Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Too good... Jerry, take your children with you. Take them away from this bitch ! It seems you are the only one with Mark who can give them all the love they deserve ...
Wow, JTS, you did a wonderful job here
Big kisses for you
PS : Mr Hamster is nasty-looking. He makes me jump... A good night's rest will do him much good. A big kiss for him if he takes this rest very soon
Author's Response: Jerry will get his kids in record time. Thanks for the compliment Ihintza. Mr. Hamster is all good now.
Big Kisses Back!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 79: Checkmate
You write from light and happy to hard, gritty and seedy. What a roller coaster but I'm getting use to it and loving the thrills. I'll do my part to save the little guy. He's a lot cuter off the stuff.
Author's Response: Two things that I hate with QAF fanfiction is too much canon written in a story or a slow level--no action or emotion in a story. I try hard to avoid doing either in my writing. Thanks for commenting David.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
Oh how I'm happy for Mark. Jerry’s children are adorable. It wasn’t obvious Mark find his place but he knew very quickly how to forge a friendship with each of them. And apparently, he won hands down ...
Hunter in Las Vegas, it will be great for him
Big hug for you and a huge caress to Mr Hamster
Author's Response: Mark is great with kids and loves them very much. Hunter will be having a lot of fun in Vegas.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I’m Home.
Nice how everyone rallies around. I fully expected to see Jenn show up. Even if he was fifty and something similar happened, she would be there.
Should be interesting to see how Jerry's kids respond to Mark and his place in their Dad's life.
Good point that Jerry made about the press and Mark's mother. Hopefully, they can be pleasantly surprised and find out she cleaned up her act.
Well, I'm glad that Linds is responding well to treatment (but I wonder if she is truly cured of her Brian obsession). I'm not sure of Canadian law, but assuming she received permission to visit her parents (and they wanted to see her), would the probation office have to notify B & J of her proximity?
I always love the banter between B & J. It's funny, but it also shows their love & affection.
Great chapter, on to the next!
Author's Response: I'm reminded of my aged mother insisting waiting at the hospital when I had gall bladder surgery not too long ago. Three cheers for mothers everywhere. Sadly Mark's mother's is a mess and risk to him. Lindsay is under court order to stay away from Gus or go to prison.
Hugs!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
ps little hampster is one scary dude...mr. hampsert switch to decaf...and just say no..lol :)
Author's Response: He promises to go cold turkey and off the review meth once he sees 1,000 reviews. He's really cute when he isn't high and still very creative.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Well, Mr. Hamster wants more reviews...
I am really enjoying reading the story and look forward to each chapter as you write it. I especially love the 'ads' that each person has developed. I think I like the 'booty' one the best.
It will be interesting to see Brian and Justin's reaction to Lindsey being let 'out'.
I would like to see a little more with Emmett, pershaps it is time to bring Drew back????
Author's Response: Thank you Eileen for commenting. I love to read a new name in a review; it gives a name to my readers and a connection I don't have without your reviews. Your ideas for Emmett and Drew or excellent. Let me work on that once I get past this family emergency for Jerry and Mark.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
please let jerry get his kids and put his ex and her boy toy in jail or the poor house... what's going on with gus? does he know he'll have a new baby brother?
Author's Response: Next chapter is the showdown for Jerry's kids with the lawyers. Forgive me; I meant to write Gus and the new baby in the story and forgot to. I'll soon remedy that. Thank you for reminding me; it's important.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
Wow!!!!!!
You go Mr. Hamster. This chapter totally rocks. Wow!
Author's Response: Your lines was the hit to get Mr. Hamster spinning good now. Next chapter underway.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 78: I Want Mark
This just keeps getting better and better. Mark will make a great second dad. Tell the hamster we need more now. Please.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster could barely keep his little eyes open after four chapters in about 20+ hours straight awake. He snorted your line and wiggled his butt, and slowing climbed on his wheel. Looks like maybe one more chapter tonight. Thank you Lorie!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I’m Home.
"I'll pull this car over and make you walk home"... Hey, that's what my father told us when we were kids and we were arguing in the car... That's what I also say to my husband when he criticizes the way I drive !
Nice chapter, I loved it. A little incursion into their life at home with the family... Poor Mark, his family wasn’t very great… Luckily, he can find love and support from Jerry. I hope it will go well with Jerry’s kids…
Big kisses
Ps : Talk of the devil and he appears… Gex comes just into view !!!
Author's Response: About to post a new chapter right now. Things happen fast for Jerry and Mark. The kids are on a mission.
Big kisses back!
Reviewer: Anngy (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Wow...umyeah, this was different. I know teens are doing these things but something just doesn't feel right about this here. Honestly it just feels some what dirty. This is my least fav chapter and I can't read this one again as I have all other chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. There're no more chapters like this one with Molly and Tyler. Enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
wow, awesome chapters to catch up on.. thank god justin, and mark are alright.. now what's going on with lindsay, will the boys have trouble with her now?
can't wait to see what happens next..
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster's all butt hurt you didn't review each chapter but I'm very grateful you did review this one. Writing the next chapter now.
Hugs!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
yeah, mark and the kids did fine together. hope hunter gets his banana from playmobil LOL
great chapters mr. hamster keep running...
Author's Response: I think Janet's about to have her first crush on Mark. Hunter will be fabulous. Mr. Hamster says he's probably good for one more chapter before falling out. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I’m Home.
poor jen thats going to be a doosy when she realizes about molly.
hope they find mark's mom and can help, hope too jerry's kids are cool with their dad switching side & w/ mark
Author's Response: Knowing Molly is seeing him for a long period of time should lessen the blow when she finds out. And she raised Justin so she should be able to handle just about anything. Mark's mom is hopeless and very dangerous. Jerry's on top of it believe that. Mark can charm the skin off a snake. Read on and see how the Kid's Test turns out. Thanks alys for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
Sorry for the delay but my moms decided to make a big 'piperade' (a typical Basque dish) for tonight and they called their beloved daughter for help... Now I can go back to my reading, in front of Tomas who just come with his breakfast (it’s 16:00 pm here) but still not Gex (apparently he’s still sleeping)...
I enjoyed this new chapter. It was pleasant after the little wave of stress previously... The accident is enough gripping but I love how Justin keeps his calm, compared to Brian (but that’s quite understandable, he is worried, far and he can’t be there for Justin...). I’m very happy for Hunter. I’m sure he will make wonders.
Lots of cuddles (and also Mr Hamster)
If you go on Google Maps, we are exactly between Hendaye and St-Jean-de-Luz (closer to Hendaye). It’s the gateway to Spain, between sea and mountains. It's really a little point on the very bottom of France... Our favorite places where we work or have fun stretch from San Sebastian (Spain) to Biarritz. The Guehexan’s favorite surf spot is Guéthary. Our nights out are often in Spain, St-Jean-de-Luz and Biarritz (a town very very gay-friendly)... Well, you know now my little world... and you see why we all love our region)
Author's Response: My mouth is watering thinking of your food. Justin has his moments and in a real emergency he's very calm but subject to delayed stress later; not so this time. Mr. Hamster loves to cuddle with you. I'm reading about your location; it's enchantingly beautiful. I love coastal towns. I lived in San Diego California for 8 years and loved it. I bet you have great weather year around. You have a wonderful life there I'm sure.
