Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
pleeease joan act out please....very good mikey gets a gold star for being a good boy lol.. the wedding was beutyfull....aaaawwww gus and jr.
now on to paaaarty. lol
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; Joan starts out nice then has a few glasses of good wine.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Excellent!!! Brilliant!!! So happy for the couple. Beautiful day.
Take care.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated. I'm delighted you liked it.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
That was the best Catholic wedding in the world; short and sweet cuz we know they usually take foreverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Beuatiful darling, simply beautiful
Author's Response: The entire service would have been a very boring read. I shortened it the best I could and still keep the flavor of the moment. Thank you for commenting Carlly.
Author's Response: The entire service would have been a very boring read. I shortened it the best I could and still keep the flavor of the moment. Thank you for commenting Carlly.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
This chapter was soooo amazing. You wrote it very beautifully.
Author's Response: Thanks kwil. I worked very hard to make it accurate but not boring.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
hehehe , loved it.. i laughed when i read about joan kinney, talk about a slap in the face..
can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thanks Lesley for commenting. Writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
Terrific chapter. Loved the wedding. Can't wait to see what happens with Joan too. I see you did lots of research for this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you David; truth be told Catholic weddings are a very long precedure and I condensed it greatly. I'm glad you liked it and I'm working on the next chapter now.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
i thought everyone would rip into him, but i guess mel and hunter did a good enough job.
yay the wedding.
Author's Response: Mel got a heads up from Brian that Micahael was coming and she called Hunter and hatched her plan. Mostly everyone else held back for Debbie's sake. Debbie didn't want to hear Mel telling Michael off so they got out of there. They didn't expect Hunter to get violent however. Thank you very much for reviewing and commenting sjmpets3.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
Superb. I really had the feeling to be with them around the table... I'd like to have been outside with Mel. I definitely see her doing this and Hunter too. Although, in that case, I don't know if I could beat my father but maybe I will... When you are deeply hurt, disappointed, angry, the situation can be out of your control and sometimes you can have gestures or words extremely violent. Brian wants Justin stays out of their quarrel, good cause this settling of scores was necessary. Well, even if Michael isn't expecting a standing ovation, he hadn't anticipated a meeting with Mel Tyson or Hunter de la Hoya ;).... In any case, I really loved this chapter. I'm OK with Complicated, you are a genius
Love
Gehexan
Author's Response: Wow! Woke up to find 10 roses and only 1 stone thrown. Thanks for commenting Gehexan. I'm very happy the chapter entertained you. Michael knew he was in for it; he just wasn't sure what "it" was. The dealing with Michael is over and the family can sort of get back to normal.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
It's a good thing B&J keep an eye on the Craig's store. Seeing that our Kings Midas turn everything they touch into gold, Molly will be soon very, very rich... I hope Michael will follow Justin's advices for once. In addition, Justin invites him to the wedding, for Debbie. He is quite somebody. Brian wants a preliminary family reunion and he is right. Wow, I'm longing to see it..
Very good chapter
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan; I love reading your comments. Of all the people on QAF I like Justin best because he's just as beautiful on the inside as he is on the outside.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
Oh my god! I loved it! I can't wait to read about the wedding.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Vikinglass24 for give a review hit to each chapter. Love you girl! Working on the wedding chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
Great!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
so good!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 26: Merry Christmas Mr. Kinney
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 25: Christmas at Britin
Oh wow! What a way to end the chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you much!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 24: Christmas Morning
Oh! How cute. That telescope is huge!
Author's Response: Thank you VG24. I'm viewed through that scope and it is amazing what one can see with it. My first great view of a galaxy was with that scope.
Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
I am sorry but I thought what Hunter did was 100% percent wrong. Michael was good to Hunter and while I blieve he should have has he say violence was not the answer and for him to be proud that he knocked a man out and sent him to the hospital was sicke to read. I am sorry but Hunter is and will always be a sad little punk.
Rie
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your feelings Rie. This is fiction and nobody named Michael was harmed in the writing of this story.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
Brilliant! I can feel all the anger, all the hurts, all the love and everything in between from everyone at Deb's all at once. And I can't tell you what I'm feeling right now or why I'm crying.
But I know one thing for sure, YOU ARE GENIUS!!!
This is keep playing in my head...
"forgiave, sound good, forget, I'm not sure I could, they say time heals everything, but I'm still waiting, I'm through with doubt, there's nothing left for me to figure out, I've paid a price, and I'll keep paying, I'm not ready to make nice, I'm not ready to back down, I'm still mad as hell, and I don't have time to go round and round and round...."
Love you.
Author's Response: You are too kind complicated; thank you very much. I'm delighted this chapter entertained you. Your reviews motivate me to write more for you.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
Not only Justin on to Brian, but Brian too. So many things happen in B&J world at once and I can't wait it unfold one by one.
Keep up the good job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for this review and comments. I sure plan on writing more and fast for you.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
Poor Mikey, but he desreved it!
Can't wait for the wedding. :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thank you kwil for commenting. I have to sleep now and write the wedding chapter tomorrow. I also have more research to do for that chapter to accomplish and make it good for you.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
hahahaha, good on mel and hunter.. michael got what was coming to him. i totally loved this chapter.. it rocked JT..
