Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
Love the story.
Brilliant twist Mr Hamster.
Hugs.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated for commenting. Hugs back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
Love this chapter. Family time. I am having good time reading.
Like the idea of gay resort very much.
Can't wait.
Kiss, kiss.
It is almost midnight here, and I just finish baking cookies for Aidilfitri celebration.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. There is still much more to decide about the lsland. Now I have a clue where in the world you are.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day
Very good talk between Gus & Justin. Who said we can't take exemple from the young.
Looking forward the family vacation in Malibu.
Love you.
Author's Response: Gus is incredible for his age; he lives in such a positive environment he has great confidence in himself. Malibu coming up.
Love you back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 120: Gay Blue Lagoon?
I love the idea that the underaged kids get to go clubbing with their own age group to ring in the New Year as well. They'll have a blast.
I've been in fantasyland imagining B's new idea for the resort. The more primitive, eco-friendly environment would be a welcome respite from our everyday technology-laden world (at least to me, others might go into withdrawals). Incorporating the island is a good idea too. This way they can make guests sign a waiver that if they break any of the island laws (whatever they are) they can be escorted off, without fuss. Likewise the staff could sign a staff rules of behavior (always play safe, require periodic medical checks, which drugs/if drugs are allowed, etc.) or they can be similarly escorted off. Speaking of the staff, I've been trying to picture...if the staff are dressed ala Blue Lagoon characters, will they be wearing personalized loincloths, or are nametags unnecessary? *g*
A simple name would be best like Eros Island or whatever. Can you tell I'm into this? Lol.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: One must always plan for the kids to have fun on a vacation. They're still very much in the brainstorming phase about the island and there is so much more to consider; health dept. requirements etc. I'm sure they can come up with some way to identify the staff members. Thanks for enjoying the story and letting me know.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 120: Gay Blue Lagoon?
I am completely taken by Brian's island idea. I'd love to live and work there. It could be the hottest gay island in the world. Gays would fly in from all corners of the earth to stay there. WOW!!! You rock Mr. Hamster!
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster takes a waiving bow. It does sound like a fun place to live and work. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
Slave Justin would think of that. Love the flying idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
I think it is time for Lindsay to have a reality check. She seems to be loosing it again, living in a world that makes her think she could get visitation rights.
Gus will probably have to put her in her place and set the boundaries. He will have to be the adult in the situation and tell her what he will allow.
Author's Response: You are so right. It was, is, and will always be about what Gus wants; not Lindsay. Thanks Eileen for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
A very special Christmas (even if there was no snow) starting with the human alarm clock. That brings back yet more fond memories. *g*
I like the Egypt theme for the upper class resort, of course Slave Justin came up with this, LOL! The huts could have different themes too for a different flavor. Or maybe set each one up as a different fantasy room (S/M dungeon, pirate ship, victorian, caveman) that could be reserved for a few hours at a time...or not. LOL It's just fun thinking of all the possibilities! But I definitely agree with them having a private house/beach for their family use.
Then we have Linds. Somehow I knew she wouldn't be satisfied (it's always been about her...manipulative, spoiled wench that she is). Kind of funny that she feels thwarted by 'the mighty BK', is she over her fixation with him or is it because she is not getting his attention that she is doing this? I hope her parents put their collective feet down, because I don't think she'd have a roof over her head or money to hire a lawyer if they didn't support her. Well, I guess she can try, but I can't imagine a good lawyer would take her on with her history (and just thinking about that lawyer being confronted with Mel, and B/J makes me smile).
Mark and J, pilots. Life imitating art...Mark was the pilot in the Camaro commercial and it was J's concept. At least they can rack up a lot of qualifying air hours by flying between CA and Pitts. *g*
Another goody! Looking forward to the next...
Author's Response: I'm always honored with someone takes the time to give such a detailed review showing their interest in the story. I love your hut ideas for different themes; don't be surprised to see it added later. Years ago I was a pilot myself (single engine prop. planes only) and I like to write about it; it's tons of fun but too expensive these days for me to fly. I'm getting tired but I might get one more chapter out tonight if Mr. Hamster can stay on his wheel. Thanks so much for your great review cakdg.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 119: Malibu Christmas
I knew that lindsey wouldn´t keep her mouth shut.... grgrgr... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Every story must have the bad characters who could be good .. etc. Thanks rose!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
Hey JT, thank you for the chapter dedication, how fun!
Wow! What two really great presents for Michael. He gets a clean record and he gets to spend alone time with JR. I didn't know that the criminal record of an adult could be sealed. Michael has been fortunate and this will make Deb so happy too.
I love the idea of the resort and B/J & J going into business together on the project (it's about time really). Can't wait to see the designs and advertising. I'm sure it will be fabulous as always. After all, who would know better what their customers would want, they are their target market. Joint adventure indeed! *g*
Just a note: when the guys land at Honolulu airport you mention Ted and Blake, but not B/J...?
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for catching my oversight missing to add B&J. I've fixed it now with your help. Once an adult completes probation and for certain none violent or sexual crimes and first offenses the record can be sealed. The resort will be a very fun projects for the boys to do. Thanks for commenting cakdg.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
love the island idea. great gift for mikie from b/j.
Author's Response: Melanie finally allowed him to be a father again. It took over 5 years of being good but it finally happened. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
great chapter: 3 things though...
typo: Boys Paridise should be Boys' Paradise
Since Brian talked about opening the hotel to lesbians, there should probably be beautiful servant women (not just 'beautiful boys and men...)
Which Hawaiian island are you talking about?
Author's Response: Typo repaired; thank you. They will have beautiful girls too; they have to research how to make a resort for girls. The island in the Hawaiian chain only exist in the reality of my story. I did find a 500 acre island for sale in the U.S. Virgin Islands but it's illegal to be gay there or have sex anyway. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
I am sorry for not commenting for a while but i havent had the time to read because RL has been hard. But now i have read all new chapters and you are so good at this. and i wonder about the gay paradise it must be a dream come true for them.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: RL has a way of doing that from time to time. Glad to hear your reading and enjoying my story. They may push the envelope of gay resorts soon. Thanks for commenting Buffytess.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
Boys Paridise indeed; this is a very rich idea and could be legendary. I'd love to visit such an all gay tropical island full of beautiful boys and men. I'd love to work there and find me a rich daddy. Where do I send my resume? I wonder what ideas Justin has for the upper class hotel? Egyptian kings and slaves perhaps?
Author's Response: There are gay resorts in the world but not an entire island to my knowledge. Your insight into Justin's thinking is spot on. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 118: Paradis de Garçons
Sorry it has been a while since I last wrote an feedback. You did a wonderful job as always. The best story i have ever read. Keep them coming...
Author's Response: Thank you very much kwil. I'm happy to see you're still reading my story. Enjoy!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
So glad Justin was ok, it could have been so much worst. Wow! Petco bouncing checks, can totally see Brian wanting to drop them like a bad habit.
Author's Response: I couldn't hurt my favorite blond for long or very bad. Companies bouncing checks is part of doing business. I remember my family's business dealing with that crap all the time. They even got a bounced check from Texas Instruments; a multi-billion dollar company who let their account get too low. It happens. Thanks for commenting and reading Kat.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day
forgiving does help, not living with the ex-abuser do definatley help.
