Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2019 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love it

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

I like that they didn’t change their plans and they are still heading off to NY. Great ending.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

And baby makes three. How will this alter their plans? A Taylor-Kinney household; I always like it when they use both names.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 16

I’m so pleased they all knew Brian just wouldn’t leave Justin like that. Hopefully it won’t take long for them to figure out where he is and they arrest Ethan.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh no, Ethan’s back. What has he done to Brian?

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Debbie and Craig. OMG I didn’t see that happening. LOL

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow Brian moved fast once he knew they had both been accepted to NY and the wedding was on. However, it’s always nice to see the men finally get together.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

A strong Justin I like that. He called their bluff and the blackmail didn’t work. Hooray for the town folk. Now the Gold’s need to be run out of town.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG that is teamwork. Brian and Justin seem to have everyone in their corner; Ethan really doesn’t know what he is up against. Ethan spent a dollar to spend some quality time with Claire. LOL

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 9

Foiled. Damn Mrs Honeycutt for coming home early.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 8

Emmett and Claire seem to be a great combination for helping out the men. Ethan doesn’t seem to stand a chance against the two of them. LOL

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

I hope Emmett can come up with something to help out Brian and Justin.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 4

A barn-raising with violin music that sounds like fun. NOT. Ethan courting Justin; why would Ethan think Craig would allow that???

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow Brian realises he needs to be more careful with the kissing and not get caught but will it be enough to deter creepy Ethan. Claire helping them out that priceless.

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Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

The Kinney’s are nice people and Claire is Brian’s teacher. I have actually been in a class where the teacher was a sister to one of the students. It will be interesting to see why Craig is so hard on Justin. Brian kisses Justin and runs away. Adorable. I think I am going to like this AU.

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Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thank you for finishing the story... I know it took time and your dedication is really appreciated. I enjoyed all the flashbacks I got for Little House on the Praire. Its a great time period.

Emmet was a great strong character at the end and Michael was even likeable, lol.

Sequel? Lots happening with the move to the city, a baby on the way and school starting. I wouldn't be surprised to see someone's parent(s) show up to help with the baby... or maybe Claire.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I have a bunch of different ideas that I've been toying with but nothing that I'm happy with. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 19

I loved the story! Thanks! Hope I get to read some more soon!

Reviewer: Tinkerbell (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2011 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

Awesome story :)I love it so much,is it the end?

Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. It's the end of this part but there will be more to come when I have more time.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 19

such a lovely heart warming chapter. great job. now starts a new phase of their lives, university and a baby.

Author's Response:
Thank you for liking the story. Life has been so hectic that I hope I get a start on the next phase of their lives.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 19

Loved that ending. It was worth the wait, so glad you finished it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: gale4every (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story**make justin top once ;) xd

Reviewer: silvermoon8916 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love your story.please update ASAP.
thanks.m.sa

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2011 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 18

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yay! This was so romantic. I love a wedding, can't wait.

I really enjoy Claire and Jack being kind, good people. Actually, I really like the originality of this fic, it's so refreshing even for an AU.

Looking forward to the next chapter, maybe the wedding will be in it????

Thanks so much for sharing this.

Laura

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yay! This was so romantic. I love a wedding, can't wait.

I really enjoy Claire and Jack being kind, good people. Actually, I really like the originality of this fic, it's so refreshing even for an AU.

Looking forward to the next chapter, maybe the wedding will be in it????

Thanks so much for sharing this.

Laura

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comments. It makes me very happy to hear that people are enjoying it. No worries, the next chapter will definitely have the wedding.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 18

i hope the trial goes well.

sweet chapter.

Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 18

i can not wait to read more of this story

Author's Response:
Another chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 17

I can not wait for you to update this wonderful story

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 17

I am glad that Brian awake!

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

i sense they're closer than they know.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2011 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 16

I hope the boys find Brian soon.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: jai (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 15

that evil rat! justin knows better! I can't wait until all is revealed. (I hope thats soon, haha)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 15

that little slimball. brian will get out before justin is put through any agony of having to be with ethan.

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 15

OH MY GOD YOU SHOULD COUNTINU THIS I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEND

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 15

No, Justin can't believe that the telegram is true! I certainly hope he doesn't. Looking forward to your update.

Thanks for sharing this, it's delightful!

Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I hope to have another update soon.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 15

why doyou writers do this at the good parts.

Author's Response:
So you readers will continue to read. LOL! Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, so glad that Brian won Justin's basket. Loving this fic!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

WHAT? Ian thinks he's going to get Justin? The pig?

I love how you've tweaked the AU so that courting between men is accepted.

This is excellent!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is so charming and imaginative. I just love it. I'm hooked!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 15

Justin is not dumb enough to believe that telegram, especially when Ethan is suddenly back in town and had already made a pass at Justin.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

I hope Justin get to Brian soon.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 14

that little scumbag!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 13

nice to see you and the story back.

very happy for brian and justin. brian calming his parents worries was sweet. craig dating debbie? good for him.

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 13

OH MY GOD .... IAM VERY HAPPY YOURUPDATE..... PLEASE DONT LEAVE US A LONG TIME ANOTHER CHAPTER

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 12

Please finish this story...I really like it

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I Can not wait to read more of this story please updade as soon as you can

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMG!!!! You are so cruel!!!! you can't leave me hanging like that, they just got rid of Ethan and they are about to be happy and starting a NEW life! What else could possibly happen?Arghhhhhhh More please. Thank you.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 12

Glad to see an update of this story. Looking forward in what happens next.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh my goodness! you cant leave me hanging here!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh please finish the story!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

Justin is learning his own strength. His dad now backs down from a fight with him.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 9

Awwww.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hee Hee. It feels so good to be naughty.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Justin should just kick the poop out of Ian.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

I never thought I'd say this:P Im begining to like Jack Kinney

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

grrr. I dont like Ethan. He needs to get small pox and die.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian hesitated for about a second before he placed his tongue inside Justin’s mouth. He really didn’t know what he was doing but it felt right all the same.