Author's Response: Hehehehehehehe!!! Thanks so much Lesley; Michael bashing is always a very popular event especially when he richly deserves it. It just seems so in character for Mel to condemn the man and for the street tough son Hunter to pay him back for dishonoring their little family. Michael will think twice before being stupid again.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 29: Family Honor
daaaam mikey got a beat down... go hunter..
Author's Response: A Jewish curse and a major beatdown; thanks nicole for letting me know you approved of Hunter's actions.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
justin's heart is just too good sometimes. i hope michael doesn't disappoint him.
glad things are working out at the store. justin and brian are going to make molly richer than if her father had lived.
Author's Response: Thank you sjmpets3 for commenting. Your words are very encouraging to me. You're so right about Molly's estate. Next chapter; Michael first sees the gang again and gets his due reward.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
excellant, sound like mikie is get his head on straighter.... love the wedding plans, can't wait to eventually hear how carl's fellow officers take it all
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing this chapter. I write for the wonderful feedback you good people provide me. Michael is a changed man and has one more major event before his ordeal is over mostly; next chapter. The wedding will be after that.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 28: Coping Now
I like how they are equals in the relationship. Justin can tell Brian what he has done about Michael and Brian trusts him enough to trust his judgement without question.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lorie for your review and comment. Brian has learned over the years to allow Justin to make his own decisions and handle people his own way. It has certainly proven good at Kinnetik to let Justin deal with the staff with his personal charm and kindness. Business and profits are soaring with the spirit of Justin there.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
Brian and Justin are so sweet, the way they are helping Mark and Tony. Needed a tissue warning on that chapter too.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lorie. Mark and Tony are the new Brian and Justin Show at the new Babylon. They're a huge hit.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
boy i wished i worked for them. nice chapter.
Author's Response: Yawn! Good morning or is it very late afternoon at my area? Thanks for the review sjmpets3. The boys were more than happy to help the new kids at Babylon and they were also impressed how they were like them only much younger.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
jesus, I was only gone five days and you update like 10 chapters in this time..... I love your story. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks rose. My mental hamster wouldn't stop spinnng out the plot ideas so I had to write them down.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
Great, Babylon is now open... Mark and Tony look pleasant. They have been very lucky to come across B&J. They can peacefully start a new life at the same time as the new year...And speaking of new year, it will be without Craig. Bye-bye asshole, say hello to Satan for me. Break open a bottle of Cristal Roederer !
Me too, I love the sex deals between our two lovers... We do it with my partner. It adds spice in the relationship...
JT, you are too good
Love
Gehexan
PS: Ihintza comes home tomorrow with her baby. So, this afternnon, we helped Christian, my brother-in-law, to tidy up. It's just male solidarity cause, if my sister comes home to find HER house messy, she's going to pull out banderillas. Ihintza angry, it's not something I would wish for my worst enemy...She's volcanic, hot-blooded. It's the spanish side... thank you mom !
Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting and the family update Gehexan. So happy to hear Ihintza and child are coming home. She going to be a little sore after a C-Section but that will pass soon. I'm happy the chapter entertained you.
Hugs!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: Merry Christmas Mr. Kinney
When I got up this morning, I found two extra chapters. After reading this one, I don't know why but I felt suddenly the need to go back to the bed where was my lover... Wow, what a scene ! My God, JT, I'm speechless. Tomás, my boyfriend, wants I stop watching porns but it's not porns. My youth, my imagination and your descriptive passages are enough for me ! Lol !
I loved everything in this chapter. Christmas' day is grandiose in the Kinney's house. And Lindsay is now in ER but she's not out of the wood yet.
Excellent work
With lots of love of a gay boy,
Gehexan
Author's Response: Ahhh,,, young love; I remember it so well.Thanks for the compliment saying I add to your love life Gehexan.
With lots of love of a gay much older man;
~JTSecrets
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 27: Babylon !!!
just caught up, excellant. hope mikie continues to growup. love that mel and brian are getting along.
Author's Response: Thanks alys. I always felt Lindsay had much to do with the strift between Mel and Brian. That isn't an issue in my story now and Gus needs his momma.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
Nevermind JT, I just figured out who hired those two to bash chris hobbs
Author's Response: OK, thanks for reviewing and enjoying the mystery.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
wow, great chapters JT. I loved them.. talk about exciting. I knew michael would fuck up and now he has... i wonder who bashed in chris hobbs head?? well thank god the cops cleared brian and justin..
can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Thanks Lesley, the clues are in the story and some review answers. Hope to write another chapter today.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
great chapter, very insightful why ben was with mikie... rings very true.
Author's Response: Thanks alys; I try to stay in character best I can.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
wow!
Author's Response: Thanks sjmpets3 for wowing me. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
i can't say enough how great this chapter was.
michael got caught. terry is a happy camper with his bonus and moving in rent free to the loft. ben and hunter are moving on. justin gets a new account that he doesn't even know about. you have to give something to brian before justin owns all of kinnetik, and chris hobbs got his. what could be better?
brian and justin thinking about doing it raw on their wedding night is so romantic, always.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for reviewing and for your comments. Justin is sensitive to Brian's feeling and it wil show later on. They are a partnership and Justin will keep the things in balance. I very happy you liked this chapter.
Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
Very Nice!!!
