't. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: That was a couple of weeks ago; I'm all better now. Heah! You're my 1,100 reviewer which means the next chapter is dedicated to you balrogtweety.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
Seems like Brian's family is reaching out for help. Hope things go well.
Author's Response: I prefer to make happy endings with a few bumps in the road on the way.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
Molly sure needs to grow up. She will learn one day.
Author's Response: I hear being with child can be very emotional. Let's hope that's all it is.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels
Nice wheels. Love the color. Hope Craig can find the boy.
Author's Response: Craig is just like his father; have no fear.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
I like how you put this into this story. Feels like I'm reading 'Forever Yours'.
Author's Response: You read that epic tale? I hope I don't repeat myself too much, but I love for the boys to have money.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans
GREAT chapter!
Sad about Linds' dad. Excited about the two new babies!
What a way to end it! I'll have to wait to read the next installment. :(
Have a good wk!
Author's Response: Thanks Susan for commenting. I've been down with the flu but I'll be back soon.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections
Good chapter! Things moved extremely fast! :)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth
Grrr, hate having to register to leave a review, understand why though.
OK, funny & sort of sad..... another great chapter!
Hope you're enjoying your wkend! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for joining. It helps our publishing website to have more members. Now it's easy to leave comments. Love you girl!
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author
I hope you get well soon and i hope that it´s going to work for you to upload new chapters i will be wating patiently for them so take your time.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: For now I'm just able to answer comments. I'm still recovering from the B.K. Flu (butt kicking flu). Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author
Hello my beloved author
I knew too that something was wrong ... Above all take good care of yourself, you are the most important ... We wait as long as necessary until you come back at us in full health.
Lots of big kisses from France
Love you
Ask Mr Hamster prepare you a lot of chicken soup ... I'm sure he must do his best to take care of you
Author's Response: I'm answering one more then I have to go lie down again. I finally went to the doctor and got meds for this monster flu I'm having. I can tell I'm getting better very slowly. Thank you for being patient with me during this time. Love you Inintza and big kisses back.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author
i had a feeling you were ill as no writing from you in a while. hope you are getting well and have your postings upgraded. take care of yourself as we all have missed your wonderful stories. lol
Author's Response: Feeling much better today so I'll try to catch up on comments. I have the worse luck with flus and colds. Still have my computer problem posting new chapters. Will work on that soon. Thanks brian for your kind comments.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
great story by the way :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you rose. : )
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
Another week of holidays with my children... I’m currently enjoying a relaxed time on the terrace to update my comments. The last week, we were in Spain where we spent a wonderful moment at my grandparents home in Valencia. The big landing, everyone was there, my grandparents love when we are all around them even though my grandfather are still a little uncomfortable with persons of the same sex together (he loves us, he’s just embarassed to see gay kissing) On the way home, my older brother, Gex and their lovers have made a detour trough Madrid to enjoy the gay nights (apparently a comment on your new story made Gex want to go there and as they know the place, they put it on their program ;)). They’ll be back today…
Excellent chapter. I’m sorry for John. I just hope he accepts the help of his uncle, that Brian and Justin will be able to stop this vicious cycle and the boy will be able to get over it quite well. In any case, once again, the Kinney family can’t do without Brian...
I tested the recipe sandwiches last Sunday on the road. Only my parents and we had cars so we were responsible for supplies. The others went on bikes. At noon, the family meets in Zaragoza for the meal and everyone found these sandwiches delicious...
I read your reply to the brother’s comment. You are right. Tomas would do anything to his boy. We love Tomas here. For me, it's like my brother. Children, we were always together, my older brother, him and me... Inseparable ... As said my dad, Tomas was already the third son of the family while Gex was not even a spermatoazoid...
A pleasure to read your story,
Love
Author's Response: Please forgive my late answer. Finally I'm feeling more like myself again. I'd love to see Spain. Glad the sandwiches were popular. That really is my mother's recipe for us 4 boys growing up. Going to bed now and hopefully I'll repair my computer problem tomorrow stopping me from posting any new chapters. Love you Ihintza.
Reviewer: skywriter (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
???
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
hellooooooooooo....
I am glad that Brian able to put all the past behind him.
A mother is still a mother even though she unable to love like mother should.
Love your idea for this chapter.
Love. Love. Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Hi Complicated! Forgive my delay answering as I'v been out of town. Kisses back!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue
Glad the boy was found, what a sicko.