Hugs!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
Fuh! Mark pass the test. Seem he is very good with kid (with the help form Jerry).
Agreed with Brian, Hunter have to earn it himself. Hunter is very bright & he will grab the opportunity to prove how good he is.
Excellent
Take care.
Author's Response: Mark is a charmer and understands kids great. Later the find out how bad the pool boy is. Hunter will be special; Vegas is a major turning point in his career. Thanks so much for your chapter reviews and comments complicated. Mr. Hamster says squeak!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
I loved Jerry's kids reaction to Mark. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Who wouldn't love Mark? Besides next to pool boy he's an 11 next to a 4. Thank you very much for commenting Lorie.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I’m Home.
A few more battle scar is only make Justin more hot. The banter between Justin & Mark in the limo is so child like it's hilarious.
Love, love love this chapter.
Brilliant.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it; it's sometimes challenging to fill in new important information and still be entertaining. I'm glad it might have worked. Went to Sunday brunch and came home to reviews; feels like Christmas in August! Thank you!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 77: The Kid’s Test
What a chapter. Mark's mom, Hunter's ad idea, going to Vegas with a jet and limo, the muffler part had me laughing it was so childlike of Justin, and the part with Jerry's kids priceless.
Author's Response: Hehehehe! It was a very fun chapter to kick out. Mr. Hamster was on a roll. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
The breakfast is finished and I take a break before the meal… I love these moments when I’m quiet at the edge of the swimming pool, in the cool air, with my laptop and my favorite story… It missed a couple around the table this morning and my daddy, who is always up with the lark, said that, considering the noises he heard coming from their studio apartment, it wasn’t worth waiting for the txikiak (kids in basque) to start because they are not ready to get out of bed… He, He…
Very beautiful chapter…. And fortunately for you, I don’t have to wait for the next update because or else…. JTS, JTS !!!! All is excellent : Jerry and Mark, Blake… I adored Tyler (me also, the number of times where, teen, I felt a `small something' for the gay friends of Otsoa…! The boys gay have one I-don’t-know-what so sweet, so attractive. I loved Cynthia also, always perfect…In short, I loved every things here…
Well, I hurry to write this comment (It’s not obvious! In French, I’ll go much more quickly and I could say much and much more things…) to read the next and thus to take news of my favourite boy
Enormous kiss for you and a little peck on the lips for Mr. Hamster
PS: Txabi seldom, il ever, makes nightmares. I was breastfeeding Maïa when I heard him cry. Apparently, the start of the school disturbs him a little (schools reopen on September 3th). I went in his room, I took him in my arms, I comforted him, I explained to him that these nightmares were the product of his imagination. We have created a happy end with this awful dream and after he fell asleep again without problem… That always takes a little of time and after I didn’t have any more courage to return to read
Author's Response: Good morning to my favorite mother in France. Tell what city you're near so I can look it up on a map. I love reading your long comments; and your Twitter like updates. Your English is excellent; Europeans are so gifted with more than one language. Americans are so lazy and demand everyone knows English which I think is wrong. I did study Deutsch in college years ago.
Glad you like the chapter. I'm writing about one right now. Glad your son is ok and not normally having nightmares. In a way it's a good sign of a strong imagination.
Kisses back and Mr. Hamster blows you a kiss toward France.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 76: Lucy I’m Home.
Very funny chapter. Intresting about Mark's family espc. his mom. The I Love Lucy routine was a riot.
Author's Response: A typical B/J day with friends. I had fun writing it too. Thanks for commenting Dave.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
Well, I'm glad that J has good instincts and ducked when he was supposed to. Me, I would have turned around to see who was yelling and why, and be dead. *g* Sounds like the truck took the brunt of it. Glad J's ok.
I can picture J taking care of business under the truck, but then again I could picture B doing the same. I mean really, if you're all right and have to wait to be unpinned, what else you gonna do? Lol. And I sympathize with him about his shirt...why are we always wearing our favorites when shit happens? I guess so that other wearables get a chance to become a new favorite.
I'm happy for Hunter, this is a sweet deal and now he can concentrate on his future instead of worry about finding the money to cover his meds (I'm sure Ben will be happy & relieved as well). Curious to see how he works out as an ad monkey. Will he get salad or bananas? *g*
I'm with B, regardless of J's assurances, I would have been on my way home too.
I bet business situations as with Petco happen more often than the general public is aware of (and especially more so with an economy as we have now).
Jerry & Mark are good friends.
Good chapter!
Author's Response: I'm always deeply honored when a reviewer leaves a detailed lenghtly comment. It shows your investment in my story and that is a true honor. Justin could also hear the lighting bar coming down albeit he didn't know what it was. Hunter will surprise them; bananas. Brian couldn't get out of Atlanta quick enough. You're so right about businesses bouncing checks. Jerry and Mark are like best friends with Brian and Justin as they are so much alike and help each other so much. Imagine; the fact long ago they took pity on a billionaire who needed a little help coming out and how it changed their business success and their lives. Such connectons happen like that in the real gay world. Thank you so much for your great review cakdg.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
Sooo...glad Jus is ok.
Thank you for the reality check... shit happens.
Kiss, kiss
Author's Response: It's been one of my favorite phrases since I was a kid and so true. Brian is thinking how to keep his boy safe at work now.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 52: Hurricane Gus $$$$$
Man, Brian and Justin are tough, businessman. Don't mess with the Kinney's. Look what one ad by a five year old did!
Author's Response: They never dreamed the Gus story would have such ramifications for new business and good will. The Gus story took the nation by storm. Any success story by a kid in a recession will be a winner. Thanks Kat!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
WOW!! You did it again.
Brilliant.
Author's Response: Me tickled you liked it. I love Justin too much to hurt him bad. If you only knew how much I love him...
Thank you so much complicated for commenting.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Always love the pasta night at Ded's.
Love the way Mark talk to Molly, it's so funny. Gus is so sweet....
Hugs.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster did a happy dance when he saw your review. Mark is such a charmer; his wit is beyond his age. Thank you for commenting very much. With your help we can hit 1,000 reviews soon.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 51: Pittsburgh’s Newest Millionaire
I have to wonder if Lindsay some how finds out about Gus, either by seeing something on tv or in the paper. Its so great to see him doing well despite what his mother did to him. Its a real testatment to Brian and Justin and the family. Gus has a lot to be proud of, what an amazing kid...got daddy Hershey for a client.
Author's Response: You'll find out about Lindsay's knowledge later in the story. Gus is amazing and kids can bounce back in an incredible way from adversity or harm. Thank you Kat for being a reader and reviewing each chapter. You're a VIP Reader for me and I cherish you.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
A good time was had by all at Debbie's. Well, except maybe for Michael, but he knew enough to keep his mouth such (color me surprised, but it was bound to happen at least once, right? *g*).
Blake has made the announcement about the new ownership and everyone learns that basically nothing will change, except that their jobs are more secure than ever. Nice.
