Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 04:22 PM · On: Well, Doofus?
NO, I didn't want it to end lol. I hope I can find another story that feeds off of this one. That is the only bad thing about this story and others, I just want them to go on lol.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2015 10:31 AM · On: Well, Doofus?
Great story, a really good read. Is the epilogue still to come?
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2015 07:48 AM · On: DJ Gangsta Moll
Can't believe I laughed out loud again -hilarious reactions to the "how many" question. This is such a good read.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2015 06:18 AM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
OMG laugh out loud funny. Perfect antidote to a long and crappy day at the office. Thanks :-)
Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2015 02:25 AM · On: Spiraling Downward
I love this set. Please, please, please, will there be another? Maybe telling what happens with Gus?
Author's Response: I do owe you all an epilogue (I'm actually gearing up to write that), but yes (maybe) on a Part III. There's definitely more conflict to explore in this one. I basically just gave them a short reprieve.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 01:33 PM · On: Well, Doofus?
Congrats on finishing this story. Isn't it a great feeling of accomplishment when you can wrap one up? Yay! TAG
Author's Response: Thanks! Most definitely.
Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2014 08:39 AM · On: Well, Doofus?
I hope the epiloge includeds what happens to Gus & Molly.
I laughed A LOT! Love stories where you can cry and also bust a gut laughing. Loved Truth or Dare.
Author's Response: That's a great compliment (that the story is sad and funny)!
Actually, I wanted to leave this one a little open so that I can do a second sequel (if there's interest).
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2014 03:39 PM · On: Well, Doofus?
Oh no! Another story ending. Can't wait for the epilogue. Love how the judge didn't just agree with their getting custody, but did manage to find a way around it for them. Good job!
Author's Response: I was trying to give the ending a touch of realism (and leave it open for a second sequel)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2014 01:37 PM · On: Well, Doofus?
Huh???? Justin is right about Lindsay, the way the judge ruled and his reason for it really gave her a victory here. A year is a long time for Gus to keep having visits with Brian without Justin being there...it's unfair to him...to everyone really. And besides, if Molly never sees it, I really don't see that it should matter.
Author's Response: I know. The judge knows, too, but there's a lot of prejudice. I was going for a touch of realism. Plus, I kind of wanted to give myself somehwere to go just in case there's interest in a Pieces III.
Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2014 10:33 AM · On: Well, Doofus?
Nice to see they get to take Molly home but is kinda sad to see that most of your stories are ending =( Looking for epilogue
Author's Response: I have NO idea if there is any interest...I think Pieces II is less of a favorite, but I wouldn't mind doing a Pieces III. That's part of the reason I ended it the way I did.
I am finishing my stories, but I'm giving myself more time for the second set (Fawn.Armani, How Sweet It Is, Taylor, and Buttercup and Enigma), which I'm gonna start updating later today...so it won't feel as rushed. And I don't know whether you read FoF, but I'm definitely planning to do periodic standalones in that universe...make it a series.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2014 05:53 PM · On: Brian 'Dating,' Designer Clothes, and a Box Load of Porn
How excited I was to check this site and find two new chapters from one of my favorite authors. It is so nice to see a Judge who is not judgemental and only looking for what is best for Molly. And how all the people who spoke were favorable toward Molly staying with Justin and Brian. I am so looking forward to seeing what Emmett has to say, because he is one of my favorite characters.
Author's Response: Awwww...you're giving me the warm and fuzzies
(grinning like a fool)
Emmett's one of mine, too...I think that's why I keep trying to hook him up in my other stories. I want him to have a B/J caliber partner...
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2014 04:48 PM · On: Brian 'Dating,' Designer Clothes, and a Box Load of Porn
Okay see you gone make me pull out my paddle with all these cliffhangers lol...next chapter please.
Author's Response: Umm...is that supposed to discourage me? :-D :-D :-D
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 09:50 PM · On: You Can Have Anything But the Twix. I Really like Twix
The judge appears more open than what I fear most would be like in PA.
Interesting chapters, I like the personal development of the minor characters.
Author's Response: The judge is unusually open minded. But there is a limit to what he can do (given the context).
What a wonderful compliment!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2014 06:28 PM · On: You Can Have Anything But the Twix. I Really like Twix
It looks like the Judge is going to rule in Brian and Justin, and more importantly, Molly's favor. Love how you had him put Craig in his place. Waiting for more on this as soon as you can get it together!