Good ending!
Seems like this is it for tonight, too tired to continue. Planning on getting a couple more installments in tomorrow! :)
Not sure where in the world you are but sleep well whenever it's time for you to go to sleep!
Author's Response: Sorry to be late answering you; I've been out of town visiting family. Thanks for commenting Susan.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped
Glad the cop is going to get what he deserve.
From one sicko to another. YIKES!
Excited I'm going to be able to read some more! :)
Author's Response: You're catching up with the story! Hugs!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop
Wow! Surprises as usual.
Glad the cop is going to get what he deserves.
Also glad everything is working out for Todd!
Oh, and Mr. Hamster, too cute! :)
Have a wonderful wk!
Author's Response: Thank you Susan. Love to read your comments. You're gaining on me! Hugs!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders
A little strange thinking of Ben & Hunter as a couple! Great idea having them take Todd in!
SO glad I have your stories to read! :)
Author's Response: Awww! You're making the hamster blush again!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby
Of course, another good one! :)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky
Really nice "day in the life of" installment!
I'm enjoying being able to actually read several chapters back to back! :)
Hope you're enjoying your weekend as well!
Author's Response: Susan you made my day with all your wonderful comments. I'm beta-repairing Embraced right now; it had so many typos I was ashamed of it. I wrote it so fast. I'd be feeling down without your comments today. Words fail me expressing how much I live to hear from the readers. Thank you!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps
Pretty harsh, thank you for the warning. Really sad that these situations actually exist.
A really good, interesting installment.
Author's Response: As sad as that part is; it has a happy ending. :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West
Wonderful, love how everything turned out!
Wish I was on one of the boats in the pic! :)
Author's Response: Key West is a magical gay fairyland! For real girlfriend. :P
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire
LOVED it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath
Another good one!
A little sad but really good.
Author's Response: Such is this JTSecrets' rollercoaster! Things will go up again, and down, and up, and down; kind of like Brian on Justin. :)
Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
Just wake up after a very short night and a very very long shower... : D I'm waiting for Tomas, who is getting dressed, to take breakfast (if I stay in the bedroom, Tomas won’t be able to slip into his moto clothes and / or me, to keep mine ! He’s too sexy in leather pants). So, I use this break to upload my comment on this chapter. Currently, we are still on campus because yesterday I had no train to go back home (strike) and, with the closure of the Paris airports due to the cloud of ashes from the Iceland’s volcanic eruption, it’s the chaos in other airports. So, Tomas came pick me up. He left work at around 08: 00 pm and he arrived in the night (2 hours drive, 133 miles, Is it not love that???). We’ll go back after the breakfast, with the GoldWing. Like Daniel and Brian, a bike riding and, in addition, there is really nice weather, it'll be a great moment.
Super chapter, as always .... Brian is really a good son. Despite all the meanness on the part of his family, he responds present to help his mother and, in passing, see what he can do for his nephew. But he is right, if John is not ready to get out through his addiction, it’s his problem. Ultimately, Brian can at least keep an eye on him until things fell into place... I'm longing to know John's decision.....
Big love,
Excellent week-end
Author's Response: Shit boy! If you were my puppy I'd drive across Europe in a snow storm to get you back in my bed. No volcano, no terriorists, nothing would stop me either. I totally understand Tomas's devotion to you and yours to him. You guys were totally made for each other. I'm doing beta-repair on Embraced this weekend and then I'll get back to this story soon. Big love back you beautiful young man you. :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill
Good, good!
Surprised at the end, wasn't expecting anything like that!
This past wk was one of the longest ones ever & I'm looking forward to just setting back & doing pretty much nothing except read your wonderful story!
Hope you enjoy your wkend! :)
Author's Response: Thank you love! Enjoy and I look forward to your comments. You make my day with your kind words.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow12004. This means a lot to me.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage
Enjoyed! :)
Seems like the next installment will be interesting.
I finally finished my taxes, yea! so I'm going to sneak another chapter in before heading off to bed!
Have a wonderful week! :)
Author's Response: Gosh, I'd be flat without your comments right now Susan. Glad the story makes you entertained. Thanks for the good wishes.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute
Great chapter!
Still amazes me how you just keep adding layers into a story & it's also just another day in the life of!