I can commiserate with Mark & Jerry regarding wealth and fame. I personally would hate to be famous (for any reason) and would only want to be wealthy if I could be so anonymously. The loss of privacy wouldn't be worth the trade off for me. But it is nice daydreaming about it without the downsides. *g*
So Kinnetik RE are becoming national landlords. They need to go further west (I'm thinking Hawaii) for their next purchase. Then where in the globe next?
Drat! Another cliffhanger, I wasn't expecting that. Poor J, fate truly has him marked for calamity doesn't she? Hope he'll be ok...
Great chapter...rushng to the next to see what happened.
Author's Response: Michael has learned his lesson about his life and takes responsibility for his own mistakes. His path is upward now. Blake is good and will let the pros manage as he does what he does best. Jennifer is taking her time buying only excellent properties at bargain prices in the recession. Justin will be ok; I love him too much to hurt him. Thank you so much for commenting and rating cakdg.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 50: My Other Girl
The commercials sound great and how awesome for them to do the Rage tie in.
Look at Gus making money before his second nap of the day :) Like father, like son.
Author's Response: Good to see you reading again Kat. Gus is a trip and so adorable. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 49: Discovered
Aww! Tony gets in on the action too. And little Gus is going to be just like his fathers! Gonna have his first ad before he turns 6!
Good for Michael throwing that crack and pipe away! Common sense prevails!
Love Matt!!
Author's Response: Tony's a beautiful boy and will do well in Hollywood. Gus is so smart and a natural for advertising. Michael is finally on the rebound. Matt is such a hottie and my first choice for Rage. I'm pretty fond of Mark too. *grins* Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
Your description of the accident is very realistic. There should have been some kind of safety back up system for the main brake.
Author's Response: The new lighting hoist will be much safer. Thanks for commenting and reviewing all your chapters read.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
Evil cliff hanger here. Glad I didn't have to wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I never leave up a cliffie very long. Thanks
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Love any scene with Debbie in it and the gatherings at her house.
Author's Response: Debbie's a rock.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
Loved the answer at the end. Reporters can be so stupid asking such a personal question.
Author's Response: For the picture Mark didn't alienate anyone with his answer. He's a natural with the press and a doll.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Almost a very serious injury here. Glad it wasn't. Exciting chapter.
Author's Response: Broken bones are serious but not life threatening usually unless a big bone like a femur that bleeds bad internally. Thanks for commenting David.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Wow, what a chapter. First Jerry and Mark and then Molly and Tyler. Very well written straight scene.
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
Loved Tucker gettng to bottom and Jenn on top. Fun chapter.
Author's Response: I think the girls got a kick out of this chapter too.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
This was so funny. Jennifer with a strap on is novel.
Author's Response: She is so not the type; it was a load of fun to write. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
Always wanted to see Ireland. Read the chapters; now reviewing so you get the hits for your mission to 1000.
Author's Response: Thank you so much David. We're going to make it with the few faithful readers who do review each chapter. I really appreciate your help.
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
Glad Justin is okay. Still loving the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. It reminded me I forgot the dedication for you for being the 900th reviewer. I fixed that and it's up now. I was so busy on the next chapter I spaced it out. You're a sweet heart to review and rate for me.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 75: Shit Happens
justin like justin to talk on the phone while he's pinned down <grin> love that Hunter got hired w/ benefits
Author's Response: I guess being pinned down is normal for a bottom. Hunter will be a surprising employee. Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
Not a good place to stop - Is Justin hurt? If he was hit it would have killed him. That can't happen; right?
Please hurry and finish the next chapter...
Jane
Author's Response: The next chapter is up; I'm fixing the spacing problems now. Thanks for reviewing Jane.
Reviewer: Darkraven (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
No no not his ass. anywhere but there.
Author's Response: HA! ROTFLMGAO!
OK, his beautiful ass is safe.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
oooh that's mean. can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Next chapter is half finished now; thanks for commenting Carlly.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
that's a cliffee ending.... did it but only w/ an 80lb tool, some grand mals, but grew out of it. etc.
hope justin ducked in time. wasn't sabatoge was it?
great chapter congrats on 900+
Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now to end the cliffie tonight. It was mechanical failure; not sabatoge. Thank you for being part of the very important reviewers who will help me make history; over 1,000 reviews on MW perhaps. If I break that ceiling I believe it's a big win for MW and every author who publishes here. Thanks alys for commenting.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
oh that was mean leaving right there. lol
Author's Response: If shooting Justin will get me reviews I'll shoot his ass; I swear I'll do it. hehehehe Writing the next chapter now; thanks for commenting darkraven.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 74: Business and Pleasure
nooo you can't end it like this.... i just know your working on the next chapter riiiight.
Author's Response: The next chapter is 25% finished. I'll have it up tonight. I never leave a cliffie up very long. Thanks for commenting nicole.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Evening barbecue tonight here
I love the character of Debbie in QAF. She’s is a very dynamic woman who is never at a loss for something to say. She has a big mouth but she shows also tenderness and she’s good at giving advice.
Mark can take full advantage of his break at Pittsburgh. I’m sure Debbie will pamper him, so he’s be able to go back on top form. And now that Jerry is with him... Everything is going well !
Excellent chapter, a beautiful moment
A big hug for you
A sweet kiss on every cheek to Mr Hamster…
Author's Response: It is so good to see you reading again today. Gex told me your boy had a nightmare and you had to stop readying. I too love Debbie; she is the glue of their group and so loved by all. I'm working on the next chapter now. Thank you so much for commenting each chapter. Hugs back and Mr. Hamster is all a blush from your kisses.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
I catch up on the late reading. Our boys just come back from a horseback ride into the hills. They‘re unsaddling now except Gex who rides bareback (he says he loves it because it takes less time and above all it’s great to toning thighs, abs and buttocks). I’m longing to have back my previous life (surf, motorcycle… as my brothers).
A lot of rest now for Mark so he can recover from his injuries. Brian and Justin are really loyal friends. Moreover, they provide support and composure. It’s necessary to calm down Jerry...
Very good chapter
Gros bisous d’une petite française qui t’adore (Big kisses from a little French girl who loves you)
Author's Response: I haven't rode a horse in 40 years and I live in Texas! Of course I live in the city now. Jerry feels Brian and Justin are his best friends and it's hard for him to trust anyone and make friends.
Big kisses back from old gay man in the USA.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 48: Changes
Good for Vance! This might be just what he needed, I'm glad he's an assett to Kinnetik.
Aww, time to make a baby!
Author's Response: In time Vance realizes he's still a good ad man and will grow with Kinnetik. Justin is delighted to become a father. Thanks Kat. Your chapter reviews are so important to me as I race for the historic 1,000 reviews on MW.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 47: Big Bananas
Oh Michael!! Crack, you smoke crack on your first day of work. I thought he hit his dumbest point, but this just takes the cake.
Yea, Kinnetik got GM! They are really growing by leaps and bounds!!
Author's Response: Michael is hitting the last bottom before coming back. Kinnetik is having a great year; the story will slowly shift away from business and more toward family matters. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Good that Mark got to break away and go to Pittsburgh to relax and recuperate.