Author's Response: Thanks jay for commenting very much.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
waaait a min.....don't tell me the beer man has power....laaawd, and is he on the DL like marvel guy?
i'm soo happy for angel.... keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for commenting and reviewing. Not sure what you mean by on the DL (down low?). Busch is very intuitive. There is vision and magic among the very rich.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 18: This Beer's for You
OMG...... I LOVING IT. GREAT LOVE SCENE. BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! BRAVO.
LOVE YOU.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated; I'm happy you enjoyed the hotness!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
What a surprise! I did not see its coming! Hah! If only Chris can see I stick out my tongue at him. I am so in love with Jerry right now. This is what I call 'the power of love'!!!!
God job Terry. If only my boss like Brian or Justin, I don't have to feel depress everyday at work. (it is only make my hypertension worse) I know, I know... I should looking for new job.. but time right now.... it's hard to fine a job. Hmmm....
Take care.
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for commenting and reviewing. These are tough times so hang in there until the climate gets better. Lots of folks are putting up with a job they don't like; it will pass soon.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Hahaha... why I am not surprise with Mikey action. Brian so right when he say "His adventure has just begun Angel." I like it, I love it.....
You are brilliant as always, JT.
Author's Response: Thank you! Complicated for your compliment and review. You motivate me to write for you so much.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
Yay, stupid Hobbs. Wow, stupid Mikey. Yay Terry and Angel. Yay beer and car companies!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate for reviewing and commenting. The plot thickens!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I'm curious who attacked Chris. I hope you plan to reveal that. Loved this chapter, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you VG234. The clues are in the story and I practically screamed who did it answering reviews!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
OMG......noooo, you didn't..:D don't tell me he thinks that by doing this he's going to get another night as a thank you...laaawd the crooks and turns of this story.
but i love it keep it comeing ;)
Author's Response: He doesn't want anything for it and will not let Justin know he had it done. He just felt like settling the score and thought Chris had it coming to him. There is now two very powerful men who love and protect Justin; but he isn't expecting to have a tender moment again. He can still love and protect Justin from a distance.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
see now you just had to put this up when i was about to go to bed....lol
mikey mikey what can you say about pooor little mikey. : /
now who in the world whould go after chris hobbs...don't tell me justin hired the same guy brian did to off sap and big ed.. laaawd
Author's Response: The clues are in the story nicole. I made it pretty clear who loves Justin enough and has motive on several levels. Brian and Justin had nothing to do with it. It might be very exciting in a future movie about our lovers perhaps.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Revenge
I sure didn't see that coming against Hobbs and I have a good idea who would do it. What a story!
Author's Response: Thanks David for commenting. The clues are there so you are probably right.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Mikey is such a stupid shit. I can't wait to see him get what he deserves. He annoys the hell out of me. I love how everything else is going though. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much VG24 for reviewing. This story is now the second most reviewed story on MW behind Embraced. Michael messed up real bad this time with nobody to blame but himself.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you Vikinglass24; I love you for loving it too!
Hugs!
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
ooohhhh an adventure. stupid Michael.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing darkraven. Michael sunk his battleship this time on his own-BIG TIME!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Add 17 sticks to his pipe going down now. ???
Author's Response: Next chapter; a pipe is a year so Michael gets a total of 18 years in confinement.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
OMG...mikey......mikey....mikey.. let the games begen. how slow can he be.
another fabulous chapter..
Author's Response: Thanks nicole. Michael doesn't get very far. Add 17 sticks to his pipe going down now.
Reviewer: wondering (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
in your last two stories the sex scenes were great. In this story they are like
watching Queer as Folk on LOGO; they kiss - commercial break - they are
finished, dressed and ready to go out. What's up with that?
Author's Response: HA! Thanks for reminding me to add the hot sex. I got so wrapped up in the plot I forgot to make our boys do the nasty much. I'll have to rectify that for sure! Thanks for commenting wondering.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
yay for terry for landing the client.
with brian and justin as well as mel in gus' life, he's going to grow up to be a wonderful person. he won't even remember lindsay.
michael, whoo boy can't imagine what's lying in store for him.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for commenting. International Bail Jumping is a very serious federal crime as Michael soon learns. Yes, Gus will be fine but Lindsay had to learn the possible harm she could have caused as part of her sex offender theapy. Knowing the harm she caused is incentive not to repeat the crime (so says my research for the story).
Reviewer: moonsun (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
I have been reading your story since you have started it and I have to say i am loving it. I hope michael gets what is coming to him. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you moonsun. My heart skips a beat when I hear from a new reader. Every story needs a whipping boy and Michael's mine! Thank you for the compliment and I hope to hear from you again.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: Church Street
Great chapter; Michael is such an idiot. Now he gets charged for jumping bail and leaving the country in flight.
Author's Response: Thanks David for reviewing. You're so right; Michael now made sure prison is in his future.
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Okay! I have stated this many times- YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!
I am glad that you brought diversity at Kinnetik. I was extremely happy to have Sap and Big Ed taken out, even though Brian was behind it.
Then, to get even with Craig was even better.
I am really looking forward to the future chapters of: Halloween with Gus, Christmas at Britin, Terry getting the big contract, David as a model, Valentine day with Justin/Brian, the weddding in March with possible an Irish twist, and who knows what summer will bring for Gus/Justin/Brian.
Of course, there is still the need to a baby brother of Gus.
Again, you are great! So, please keep it up.