Author's Response: Yes, I can see that being very true. That topic sparked a lot of interest. Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day
Gus is doing the right thing for him and he also gave J something to think about too. Forgiveness is not always easy to give, and in some cases it took me a long time, but in my experience it has been beneficial when given.
Devin is cute about moving everyone to the ocean. I always love a child's view of the world and how simple it should be. If only! *g*
Great!
Author's Response: Well look who became my 1,300th reviewer and will have the next chapter dedication: YOU!!!! I got several private emails from people who were abused doubting how Gus could so easily forgive his mother so I felt the story needed more information from him so the readers could understand his thinking. The world through the eyes of a 5 year old is fun to see. Next chapter the family of Kinneys goes to Malibu for Christmas and New Years. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
Yum, love Slave J fantasies. Had to laugh at B knowing J was having a good dream because he was moaning and snoring at the same time. Lol Funny and hot!
Aw poor Devin. I think closet monsters have been around as long as kids and closets have shared space (they must breed like crazy). This brought back a lot of fond memories.
Glad the boys had fun on the jet. Devin is a typical kid wanting to immediately do it again.
If the Petersons want to see Gus they will endure/accept the bodyguards.
Fun chapter!
Author's Response: That's Justin's most favorite fantasy too. Who hasn't deal with closet monsters has missed out on a lot of fun with kids. Boys love power so the jet was a great treat and it showed Peter he was not left out of family events and toys. The Petersons will get over their problem with Brad; Lindsay has another issue coming up but that's too bad for her. Glad you liked the chapter and commented cakdg.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day
The power of forgiveness is amazing. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 117: A Typical Day
gus has so much love and understanding love the story
Author's Response: I felt the story needed more knowledge from Gus how he could so easily forgive his mother for such horrible abuse. Thanks nickie for commenting.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
god, I know those monster stories...hihi... very funny and a very hot sex scene you wrote for us.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: I had an imaginary robot who killed my monsters. hehe Glad you liked the hottness. Thanks rose :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
Hehehehehe..... lucky for them finish in time. Very hot scene.
The Petersons better accept the bodyguard quick.
Brilliant chapter.
Sweet dream JT. Take care yourself & Mr Hamster.
Author's Response: That was a close call that morning for our lovers. I had fun writing it. We slept great. Thanks complicated.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
The ending of this chapter is so funny. I love it.
Very good progress between Gus & Linds. Smart move when Gus decide not to tell about Linds to his brother.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Brian's wit is legendary and he's great with kids. Gus is very smart for his age.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Still reading dear! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Kat! I'm delighted to hear from you. Enjoy!
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
Not sure if I like this chapter. I'm having a hard time coming to terms with Lindsay being anywhere near Gus??
Author's Response: Next chapter Gus talks about why he decided to forgive his mother so easily. The visits are very supervised. Thanks Tiff for commenting.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
I lov eit
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster and I are glad you did. Thanks Rainbow for telling us.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
like the smoke detector analogy
Author's Response: Thanks alys; it just seamed to apply to the situation of a bodyguard too.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
That was such a hot love scene followed by such a funny emergency. The boys had a blast on the jet. The Petersons must accept the goons or else. Great updates.
Author's Response: Thanks Dave for all of your chapter reviews; I really appreciate them very much. Lindsay will get over it or else for sure.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
Heavy emotional chapter is followed by an easy funny one. Bravo! I laughed at B and the boys the end.
Author's Response: I felt we needed a light hearted chapter after the one before this one. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
JTS, the plot master. I didn't see this coming. What a twist this was. I could see the court room as it happened. On to next.
Author's Response: The court results were within the realm of possible. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 116: Closet Monster
oooo something is going on with the petersons and lindsay.... gus becarful...lindsay plllleeeease do something stupid
Author's Response: The Petersons are just not use to goons around; no big deal. Lindsay will be upset about another matter soon. Thanks for commenting nicole.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
At first I was surprised Brian agreed so fast to write the letter then I thought he could write anything with calculation. Danni sounds perfect. On to next.
Author's Response: Brian realizes when a man as powerful asks for a personal favor it would be wise to grant it in the long run.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
Oh shit. Lindsay screwed up big time here. Got to read how this unfolds.
Author's Response: Lindsay was pushing the limits of the law here. Thanks for commenting Dave.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
I take off for the weekend and come home to find six chapters waiting for me. Loved the hotdog joke very much. It's funny what kids will hit on. Saks is a good store with quality stuff. On to next...
Author's Response: Once in a while I'll shop at Saks for a good outfit. They are outrageously expensive however. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
Ok, you make mistakes intentionally to see if we follow ? ;) That doesn’t work !
Gus is impressive with his thoughts. His views on Mel’s anger is very perceptive. He’s a fine psychologist. He’ll be amazing older. Justin will go with Gus. It’s the best solution. He won’t leave the boy a second, idem for the bodyguard. I see no risk to Gus...
For Danni, I trust them, they will find an alternative to antidepressants
Excellent chapter
A tons of kisses for my favorite writer
Author's Response: I wish I was that clever. I blew it on the names and admit it. It's corrected now. Twink kisses for this old American man have my heart in tackicardia mode racing wild. Thank you! Mr. Hamster thinks he might be good for one more chapter tonight; in progress.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
Wow, Mel gets really angry. But it is the choice of Gus and as Brian and Justin, she must respect it. If she doesn’t see her ex, it’s her choice. Gus is a young boy, very intelligent and very mature. Like sister, I think a right of access is a good way to reconnect smoothly. And Brian will be there to supervise. He keeps the authority... So if Linds screws up again, he’ll have the last word ! She won’t be a second chance...
Very good chapter
Author's Response: Since Lindsay is prone to fixate on Brian; he won't be supervising; Jusin will do it with a goon present too. Yes, Lindsay has no rights to visitation except what Brian allows her so she better not mess it up. This is all for what's best for Gus; when it stops to help him; she's history. Thanks Gex.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
OK, Daddy JTS is a bit lost in the names of his kids or then Brian, Justin, Mark and Jerry can’t recognize their youngest and consistently exchange their boys (Zack instead of Devin ! I smiled the whole chapter)
This first time in the jet went well. The next visits will be supervised by Justin. Brian may be right to choose this solution. I loved Brian with Peter and Shawn. And I loved the décision of Gus not to speak of his mother next to his young brother. Danni chose the youngest, it’s her maternal instinct. I just hope she won’t need the Zoloft, poor girl... here, Lollipop is with us when Gehexan isn’t there but when he arrives, we don’t exist any more, she only sees him, hears him. It's fun to see
Excellent chapter
Big hug and a little peck on the nose for Mr Hamster ..
Author's Response: I have been up over 24 hours writing and screwed up this chapter royally! Yes I wrote Zack instead of Devin; I'm either a retard or this was a clever ploy for major review hits (answer: retard). I better sleep soon if I know what's good for me. Pretty soon the voices in my head will start and I'll get delusional again. It's a very fine line between genius and madness and lack of sleep usually crosses the line. Glad you could see the humor in my errors. Thanks my lady!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
When, in a previous comment (112), I talked about finding another solution with Brian, I thought this kind of access. As a mom, I know I wouldn’t harm my children but, if one day, I can’t see them, maybe I will react like Linds. So, for me, it's after all a good decision. And it’s the wish of Gus. He’s a very strong kid and very clever. In addition, Brian and Justin will supervise these visits, Linds will never be alone with her son ...