Gus may be B's biological son, but sounds like he has J's appetite! Lol.
The blonds showing off their abs was fun.
I think Debbie's going to need a bigger house to hold the expanding tribe when she has Sunday dinners. *g*
Fun chapter!
Author's Response: It will do Mark, Tony and Jerry good to get away for a while. I love adding Debbie into the story; she's the glue that holds their family together. Yes, her house gets crowded now. Thanks cakdg.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 46: Golden Chariot
Michael just got reminded yet again of how much he royally fucked up by hurtig Justin.
Author's Response: Michael is so typical of the poor me types of people. He is such a victim of fate. Thanks for commenting Kat.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 45: Malibu
Geez, Jerry gave them his jet! I need a friend like that :) Its good that Justin and Brian were able to get away for awhile, they really needed this time off.
Author's Response: Jerry wanted a new jet and this gave him a write off on the old one. Malibu is a great place to visit; beautiful beaches.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
This is what friends are for.
Very good answer, Mark.
Nicely done.
Love you.
Author's Response: It was a personal and business trip to go to LA and help Jerry and Mark now. Mark's a pro with reporters and a darling on camera.
Love you to complicated.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
Matt's ok, Jenn is clued in (sort of) and B&J were able to be there for Jerry, Matt & Mark. They also got Jerry to think clearly about the director. Although the director deserves some grief for the very stupid decision he made. He's very lucky that neither Matt or Mark were killed.
Ok, it's going on 2am here and it's been a very long day and I'm very sleepy so I'll finish the next chapter tomorrow (I have something to look forward to *g*).
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Isn't it nice to own a jet for family and friend's emergencies? It would be bad publicity to fire the director at the end of filming a major picture. Thanks so much for your very valuable chapter reviews. Have a nice sleep cakdg.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 44: Who Wants a Job?
"In the Circle of Life, it's the wheel of fortune, it's the leap of faith it's the band of hope. Till we find our place On the path unwinding In the Circle, the Circle of Life"
Wow, Vance coming to Brian for a job! How the mighty have fallen, Brian should make him sign a non-compete agreement like Vance wanted him to sign.
Author's Response: Brian would simply fire any ad man who attempted to compete with him. A clause isn't necessary; loyality is a given and expected with employment. Kinnetik is large enough not to depend on one client's account. Vance will prove to be a good employee in time. Thanks Kat for reviewing and commenting.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
I liked J as big brother, he was protective but not an ass. And he brought up the salient points Tyler should be worried about (due to their ages) if he's in it with Molly for the long haul. I wonder how Jenn is going to get clued in?
I sympathize with Mark. If the arm break is clean, it shouldn't be too painful, just damned inconvenient with the cast...but the ribs (more than one too), oh, ouch! Ribs always seem to take forever to heal, so much longer than a broken arm. I'm glad that for the most part he's ok, I hope Matt will be too.
I hope that the nurse that Jerry revealed his relationship with Mark to, can keep her lip zipped. But then again, considering how he threatened her job, maybe she will...
Another good one, on to the next...
Author's Response: Justin is wise for his years to give his sister room to learn and love. Ribs get better in a month but can be sore for many months yet a person can function. The nurse is too afraid to say anything for losing her job; patient confidentiality is involved here. Thanks cakdg for commenting; I love to read your reviews.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 43: Surf with me Rage
I almost can't type thinking of Matt Damon as Rage!! LOL!! And that picture isn't helping. ;) I can't concentrate on words anymore...on to the next! LOL!
Author's Response: I couldn't find two hotter men then Mark and Matt for the roles. I had trouble writing and staring at them myself. Thanks Kat for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 42: Surf with Me
Vance really did lose his pants didn't he?! I love that Mother Taylor gets the house and how sweet of Brian to want to give it to her for her birthday.
Glad to see Mark doing so well and happy. Yea, an appearance from my Auntie Em. So great that he is helping Jenn decorate her office.
Author's Response: In a takeover of a failing business you maximize profits and limit libilities. Mark is very happy and loved. Emmett is such a lovable character I really should try to add him more in the story. Thanks Kat for your input.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Jerry & Mark wet and very hot!
Molly & Tyler...condoms are not optional. I know kids are frequently stupid when their hormones are involved. This read like them getting together was a pre-planned event (he wasn't sure she would meet him, she was on the pill), but neither of them had a condom...very poor planning. I mean if she's knowledgeable enough to get on the pill, give him a blowjob without any prior experience, she should know about STD's, too. Sorry, this is my maternal instinct rearing its head. Otherwise, well written.
Just wait until J figures out it wasn't a dream!
On to the next...
Author's Response: I caused a bit of controversy with them not using a condom. I felt even today most kids don't use them when they are young and new to sex so that's how I wrote it; although I agree condoms are very important. Justin follows his hunch next chapter and finds out the truth and deals with it in a big brother fashion. Thanks cakdg for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 41: Think with your dip stick, Jimmy.
That letter makes me want to work at Kinnetik!! I want a fabulous company like that to steal me away from the lame job I currently have.
Has Vance realized just how screwed he is yet? Demanding his stuff back? Clueeeeeless!! This meeting with him and Mel should be interesting.
Author's Response: Kinnetik is the place to work for sure. Vance has no cards to play; he's at the mercy of Mel and that's never good. Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
See what happens, I go out of town for a day and come back to find 5 new chapters! What a nice surprise. Now I have to catch up again. *g*
Auntie Em to the rescue with more sage advice. Lol
I'm happy for Ted and Blake. I just hope Blake is ready for the additional responsibility as running the place is very different than being an employee not matter how talented.
I liked the update on Gus and Lily around the dinner table. Although, I was surprised Gus wasn't asking any questions about the baby. Can't wait for the sonogram!
Glad that Mark is finding making the movie more entertaining.
Jenn got her man and he's very happy! The strap-on reminded me of an incident back when I was about 13 (in the mid-70's). My best friend had unearthed a sex shop mag (turns out it was her grandmother's) and we were giggling and wondering over the things in it, the strap-on harness in particular captured our imagination & interest. We got caught when her mom and grandmother came home early. Her mom was scandalized, but Nana Ross just laughed and explained to us how the item could be utilized on either another woman or a man. Her mom objected and disagreed with the point about using it on a man. We watched this kind of verbal ping pong match go back and forth until Nana Ross finally asked the mom why did God give a man a prostate unless he was supposed to enjoy anal sex regardless of who pleasured him, male or female? The mom reawakened to the fact that we were a very interested audience to this discussion and sent us out of the house. Lol. I never forgot it and through the years I've always thought Nana Ross did have a very good point. I wonder if her husband agreed. *g*
Great chapter! On to the next...
Author's Response: That was a productive cycle for me; 5 chapters in about 2 days staying awake before crashing. I woke up and found all these wonderful reviews to answer before writing the next chapter. Ted and Blake will do great and Blake still does the job he loves and keeps his director on board. I got a kick out of your personal story. Thanks for the idea to add Gus and the new baby in the story. Thank you so much for such a detailed review.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 40: Growing Pains
Phew, that was so damn intense. I'm so anxious for those guys. I know they'll be able to pull it off, but its still nerve wrecking and exciting.