Debbie
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you very much Debbie for your praise. I'm truly honored by it. Diversity has proven to be a very popular plot twist. A reader gave me the idea for it. I listen to suggestions. You have a very good handle on the story's future. I'll be writing fast and furious as I usually do for each novel. I only do one novel at a time so my readers don't have long to wait for new chapters. If I'm not posting a chapter; I'm sleeping.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Hey, another great chapter. I like Terry and David. I also like that your Brian can look and appreciate without immediately fucking. "Pretend that the owner of Marvel Comics might see it" made me laugh. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks Kat. Justin didn't want to put too much pressure on Angel with the assignment.
Reviewer: The annoyed reader (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
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“Heah Angel.”
“Brian, Michael just called Mel. What do I do with him?”
“Walk up to him and punch him in the nose hard.” Angel walked up to Michael and slugged him in the face real hard.
“What the fuck!” Michael’s nose started to bleed.
“Done Brian. His nose in now bleeding.”
“Next time he fucks up. Beat him down. Let him know I ordered it.”
Is this supposed to be funny or are you really seeing Brian this way?
Author's Response: If you recall from the QAF show when Justin showed up with Ethan at the girl's party; Brian punched him in the head. When Michael gets stupid the only way to stop him is violence. Too much is at stake to put up with Michael's shit. Yes, I see Brian doing this or I wouldn't have written it. Getting his ass kicked is sometimes the only thing Michael understands.
Reviewer: Stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I'm worried about Michael and Lindsey, why you let them go out from jail? Please stop them, better kill them like Sap and Big Ed
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment and question Stellakinney. The future of Lindsay and Michael is yet to be revealed; the story has a long way to go. Lots can happen from now to then.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
You make my day. After almost accident going home today (some idiot driver cut me without signal & so suddenly) reading your story make me feel better.
I like it so much when Angle follow Brian order. What an immature, pitiful, ungreatful, stupid (the list so long & I am shaking my head) Mikey is.
Thank you so much for super fast update!!! Kiss, kiss, kiss!!!
Author's Response: Thanks complicated for your comments. Sorry about your near accident. I hope to have a new chapter up tonight.
Reviewer: TLS (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Just got caught up with this story. I love the fact that you update so quickly. I just realized that this is the first story that I have read; that I Remember; in this fandom that has incorporated a multi-racial element. I love that way you have portrayed Angel, and the introduction of Terry and David to the family was great.
Wth that noted, Will Micheal Every Learn. I'm just glad he suffered some consequences for his action.
I love this story and eagerly await the next part.
TLS
Author's Response: Thanks TLS for reviewing and commenting. I felt (with help from a reader) that diversity would spice up the story. Alas, Michael is a hopeless case who will really mess up next chapter. Perhaps a new chapter will go up tonight.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Another great chapter!! Love Terry and David, think they are a great addition to the family. I also agree that its nice to see my fellow minorities represented (in a good way) in fan fiction.
What a great project for Angel, he'll do really well in it. I found a link on Wikipedia with a huge list of black superhereos, including Green Lantern who I grew up watching. Here's the link in case you want to check it out for research. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_black_superheroes
I can't believe Michael would risk not only his life (*eye roll*), Angel, Justin, Mel and Jenny's. IDIOT!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kat for your review and comments. I'm loving the new characters too. For my story I'm pretending there are no black super heros. Since Sap and Big Ed are gone; nobody is in danger anymore; they just don't want Michael around so aren't telling him that.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
That last line was a cute play on words from the bible lol love the story update soon. I can't wait.
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley. Honestly, I wasn't even thinking about God's comment after the Creation when I wrote that; it just came out of me. I now remember it after you mentioned it.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
Wow, Michael is just beyond belief! He better not get Angel hurt, really liking Angel.
Not understanding how a guard at the local jail would know the real details about Michael if it's supposed to be kept quiet & behind closed doors. I hope that doesn't cause trouble for everyone.
Always love Gus.
Great idea w/ Craig's store. He is going to sh!t a brick, bwahaaa!
Author's Response: The guard was a supervisor and knew about it. Not all the guards knew. Big Ed make no comments before getting out. Everyone is safe now since he is gone; same for Sap. More about how they died in the next chapter written tonight.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Good chapter!
Can imagine the look on Craig's face when Jennifer broke it down for him!
I wasn't expecting the letter from Angel. Love the Mr. Kinnetik!
Glad Brian & Justin still have compassion towards Michael. I'm probably on my owe w/ this but I'm glad Michael is safe now. Although, knowing him, I'm sure he's going to do something stupid but seems like Angel will keep him in ck.
Oh, forgot to mention in review for last chapter, love the double wedding idea at Britin. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for your comments and review. Craig was floored to say the least. Honestly Brian helped Michael for Justin's sake. Michael can be counted on messing up soon. I like the double wedding too. We have Christmas first.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
Glad Carl is ok.
Nice w/ Justin showing his dad the house! HA! Craig hearing Justin telling Jennifer about his success.
Interesting w/ Michael, glad he realizes HE was in the wrong & Justin didn't do anything but I'm still worried. Wonder what Angel is up to......
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for reviewing. Carl is fine now. Justin had fun with Craig and made a point of calling his mom. Angel is good.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
excellant excellant. love that angel slugged mikie, and ratted on him. love terry and david. wonder what kind of dress deb and sunshine will wear LOL
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing. Sometimes the only thing Michael understands is a fist. Justin will be wearing a blue tux but Debbie had to get her dig in there.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Fantasticccc!!!!!!