I'll be back later this evening to read more! :)
Author's Response: Many years ago when I was a junior paramedic; I dated a detective in Vice. I learned they have the most interesting lives with the cases they deal with each day. They work hard and they party hard when they have time off (which is rare). That and others times in my life help me to create the plot for this story to be real for the readers. Thanks so much for your chapter comments that mean the world to me and the hamster.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies
Oooh, good chapter!
I like the undercover w/ the new characters.
Glad Gus is OK, never can be too careful.
Author's Response: Cops will assign new rookies to investigate other cops. Otherwise they know who already is a policeman on the force. Gus will be fine; just a baby cold or something. Thanks Susan.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops
Good installment!
Like how you effortlessly include serious matters and handle the outcomes so well. Wonderful talent!
Hope you've had a good week & are enjoying the weekend. :)
Author's Response: I have prior knowledge how IA deals with cops that have a drinking problem. One might think it shouldn't matter if the cop had a family or not; but in reality it does affect how they deal with him. A man with a family has more reasons to stay sober and make it past IA probation. I had a great weekend; thank you for mentioning it.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber
Funny! Thanks for that!
Then came the hamster, TOO much! :)
Author's Response: We had fun with this chapter very much. Thank you for reading and commenting Susan. It warms our heart to see your postings. :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 26: First Night on the Job
Loving you, loving you, little hamster!
Yet another GREAT one! This is just what I'm needing! I just wish I had more time to enjoy it but it helps to know I am able to escape when I have the time!
Thanks for sharing & make sure you're taking care of yourself! :)
Author's Response: Heah you're still reading; that's all that's important, and you comment too. It means so much to me and the furry one. I have been taking better care of myself and sleeping more; instead of staying up days writing. That wasn't healthy for me at all. I had a great Easter and ate a ton of food with many leftovers to deal with as well. Love you!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: I Swear
Oh my, all hick broke out!
Love the Mayor not really having a choice!
:)
Author's Response: Sort of a Baptism by Fire with problems on the first night. The hamster was spinning away making this chapter happen.
:)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: I Do
LOVE!
I miss San Francisco! Wish I could afford to live there!
Enjoyed this installment, even w/ Craig's heart, it was great & he'll be fine.
Thanks for writing these wonderful stories, it helps me escape from RL! :)
Author's Response: The last time I was in SF was in 1975 visiting a sailor boyfriend of mine stationed there. It was a magical place back then. It was the first time I held a boy's hand in public walking down the street. Sometimes I get so into my writing the stories become my RL and the real world becomes my fiction. Am I making any sense? :)
Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
Can't wait to read the end !! When are you planning to update it (comments says it's still un finished...)
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting Ptitprof. I've developed a new story, and plan now to write the next chapter in this one very soon.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good Funny Money
Nice quick chapter.
:)
Author's Response: So good to hear from you again Susan. :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 22: Good Bye
Great chapter!
Enjoying how it's moving along!
Author's Response: I hoped to keep the pace moving forward quickly so it doesn't get stale. Thanks for commenting very much!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
I miss seeing pictures of the fluffy one. :( (still love you both)
Author's Response: I'll try to find more pictures of the furry one. Thank you so much for the comment hits on this story. As you know they are very important to us and motivate us to write for you. The readers have been so good to me writing in. Love you girl friend! :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels
Something that costs that much money should have doors and seatbelts. Love you both.
Author's Response: I agree! We love you too.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
:)
Author's Response: :) back!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang
Kisses and hugs.
Author's Response: Kisses and hugs back!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments
The recipe looks delicious. Love the story.
Author's Response: It's simple and easy but tastes very good. Love you too.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
Hugs and kisses.
Author's Response: Loads of love right back at you!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding
Love to you and the fluffball.
Author's Response: Ahhh! Thank you !
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning
Brian and Justin are great parents.
Author's Response: I agree; to me they have the quality for it.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night
Cute couple. Great story
Author's Response: I looked long and hard for a young man that matches Brian's facial features and this boy is so hot! I love his eyes.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor
Most people have a good side.
Author's Response: Yes, the key word being 'most'.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 74: What the?
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together
More recipies. Love it.
Author's Response: I've used every recipe I post in a story and know it's good.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy
Another pretty boy. X&O
Author's Response: Pretty deadly too!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley
Love and kisses to my fluffy baby.