Excellent chapter. Of course I love the direction of this story and it's roses that I send you
Big Love
Author's Response: Forgive me: I missed answering this review earlier. Yes you did have the foresight to see a need for Lindsay trying another way to solve her problem. In a later chapter Gus talks about how he forgave his mother so easily. Thanks for the rose.
Big love back!
Reviewer: Cheryl121152@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
Great Chapter! Love your stories.
Didn't B/J name Justin's son Devin and Mark/Jerry name their son Zack? You may have them confused in this chapter. Also a few chapters back, you had the chefs mixed up.
Author's Response: You all caught me big time. I really messed up this chapter. Justin's son is Devin. Mark's son is Zack. I've been awake over 24 hours straight writing 5 chapters and it shows. Thanks for setting me straight. I'm repairing it now. I have a character list three pages long already and should update it. But hey; if major blunders gets me a ton of reviews I'm not above pulling down my pants on line. hehehe Thanks for your help.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
loved this chapter. brian giving shawn and peter a little ribbing at the end was great.
will zack be starting school at Gus's school soon?
dogs love to go to work, I took mine daily for years... if danni gets lonely
Author's Response: I messed up again; I meant Devin not Zack. I'm tired again and should sleep soon.
Great idea for the dog. Thanks!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
Just a note, I thought B/J's son was Devin. Zack was Mark & Jerry's?
Well, I'm glad the reunion with Linds is relieving Gus and B/J. As long as this continues to be what Gus wants and she can't be alone with him, it should be ok. And though Gus may be right about Mel (smart kid), there's also the kind of double betrayal. I mean, not only for hurting Gus, but it was due to her fixation on B. That had to hit Mel double hard and make her wonder if Linds ever really cared about her at all...
I had to laugh at the Zoloft comment. But another alternative is to maybe get her a doggie companion. The boys certainly wouldn't mind. *g*
Great!
Author's Response: I'm tired again and been up over 24 hours writing. Yes I messed up the boy's names again big time in this chapter. I'm fixing it now. Brian will take no risk with his son; he can't piss without a body guard nearby. Your insight on Mel was priceless. That is sooooo true about the double whammie it had to be for her. The second dog is an excellent idea. Thank you much cakdg.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
Ah, Danni will be very happy with her new masters. I’m sure she’ll quickly take Brian in. Linds's father hangs on by his fingernails. It’s not obvious to ask Brian to write this letter for indulgence. The circonstences are still very present. Ted is good at giving advice... By adding a discussion with Justin, also wise, maybe Brian will make a perfect decision
Great chapter
Big hug
Author's Response: When a man as powerful as Charles Peterson asks for a favor it means a lot. In the future it could be priceless and Brian knows that. It all comes down to what is best for Gus? Big hug back Gex.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 115: Zoloft for Dogs
I lov eit
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow for letting me know.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
Female Golden Retriever is a really good dog. Lollipop is a delightful girl. She's MY girl !
Linds is idiotic. She was warned, but she stalked her son despite the warnings of Brian. She screwed up and now she must accept full responsability for it. I hope she’ll go to jail. It's too bad for Gus, but she was too far. The discussion with Justin couldn’t have come at a better time. And Justin is fabulous in this situation.
Superb chapter
Big kisses
So, for the record… I know I’m going to surprise but my moms raised us without diapers. The diapers were only there for outings. According to my moms, they knew our pace and our signals for pee and poo… Intza tries it with Maïa...Yes I know, weird family ;)
Author's Response: The adults have one view of the situation; Gus has another and what he wants is what counts here. I hope you're still reading after finding out what Gus wants. Perhaps your diaper theory is for the best. I don't think it's weird at all; sounds very natural if you can watch them close enough.
Big kisses back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
Justin has found a wonderful friend for their children. Danni seems adorable. In addition, she’s already trained and has been well treated by the old masters. She arrives now in a home where she will be happy. Charles Peterson lost completely hope. He knows his daughter has made a huge mistake. He tries to save what may be hoping that Brian grants his request... Ted expresses exactly what I think. I have that same feeling ambivalent ...
Superb chapter
Big Love
Author's Response: Thank you Ihintza. Soon you will see Gus has feelings no one foresaw. I hope you like the direction of the story. I've recieved roses and rotten tomatoes. I must be doing something right!
Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
Small quiet evening around the pool. Everyone is in the water... So, waiting for the meal, I read a little after a day in Spain
Just by reading the title, I thought 'Linds'. Of course, it’s understandable for a mom to want to see her son but still, she’s really stupid. There is a court order against her. She knows she faces jail. Why did not she try to talk to Brian and Justin and try to find a solution instead of tracking his son ?
Justin is perfect with Gus. He was able to explain the situation calmly. And Gus reacts well. He knows he did nothing wrong
I'm glad the choice is a Golden Retriever. It's really a friendly dog
Excellent chapter
Big hugs
Author's Response: Thanks for the Twitter update; I feel like I'm with you. I hope to still be your favorite read after you get to the next few chapters. Gus has his on ideas on the situation and shocks his fathers with what "he" wants concerning his mother. My favorite pet as a child was a Golden Retreiver. They're the best; someone (something) poisoned her and I was depressed for weeks.
Big hugs back Ihintza!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
Hey JT. Thanks for your in-depth reply to my comment. Actually, the part of Linds' original crime that I focus on more is her physical abuse of Gus, more than the sexual. As he said, that's what he remembers more and so did I.
I'm glad J will be the one to accompany Gus on his visits with Linds. I don't think she ever knew what a pitt bull he could be when provoked. She's in for a surprise if she puts her foot wrong. *g*
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Lindsay was very drunk when she physically harmed Gus. He still has many more good memories of his mother than bad ones. For Gus to overcome the abuse it's important not to escalate the situation 5 years after the fact. He wants to forgive his mother and it will have a very positive effect on Gus's emotions. In the next chapter he laughs like he hasn't laughed in years. The shadow of Lindsay no longer hides in the back of everyone's mind. He has a very interesting theory on Mel's reaction. Lindsay learned in therapy how much she hurt her son and how much damage she could have caused. Adults have one preception of the situation; the victim child has another; and one must always look what is best for the child. At nearly 12 he knows his feelings and he needs to forgive his mother. Gus is an amazing kid as time will show. Thank you for such a detailed thoughtful comment.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
I liked the introduction of Danni to the family.
Well, I am very surprised...if Gus felt this way about Linds, why didn't he say anything to his dads before now?
As he hasn't spoken with her since he was 5, he doesn't know that she wouldn't hurt him again. And for Gus to just rush into her arms without a clearing of the air between the two of them first, didn't ring true for me.
This situation struck me as too easy for Linds. She's getting everything she wants, even though she violated the conditions of her release. Not only isn't she receiving any punishment for this, all is forgiven and she gets to see Gus and B again. So what's the lesson in it for her? My gut still tells me that Linds will try to manipulate the situation, it's in her nature. I also think Mel knows this (after all, she lived with the woman for years, who would know better?).
Curious where the story goes next...