New members added to the family. Cool...
Author's Response: Thanks kwil. I"m excited about the new members of the Liberty family too.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
mikey pleeeease call your mother....oo better yet call ben & hunter pleeeease, so angel can beat you down.. :)
finaly a qaf story with some educated black / spanish gay folks.... Brovo :D 2 thums up. woo hoo. :D
Author's Response: Thanks nicole; a reader gave me the idea for diversity and I loved it. Adding them is very popular. Michael will mess up; count on it.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Too tired to say anything. But loved it. lol. Update soon :) :-) :) x
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know Yaz. A couple of words is cool and the review joins the count and motivates me to write.
Reviewer: Eniola (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I love the Liberty family you've created. I wish I had friends/family like that in my life. The love and support comes through extemely clear. Loving Angel, Terry and David as well. Michael's proving to be dumber than dumb more and more. Maybe Angel should go ahead and give him that ass kicking now just for breathing.
Author's Response: Thanks Eniola! The addition of Terry, David and Angel is proving to be very popular. I could just kiss the nice person who gave me the idea (kiss!). Michael is beyond idiot. He will soon shit in his mess kit good.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
ya hoo loved this chapter.. it was nice to see angel punch michael in the face. michael is a whiney little asshole who needs his face smacked a few times.. its nice to see terry and his bf become one of the family..
can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for reviewing. I'm working on the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
A beautiful chapter. I enjoyed it ! I'm longing to see the wedding. The family circle is widening. Terry and David are lucky. It's all love in this group...Brian doesn't like his ex best friend anymore, it's as plain as the nose on Michael's face (oops). I know now where is the problem, this great dummy is acephalous. A good job for Angel, it's right, I can't remember a black super hero. There is the beautiful Storm (Ororo) in the Marvel's Comic books (X-men) and Lucius Best (that's a name !) - Frozone - in the Disney/Pixar motion picture «The Incredibles » (ok, this one isn't a real turn-on) but no sexy well-built beautiful man...
Ok, I go to the bed now wake up someone (who's going to grumble a little but love it)
Get some sleep too
Love,
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for reviewing and commenting. I had to look up:
acephalous: lacking a head or governing body.
Good one dude. I had a good long sleep and will write tonight. Thanks for hanging in there with me.
Reviewer: camm76 (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
I'm really loving this story so far! I like the new members of "the family".
I hope Michael dosen't come back and put Justin in danger. I can just see him doing that, running away from Angel and comming back to the Pitts. He really doesn't deserve to be apart of the family in any way. Despite being Debbie's son.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks camm76. Michael would have to have a death wish to do that. Truth be known, the risk to everyone is over; they just don't want Michael around; therefore, he's keep away for as long as possible. Thank you very much for commenting.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Wow! I've never seen a writer kick out fantastic chapters as fast as you do JT. Love the new family. Angel, Terry, David; all fabulous. Break it off in Michael. Ted for best man. Remember to get some rest dude.
Author's Response: Thanks David; I have to write when the hamster's hot. I'll sleep tonight. Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I hated ... He, he, I'm sure you don't believe me ! I, L, O, V, E, D, T are the keyboard keys I know the best ... I loved it ! A lot of joy and surprise here with the new ad, Terry, a second chance for Angel with job and school (so Justin). I'm happy for him! "The hand of the master", a beautiful master lol!
By the way, Ted & Jerry as best men
A great job,
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you oh so very much Gehexan. You warm this writer's heart with your comments. Thanks too for the best man vote. I have to sleep soon then more tomorrow.
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
Can't wait for the wedding. liking Angel more and more.
Author's Response: Angel is like a black version of Justin; beautiful, talented, young and destined to greatness. The wedding will be a major event.
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
wow. i might learn to like Angel.
Author's Response: I promise you; you will soon love him. He's so much like Justin it's ironic only stronger. Thanks darkraven for commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The New Family
very nice, all of it.
welcome terry and david to the wildest family this side of the rockies.
angel got a nice break, so did michael. oops!
Author's Response: HA!!! Very well said sjmpets3; the stage is set for things to happen now with the new main characters in place. Michael may learn; someday.....
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Damn it, what's fantastic chapter ! Brian, my hero. Hire a professional killer to protect Justin, that's LOVE and so Brian. And this proposal, priceless !!! « Brian, turn off your intercom please » - ROFLMAO - Cynthia waited just long enough (grin). It's so good.
Well then, I take my hat off to the hamster... Excellent. It was a pleasure to read ...
Big hugs
Gehexan
Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan for your great review. Protecting his Sunshine is what Brian does best. LOVE! is the power of all that happens with them. The hamster takes a bow.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
Ihintza sends you her love. She came out of ICU today and saw her little baby for the first time in neonatology. So, she's in better spirits.
Well, to me now the marathon reading and comments. Another great chapter. I loved it a lot. Justin is as sly as a fox (a cute blond fox ;) ). I would like to be a fly on the wall in the Craig's office to see his face ! Michael is a really moron. And he doesn't even do it on purpose. I wish good luck to Angel.
A good moment, thanks a lot
Gehexan
Author's Response: I'm very happy for Ihintza, Gehexan. ICU isn't a fun place to be. Seeing your child for the first time had to be real special. Please enjoy the new chapters and let me know if you like them. I look forward to each review and comment you give me very much. Thanks!