Brian taped his conversation with Mel!! LOL!! This is why he's a success, a fat fucking success. And what makes him a better businessman than Vance, he knows to cover his ass.
Oooh! Please have Brian and Justin have the Kip Konversation (hee hee, clever)!
Author's Response: With delegation the boys will make it. Brian isn't stupid and CYA is a major reason he stays on top. I meant to write in the Kip conversation and forgot to; will do it later in the story. Thanks for commenting Kat much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 39: Read All About It !
Brian should patent his panic attack solution/motivational coaching. Worked wonders on Sunshine :)
So glad Jerry's divorce has been finalized, now he can move on with his life.
Boy, did they put the screws to Vance, he should know better than to not read the entire agreement. Then again, he was dumb enough to fire Brian...so there you go.
So glad I got the hamster spinning again! Go hamster, go hamster!! Hugz to you too!!
Author's Response: Brian knows his boy and how to pull him out of a funk and wind his clock for the day. Jerry gets to stay rich by being smart. His wife could have taken half his estate. Vance was panicking and feels the effect of sinking in the drain.
When I don't get reviews for a chapter I lose my motivation and inspiration; I can't write and yes, your review stopped my block and sent me back to the keyboard with Mr. Hamster spinning out new ideas. Know how very important for the story your reviews are. Thank you!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Bitte schön !
I love this time at Debbie’s. I love when everybody compare the two abs… I wish them a happy Sunday’s pasta… Now that everyoneis there, the festivities can begin…
Excellent chapter
Thank you so much, thank you too Mr Hamster
I go to bed now with my boy (after reading once again the chapter 69 and take some good stuff)… Bye, bye
Big hug, big love
Gehexan
Ps : Sorry for my sis but she had an emergency with a little boy and a nightmare…
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan for commenting very much. Debbie is such a great character to write about. She's so funny and full of life. I hope you had a fun night. Thanks for telling me about your sister; RL kids must come first before fanfiction pleasure.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
Funny, the little Gus... I even can imagine him face to Lily... I’m glad it’s not too bad for Mark. Now, to him now to put up with it.
He’s good with reporters. Finally, it is a good thing that Brian and Justin have made the trip. They are there to support Mark but they have also succeeded in calming Jerry
Very good chapter,
Big Love
Gex
(Mr Hamster is really a great worker but I hope he conserved his strengh)
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster is yawning hard and will have to sleep soon. He just spinned out 5 chapters in a row. Thanks for rating this chapter; I feared it might never win the stars. You and your sister save this story with your faithful reviews. Believe me; without them I can't write. Danke!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
It just gets better and better. Loving
Author's Response: Thank you Carlly for letting me know. Love you 2
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
Still loving the story. Sorry I don't have a chance to comment on each chapter but I usually read a bunch of them when I have time.
Author's Response: JACKPOT!!! You're my 900th reviewer Lorie. The next chapter is dedicated to you.
Even a quick "love it" would be great for a review.
Now I'm on the last lap toward 1,000 reviews and making history on this fine publishing site. I love it here on MW and my success is a win for this site and all our authors.
Thank you so much for commenting and please let me hear from you again.
~JTSecrets
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
poor Mark
Author's Response: Boys get hurt on motorbikes worse. Mark will be fine and he's a real tough kid. Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
I love the test. I love Justin in his role of big brother. Looks like mine... Tyler is a good boy. Molly was really lucky to find him. The first time isn’t always a great experience.
Wow, an accident on the set. Poor Mark! Jerry flips a max...
Brilliant
Author's Response: Somebody will be the magical 900th reviewer! Brothers are so protective of their sisters. Tyler was perfect and a talented lover too. He had just enough experience to make Molly very happy. Shit happens making movies; more than we know.
Thank you and watch the review count; anyone can be 900.
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
way to go Jen.
Author's Response: I had a lot fun writing this chapter; I can see Jennifer showing Tucker who's the man. Thanks darkraven. 900 coming up.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
Oh, oh… It’s hot in the pool….
A big brother is a big brother... Otsoa has always kept an eye on our boyfriends (worse than my parents sometimes). And even now, even if his sister and his little brother have got his two best-friends, he has briefed Tomas and Christian, my hubby (and the worst is that he continues !) But, I did the same thing with his boyfriend, Xabi... Our parents never freaked out when whe have relationship or sex, but they wanted this to happen at home, safe, instead of somewhere else....
I loved Justin and Tyler.
I hope that our two actors go well. It's not funny to have broken ribs .. Poor Mark!
Big hug
Oups, sorry but... breastfeed time !!!!
Author's Response: I tried to write Justin the big brother with a reasonable side to him. Young people want to have sex and fall in love. He knew to give Molly her room to grow; and to let Tyler know he was watching them. 900 coming up for my next dedication.
Big hug back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
And now, you've started the discussion here around the table, 1st time with or without condom ?...Personally, it was with one… Well, now, I'm going to dive into the pool because I still have the last chapter in the head ...
Excellent chapter, but I imagine Jennifer when she’ll know... She’s qoing to freak out ! Justin apparently knows now...! LOL
Even if a girl with a boy don’t turn me on, I must say it's really well written. Bravo!
*Grin *
Gehexan
Author's Response: If I don't create controversy I'm a poor writer. If I get arrested; I may some day be great! hehehe
Jennifer raised Justin; if she can survive that; a straight teenage girl is going to be a breeze. Thanks for the compliment. In my twenties I walked on the wild side a few times. It's not all make up for me about sex with a hot girl.
Grins back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
I don’t want to play the moralizer but just remember that condom is super important... Molly is perhaps on the pill but she must protect herself against STD... That said, a nice moment between these two teens. You are as great at straight sex than gay sex (a description full of life as always and in the same time so sweet...). I wish them a lot of love. These two are gorgeous...
Ah, memories, memories
I love Justin and Brian here...
Big kisses
Author's Response: I agree totally about condoms. I've known dozens of guys who got HIV because they didn't wear them or care. Thanks to meds; many are still alive. That said; realistically young teenagers today are the first not to use a condom; they feel they're safe since they're new at sex. And finally I promise no teenager got an STD in the creation of this fiction.
Thanks for your review and compliment. I admit in my gay youth I experimented with about six girls; one really good too! She made me think twice how good she was. I was her second boy and she was so fresh and hot. I use that memory in my writings.
Big big kisses back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
Wow... A few recreational hits, a joint, good euphoria, no more inhibitions, a sensuality on the top, just the right size... the right guy behind (uh ... sorry, let’s no wander off the subject... Here in this case the right girl !). Charles is getting a real f*****g damn kick out of bottoming here ...
I know I have a few bottles in my fridge
Super chapter very motivating to start ... .. I'll make myself comfortable if you should continue on this path ... ..
Big big hug
Gex
What did you do to my sister with this chapter? She doesn’t stop to tease her husband... and he nearly died laughing!!
Author's Response: I knew this chapter would get the girls going. Most of my readers are straight girls crazy for Brian and Justin. If you read my answer to her review I tried to steer her straight but sometimes girls can be like a dog with a bone. Just try to take something away for them. Hhehehe!