Author's Response: Your insight is outstanding. Children can be very forgiving of a parents mistakes. The subject was taboo to talk about until Justin brought it up and they asked Gus for his opinion and he told them. You'll see only Justin taking Gus for visits. Brian already thought of what you did; Justin sees it too. What is happening is what may be in Gus's best interest to not sustain long lasting damage. Things with Gus get more relaxed next chapter. An hour or two every week or two isn't giving her much to run with but it does give Gus room to filter his feelings and overcome his memories. Would it surprise you to know sexual abuse counselors and courts do reunite families of incest and they have the very lowest rates of repeat offenses after treatment? I've done my research and kept an objective view of this explosive subject. Thank you and I commend your depth of vision into the story.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
Danni sounds beautiful, I bet B won't be able to resist her, either. *g*
Well, I'm not surprised Linds' father made the plea to B. And Ted put my feelings into words. On the one hand she did what she did years ago and in present time she hasn't hurt him. But she wasn't given the chance either. Gus is now more mature and able to make decisions for himself. He also remembers what she is capable of. So, even though I have my reservations, I agree with B's decision. Let Gus say what he wants to happen to her. I just hope it's not too much pressure on Gus.
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Brian won't be able to resist the new young blond of Britin soon. Ted is always a voice of reason and that's why Brian asked his opinion. They won't be expecting what Gus wants; it'll shock them. This is an 11 year old going on 41. Thanks cakdg.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
great chapter. Brian will definatley keep Linds reined in.
Author's Response: You can count on Brian and Justin keeping a close eye on Lindsay. This is all about how best for Gus not to be hurt by the prior abuse. Thanks for understanding Gus's wishes with such a sensitive emotional issue of conditions. Thanks for commenting too alys.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
love danni the dog, bed brian will start taking walks with her or letting her on the sofa at news time with him ;-)
hard when charles asked brian to write that letter. I vote for her not being able to leave canada at least... given the chance we'll try and hurt gus again
Author's Response: Brian will fall in love with the new blond in Britin. Gus has his own ideas and desires about his mother. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
Don't get me wrong Mr Hamster. I do still LOVE YOU!!
This is show how genius you are, when you can make reader feel just by the way you wrriting the plot twisting. It is make the story alive, intresting, dynamic... everything.
You write the story that make believe. Not everyting is wonderful, it is fantasy. I like your style that balance the fantasy & reality in your story.
Wonderful, brilliant & excellent job you both doing so far with the story, and I can't thank you both of you enough.
A long & hard kiss & hug for you Mr Hamster (never forget I love you, always).
A tender kiss for my fav author, JT.
Author's Response: I don't know who's blushing more; me or my rodent. Thank you!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
Well, hard choice of dog... I’ll opt for the Golden Retriever, but it's just subjective. I love how Brian hands over this choise to his «assistant CEO of housefold affairs »
Justin is right. Peter can’t stay with crappy clothes. He must have the best now. John will be raving mad ! But he has decided which side he’s on (homophobia)
A new chapter very pleasant
Big love for the best writers ...
Ps : Two gay boys and a straight girl. My biological mother often tells my father he has gay genes very strong, stronger than her lesbian genes
Author's Response: Very soon you will read who the dog is. John is beside his self with jealously for his little brother's good fortune. Tough Sh*T we say in America. He'll get over it. The odds of so many gay people born in the same family (2 out of 3 kids) are very very high. Maybe their diapers were too tight. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
Well... well..... well. I am not really sure about this. Half of me hate what is going on, but half of me understand the need for Gus to do this.
Oh... Mr Hamster, very, very clever you are.
Anyway can't wait what will going on with the visiting right between Gus & Linds.
I hate it but I love it.
Muah!! Muah!! Muah!!
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster and I put on our aluminum foil helmets getting ready for the psychic mental attacks from readers sending us negative vibrations for this turn of events. My helmet is quadrupled layered. So far our defenses are holding up nicely. Gus will not be alone with Lindsay for quite some time. Brian or Justin will always be in the room. That's all she gets and it'll be enough for her and Gus. Love you and thank you for not sending mental torpedos at us this time.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 113: Danni
Welcome Danni. I sure she will be loved by everyone.
Can't wait what will Gus write for Linds.
Excellent.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Gus gets to do more than write a letter; he shocks his fathers with what he wants.
Kisses back! (winks from Mr. Hamster who hopes you still love him after you read the next chapter)
Reviewer: Stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 114: Small Package Miracles
I'm sorry but I completely disagree with the decision of the court ... Lindsey gets along well? Oh JT...
Author's Response: Hey! I didn't like it either but this is what Gus wanted. He could have said hang her high but instead he wanted to see his mother. Her visits with him will be directly surpervised always until he's much older. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Brian and Justin really took Peter under their wings. And Justin wants to settle in the office of Brian to make his arms as assistant CEO... Great but they may as well install their desks straightaway into the bathroom (LOL).
I dare not even imagine what would cause a blizzard here. 5 cm of snow and we are already on our knees (at least those who aren’t accustomed to driving on snow). The authorities will activate the emergency powers and send the Army (I’m just kidding – 5 cm and that stops the world from turning… pfew)
Excellent chapter (just more Slave and King for me ;) )
Author's Response: Peter was lucky to have Brian and Justin available for him. I laughed at the restroom office idea. It takes skill to drive on snow and good tires for it. I too enjoy slave Justin's visions. hugs!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
John is always so stupid (for Claire, there may be still hope). It’s a good thing Peter leaves this environment. First exit on the gay scene for the young generation. With such chaperons, this could only be fine. I remember my first time in our usual club with Otsoa, Tomas and my dads (yes, my dads) as chaperons. Inside, a special moment, a lot of invitations to dance, some caresses (nothing too serious) and a crowd of gay guys who felt they’d been entrusted with a mission of responsibility to me because I was the "little brother of" (and sometimes, it’s still the case). It was too great.
Super Chapter
Always a pleasure to read
Author's Response: John is a typical macho homophobic prick teenager in America. We have way too many here. Remember this is the country that beat to death Matthew Sheppard tied to a fence. I sometimes wish I could leave it's so oppressive at times. The far right religious groups rule the country and it makes for a bitter environment too often. I too was the youngest in my family and it has its advantages. You get away with so much crap being the youngest growing up.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
Peter was right to speak with Brian and Justin. They are wonderful people who will help him in his coming out. It needs courage to reveal his homosexuality. For my brother and me, it was less difficult because we didn’t have to tell our parents. I came out during my last year at collège (Your Freshman year). I told my class and the next day the whole school knew ! A great time ! In fact, I haven’t experienced serious bullying. Just some insults but I didn’t react. I just divided my class into two part, with me and against me (those who avoided me). During breaks, it was rather original, girls came toward me, some boys too out of curiosity (and I didn’t even know them). For teachers, it was either indifference or support but never rejected... In my village, nobody was surprise. Everyone here knows my family and appreciate us. In fact, it's sister who created the buzz (Look, the fags’girl, she’s dating a guy !!!!)
Super Chapter
I really had a good time
Author's Response: I can just imagine; you have gay parents; three gay sons is it?; and one straight girl. I can see how she would stand out as the token straight in your family. Sounds like you went to a pretty cool school. In many places in America coming out at school will get your ass kicked on a routine schedule. Some big cities have high schools just for gay kids because it's that bad here. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing very much Gex.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
We travel through time... 5 years later and the next generation. Successful transition on this great chapter. I love seeing the evolution of each character. Shawn seems a lovely boy. Peter faces his homosexuality. Brian and Justin can help him. I just hope they will keep him with them and he doesn't return to his mother and brother.