Author's Response: He loves you back!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill
Great recipies in this story. You can make mashed potatoes with fat free cream cheese and no milk. Try it they are delicious.
Author's Response: Sounds delicious; I'll have to try it.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN
love the story.
Author's Response: Thank You!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job
Where do you find all the pretty boys? Love to the fluffy one.
Author's Response: Google Images mostly; love back!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter
Daniel has very pretty eyes. hugs and kisses
Author's Response: I loved his body too :P
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame
Love the boys.
Author's Response: You can take Brian and I'l take Justin. :P
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf
love the house. Kisses to my favorite little fluffball.
Author's Response: Ahhh...you made him blush.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better
Looks and sounds painful, but could be worth it.
Author's Response: Some men do it but I don't think I'd want to. Thanks for all these great comment hits.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life
Love the house and the story.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe
Love the story.
Author's Response: Thank you very very very much! We love the comment hits and they motivate us to write for you.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals
Picture 1, creepy.
Picture 2, hot.
Author's Response: That was actually a real senator but not in PA. Shannon's a very beautiful man indeed.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer
Love the hamster. you too.
Author's Response: We love you too Lorie.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion
Hugs and kisses
Author's Response: Hugs and kisses back! :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard
:)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money
Kisses for the fluffy one.
Author's Response: He loves your kisses too very much.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family
love it
Author's Response: Thank you! All these hits are so wonderful from you.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Knee
YEA! Great chapter!
Love that Rex is going to be OK! I hope he remains in the story & we get to see how his life is going to turn out!
Author's Response: Rex is in the story enough to know he turns out ok. Thank you for reading and commenting very much Susan.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 20: Rex Denny
Love it! Looking forward to the outcome. Would be nice to keep tabs on Rex. :)
Once again, your stories are wonderful.
I'll be able to read at least one more if not two more chapters today!
Hope you're well.
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm doing great. The weather is warmer and the hamster is driving me crazy with the new story we started. Bless you girlfriend for commenting on each chapter. Enjoy the story; it's almost completed.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Chief
Another great chapter! :)
What is going on w/ this person's leg in the picture, yikes!
On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I've enough pro-football players on TV to know that's a blown out Knee joint. Broken so bad it will need to be replaced. Brian and Justin will help the lad out. So happy to see you reading and commenting again Susan.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
This has been a great fic really interesting look into police work thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know the plot was interesting for you. I too enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
In the same situation as Molly, I would have felt really annoyed if my older brother gave me a lesson to manage my money. I would made a point of honor to show him that I was able to hold a budget ... But Molly doesn’t seem understand the problem. I hope that together
they can help her to come back to earth. Her eyes are biger than her stomach…
Anyway, congratulations for the exploit ... So many words into such beautiful stories ....
Author's Response: Molly is still young and just beginning to live on her on. She'll come around in time and Sean is money smart and will not let his wife shipwreck their future together. Thank you so much for joining the site and making me a favorite author. If three more people do it I'll be on the top ten favorite authors on this site someday.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels
We are big fans of bikes. I already rode with Tomas on his Goldwing. A dream. I would be able to drive it but I’m a bit impressed by this monster. In addition, Tomas doesn’t let many people drive it, even Gex has rarely this opportunity, and he’s his lover, so imagine with my 60 kg all wet, I have no luck ;)
The boys are lucky to such gifts... I like the car too. Well ok, not very handy for a large family, so I’ll keep my RAV4 ... ;)
Very nice chapter, JT.
Author's Response: I love motorcycles but haven't rode one in many years. Once upon a time that was all I could afford to drive right after getting out of the Navy here many years ago. The RAV4 is a beautiful car.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
The gang was spotted and arrested. An operation carried out brilliantly.
With her knowledge and her complete mastery of the real estate market, Jennifer makes still a great deal that will bring a lot of money to family.
Excellent
Author's Response: Justin still has his skill with the psychic stuff. Jennifer knows cash talks and bull shit walks in real estate. Thank you for commenting Ihintza.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang
I am very happy for Todd. My anxiety vanished when I read that Justin took the young man's future in hand and had found him a nice guy. Then, the announcement of Molly’s new maternity has filled me with joy. I can imagine the surprise for everyone ...
Then again, a problem comes on which Shannon must intervene while the party for his brother is in full swing ...