Author's Response: Craig totally deserved it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2014 04:22 PM · On: You Can Have Anything But the Twix. I Really like Twix
Doesn't look good for Craig here haha!!! That’s what his smug ass gets for proving to the judge that he would throw Molly out on the streets without hesitation if she told him she was a lesbian.
Author's Response: That WAS pretty dumb of him.
Author's Response: That WAS pretty dumb of him.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2014 03:11 PM · On: "What’s All This Business about Assault?”
Great chapter, I cried through most of it.
Author's Response: I actually cried, too :-(
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2014 10:20 AM · On: You Can Have Anything But the Twix. I Really like Twix
Just read the last 3 chapters - wonderful lunchtime reading. I like the judge - he seems receptive and reasonable. Craig - of course is a prick. I so hope he gets caught out somehow and is able to be charged for what he's done.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the newest chapters :-)
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 06:50 AM · On: "What’s All This Business about Assault?”
Like all of us, I'm rooting for the boys!
i am enjoying this story.
Author's Response: That's so wonderful to hear!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2014 06:44 AM · On: "What’s All This Business about Assault?”
This is getting so good I didn't want it to end. I like this Judge so far.
Author's Response: He IS pretty cool :-)
Author's Response: He IS pretty cool :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 05:12 AM · On: The Reason We Watch Sad Movies
What a wonderful use of that basement. Not to mention H O T!
Author's Response: Yay!! That's what I was going for :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 01:04 AM · On: Perception
The house sounds fantastic. Brian did a good job. Love how understanding Ben is. I didn't want this chapter to end.
Author's Response: Awww...that's such a sweet thing to say :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2014 01:03 AM · On: Perception
Yes indeed, Angel needs to make an appearance and let His Heart see how much he's really needed...something tells me that Justin is in need of a little comfort as well.
Author's Response: I went the other way (giving Brian a pretext for letting Justin take care of him) ... I hope you like it.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 02:17 AM · On: DJ Gangsta Moll
Ooh, Justin makes such a hot little hustler...
A new house will be great for them, giving them the privacy they need...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I agree on all points :-)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 02:26 PM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 1
The interview was very perceptive. The questions seemed very thought out.
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment! I did put a lot of time into it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 07:34 AM · On: DJ Gangsta Moll
Brian rented a house without Justin seeing it? And he organized a packing party! With Pizza and a DJ no less. Will wonders never cease!!!!
Author's Response: Brian was feeling a little 'off' :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:17 AM · On: DJ Gangsta Moll
DJ Gangsta Moll....ROTFL
"Brian you's a Ho!"....ROTFL with tears in my eyes... (oh I can't breathe and my sides hurt)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you found those bits humorous :-D :-D :-D
They gave me a giggle, too
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 04:19 PM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 2
Wow. At first I was wondering - is this the same woman that interviewed Justin? she seemed so hateful. But then she changed and I could breath again. I like her recommendations and am somewhat surprised that Brian agreed so easily. He's changing and for the better.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 12:51 PM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 2
I have mixed feelings about how Brian’s interview actually turned out...I can't tell whether Mrs Crenshaw was helping him or condemning him.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 05:17 AM · On: You Break My Heart Every Time
Pretend or not, that was fucking HOT!!!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2014 04:57 AM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
Classic Brian Kinney sex talk advice.. Ha, ha, ha...
Loved it...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 01:18 PM · On: You Break My Heart Every Time
*reaches for my bucket of ice*
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 04:42 AM · On: You Break My Heart Every Time
So they rent not buy? You've got a way with imaginary sex. : )
Author's Response: Yeah. Justin's not ready to be 'too married.'
Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 04:39 AM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
OMG. This has to be the FUNNIEST chapter I have ever read.
The 'Justin Taylor Special', jumping on Brian, trying to cover his mouth and then threatening him, forgetting condoms, Sex Buddha.Priceless.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 04:16 AM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
A really enjoyable chapter. And educational too.
Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 01:39 PM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
Very educational...I took notes even ;)
Author's Response: Ha :-)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 06:16 AM · On: Brian Scars Molly for Life (j/k)
Just caught up with the last 3 chapters. They were all great. Justin's interview felt real and the sex talk was very funny and so Brian. I like that Justin did 'damage control' also just like him.