Wonderful chapter
Big hug
Author's Response: It was time to just forward. Shawn's a sweetie; Peter wisely talks with his uncle and Justin. You'll like the next chapter.
Big hugs back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
Welcome baby Zack ! Mom and baby are doing well. Dads, Hunter and the rest of the family will be able to get their breath back. Now Tiffany must rest and get help. (I know someone here who understands that she shouldn’t make no effort and rest ... I think she even enjoys a little !)
Wonderful chapter
Author's Response: If you grew a basketball in your tummy for nine months you'd want to be pampered a bit too and deserve it! A C-section is major surgery and one must take it easy after such an event. Glad you enjoyed the chapter almost as much as I'm enjoying reading your reviews! Thank you!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Oh, I'm sure Sister cried on this chapter. Wonderful chapter elsewhere. I remember Intza’s first delivery. It was panic stations (we really thought of losing them and besides her OB wasn’t very positive before going in surgical unit). For the second pregnancy, everybody was scared to death (even the OB because he already knew the girl and Intza may be full of surprises) but there, we were all prepared… Tiffany have a difficult spell.
I loved the section with Troy Henry. Poor guy ! There are days like that where it is better to stay home…
Excellent
Big Love
Author's Response: I was thinking about your sister writing the chapter. Women have to put up with so much crap. I once knew a guy like Troy who did that and got fired off the job when he got all smart mouth with the CEO of our company; he thought it was a salesman he could abuse. It was the funniest shit I ever saw. Everybody just stared in shock when he did it. The guy had 3 kids too; what a shame. Big love back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 104: Warner Brothers
Too strong, this Brian… He’s terrific. I love his offer to Harvey Levin (rofl). Jerry however is softer with the owner of TMZ, Warner Bros. But on the other side, WB can’t stick their oar in too much because if Mark leaves turning, they are in trouble ...
A chapter beautiful as always
Big Love
Author's Response: It was best for everyone concerned to put a lid on the PR shit fast. The controvery was answered and put down; TMZ was punished and changed, and the movie goes forward unharmed.
Big love back Gex!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
Vacation end today… Tomorrow, go back to real life. It sucks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, Edinburgh. I visited the city during a stay there. One of my former lives in Glasgow and he showed us around the country. Scotland is really superb.
So, here… Brian comes with a terrible plan. TMZ won’t have a good time in the near future. They threw the first stone, so much the worse for them. Really, they are stupid but they don’t know the fabulous Brian
Chapter genius (with the slight hint of that hot scene I love so much)
JTS, you're awesome
Mr Hamster, you're awesome
This story is fabulous ...
Author's Response: I visited Edinburgh on a Harry Potter Fan Tour for adults. I really loved it there. Scotland's amazing. I'm delighted you liked the chapter. Mr. Hamster was in rare form that day we wrote it. Thanks Gex.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 102: Sins of the Mother
Hello Dear,
Yeah, I’m behind with my readings but I’m going to catch up it... I promise (and then anyway, I need a little break ;)… Tomy too… So, I’m here with a good breakfast, my laptop for a quiet Sunday). Now, I start the marathon
Some "journalists" like to dig up the shit... These magazines are often the source of many scandals and they are highly appreciated by some people… In any case, Mark is in turmoil, but he can count on his friends to help him in this bad publicity. And Brian in attack mode, he’s knockout…
Excellent chapter
Big hugs
Author's Response: Hey Gex,
Glad to see you reading again. Sister told me you were "busy" (snicker). The chapters are short and will go fast. I hope you enjoy your reading and I hope you know how much me and Mr. Hamster appreciate your great comments. Hugs Back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
I think J's conversation with Gus was handled well. Gus knows his options if the need arises.
Linds was warned at Thanksgiving and Gus' safety is paramount. Wonder what her parents will say?
Another good chapter!
Author's Response: Brian gets a call from Lindsay's dad next chapter. Justin was very good talking with Gus and understands the situation without freaking out or getting overly emotional about it. That would not do Gus any good. It helped him to know it happend to his dad too and he can grow up ok after it. Thanks cakdg.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
I enjoyed reading the conversation around the lunch table, all of them pitching their ideas for the dog. I think Great Danes are very majestic, but there is no getting around they are huge. They would need a people door, not a doggie door! We've had Labs (all colors) and Golden Retrievers, they're great with kids. So either breed would get my vote.
How fun for Peter on the shopping spree. I can imagine he would be overwhelmed but J handled it with him just right.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Justin has his heart on a golden retreiver as you will see in a future chapter. As a child that was my favorite pet. Peter has a new life to adjust to. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
I can easily see B/J sharing an office and CEO duties.
I love snow days that I'm prepared for! I can just picture Britin in a winter wonderland and all of them snug in the house. I'm also grinning picturing Mel in her butch truck!
Aw...a puppy! All of the kids are at the right age for the responsibility. And B put down fair rules too. Curious to see who the newest member will be.
I feel for Peter, being grateful and new in the family dynamics. He's never been a big brother before either. Knowing B/J and the kids I'm sure Peter will get over his tentativeness quickly.
Loved it!
Author's Response: I love snow but I don't care for cold weather. I don't see much of the white stuff here in Texas. The dog will be just over the puppy stage for a small story spoiler. Peter is very happy in his new home with a boyfriend and very understanding gay parents.
Love you too!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
Haha! Loved John's jealous reaction to the news of where his brother is going to live now. As B said a long time ago, the way to piss off straight people was to be a big fat fucking success. Oh yeah!
I was suprised, but pleased, at Claire's grateful response when speaking with John, maybe there's hope for her relationship with Peter and B/J yet.
Glad all the boys had fun at Babylon and nice to remember the Vic Grassi house (I really miss Vic).
Another good one! On to the next...
Author's Response: That was a fun chapter to write. John is a piece of work for sure. Claire is having to reconsider her issues about gay people. I loved Vic too. Thanks for commenting cakdg.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
glad linds is gone, too creepy and scary her spying on gus.
ok golen retrievers are good dogs :-) glad they're looking in to shelters rather than breeders first.
Author's Response: Lindsay isn't the brightest fork in the drawer. Next chapter Justin finds their dog at a shelter. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
Oh goody, I have more catching up to do!
Peter is lucky that he has B&J there to support him in all ways (and get him out of his homophobic family's daily orbit). I like the way that J approached Shawn (Ted/Blake) about Peter. Shawn knows up front that Peter is interested in him and that he can help guide Peter. By helping Peter come out, it should also help Shawn come out of his shell too.
Claire! Well, she's right, she doesn't know Peter (if she ever did). But she and her mother created the environment in which he didn't feel free to tell anyone other than B&J (if she was any kind of ok mother, that should have given her pause for reflection). She's a mercenary thing too isn't she? B paying off her mortgage and taking care of Peter wasn't sufficent? She had to ask why he wouldn't pay for John too...stupid cow!
I'm happy that Peter gets to enter the Kinney all male kingdom. *g*
Great! On to the next...
Author's Response: Justin wanted to try for a baby but couldn't get Brian to do it so the argument ended not having another child. Mel and the girls are right down the street and frequently come to Britin to visit and be with Gus. Not exactly an all male kingdom. Thanks cakdg.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 112: Stalker
Hope Linds put to jail for a long time this time.