JT and Mr Hamster, you manage very well the art of keeping your readers in suspense ...:)
Author's Response: A new baby is always joyful news for a family. I'm happy the suspense is entertaining for you.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments
This week I tried the chicken and everyone really enjoyed it, even my little boy who usually doesn’t like chicken. My mother had prepared rice with red peppers, which went very nicely with the dish. It was really delicious.
Justin is really nice with his sister. If she agrees to follow his advice, she can do it. I hope Todd will be ok, he already suffered so much before his meeting with Ben and Hunter.
Superb, JT as always.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chicken recipe. It's so simple one might think it wouldn't be good but as you found out it taste great. Todd will be ok with Justin's help.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
As you see, Gex showed me how to register on the site. But the same day my hubby has wanted a cuddle and I left my computer for take care of him ;) Today, I want to finish my comments before joining him.
Craig Jr seems to follow in his father’s footsteps with great success ... I’m sure that soon the student will surpass the master.
I love
Big kisses
Author's Response: I'm very happy you joined; it's good for the website and you don't have to mess with the security codes to make a review comment on a story or chapter. We need good people willing to leave comments here; too often good writers get discouraged because no one comments on their work. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
Yay!!! Gex join the site too...
Wondering why it's never cross my mind to sign up as a member.....
Frist of all, thank you for the dedication...:)
Second, thank you for the suggestion to join this site...;)
Third, love the title & the story... Excellent.
Big hugs & kisses.
Maybe I should try Mr. Hamster spirit...
Author's Response: You guys are so nice to comment on each chapter; without it we couldn't write. Gex and his sister are fantastic just like you are complicated. Mr. Hamster has the eyes and spirit only for you dear. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
3,500 words a day! Wow, Mr. Hamster deserves a thunderous applause for this exploit. I LOVE MR HAMSTER
I love the ' Taylor Spirit ' too... I am ready to test the 'Tomas Spirit' tonight as soon as I finish these comments... ;)
Molly is not a very realistic girl. She really has a problem with money. I hope Justin will succeed in making her see reason, otherwise she’s heading for serious troubles. Craig Jr, for his part, realizes that his gift can make him a lot of money. If he follows the same way as his father, he will be quickly dead rich and I hope that Charles will not be too jealous ...
Excellent
Author's Response: I freaked out about how much we've written in nearly a year. This has probably been one of best years recently for the sense of accomplishment it gave me. I'm sure the Tomas Spirit took good care of you. I can sense how much in love you two are. You have a hot blond and he has a beautiful smoking hot smart twink to love. Molly will come around as she grows older and will have a good life within her means. Charles won't be jealous at all; he's proud of his brother. Love you Gex!
Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels
See, like Complicated ! And sister too, but then she disappeared into her room with her husband in the early evening and since we haven’t seen them ;)...
The Honda Goldwing is a beautiful bike, really comfortable on long trips, I know it… IT’S TOMAS’ BIKE ! Usually we take it for vacation because it’s ideal for long roads. I love it. All gold, it’s his beautiful baby. Me, I have a blue Honda Pan European (1300 ST ABS). We use it most often for local distances. Intza and her husband have a Yamaha FZ6 Fazer, my father a old custom DUCATI and my elder brother a BMW L1200 LT. And yes, we are bikers and we love ride.... But, on the car front, we stayed pretty basic. No Mc Laren here. Anyway, I like their gift idea for birthdays...Shannon ‘s car is beautiful. I'm sure she would be a smash hit in the village here ...
Beautiful chapter, JT
Author's Response: I've never driven a Gold Wing but I once rode bitch on one. In my younger years right out of the Navy I drove a bike for economic reasons (cheap gas in the late 70s). I looked up your bike and it is so beautiful. I'm eveious for you. Thank you for commenting and being a loyal reader.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit
Would you believe I've written almost 1.2 million words since April of last year?
That works out to over 3,500 words a day! Do I have a terrific hamster are what? :)
Reviewer: complicated (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels
hi JT.
As you can see.. I am a member to this site :) It is so cool.... I like it....
Wow very cool bike. Love to have one myself, and Mr. Hmaster you can ride with me....
Good chapter JT, Mr. Hamster.
Please.. please take care yourself JT. Mr. Hmaster it is your duty to watch ove JT.. ok.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: JOY JOY JOY!!!! You joined the website! Mr. Hamster is so tickled about that. He would love to take you out on a hot bike and show you off as his personal biker mama. And you made me a favorite author. We are so grateful for that. I do try to take care of myself but the weather here has been unreal lately shifting from hot to very cold almost everyday. One can't help but to catch colds in this shit. Texas has the strangest weather in the world!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
Thanks to Justin, they laid hands on the gang responsible for the explosion and the deaths of these men.