I'm glad you guys are having fun. Next chapter; Molly gets funky. Thanks for reviewing man.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
cute how molly admired mark's abs ;-) always love em
Author's Response: I'm a big fan of a six pack myself. Thanks for the review hit again alys. Every one counts.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 73: Debbie’s
loved how just knew about molly and tyler... glad molly talked w/ jenn asap.... no one talked w/ them about birth control directly though....
glad mark is okay, love how debbie talked w/ brian and justin
Author's Response: Mark and Jerry needed a down home fun time without the phony Hollywood crap around them. It doesn't get more down home than Debbie's house. Mother Taylor has had many talks with her daughter growing up. Justin knows that to has she gave him the same talks as a child. Thanks so much for commenting alys; please do it again.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
I think Blake will manage the clinic in an exceptional way. He is so nice ...
This little discussion between Jennifer and Emmett reminds me the one I had with my older brother Otsoa years ago. Well, in my defense, I was young, a little nosy and curious... (and then I have found some gay magazines in his room where I wasn’t allowed to go but I'm his sister with all defaults a sister may have ;) ) Ho, ho, Charles has his little secret... You know what ? I'm going to ask my husband tonight (Imagine, he did all his schooling with Otsoa and Tomas and they were inseparable, knowing these two fellows ... OMG ??)
You are a real great writter. I love this story more and more and more…
Big love
Author's Response: Come on girl; a straight man can have gay friends and besides; your brothers were a short cut into your pants. Think like a man with your dip stick girl. Ha!!!
Real big love back!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 38: We Can’t Afford Lunch
How wonderful that Jennifer gets in on the action. I love how she handled her boss, no need to wonder where Justin gets his fiestiness from :)
Author's Response: She always was a strong woman and now after taking lessons from Brian she's flat out dangerous. Thanks Kat; your chapter reviews are priceless.
Hugs!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Who's for Dinner?
Yeah!! Just what I was hoping for with Vangard!! Throwing in the towel. What a day for Kinnetic! Glad Gus Gus is ok!
Author's Response: Now that he's in the drain Mel moves in for the kill. Gus is a child who will do things creating an emergency in seconds. He's a kid; that his job. Thank you Kat.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 36: All Choked Up
Ford! WOW! I really want to know Vangards reaction to that. Kinnetic is kicking ass big time!
I hope Gus Gus will be ok!
Author's Response: Just a close call with a child. Carl's on top of it. Our boys are just beginning to take over the ad world. Vangard's shit right now.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
It was so hot and sultry today, we stayed at the beach all the day and now around the pool (and even in the pool for some of us, so don’t wait reviews from Gex yet ;) ).
Wow... This is an excellent chapter full of surprises ! Jennifer is a member of the upper class. It would have been logical to see her with a conventional gift and Ted with a sexual gift... I burst out laughing. JTS, really, you're a wonderful devil. Jennifer emerges from the dark. She’s going to make the pillows blush... Go, my girl !
I just want to know the reaction of his beloved ...
Big kisses
Author's Response: I"m so happy to see you reading Ihintza. Hundreds read the story and don't leave 2 words for a review. You wonder folks who do take the time are carrying this story. I thought Jennifer could handle being on top of the world and her man. Ted, is the accountant and practical one. He loves his Blake tight and wouldn't stretch him with toy. Brian knew the best way to make Blake feel equal in the relationship was give him a business ship of his own to command. The clinic will solidify their relationship.
Thank you so very much for reviewing. It means so much to me and Mr. Hamster.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 35: A Star is Born
Barrack the hero, very clever!
Now Jerry is loving being a bottom, glad he had a good first experience with that.
Love seeing Justin using his new last name :)
Author's Response: Thank God you're back Kat! Mr. Hamster was going into major withdrawals because nobody would leave him a line to snort. He pulled your review to his little nose and loaded up the rail in one draw. Then it hit him and his back in his wheel spinning out the next chapter; I think you saved my plot hamster's life today.
Thank you for commenting. Justin is very proud to be a Kinney as he has no feelings for his father or desire to carry on his name. Jerry had a wonderful boy/man for his first top and will probably be the only man who ever tops him too. They're in love forever just like Brian and Justin.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 72: It depends who I'm With
love it i agree with gus... if i'm asking about a friend and were my daddies are answer the question , i'm not intrested in a lesson. kind of suprised jerry didn't know about the safty risk the directer was doing on the set. but glade nobody got reeeealy hurt.
Author's Response: Action movies are dangerous to film. More accidents happen then we know about. All actors agree not to sue the studio if they get hurt. Many stunts can be very dangerous. I know Daniel Radclifffe has had several injuries but nothing serious. He said the broom scenes are some of the hardest to shoot and they have a giant air mattress under them and often fall off the brooms needing the mattress to break their fall. Rupert sprained his wrist filming Half Blood Prince falling off his broom. Thanks for commenting nicole.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
OUCH!!!!
Big brother in action, so much for secret Tyler & Molly.
Matt saved by Mark. It's gotta be hurts.
Thank you JT the best writer ever & Mr Hamster the master of the plot twister. Genius!
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: They really don't have to hide their love; Tyler is a little shy since this is his first real girl friend. He doesn't want his parents know he's having sex so Molly can still visit. Duh? Isn't this why they created sleep overs for kids in heat? HA! New chapter on the way.
Mr. Hamster takes a low bow and waves to the kind reader who holds his hamster heart. Kisses back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 71: Action on the Set
ok love the jusitn big brother you beter not hurt my sister... i just wounder does tyler know molly has her own money posiblie billions of her own coming and trying to get in on that...hmmmm
and i thought jerry and mark's relationship was top secret why how he tell a homaphob nurse just state who you are who you want to see and then threten to buy the hospital to fire or just have / get her fired. oooo just thought what if matt's wife comes racing in and finds out about the movie and love seens ooooo..
3 story fix in one day wooohoo :D
Author's Response: Tyler comes from a very wealthy family himself; money isn't on his mind. Jerry was so upset he didn't give a shit who finds out about him and Mark. He was going to see his injured lover over her dead body. Matt's wife knows about the movie and sex scenes; it's only acting and she's quite certain her husband is straight; he proves it damn near every night. I have another chapter cooking in the pot right now. Thanks for commenting nicole very much.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
Hmmm.... Like brother, like sister??
Can't wait..
Kiss, kiss
Author's Response: Yes, those Taylor kids love their men. They do it so well too. Was the fact Tyler looked so much like a young Brian part of the equation of love? I hope mother Taylor can handle the next one's hormones better than she handled the first one. Thanks so much for your review complicated. Mr. Hamster is blowing kisses back.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
WOW!! OH!! OH!! OH!! WOW!!
Excellent!!
Have you found your size Mr Hamster??
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting complicated. Mr. Hamster says you can help him find his size; now he's blushing beet red.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
molly.... molly.... molly, i don't know what to say...no condom... woooow well i guess you'll be seeing alot of him in the next 9 months and 18+ years.
Author's Response: Ha! Molly had the sense to get birth control first. She'll be seeing lots of Tyler anyway; they're very much in love. Justin takes his vision to the next level, next chapter; going up right now! Thanks for commenting nicole.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 70: Lovers
oh oh i can sens some trouble in paradise with Molly and Tyler, a pregnancy maybe i dont know.
Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Molly said she was on the pill. Girls can get them in America from Planned Parenthood clinics without a parent's permission. She's awfully young to get knocked up. Justin has other concerns about Tyler which he explores in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting Buffytess.
Hugs Back!
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
jen....jen...watch out... i jope u got the prenup signed and he gets nothing...
why do i feel charles is going to cheat with a guy? if so i hope justin rips him a new one.
Author's Response: Tucker is straight and has no interest in a man. You might be surprised how many men like to have their women strap on and take them. It's more common then many people realize. Tucker's very happy with his Jennifer. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 34: Rodeo Drive
That picture makes me miss living in L.A.!! Great advice from Auntie Em, I'm glad Tony admits that he misses Mark and regrets what he did.
OK, so like I was totally saying something about Jerry being honest and how doing so would be fair to his wife. Then like you totally threw in the little item of her getting it on with the pool boy. Yea, don't feel bad for her anymore, the kids yea, but the fact that she was happy about the divorce...Jerry is better off.
Gus saying groovy was too cute. Loved their family Sunday brunch.
Author's Response: Who could miss living in the Jungle? I'd miss living in Malibu maybe. I lived in San Diego for 8 years and loved it. I visited LA many times with friends in the Hills. Back then a round trip ticket on PSA was only $35. Jerry was ready to leave her without Mark in his life; this made his rebound positive and good. He found the love of his life and they'll be very happy together.
Gus is adorable. He's going to be a real heart breaker when he gets older.
Thanks so much for your great comments Kat.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 33: Wedding Night
What an amazing life for both couples. I guess Jerry really did fall in love at first sight. I really hope he and Mark will be happy together.
I knew Brian and Justin's first time without condoms would be special.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked this chapter. Jerry is having the love of his life and Mark could not have landed a better man too. Tony will be ok later; you'll see. Brian and Justin are forever committed to no condoms again. It's that goooooood! Thanks Kat.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Billionaire's Puppy
WOW! Just like that?! I hate to see a family torn apart, but Jerry has to be true to himself and fair to his wife. I think He and Mark may make a cute couple.
Author's Response: Things happen fast on that level and a billionaire has the personal power to get what he wants. He was lucky Tony cheated on Mark recently. The boys weren't that much in love; more in lust. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
Wow!!!...didn't see this coming. However, it was sooo hot. Jennife is a very naughty woman. :D Well done !!!!!!!
Author's Response: I felt a woman on top of the world deserved to top her man too. hehehehe Thanks for commenting kwil.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reception
Thank goodness Debbie held the reigns on Joan! I will say Saint Joan did behave herself for the most part and I'm glad she got to see how successful and happy Brian is and to see the home he and Justin have created for themselves with the family.
Author's Response: Joan knew Brian had money but she had no idea how much or how stable he was with a family and all. She adored Gus and will behave to see him. Thanks for reviewing Kat; I love to read your comments.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Over
drat.... can't type
hope tucker isn't switching sides..... sounds like he REALLY enjoyed it, even though he says he knew he was straight at age 18. perhaps jen needs to add a rabbit/butterfly to the 'belt' to make it more fun for her. :-)
Author's Response: I wondered if you would want Jenn to be hurt like that. Thanks for the self-correction add. Jennifer had a wonderful time pleasing her man. I predict their first argument as a married couple is who gets on bottom first! hehehehe Who would have thougtht Tucker was a size queen in heart? Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Forever Yours
What a wonderful ceremony! Joan being there was a great twist. I hope she doesn't try to cause trouble for them. Also loved Teddy being the best man and Daph too!
Author's Response: Thank you Kat; I did a lot of research for that chapter to make it accurate. I did keep it brief as far as Catholic weddings go. Joan will be good if she wants any contact with her grandson.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
hope tucker is switching sides.....
Author's Response: Huh? Surely not!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 69: Just my Size
glad the grooms to be liked their wedding gifts. can't wait to see how jenn responds when it's her turn.
Author's Response: Tucker's naturally gifted without a strap on. She's very happy with the real thing. Thank you for commenting sjmpets3.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
GOSH! It's just 'sexmazing'!! The only place I never thought see Justin's mother is in a sex shop ... Jenny, Jenny, Jenny ...
JT, JT, JT .... (* grin *)
I almost forget the rest of the chapter which is wonderful
Thanks you my dear for this
Gehexan
Author's Response: The secret lives we live from others. Even Jennifer walks on the wild side. It must be really late in France right now; like 2 am? So good to see your review comments Gehexan; I'm writing the next chapter after catching up on my reviews. Kinky Jennifer has proven to be a popular plot twist. Kiss your man for me.
Love back!
Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
oh wow. just wow.
Author's Response: Wow back! Thanks for the review darkraven.
Reviewer: chris (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
JT Where were you when the show was on the air… that’s how damn good you are.
You need to be writing shit for Showtime or HBO damn both.
Love your work.
Author's Response: Thank you Chris. Novels and scripts are two different animals to make up. I know I sure didn't like how they ended QAF. Thank you for reading my story and reviewing.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
I don't blame B, I would want the Kinnetik name on their tower too. IMO it will look a lot better than UMPC.
I would have loved to work on Angel & Gary's project.
I had to laugh at how furtive Jenn was acting when leaving the building to go to the shop, but then brazenly made her purchase. And lawdy, lawdy, Mother Tucker, I didn't know that about you! But then again she is J's mom, so I really shouldn't be so surprised. I think a hot time is forthcoming. *g*
Author's Response: With a penname having secrets in it; there should be some surprises in my novels. Jennifer will seek information before her night with Tucker. Thanks so much for your comments cakdg.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
Details please... Lots and lots of juicy details......
Author's Response: Hehehe! I'll have to remember this review when I write the next chapter. Thanks Eileen for commenting. Your wish is my command.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
I am so loving it!!! (just thinking of it make me so hot)
Excellent!
Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated for commenting here. This next part of the story should tickle some readers quite well.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
OMG! remarkable chapter, with all the details. I learn so much today about Ireland.
Bravo JT. Brilliant Mr Hamster. Very good job.
Love you.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster does a River Dance and then takes a bow.
Love you back!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
That's f^%^%$# hot and let me say as I girl who popped her guys cherry, it was and continues to be a pleasure. Cannot wait for more!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: I'm hoping this plot line gets my girls going Carlly. Tucker is in for a fun night of surrender. Writing the next chapter very soon; after catching up on my wonderful reviews. Thank you so much for commenting.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
haha you go jennifer.. great chapter JT..
have a nice sleep JT...
Author's Response: Thanks Lesley! Jennifer is ready..almost; she needs a few pointers first from a friend. I slept great and will work on the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
hmmmm, jennifer you naughty girl.... ideas
Author's Response: A powerful woman should enjoy being on top now and then. Jennifer is fulfilling a fantasy of hers soon.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
Wow, a superb chapter. And I'm like my sis (but without tears!) So good memories. A beautiful country with some beautiful guy ;)... This country has a mythical beauty. There, you feel far from everything.