Gus is very smart for his age.
Excellent.
Author's Response: Lindsay messed up big time. Now she will serve her prison term and there's nothing her daddy can do to stop it. Thanks complicated for commenting.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
I REALLY hate to say this, I didn't like this chapter very much. I really don't see the need for Mel & Hunter to attack Michael.
I sort of understand where it's coming from and at the same time, it just bothers me.
I do like Justin still helping him. I also like how Brian didn't go there, even though I feel he had more of right/reason to than either Mel or Hunter.
Author's Response: I appricate your honest comments. Others had some of the same feelings as you do about this chapter. This was the last punishment for Michael; mostly he will improve now with I think one more mess up on the way. I promise that things will get better for Michael. Mel had his kid and Hunter was his son; both were deeply hurt by Michael's actions. Brian refrained from attacking the man for Debbie's sake. Thank you for commenting Susan.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
A Golden Retriever is adorable for children... Here, we have Lollipop, Gehexan’s female Golden Retriever with the rainbow bandana around her neck. She’s gentle with kids, happy, stable. But she’s not alone... Well, I go. There is Urri (the family’s old German shepherd, a good grandpa), Donald (the duck saved from certain death by Txabi, one market day), same story for Bunny the rabbit, Mr. and Mrs. Sheep, three Pottoks, four horses, not to mention cats’ neighbors who have made their home on the property...
I loved Brian's joke with the hot-dog (He want traumatize his son ?). Justin goes with Peter to buy new clothes more appropriate to his current lifestyle... They are adorable with him and he’s so shy with them... I hope they can show him all the love they have in reserve ...
Excellent chapter
Big hug (and a little peck on the lips for Mr Hamster
Author's Response: Justin's favorite is the golden retriever. Pottoks are native to your region and very rare beautiful animals. Cats have a way of living where they want to don't they? Peter will adapt and fit right in. Hugs back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Oh, I love the fact that Brian and Justin will share the same office. It’s too great. I really enjoyed this family time. A quiet day as I love it. When it gets very cold, I light a good fire in the fireplace and I sat on the couch, wrapped in a warm blanket with a hot chocolate and a good book ... or a great story to read on the laptop (… If you can read between the lines… So, if this is over, I hope to count on Mr Hamster ;)) Like all children, the kids want a dog ... too cute. The four-legged friends help kids to grow up better. Alongside them, they gain confidence in themselves and acquire sense of responsibilities. See, here, it's like a zoo !
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, it’s so cozy
Big kisses for my favorite writter and for the cutest hamster
Author's Response: The story can be in Pittsburgh without one winter blizzard; they get many each year. I miss having a fireplace; this house doesn't have one. I do have 2 electric one however. Kisses back and a wave from Mr. Hamster.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
I just come back from shopping because tonight we have friends and neighbors and it’s Tapas’Night here
I don’t know why but I’ve a bad feeling with John... I just hope he won't attack his brother. He’s so mean. Apparently, the youth spent a great night in Babylon... I loved Mark and Brian always in PR mode. It was too funny... What a splendid idea this donation for the Vic Grassi House (Vic ah, that's a character I miss ....)
Superb chapter
A tons of kisses for you and Mr Hamster
Author's Response: John will mostly only run his mouth and see very little of his younger brother now; perhaps only family gatherings which are rare. It was important for Peter to see he wasn't the only gay boy in the world. Kisses back! Thank you for commenting Ihintza.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
thanks for more chapters . always great. deb
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting deb; I appreciate you taking the time.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
I'm so happy for Peter... At least, he’ll live in an environment where he’ll be loved for what he is. I can’t understand these parents who reject their children because they are homosexual or who don’t know how react with these kids... Sh*t, it's the same person before and after coming-out. I would say it’s a better person after precisely because he can live full life. They never really loved their children, it isn’t otherwise possible... Anyway, I'm happy for him and Shawn.
Very nice chapter
I loved it, love you and love Mr Hamster so much
Author's Response: America is different than Europe with much hatred for gays; many parents disown a gay child in this country; it's a tragedy. Religion plays a big part in the way they think here. The religious groups fight tooth and nail for gays not to have any rights civil, marriage, etc. Thanks for commenting and we love you too very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
Excellent chapter.
Jus is right. New cloth for Peter is good idea.
Every household should have some animal, coz it is will teach everyone to take care, to love, responsibleity among other things.
Hugs.
Author's Response: It's important for Peter to feel welcomed and wanted at Britin. It would be cruel for the others to be well dressed and Peter in rags so to speak. I'm crazy for my little dog; she owns me and has me very well trained. Hugs back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Wow! Some quality family time when wait for the weather clear. Like what Brian drive. Love when Jus suggest to share Brian office. Good thinking.
Hehehe, poor Peter he feel embarrassed when Brian send limo to pick him up.
Mr Hamster, will you write some Slave/Master scene of B&J?? What Jus is imagine in the shower is so hot!!
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Bad weather is perfect for quality family time to happen. Peter is adjusting to his new lifestyle. Mr. Hamster is thinking about your request; S&M is not really canon as this story is based on but their is room for artistic license. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
Hope John will not cause any trouble to Peter, B & J. He is so mean.
Love the boy enjoying the Babylon. Like when Brian turn to PR mode when Mark dancing on the bar. It is a good cause to donate to Vic Grassi House.
Brilliant chapter Mr Hamster, JT.
Muah!! Muah!! Muah!!
Author's Response: There isn't much John can do but run his mouth. He has to face how good Brian is to them. Brian excells turning a potentially controversal event into a PR winner. Mr. Hamster takes a bow and thanks you for commenting.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
great chapter... no mastiff though ;-(
maybe if john gets his head on straight, brian and justin could give him a gift card to saks LOL
Author's Response: Sorry, no giant mastiff will be the selection for the family pet. They wouldn't give homophobic John a gift card to Wal-Mart. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 111:Saks Fifth Avenue
I love your story,
Author's Response: Thank you! Mr. Hamster and I love you for reading and responding for us.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
cute how gus wants a dog. I guess no mastiff though, perhaps a chihuala... hopefully a shelter dog?
loved remark the girls have no bones in their pantry... LOL
Author's Response: Mastiff? Brian's thinking about 10 lbs., not 100!!! Chihuala (sp?) have such an attitude. Justin goes dog hunting once the weather clears up. The snow is worse in Pittsburgh. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow for letting me know; very much appreciated. :)
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Great chapter, and very family like. I could just see the northeastern snow storm. I wonder what kind of dog Justin gets? Pedigree or pound mutt?
Author's Response: Knowing Justin he'll do a ton of research before deciding. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
loved mark dancing on the bar, great idea to difuse any bad publicity from it by donating the money.
Author's Response: Mark still loved the attention his good looks could create. Leave it to a PR man to avoid a controversy and turn it into a coup. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
glad brian got peter out of claire's. john would probably hurt him, even if claire is kinda taking this pretty easy, siblings are another story.
Author's Response: John is a mean kid especially about someone gay. They knew he was better off with them and we all have a heart for our young ones; they have it rough too often. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Loved this chapter. It was so heartwarming
Author's Response: Thank you jay for letting me know. Chirp again!
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 110: Blizzard
Quick note: Typo:
“Yeah, we need a dog Dad.” Zack voted in.