Jennifer is an impressive realtor. She rules the negotiations with an iron hand. With this purchase, Synergy Investments made a lot of money and the club members are getting richer ...
Now I am joining my boy for a cuddle, inspired by Brian and Justin ...
Superb chapter, JT
Good job, Mr. Hamster
Author's Response: Heah Gex! So very good to see your comments when I woke up today. I've slept like two days straight catching up after staying up and writing. Glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang
I'm glad that everything works out for Todd. He’s a good guy, just a little lost but thanks to Justin, he now has a gentle lover. I know he overcomes his addiction with him and the specialist. Nice to organize this party for Sean with family and friends but Shannon didn’t really have time to enjoy it, gripped by the news he just received.
Well, we bathed in a warm light and… go, we are again on the top of a roller coaster! Very good
Author's Response: I figured Todd would have some issues due to his background of abuse. I hope I made it sound realistic. I'm catching up on comments to answer before writing the next chapter(s).
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments
Last Sunday I had the pleasure of tasting the carot cake and this week Ihintza served us a meatloaf ... I feel I’m about to eat soon 'Garlic Brown Sugar Chicken'. Here, if everyone knows JTSecret for his stories, you are now also known as the 'JT Recipes' because Intza posted all the recipes on the fridge. She went shopping yesterday, so I'm sure if I dig a little, I'll find all the ingredients
Justin put his plan into execution with his sister. With him, she learns how to manage money. And while everything seems to be fine on their side, it’s at Ben & Hunter that the problems come
Can’t wait to read more
Author's Response: I'm very happy the recipes are tried out. Both the meatloaf and carrot cake are favorites in my house. The Garlic Brown Sugar Chicken is so simple and easy to make one would think it's not good but that is not the case; the flavor is great if you have a bit of a sweet tooth. Molly will get over her desire to spend money soon enough. She is not as mature as her brother is.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth
Wow, Craig Jr. is as good as his father. Both leave no chance to the policemen... It’s goint to be interesting with two psychics in the family.
Superb
Author's Response: Little Craig has a future in law enforcement if he wants it. Just wait until the FBI learn of his abilities!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
Ok, this story is totally addictive. At the end, you must open centers to help your readers come off... ;)
Craig Sr is recovering well from surgery. The bond between father and son is really strong. And this same link will be strengthened between Justin and Craig Jr., now that the boy showed his mental capacity
Beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you! Someone said the same thing about "Embraced".
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale
Yeah, okay. Now I know why sister doesn’t want I have an argument with my ex, she only sees room and board in Scotland ;). Just kidding, She’s not like that and my ex is a really really nice guy and we like him.
Seriously, this is bad news for Craig Sr. Anyway, with this new heart, he will be healthy again, ready to bite the life ... With one of your previous stories, I was already on Google for news on these transplants. It's pretty special, but the country itself is a bit ... special. Beautiful country, but special ...
Fine chapter
Hats off, artists .... Standing ovation for the story
Author's Response: I love the UK; wish I could live there but I'm stuck in the USA to get my health care here as a military veteran. Health tourism is a big business in the world for procedures and transplants. Mr. Hamster and I take a bow humbled by your comments.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding
These moments with family remind me a lot the moments we spend here. And I love that. Justin and Brian are great parents. If someday I have children, I want to reproduce the education I had and the link with my family. I have super parents and a super super family. I love them all
Excellent chapter
Big hug
Author's Response: I know several gay parent families and the kids are super. I also know many straight parents with disfuctional families to the max! Go figure on that. Hugs back!
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning
I loved travel with my parents. It was always super discoveries. To nothing in the world, I would have missed these holidays. My first real memories of travel, I was five and we were in Thailand. It was great. It was always in contact with the population so we could compare our lifestyles. I must say our summer camps in France didn’t offer anything great at the time ...;)
Super Chapter
Thank you very much
Author's Response: I too love to travel but don't get out as much as I once did when I was a younger man and airfare was cheaper to fly. The Space Camp in Huntsville AL is very popular in America but not cheap.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night
Nice couple ! Gus is a young man not bad at all. The kind on which I could lay my eyes if I see him in a cafe or a club ... even if I have a preference for blond or light brown. ;). Anyway, good luck with that commitment, guy. This is young but they are sure of themselves ... And Judy seems to have a good head on her shoulders, so why not?