Reviewer: darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
oooohhhhh!!! I love over protective Brian.
Author's Response: Me too; he is so in character this way. Enjoy the next chapters. Thanks darkraven for commenting.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Great... Justin is safe... Brian got rid of Ed and Sap... but... why doesn't he hire someone to drop a safe on Mikey's head?? It's only a matter of time before he screws everything up again!!! I think Mikey is the only person on earth whose brain is smaller than his dick !!! lol.....
Author's Response: LMGAO!!! Good one BluvsJ. You tickle me. I'm keeping Michael around for entertainment. Angel's on top of him like stink on shit.
Reviewer: black-rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I am so happy that you are writing another story so soon after Embraced. You're stories are great!!!
Author's Response: Thank you black-rose. The compliment is very appreciated and motivating me to write for you.
Reviewer: Eniola (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Between the double wedding and the changes made, I'm definetly anticipating the next update. Keep the greatness coming. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much Eniola for commenting. Your input was priceless to the story. I'm very grateful you took the time to help me improve the plot. Writing the next chapter now. Please comment again.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
*Jumps on my bed* because i just love it. Lol. Is michael gunna loose his rights to jenny? And is he getting dumber? Lol. I begining to love angel and jerry but i don't know why lol. Just more please *puppy dog pout* lmao :) :) :-) :-) :) :) x
Author's Response: Your review has me laughing and doing a happy dance. Mommie Mel is a lawyer; what chance does Michael have? Angel and Jerry are very good people; I love them and Terry too. Please comment again. Next chapter maybe tonight if I keep my eyes open to finish the chapter (now half done).
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Hello darling. Love love love the story. You are so talented. Can't wait for more! ~C
Author's Response: Thank you so much Carlly; please comment again. Welcome to my universe.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! QAF needed diversity in my story.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Oh my god! That was fucking sweet. Brian got an assassin. Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and reviewing VG24. I don't know who did it but it was to nice to save Justin. hehehehe
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
angel is getting his way to go angel.. :) hes going places.. why can't mikey take notes, and learn.
Author's Response: Duh? We're talking about Michael here. Don't expect miracles. If Michael keeps his ass out of jail later on that will be amazing for him. Thanks for the review nicole very much.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Just keeps getting better!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate! I'm doing me best for your reading pleasure.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
great chapter JT. Glad to see that Angel is a good guy.. I'm happy to see that brian and justin are having a double wedding with carl and deb.. can't wait to see michael and lindsays' reactions to that...
Author's Response: Mega thanks Lesley for reviewing this chapter. Angel is going to me major character later on. Michael and Lindsay won't even know the wedding is happening until it's over; unless I see an angle to rub their nose in it first. They aren't exactly in the social grapevine any more.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Excellent chapter! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you oh so much inkedkelt! Appreciate the compliment. Writing the next chapter now but sleep might get in the way.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I know I say it in every review, but I love my brotha Angel!! Love the way you're fleshing out this character. He's not only someone with a good heart and a Jiminey Cricket persona, but he's talented and smart. I hope he continues on the road that he's on, especially since Justin and Brian see so much in him...meaning I hope Michael doesn't screw anything up for him.
Can't wait for the double wedding!! That is going to be so exciting!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Kat for your comments. Michael can't mess up Angel; the teenager is too smart for him. The wedding will be soon. We have a Christmas chapter first and more.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
i don't like he fact that michael will be returning to the pitts some day. even after he gets out of jail. nice that justin has a job waiting for angel and it includes going back to school.
hiring terry keller is a good idea too.
ah, the double wedding. should keep emmett very busy.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your comments. When Michael returns it's straight to jail. As a registered sex offender if he gets one toe over the line when he gets out; he goes up for five years or more. Angel's art is brillant; a true natural artist like Justin. Terry is the new top gun at Kinnetik. More about Terry next chapter. Very soon Brian and Justin will have more work than people to accomplish it all.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Sort of a filler chapter, but still awesome :) Brian and Justin's banter about the wedding was adorable, and I could imagine Brian's internal "smugness" about Sap and Big Ed, surprised that Debbie couldn't see "the hand of the master",lol. :D
Author's Response: Danke BlindDreamer for your kind review. This was an important transistion chapter with a new major player at Kinnetik. Brian wasn't smug at all; just relieved Justin was safe now to his knowledge. Debbie and the kids were in the kitchen and wasn't listening to them. Debbie and Carl know nothing about Big Ed, Michael, Sap and Justin's connection to everything.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!
This is the best story i have ever read. Can't wait for the up coming chapters.... :D
Author's Response: Thank you kwil. Please join my best readers and write a short review for each chapter. Words fail me telling how much it helps me. I'm working on the next chapter today.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
Yes!! Yes!! Yes!!! I am so happyyyyyyyy..... Great chapter. I think Gus or Ted can be Brian best man.
Poor Angle... nobody give him a gift before... Love Justin when he give Angle a job. When you are given a second chance, it will drive you to do better for yourself and greatful. (like Angle do.... unlike stupid Mikey).
I'll be waiting for next chapter. Love you. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your comments and review. You're the wind beneith my wings. I see Gus as the ring bearer and Ted is perfect for best man. Molly and JR can be flower girls. Rev. Butterfield (aka: Butterbutt) can do the service since our lovers know him intimately from the baths. Next chapter real soon.
Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
I started reading you story yesterday and was overjoyed to find the new chapters today. I really liked how you handled The Sap and Big Ed. I can't wait to see how Mikey messes up again - I am pretty sure he will. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you Jay. Welcome to my universe. Please review each chapter; it motivates and inspires me to write for you. Trust Michael to mess up and Angel to kick his white honky cracker ass!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Kinnetik Diversity
This a great chapter with new diversity. BRAVO JT!
You never fail to surprise me with your plot twists.
Author's Response: Thanks David; besides Dejon QAF greatly lacked in diversity so my story wants to change that and I"ve never seen a diversity theme in QAF fanfiction. Before anybody get pissed at me for calling white Michael a honky cracker; duh? I'm white too.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
OMG!!! What a surprise. Brian Propose to Justin & everyone in the building is the witness. Fucking love Brian... he is so unpredictable. I wish I have someone to love me as much as Brian love Justin. There is no broundries when its come to Justin, he will do anything for him.
Thank you JT, you make me cry a happy cry. I am so touch ..... so happy with this chapter. Yes money screaming, but love will make people do the unbelieveable. I can't choose betewen love or money coz i want both LOL.
Very good job, keep it up. BIG HUGS for you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicted for being such a great fan. The love between Brian and Justin is the magic that makes them so special.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
Another brilliant chapter. I so going to kill Mikey. What a clueless shit head he is. Brian make right choice for Angle to control Mikey.
I always love the way Brian with Gus. Can't wait for Craig shit. What a devil mind our sunshine is.
Love you, JT.
Author's Response: Mucho Thanks complicated for reviewing this chapter. I look forward to all your reviews holding my gay penis breath. Get in line since Angel has first dubs on Michael. Gus is so adorable and perfect for my story to grow up in. Sunshine is an angel with horns! hehehe! Craig is hanging on by a very thin thread.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Great update as usual thanks, update soon please.
Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you Buffytess for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. More chapter very soon.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
WOW! Big Ed and Sap eliminated! Justin is safe now thank goodness and he and Brian can now get married!
LOVED the marriage proposal. Only Brian can use the term twat in a romantic tone.
Craig is a douche bag! Brian owns him...love it!
Author's Response: You write such fun reviews to read Kat. Thank you very much for it. I'm motivated now to create another chapter real fast for you great reviewers. My mental hamster is spinning on his wheel in overdrive.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
I wish I had an actual visual of the look on Craig's face when he finds out Brian owns his store!! He just might choke on pure air with that!!
Michael, Michael, Michael...the worlds most delusional dumb fuck! He's so lucky to have Angel as his Jiminey Cricket or he would have already jacked himself up.
Author's Response: HA! I loved reading your review and thank you very much for writing it. Jiminey Cricket was a perfect metaphor here. Michael's not out of the woods yet.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
big ed, gone. sap, gone. craig, hanging by a thread. michael going to jail for a year. lindsay in canada for four years. all is good in the taylor-kinney household.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your great review and comment. I love happy stories with justice served hot and cold.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
OMG! I can't believe Brian hired a hit man....whait a moment...what am I saying? Of corse I can believe that. Anything to keep his Sunshine safe. I still love it and fucking craig taylor over always makes me happy! Can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley for this chapter review. Each review for a chapter motivates me to write for you fast and good. Anybody who is remotely a threat to Justin is not long for this world. Craig has one chance to save his ass. I hope to have the next chapter up real soon.
Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Hell yeah!! Now if Michael and Lindsey would just both drop dead I would be a happy camper. But I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of those two. Keep up the great work. I look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much inkedkelt for your review and comments for this chapter. I truly appeciate your reviewing each chapter very much. Justin's safety is Brian's primary concern and anyone who could hurt him is toast. I hope to have the next chapter up very soon and I'll start writing it once I catch up answering reviews.
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Dont fuck with Brians boy man, haha, that was so great, was seriously not expecting that. The marriage proposal was too cute! Just awesome, great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much BlindDreamer for this review. Readers who review each chapter are my best readers who inspire me to write good and fast. Anyone who could hurt Justin is not long for this world. Justin's dream is to marry Brian and the dark haired lover will give his blond boy anything. Thanks for your compliment very much.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
oh thank the lord, justin is safe.. now lets move on to dipshit michael and molester lindsay and see what happenes there.. i hope brian and justin get justice served there as well... love this story..
Author's Response: Thank you very much Lesley for your outstanding review for this chapter. I can't say how important your chapter reviews are for me to write good for you. Brian will move mountains to keep Justin safe. I hope to have another chapter up for you soon.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Laaaawd another laaate night reading a excalent chapter..
Craig better get to work lol. the killing of sap and big ed priceless.
i wonder who will be brian's best man at the wedding... ooo better yet what if mikey shows up at the wedding ooo :)
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for reviewing. How about I let the readers help me pick a best man; who do you like?
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 13: Kinnetik Justice
Damn this was a great chapter JT. The action was amazing and so real. Brian is not somebody to mess with where Jusitn is concerned. Thanks for the fast update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much David for reviewing again. I hope to have your next fix ready real soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
sneaky!justin is a delight.
Author's Response: Thank you very much sjmpets3 for your outstanding for this chapter. Justin learned from the master!