Should be “Yeah, we need a dog Dad.” Devin voted in.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll repair it now. I've been up over 24 hours writing and got my kids confused.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 109: Boy’s Night Out
I can remember the first time I was with a large group of gay boys and it felt so good not to be the only one. That's a very liberating experience for a boy coming out. I laughed at Mark dancing again and it was cool to donate the tips and more. John reaction to Peter's new life was very interesting. ..he sucked his way to paradise." What a jerk! Keep up the good work Mr. Hamster.
Author's Response: I too remember my first moments in a large gay setting. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
It's really good they took in Peter. He's going to have a great life now. This also helps Shawn out. The holiday at Britin sounded like so much fun. Wish I could be there.
Author's Response: I enjoy writing about the coming out phase; it's a magical moment for the boys. Thanks for reviewing Dave.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 108: Another Son
Why some mother is hard to accept a gay son. Just because they like the same sex doesn't mean they are different, they still the son they know.... why? oh why?
Very smart of Peter seeking B & J to talk.
Brilliant chapter.
I love you Mr Hamster, you too JT.
Author's Response: People are afraid of what they don't understand and gays are high on the list for too many people. Add to that the 'faggots' who make us look bad in public doing odd queer things and it's hard to overcome the sterotypes they have of us. Son or no son he's a different creature to her now. Mr. Hamster was so excited to read your review and see your rating he jumped on his wheel and started spinning the next chapter. Thank you for inspiring him.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
I enjoyed reading about the jump five years into the future and that all were together for Thanksgiving. I was a little disappointed not to read anything about Lily or the potential next child (a girl?) that she would have for J&B.
I was not surprised to read about Linds though. I've always felt that she would make contact whenever she was released and somehow I don't think she's through trying because it's all about her wants, not Gus. Glad he has security around him.
So five years into the future, what's the status of Kinnetik Advertising & RE? How did Mark's 2nd movie do? Did he decide to do more movies (closer to home of course)? What's Jerry up to?
As always, can't wait for the next chapter....
Author's Response: Lily would have done it but Brian didn't want to be a father again; he was happy with one kid each. Lindsay is lonely and misses everyone; not just Gus, but tough sh*t. The business and real estate are doing very well and they have made loads of money; they still have about 17,400 rentals, residential and commerical combined. I hope to write a new chapter tonight if Mr. Hamster will wake up. Thanks for commenting cakdg.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
Five years later, What a good idea that leap in the future ! You are a genius, JTS. Still, I noted all characters (old and new) on a document, so I don’t get bogged down in too much detail... I ADORED this chapter. Britin Thanksgiving in Britin, it’s so great. And yet it was almost ruined by the arrival of Lindsey.
I hope she won’t make problems with Gus...
I love already this young Shawn. He deserves to be happy because he seems to have suffered a lot. What will think Claire when his son will be his coming-out ? I’m longing to know what she’s going to say
BEAUTIFUL, SUPERB, GREAT
A big hug for you two
You can read from Gex, I hope, this week-end. For now, he doesn’t leave Tomas and the house. They make an appearance just to sit down to a meal ;)
Author's Response: I'm so happy to see your review and learn Gex is ok but having fun. The story needed to move forward to stay interesting. More about Shawn and Peter soon. Claire will be Claire and freak out. We hug you back !
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
Ah, Mom and baby are ok. I’m happy for Tiffany, Mark and Jerry but now she must take care of herself... An after c-section is not really a great time... Zackary (with a k) Justin Griffin is a beautiful name for a beautiful baby and it’s touching from Jerry to have thought to include the name of Justin in it ...
I am touched by these last two chapters
A big kiss for you
Author's Response: I feel for you women having to give birth; it's amazing what you go through. I always liked the name Zackery, we have an old president with that name: Zackery Taylor. Thanks for commenting and big kisses back to you!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Wow, an emergency c-section ! Poor Tiffany... Not really funny !!! What memories in this chapter. A premature birth is extremely stressful and I know what I mean (two births, two C-sections)... For Txabi, it was an emergency c-section too with a big hemorragie and a high risk of death for me and my baby. For Maïalen, everyone expected as much (I’m the Queen of stressful pregnancies) and my OB had planned a scheduled cesarean delivery as soon as possible and would sufficiently viable for the baby. 1 month ago and almost half and Maia is doing well... And you're right, what do you tell about a baby whose main occupations are eat, sleep and poop ? ( ;) )
In any case, the clan is always there in family events. It's great that everyone comes to support and welcome the baby...
A huge cuddle for you (and a peck on Mr Hamster's ears)
Beautiful chapter, thanks a lot
Author's Response: I tried not to get bogged down in medical details and just made it happen. They're closer than many straight families in the world.
Cuddles back and Mr. Hamster loves the attention. Thanks!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 104: Warner Brothers
Wow, I love when Brian puts Harvey Levin in his place !!! He’s a devil but I love him when he's like that... It's almost a shame that Jerry asks him to sign the armistice but well, WB fired the host and the reporter. They put under stress too because there is a risk for the film and a lot of money at stake
Excellent chapter
I really loved it
Hugs (and a little peck on Mr hamster's nose)
Author's Response: They answered the controversy with excellence; punished TMZ for causing it, and then limited the damage it would cause everyone and saved the picture. Under the circumstances it was in no ones interest to increase the PR war. Mr. Hamster was rather proud of himself how he handled this one. Hugs back and thank you Ihintza.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
Well... In crisis management, Brian is admirable. A superb interview to pull the rug from under TMZ’s feet. I don’t know how they will get themself out of this situation with a man like Brian. I love when he’s in an offensive mode. He’s grandiose. He’s good in the form and in the substance
A tons of kisses for you (and a peck on the lips for Mr Hamster)
Author's Response: Every family has lost someone to drugs in America; it's a national shame. No innocent family members should be hurt by it. TMZ crossed the line airing that story and since Mark's mother had been missing for over a decade she practically wasn't his mother anymore. The truth ended the controversy and flipped the tables on TMZ for causing it. Brian's a genius in emergencies related to public relations or PR. Thanks for commenting and many kisses back to you too.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 102: Sins of the Mother
Kids are sleeping, hubby too, so I take advantage of this quiet moment to join my family outside and decompress a little. I decided to sit at the big family table with a strong coffee and translate all the comments I rated these four last days (because I read religiously every update and I scribble a comment to each chapter but it’s often very late and I go to sleep so...;))
This is a great chapter... Ah la la, these magazines ! They use still low methods to get the most scandalous on the stars. Mark has a sublime support (a wonderful partner and an ultra-efficient team of PR...). I know right away Brian will come up with a brilliant idea to save the situation ...
Beautiful teamwork with Mr Hamster
Big Love
Author's Response: Thanks for the twitter; love to hear what you're doing. They picked on the wrong client when they took on Mark's family laundry and got Brian Kinney on their asses. Yes, Mr. Hamster is quite the smart rodent who I'm very proud of. Love back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
I really like the name of the newest member of the Griffin family. Glad all are doing well.
Another good one, on to the next...
Author's Response: He's a real cutie pie too. Thanks for reviewing cakdg.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
I have to catch up again!
I like how things unfolded with TMZ/WB. If B/J become WB's ad agency, won't they be required to get TMZ back on top again or are they considered a separate entity and hire their own advertising folks?