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: Gus could eat crackers in my bed anytime! :P He has the same facial structure as Brian which is why I chose that photo. Judy is a little doll and looks like she knows how to please and love a man.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love
At least the Russians don’t beat around the bush when one of them did something goddam stupid. Allen Cullen is now ready to go into a clean lifestyle. Thanks to Justin, his past is erased at all levels.
This story is really a great trip
Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor
Not only Justin has his gift but also a social network that goes with it ... Who else than he can appeal to a russian killer to help the FBI? Allen Cullen is really an exceptional guy. His rapid and effective intervention helped rescue the young Corey. Well, when the Russian secret services solve their problems, they aren’t joking. 3 killed and a house on fire ....
Great, better than a movie ... I loved
Author's Response: The Russian Mafia are known to be brutal for real. They would shoot you just to see if the gun works.
Reviewer: Gex (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 74: What the?
Hey Dude,
I finally take a few moments to comment. For a week, I’m at home. I took the week off (and maybe even the next week) and I enjoyed every minute. We have beautiful and spring temperatures here (75°F) so it allowed us to do surfing (with a wetsuit because the sea is still cold but it’s ok) ... I also finished all your chapters. The last weekend was .... mmmmm, ‘caliente’. I was everywhere. Behind, front, on top, bottom, soft, hard, greedy and voluptuous, in several differents positions involving standing, sitting, laying, kneeling and many forms a body can take ;). I saw in an answer for Intza that you gave us eight hours before the need of fuel becomes a major issue. You don’t measure my cravings, nor that of Tomas. Also Saturday morning, not even need to dress and leave the house ‘cause a large Thermos of coffee, pains au chocolat, croissants, raisin brioche pastries and a bottle of fresh orange juice waiting for us at the door of my appartement and ditto Sunday morning (thank you dad !)
The story of this kid is brilliant and involved. Apparently, the FBI seems believe that the kidnapping cover more than just a simple abduction for ransom up. Justin will again help. JT, you have awesome ideas
Superb as always. Congratulations also to Mr Hamster
Kisses
Author's Response: This comment had me laughing. Getting room service was not in my first equation and yes I underestamated your cravings indeed. Sounds like you boys had fun and well deserved going without for so long. You and Tomas are both so beautiful and make a hot couple in a photo. It actually snowed today in Texas; I am so ready for spring and summer. I hate cold weather but we have a saying in Texas: "if you don't like the weather wait 10 minutes." It changes so fast here. It can be freezing and snowing one minute, and sunny and hot an hour later. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments
I just have to post it again on the right chapter....
Loving it.
Love to try the chicken.
What happen to Todd?? I can't wait.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Always very glad to see another review hit! :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments
I just have to post it again on the right chapter....
Loving it.
Love to try the chicken.
What happen to Todd?? I can't wait.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Way to go complicated! You're my 900th reviewer. The next chapter is dedicated to you! Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth
OMG...
I have problem with the security code & the massage to try again. When I check my review is for 1st chapter...
Glad Craig Sr. is getting better.
Craig Jr. is very good. I can see the plot will ticken.
I can smell the new adventure in the future.....
Love you both.
Author's Response: You should just join the website and then you don't have to deal with the security codes, and you can choose me as a favorite author if you're a member (hint hint!). You don't have to be an author to join and it's free. They protect your identity too. It's very easy to join. I too grew up with some psychic skills and I have a good friend who is a professional psychic who has solved dozens of crimes for the law before she retired. She can give a reading telling your future for 10 years and it's the truth. We love you too.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
I like it.
Synergy Investments will make the family richer in no time.
Take good care JT.
Kisses.
Author's Response: I don't do it now but in the past I've owned rental property and once had a lover (many years ago) who had over 700 rentals. It was a crazy lifestyle dealing with all that. Kisses back.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang
I love it.
The roller coaster ride is just began......
Hugs & kisses.
Author's Response: You remind me of my first coaster ride on a wooden one at Six Flags over Texas just outside of Dallas. You think the coaster will fall apart on you it creaks and squeaks so much. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Loving it.
Love to try the chicken.