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
Thanks for the update!!!
Michael is really stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is good that Angel is there.........
Love it when Craig who owns him .....................
Really love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks patheticgal for this review. Angel deserves his name. Craig is sooooo screwed no matter what he does; you will see how in the future chapters. Thank you so much for loving my story.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
woah, great chapter. michael had better not fuck up, because if he does i hope angel will waste him... i think its going to be funny, justin and brian owning craigs store, serves him right...
can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for your review. I think you'll love the chapter.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
Hi, just writing an encouraging review to let you know that I'm enjoying the story and look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks Kate; it really does help me to hear from you each chapter. I'm writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
i can't whait to see when brian tells justin's father he owns him...and pleeeeease let mickey do something stupid at the store and angel make the call to brian please :)
Author's Response: Thanks nicole for commenting on this chapter. Craig will lose it I'm sure of it. Well, you know Michael and fuck up is his middle name.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
another great chapter. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Your very welcome darkraven; thank you for commenting and another update will be soon.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
This was a great chapter full of new details. I hate Lindsay's getting off but she's still screwed as a sex offender and not able to see her son Gus. Angel is really cool and I can see Brian helping him later on. Maybe a goffer at Kinnetic. Please write more; my addiction needs a constant fix.
Author's Response: Thank you very much David for your review and comments. I like your idea for Angel. Justice for the rich is different than for the common poor people. I hope to give you another fix later tonight. Hang in there dude.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Money doesn’t Talk; it Screams
Justin's heart is as soft as he's hair
Author's Response: Thank you monica for saying that. It's so true.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
that's priceless justin is a millionaire, and craig got ....nothing
Michael ..... he's just so so soooo stupid
Author's Response: Thanks monica; I really do appreciate you reviewing each chapter. More about Craig in the next chapter going up right now!
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Family Part Three
I'm happy for carl and debbie :-)
hahahahahaha craig in your f*cking homophobic face
Author's Response: Thanks monica for reviewing. More about Craig and Jennifer in the next chapter. She lets him have it. I'm also about to post a new chapter soon after proofreading it.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Love this story so much ..
Pff and now I must wait 2 weeks before I can read again. I'm going on holiday .. driving through Spain and sleeping in paradors.
Hope there are many chapters to read when I come back.
* big hug *
Author's Response: Thank you very much Marny for your kind review. I'm certain I'll do much writing in two weeks. I envy you; I've never been to Spain before; have a great time.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
Great chapter! Really liking Angel, he's a smart guy. Just sending that letter saved Justin's life. If they had stayed in prison Michael would have stuck his foot in his soon to be toothless mouth again.
Highlights of the story: Jenn rubbing Craig's face all up in the fact that his son is a millionaire...without his help or his alma mater. AND Brian punching Michael!! "Best friends for life". Yea, Brian was smart to get dumbass away from Big Ed.
Not a fan of the n word being used, but with that being said it is something Big Ed would say.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kat for your comments and review. Angel is wise for his years and a good character in the story. Jenn is very proud of Justin and enjoyed letting Craig have it. Michael is just beginning to realize what he has lost beginning with Brian. I too am not a fan of the n word and didn't spell it completely for a reason. Yes, it is commonly used between black people for a difference reason. Thank you for enjoying my story and letting me know each chapter.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Family Part Two
Enjoyed.
I am having a hard time thinking about Michael & am trying to block that part out. Didn't think it would bother me but for some reason, it is. Maybe it's because I'm just really tired right now.....
Love, "It was Gary's idea, Brian." Once again, GO Gary!!
Nice touch w/ Claire. Wouldn't expect anything less from Brian.
Gus' interactions are always enjoyable.
WHAT is going on at the end w/ Carl?! WOW......
Have to work tomorrow, will cont reading tomorrow evening!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for your comments and review. You can read later that Carl will be ok. I had to sneak that cliffie in there (makes an evil grin...). Gus is so adorable I love writing him in the story and he will remain a major character throughout.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
"Mr Kinnetik" makes me laugh. Still enjoying this and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks Kate for your review. Mr. Kinnetik was a fun idea and it was all their was on the envelope for Angel to write to. I hope to have another chapter done tonight.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
I don't have a word for Mikey, he is soooooooo STUPID. What world he is living?? Love when Brian punch him. Hope Angle can keep Mikey out of trouble.
Can't wait to see Craig going down. Can't wait for more.
Another excellent chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much complicated for your comments and review. The fans who review each chapter are very important to me. Michael is beyond stupid and four levels below idiot. Craig is very close to losing it all.
Reviewer: jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 11: Angel on his Shoulder
wow wow wow wow. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. When I think it can't get better - it gets better. You are an amazing writer.
Mikey is damn lucker Brian got him out - I'm glad only because as much as I think he deserved what he got I had trouble reading it - 18" and as thick as a beer can. This has run through my head to much.
My favorite parts are Brian and Justin and Justin and Gus, but I love it all - and check for the next chapter daily.
Thank you so much for sharing yourself with us...
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks jane for reviewing. Your compliment is very appreciated and motivating. Justin wanted to help Michael live but Brian wanted to get him away from Big Ed before he got Justin hurt with his big mouth. You will see many scenes with Gus and our boys in my story. I hope to have the next chapter up tonight; I'll start it after answering my reviews.
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