I like a little less England even though I often go to London .. On the other hand, I love Wales I discovered 2 years ago... and Scotland where I have a very good friend
Thank you for all this good memories
I love you too
Gehexan
Author's Response: I've never been to Ireland although I'm half Irish, half English. I have been to London twice, Oxford, New Castle, and Edinburgh Scotland and seen the Military Tattoo show there.
Love you back!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
ted's gift for blake is very sweet. jennifer's gift for tucker, maybe she should get some pointers from the boys on how to loosen him up. hahaha. can't help but smile at that thought.
Author's Response: Jennifer gets help but not from Brian or Justin; auntie Em to the rescue! You foresaw my plot girl. Thank you so much for commenting; I'm honored you're reading me.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Everything is brilliant in this chapter, really ... They have the contract, they can own the tower free and clear. Justin will be on top because it's his team that wins the race. (with a great idea and more, it's true !)
I like the discussion between Jerry and Mark. The film will be a box office hit…
Super good chapter
Big love
Gehexan
Author's Response: Now Kinnetik is well established with plenty of clients to service. Our boys are doing very well now. The Rage movie will be very special and shocking to some people.
Big love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
You know what... Well, I have tears in my eyes because, there, you see, full of exceptional memories come back up. I have a real crush on this country and people, and music (The Dubliners, you know ? I love…). I’m already gone twice. One with my hubby and son on a package tour (almost the same as Brian and Justin, 12 day, Dublin to Dublin). A second time, 1 month with all the family, (roughly the same circuit, more developed, staying in Bed&Breakfasts. We met friendly and welcoming people). It’s a magical country with a real human warmth... I plan to return there again and again... and again
A theorie about the origin of the Basque people, based on DNA, says the Basque genetic markers reveal a very strong relationship with the Celtic peoples of Ireland, Wales and Cornwall… Well, hence my love ;) !
JT, I love you so much
Author's Response: Thank you Ihintza for your comments. Both the Irish and Basque or so passionate about life I can believe they are genically related closely. I hope to someday visit Ireland if health permits me to.
Love back!
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems
Well, Justin in competition with Brian (good bet !)... Who will win ? Justin’s team or Brian’s ?? Surprise… The two are motivated.
I love the filming. Mark worried about a possible woody... Hey, dude, if I had Matt around me…, I get a Woody too !... Ho, ho ! Matt / Rage / JT / Mark… Soooooooooo good...
Big big hug
Gehexan
PS: To answer your comment CH 62 - All my tests are negative (the last in early July) but for now I'm under « observation ». I cheated on Tomás a few time (most recently last June - I know ... No need to add… It almost cost me my guy). Tomás is so nice. He is 32 and he is very patient with me (He’s my older’s best friend since childhood so he knows me well, very well). He told me « if you are a good boy, it will be your Christmas’ gift but after only you and me… The ball's in your court ». I’m ready… I’m so ready…
Author's Response: Thanks Gehexan for your comments. They love to make bets and deals for sex; after being together for over 5 years it spices up their sex lives and it's good for business. Mark had fun filming with Matt the sex scenes and they were hot. Take the advice of an old gay man who has made the same mistakes; stay on the path you're on and your life will be so much better for it. I can't remark on something I've done myself at your age. I'm sure you'll be fine and Thomas sounds wonderful; I wonder your age however. Thanks again for your reviewing support to my novel.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
I’m happy for the account and, OMG, Justin’s team won... Brian, your lover desserves his recompense.
Hey, now I know what you mean when it comes to "booty":)
I love the chapter
All my love
Author's Response: The term booty to my knowledge comes from African American Soul music from the early 70s; that's were I first heard the term used in songs and not as the looting riches of pirates. Brian acts like he doesn't want to get topped but he really loves it when Justin takes him.
Love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 65: Problems
The meal is finished, the children are in bed. We settled face to face to read your updates...
This competition is motivating... I hope they find the perfect idea for Boeing.
I loved the exchange between Matt and Mark.
Weird idea that Emmett’s...
Great chapter,
A lot of kisses
Author's Response: Sounds like a peaceful time in France tonight. Our lovers enjoy bringing sex into their business activities any way they can. Emmett's a nut; especially after he gets laid.
Kisses back!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 68: Gifts for the Brides
ROTFLMAO!!!!! You go girl! I can't wait for the next chapter. Fucking brilliant JT.
Author's Response: I was laughing when I wrote it too. The thought of Mother Tucker wearing a strap on rips me up. Thanks for commenting Dave.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
nice.
Author's Response: Danke; working on the next chapter now. Sleep might delay me however.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
I've been to several countries in Europe (some business, mostly pleasure), but haven't made it to Ireland yet, except for an emergency landing at Shannon airport due to bad weather (I don't think that counts *g*). Now, I don't have enough time or patience, and with the aggravation flying creates (between waits/delays at airports and in planes, jetlag, etc), I'm opting more to stay home and find delights that are reachable by car. However, if I could travel like B&J I'm sure I would reconsider *g*.
Lovely trip, glad that Gus could come to.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you cakdg for commenting. I love the UK and wanted to include it in the story since Brian is Irish. Wouldn't we all like to travel like our boys!
Hugs!
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Team Justin comes through again and the victor gets the booty. Lol.
Nice to see the updates of what's going on with the other characters, too.
Great! On to the next...
Author's Response: Brian never had a chance against the imaginations of the aritistic department. It not like they have to make sex deals to have sex; but after 5+ years of doing it, this is their way to spice up their sex life still. Besides; it's good for business. hehehehehe
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 67: Ireland
great chapters jt. i've always wanted to visit ireland myself.. the way you described it, sounds like it would be a great place to visit..
on with the show... or in this case the story..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley. Ireland is a wonderful place and so is England. I'd love to live there but health requires I stay in the USA.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Brilliant!!
Good job Gary, Allen & Angle.
Kiss, Kiss.
Author's Response: Those boys are pretty smart. Brian will be pleased.
Kisses Back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 65: Problems
The sex scene is kinda funny with the sock (I think).
Can't wait to see what the ad for the boeing gonna be.
Excellent.
Author's Response: Kind of a fill in chapter moving the plot forward and adding new details to the story. Soon we just forward in time to June and our boys with Gus go to Ireland for 12 days.
Hugs!
Reviewer: David (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 66: Landing Boeing
Glad to see they got Boeing and nice how they did it avoiding the negative stuff about their aircraft. I like how you go from scene to scene keeping us informed what''s happening with other people. Thank for the update.
Author's Response: "When you don't have an ad ready, kiss their asses." ~Brian Kinney
Glad you like the scene changes of the story; I hope it adds more entertainment for the readers as we follow many characters in time. Thank you for commenting Dave.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 65: Problems
loved Em, only he could think up a German nazi/ polish pow wedding theme LOL
Matt and Mark talking/ acting was pretty funny and informative too.
Author's Response: Emmett is a riot after having sex and Ted could see it. I've had friends who are actors and know a few tricks of the trade to add to the story's details that are accurate; the nylon sock is a real thing they use filming sex scenes for example. Thanks for commenting alys.
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