What happen to Todd?? I can't wait.
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: The Garlic Brown Sugar Chicken is simple but delicious. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie
Glad Craig Sr. is getting better.
Craig Jr. is very good. I can see the plot will ticken.
I can smell the new adventure ib the future.....
Love you both.
Author's Response: Yes, Craig Jr. does add to the plot a bit more. His experiences should be interesting. Love you too.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
i love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! We apprecite the hit very much!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal
You see this is why I'm not writing! lol Too busy reading your roller coaster story here! Had a few chaps to catch up on. Wow! So much going on! Were you sick? I heard someone say you were sick. I hope you're all better now! This story is taking on a lot of dimensions and I'm loving every one!
Author's Response: Damn Texas weather; I had a nasty cold that had me down for about 8 or 9 days but it has finally passed. I then wrote a few chapters before RL go it the way again. I just finished sleeping for two days straight and can now write some more, stay up some more, and sleep again. The way I live probably would qualify as bi polar! :)
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale
I heard about this kind of surgery in mainland China...
Happy that you fully recovered now, cheers!
Author's Response: God me too; I hate being down with a bad cold. It wasn't a flu like funk but it wiped me out for over a week. The people in my home suffered since i wasn't cooking either. :) I don't think they'll be ordering any more pizza for a year!
Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth
It's good that Craig is also gifted, that would make them a powerful team. And I loved the family moments.
Author's Response: You and me both; I enjoy easy reading of family plots without all the angst and drama sometimes. I hope to make a mix of events to keep the story alive.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth
i love it
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster is so glad. :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
Loving it all over again..
1 psychic in training ... can't wait for father & son 2 work together...
Brilliant idea......
Hugs & kisses...
Author's Response: I was smiling when the idea of a psychic son hit me. Craig Sr. was good at reading people too but Justin was nothing short of amazing. I'm not up to answering all my comments now with RL in the way for a couple of days. I wanted to answer this one and thank you complicated and Ihintza for commenting and I'll answer them all soon. Hugs and kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale
The bond between father & son is so strong.
Loving it..
Kiss. Kiss.
Author's Response: Yes it is and it will grow stonger as the story moves forward. Kisses back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money
OMG, the little Craig has inherited the gift from his dad ... It's great especially since Justin will guide and help him ... I am glad that the father of Justin get better. But, Molly will have soon a surprise ... She will have to deal with his brother for money, she won't be able to do what she wants
I’m longing to read more
Superb
You are doing an excellent job
Author's Response: Next chapter Justin and Craig do some psychic police work. After that Molly gets a dose of reality.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale
I love Scotland. It’s a beautiful country with lots of contrasts. A former of Gex lives in Glasgow and I’m glad he has kept a very good contact with him because it gives us a pied-à-terre when we go there.
Anyway, the vacation of our boys are nonetheless quickly interrupted by this sad news. Fortunately Craig has accepted this idea of the transplant. This will give him some wonderful years to live ... And have his family around in such a time is a significant comfort
Excellent
Author's Response: I've been to the UK twice and Scotland once. Magical. I've heard rumors of organs for sale in Asia but really don't have any proof. It makes for a fun plot though. :)
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding
Beautiful wedding
« When you're a gay parent you have to be three times better at it », it’s exactly right ... My parents have educated us in the best way possible knowing that they would be systematically criticized if we made an error. There had at home a lot of talk and no subject was taboo. We could talk about anything and express our feelings without fear of judgment.
Brian and Justin are indeed wonderful parents. They have beautiful children. I always loved when the story is in these family moments.
Beautiful. A true delight to read
Author's Response: I've known many gay parents that felt like that; often their on distant family members are the most judgemental. I can tell you had great parents too. I hope it was easier for you in France than it is for gay parents in America. In many ways it sucks here; so much open hate for gays. I'd leave if I didn't need the health care I get here. I really like to write the family scenes too. Life is complicated with relationships, work, kids, money, and surprises for us all. So it is in my story.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning
I loved the waking up with Brian, Justin and Gus. I suppose indeed Craig and Charles find more interest in the Space camp than the trip around Europe. It was different for us, when we were younger, we have traveled a lot with our parents. We loved those great moments of discoveries ...
Excellent Mr JT and Mr Hamster
Love
Author's Response: No doubt you and yours were far more intellegent and mature than the average American kids. Love you back.
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