LOL. I dont doubt he turns out to be a natural.

Ethan wanted Justin and he was going to get him one way or another.

Great choice in villian, I want to tear his hair out! Brian should break a violin playing finger!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

“I thought we could walk to school together.” Brian kicked he dirt.

I laughed out loud when I read this line it was so sweet, lol.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

How Little House on the Prarie, I so loved that show.

I smiled reading Brian giving Justin that risky little kiss on the cheek, lol.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

Yea! What a fantastic chapter - glad Criag got with the program and chose Justin over his pride. And of course the gang wopuld support him & Justin :)

A little worried about what the Golds might try next - Ethan doesn't seem like the type to back down...

Reviewer: rznbloodrose (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

finally they are togfther ,I missed this story!

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 11

yay!!!! i'm so happy! good riddence to the golds.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 11

first of all, welcome back.

i am so proud that justin had the nerve to stand up to ethan's father and that craig followed suit. as brian said, he loved him and so did his father. i'm glad craig gave them his permission to court. will we be seeing them in the future at their wedding?

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 11

this chapter was worth the wait! So glad Brian and Justin finally get to be together

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

I was missing this story. Glad you're back. Beautiful story. This chapter made me cry.

Author's Response:
Thank you! There will be one or two more chapters. Hopefully it won't take too long.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

Yea! Thanks for posting!

I hope the boys have a VERY nice lunch :)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 10

poor claire having to have lunch with ethan. she's so nice to do that for brian and justin.

how much did craig really hear? well he's trying.

sure brian and justin had a wonderful lunch.

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

Why are you toying with me like this?! :o) Great story here. This was a close call; yeah Em for saving the day. I definitely want to see B/J get together soon, but I don't want them to feel rushed or ashamed. So far so good... Please update soon.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 9

Brian and Justin are so cute. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 9

saved by the parents. whew!

poor brian, no need to feel guilty but does. justin knows him so well already.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh please let Ethan get run over by a wagon train!

I don't know how much more of him I can take. I just want Brian and Justin to be together out in the open.

Please update soon!

Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm actually having some writers block. I seem to be writing in circles. That is why the next chapter is taking so long. Hopefully by this weekend, I'll have something to post.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

Brian and Justin are so cute. I hope everything works out for them.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Carlina (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

LOVE IT :)

Hugs,

Carlina

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

what a fun chapter. glad that emmett and claire are on the boys side. keeping justin away from ethan was great. loved the way they did it.

justin leading brian to emmett's bedroom, hope it doesn't lead to any trouble. except that it will break the engagement.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oooh... I like! :)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Justin. Ethan gives me the creeps. :(

I hope Brian and Justin find a way out this mess with Ethan.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

sneaky sneaky. what aer em and brian going to do and how will even playing at being sick have brian and justin together? isn't brian expected at the barn raising?

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

glad to see craig coming around as to how he's been treating justin. now with jack on brian's side, i'm sure they'll come up with a great plan to get justin away from marrying ethan.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 6

Enjoying this story. I hope Brian and his parents find a way to get Justin away from Craig. Hate that his father promised him to slimey Ethan!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ugh. Justin and Brian have to find a way to not have Justin marry that scum Ethan. Please fix this. *crosses fingers*

Great chapter. Thank you for the quick update. Looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

I hope Ethan goes away. He gives me the creeps. *shudders*

Poor Brian and Justin. I hope they find a way out of this awful situation with Ethan.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

i see ethan hasn't dealt with craig yet. that should be quite surprising for ethan. at least i hope it is. brian and justin are adorable together. i can just picture brian hiding behind the tree making sure all was okay. ethan gives me the creeps.

Author's Response:
Well, it will be a surprise.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

what a creep. he'll never have justin. if brian doesn't see to it, craig will.

they are so cute together.

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

I like this a young brain and justin ...I like claire to . can someone please kick Ethan butt

Reviewer: Marieta (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, it is a very good begining and I would like to know where are you going with this, what was wrong with Jenn and why Brian's parents and Justin's dad is so woriea about? BTW, are you thinking to move your stories from ATP on this site?

Author's Response:
Thank you for your interest. It really is helpful to know that people are interested in my stories. I will get into the back stories soon. Thanks again for your interest.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

what did jennifer do? this is wonderful. craig gave an inch, which surprises me. yet he's ready to take back two, which doesn't.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

...huh. I was surprised by my reaction to this story. I actually like it a lot more than I thought I would. I'd really like to see where you go with it. Update soon?

Reviewer: Kat (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great Start!!! Can't wait to read the next installment.

Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Looking at the summary I thought i wouldn't like it but i do! update soon

Reviewer: black sheep (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

luvs it!! please update soon. im dying to know whats up with justins father, and what is he making him bind??!! lol great start

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

love the beginning of this new story, hope you update soon

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

i really like the beginning. what is craig so afraid of? being left alone? if he keeps going the way he is that's exactly what's going to happen. i can't wait to find out all the background stories that led him to be the way he is.

Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest. I'm hoping to get this story done soon. The boys need to go through some heartache before happily ever after. I will definitely get into the back stories soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story is pretty good I remember the one very well keep going.

Author's Response:
It's going to be a little different but I hope you enjoy it.

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