I bet a lot of actors feel the same way as Mark when they are filming on location without their families.
Nice to read about the plans and progress with the new property acquisition.
Mark's baby is on the way! I initially wasn't concerned about the baby being a few weeks early, our family has a history of preemies...but now he's in distress. Thank goodness the next chapter is waiting for me.
Great!
Author's Response: Brian will let down his ban on TMZ like it never happened. If their ratings are high enough he'll buy their air time now. Nobody will know anyway for the most part. I ended the cliffie before sleeping; I don't want to stress my readers! Love you!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
amazing chapters. your story is wonderful. thans deb
Author's Response: Thank you Deb for letting me know.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
great chapter. love how ted and blake got a son too. now what about emmie lou and drewsie ;-)
hoping linds stays away
Author's Response: Ted and Blake have a challenge on their hands; Shawn has many issues. Emmett and Drew with a kid? Maybe; nice idea. Lindsay will be a distant antagonist of the story but no real threat with the security Brian has in place. Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
Good installment!
Enjoyed Justin & Brian looking out for Molly, but that's what they do.
Liked Justin visiting Michael. Nice to set the ground rules. Looking forward to Michael NOT sticking to the plan. OR maybe he will!
REALLY enjoyed Brian & Justin's after dinner convo about Michael, Babylon, & the wedding. Always nice when they have their everyday life conversations.
Author's Response: Hi Susan! It's good to see you reading again. Molly's family so they'll take care of her. Michael will eventially overcome his hardships with a couple of dips in the road on the way. The love between Brian and Justin makes everyday events very special and easy for them to manage. Thanks so much for commenting.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
ups, will peter turn out gay??? great updates :-)) rose
Author's Response: Peter is coming out and his mother Claire won't like it one bit. Next chapter soon; thanks rose for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
LOVE the chapter. Very smart move to fast forward. With addition new face in the family, things will get intresting.
Genius JT, Genius Mr Hamster.
Looking forward for new advanture.
Muah!! Muah!! Muah!!
Author's Response: We thought about chapters of babies growing up and it bored us to tears so the five year jump was created and it worked. Thanks complicated for reviewing very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
I am so happy!!! What a beautiful name. I love it.
Excellent JT. Brilliant Mr Hamster.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated; Mr. Hamster still has a thing for you, you know. Kisses back!
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
great chapter!!!!!!!!!But i can sense some trouble with Lindsey but i hope i am wrong.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Buffytess; Lindsay's in the background but can never be a true threat.
Hugs back!
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
JT- Completed said NO but this summary seemed like an ending. Is Forever Yours coming to an end?
I sure hope not...
Jane
Author's Response: Sorry to give that impression. The story isn't over; I've advanced the time line to keep it interesting. The babies are older and we have young Shawn and Peter with coming out issues coming up. The summary was to bring you up to date with the past five years. This story may very well exceed Embraced in length. I'll add TBC... to the chapter to make sure it doesn't give the impression 'the end'. Thank you for commenting and bringing this to my attention.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
This was a powerful chapter full of great details into the future. I could smell the turkey. I loved how Mark started to help Shawn and ending with Peter facing his sexual orientation. You rock Mr. Hamster!
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster refused to write a 100 chapters of diapers, baby first steps, potty training, baby's first lie, etc. HE HE HE! So he fast forwarded the story to pick up five years down the road with new issues and kids in the family; new boys coming out, and new adventures for both of our uber rich powerful gay couples in love. Thanks for commenting and Mr. Hamster takes a bow.
Reviewer: nickie (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 107: Five Years Later
love the story what about brian's next baby
Author's Response: After much debate (small fights?) they decided to stop with two boys and not try again. Brian wasn't up to being a dad again. Thanks for commenting nickie.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
thanks JT, a great chapter. love SM's books too ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews and for enjoying the story. I hope you like the new chapter. I've moved up the time line to keep the plot interesting.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
Zach sounds like a beautiful baby. I'm very glad mother and child are ok. Mark has to be on cloud 9. Thanks for updating so fast.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I got one more chapter up before having to put Mr. Hamster to bed and me too. The new chapter is five years in the future.
Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 106: Zackary Justin Griffin
I love your story. I forgot to update for each chapter, because I was reading chapter after chapter. I read it 1 1/2 days. agin awesome story.
Author's Response: Thank you Rainbow for commenting. I hope to have another chapter up tonight; five years into the future. Please let me know if you like it.
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Such a great story, I'm completely involved wiht the progress of your characters. My only wish is that we'd see more involved chapters with Brian and Justin with their sons !!!
Author's Response: Thank you Tiff for commenting and enjoying the story. It's a labor of love. Let me see if I can write more of the sons in the story. Gus is easy but an infant doesn't do much but eat, poop, and sleep at this age.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
glad the whole tmz fiasco is over.
hope tiffany and baby are okay. 3weeks early is right on the edge of 'full-term' so hoping all is good.
Author's Response: Next chapter is half finished now. You're the 1,200th reviewer so the next chapter is dedicated to you alys. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Oh, Mark!! Poor boy.... 1st the thing with TMZ, now the baby is 3 weeks premature.
Hope everything is okay.
Brian is right, there is only one asshole.
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: Writing the next chapter now. If you hit me with another review I'll dedicate the next chapter to you as my 1200th reviewer.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 105: Three Weeks Early
Baby cliff hanger huh? Update soon.
Author's Response: Somebody's in a hurry to get here. Writing the next chapter now. Thanks for commenting Dave.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 104: Warner Brothers
I love this chapter. I'm laughing so hard. Harvey should take the advice.
Another big whale for Kinnetik. Very good.
Love you.
Author's Response: I love an angry Brian defending a loved one. Harvey doesn't have a prayer anyway. Thanks complicated for commenting.
Love back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 104: Warner Brothers
The same parent company WB owns TMZ and the movie Mark is making. That is a very interesting plot twist. Mr. Hamster is doing excellent lately. I was looking forward to Brian's war against TMZ but maybe this is better for everyone.
Author's Response: It's best for everyone not to have a war. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
Well, TMZ launched the first salvo in the PR war without a warning shot, they deserve what's coming to them! LOL
I love a crafty B & J. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Have a good sleep, both of you.
Author's Response: Heads will roll at TMZ before this is over with. Next chapter is posted now. Thanks for commenting cakdg.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
sleep little hampster
lullabye and goodnight.....
Author's Response: We had a wonderful sleep; thank you.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
Ohh!! I love it so much when Brian in the mood to fight. It's turn me on, and he never lose!
TMZ is so fuck big time.
The love scene is HOT.
Sweet dream JT. HOT dream Mr Hamster.
Muah! Muah! Muah!
Author's Response: I feel they will regret taking on a client of Brian's and Justin's and they are very good friends too. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 102: Sins of the Mother
Great plot for this chapter.
It is good that Mark have friend like Brian, who is quick to help.
Hugs.
Author's Response: At times like this a good PR man is priceless. Hugs back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 103: Laundry Day
loveing it.... funny i had TMZ playing in the background as I was reading this ch. lol..
rest now Mr. Hamster..so you can keep bring us great a great story.
one question will brians mother and sister ever make a cameo in this story?
Author's Response: I like TMZ too; they are fun to watch and get the latest scoops on Hollywood. Joan and Claire will return down the road. Thanks for commenting very much nicole.
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