And HOW did they forget the condom talk.........tsk, tsk, tsk........LOL
Author's Response: I'm so glad the story feels 'real.' :-) :-) :-)
I know, right? They are so bad!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 04:14 AM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 1
Well Damn... But Justin survived, she sure knew how to get right to the point. But I think he did good, maybe better than expected. It's a good thing him and Brian working through what hey thought the questions would be... Looking forward to Brian's interview, it might actually be the harder of the two...
Patiently waiting for more chapters, still loving this story...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I'm so glad your still enjoying the story.
Yeah, Brian did them both a solid by anticipating.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 02:04 AM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 1
*biting my nails nervously* but looking forward to the training session ;)
Author's Response: I think it's a hoot so far. Almost done :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 01:14 AM · On: Landmines Everywhere, Part 1
Wow. This was a great interview. The question's were totally believable and Justin's answers were good. It looks like he did a good job answering her questions, but should get into therapy. Not a bad idea.
Author's Response: That's so wonderful to hear! I was trying to make it as realistic as possible :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Confession
Wow that was a powerful chapter... I love how strong yet tender they are with one another... Being able to express their venerability, and be there for each other...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 12:04 AM · On: Confession
None of your writing is ever a fail, this was a very good chapter.
Have confidence, you are a great writer. If someone thinks your stories are so bad, let them write their own.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 12:04 AM · On: Confession
None of your writing is ever a fail, this was a very good chapter.
Have confidence, you are a great writer. If someone thinks your stories are so bad, let them write their own.
Author's Response: You're very sweet...
Thank you so much for saying that. It means a lot.
:-) :-) :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2014 08:24 PM · On: Confession
You know, even though Jennifer doesn't believe it she was in a dom/sub relationship, she just wasn't having the fun that Justin is. Having Molly there is making it tough, but it is soooo worth it. Brian is the best.
Author's Response: I know, right? For all her disapproval and vitriol...he's the one with a fulfilling emotional connection and a fabulous sex life :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2014 07:51 PM · On: Release
I have to say I enjoyed Justin's talk with Jennifer. She is so in denial that she doesn't realize her life was worse than what she thinks Justin's is. I'm proud of Brian for taking this and doing something about it, he got his reward in the end.
Author's Response: This ended up being good for both our boys :-)
PS: I couldn't agree more. Before people tell other people how to live, they should do a little comparison. Is their way REALLY more fun? Or more fulfilling?
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2014 02:48 PM · On: Confession
You have expressed wonderfully what I have always believed to be true...Brian never wanted Justin to see him as weak.
I also love how you used the sensual flogging to help them communicate. Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree about Brian.
I hope the actual flogging was alright. I was nervous about that.
Reviewer: charle (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2014 02:46 AM · On: Dissolution
I love your stories. Do you think you will finish the ones incomplete soon? There are so many I was reading that are not finished. Jujst wondering.
Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear!
I'm trying to finish 3 every two months....so now I'm working on Pieces II, Friendship or Foreplay, and Justin's Secret. They will be finished in the next 2-3 weeks. After that, I'll be working on Taylor, B&E, and How Sweet It Is.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2014 01:41 AM · On: Dissolution
Excuse me while I come down from subspace...;)
Author's Response: High praise, indeed!
:-) :-) :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2014 12:33 AM · On: Dissolution
Oh please, I want to know how Justin gets his groove back. Well done chapter. Personally I vote that they get a house with a playroom where they can lock people out and not have to wait until they are gone.
Author's Response: I wonder whether soundproofing is expensive ...
:-D :-D :-D
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 08:55 PM · On: "Better Than Mr. Freaking Huge's?"
Don't they get a day of rest? Nice that Brian doesn't want to be called Master, he's mellowed. I like it! They could get a bigger place and keep the loft as a getaway? The pieces are falling into place. Let's hope Molly is a part of the puzzle that is set in place. I like that Brian plans to have a room for Daphne.
Author's Response: No rest for the wicked :-)
I'm glad you like Brian's name change.
I like that..."The pieces are falling into place." Perfect summary for this one.
He would actually prefer to keep the loft and get a new place, but he's not sure he can swing that financially. Justin doesn't know that b/c Brian hasn't said anything about money. I don't think he realizes how much everything has been costing.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 01:46 PM · On: "Better Than Mr. Freaking Huge's?"
Good chapter! I like Brian's Dom name and I vote for whip Wednesday ( I'm quite partial to floggers) ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Justin's suggestion-we both broke our brains on that one :-)
Good choice :-)
|
