Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
Well Justin is embracing his life to the full. He has become the moral compass of embraced boys, thereby ensuring the power stays within. Justin is also enjoying the power he has as a purple blood dispensing justice and wisdom beyond his years. This is a really enjoyable story Bob thanks :) Chris
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing; more going up today.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
I thought there was also a chapter 28 posted earlier, was I seeing things or was it removed?! I REALLY hope it's the latter!!
Author's Response: I have to change a character's name; it will be re-posted today; sorrry about that and thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: alyssa_2009 (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
I read chapter 28 earlier, why did you take it down? Either way, awesome chappie, very very steamy, lol <3
Author's Response: It will be re-posted today with a new character name; thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
Great chapters. Looking forward to seeing how the Sunshine's music affects the embraced NYers.
Author's Response: Thank you; Sunshine will certainly make them think.
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
I love each and every twist and turn your story has taken. I'm so glad Em hasn't embraced any of his lost boys... There sweet and everything but Em needs someone who truly wants only him. Oh and I love that rodney and vic found someone to share! Okay I'm goinig to shutup now, Hope you had a lovely weekend! Thankyou so much for all the updates *hugs*
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
DAMN YOU CAN WRITE! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response: I'm delighted you liked it. I'm really fond of the next chapter as it's a major turning point in the story. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
I love you! You lovely gay man you! MORE MORE MORE. As soon as you are able of course! Love ya lots! I can't wait until your next vampire story. You write gay vampire stories wonderfully. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Here comes a whopper of a chapter! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 26: As Time Goes On
what a way to spend a rainy sunday afternoon. ready any time you are.
Author's Response: Next chapter: "He Embraced Me"
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 26: As Time Goes On
I hope you are doing well today. I'm ok, just a little tired. This chapter was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! I want MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Today will be at least a triple hitter for my readers. Enjoy! I wrote last night like a hooker smokes dope.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
Like where the story is going. Lots of new things happening here. I don't care about a few typos. Keep up the fast updates for us.
Author's Response: Thank you boi. Some readers want a beta and I have to consider it. If I produce fast enough and have a beta who will quickly work with me there should be very little delay. I'm working on the next chapter now. Thanks for reviewing and rating again. You guys are very important to us writers.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
cajsa was smart to listen to justin. i don't think young is the direction for emmett to go. will be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I truly listen to the ideas of my readers. You'll see Emmett having second thoughts about a young lover. Thanks for reviewing, and rating, and showing your support.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
cajsa was smart to listen to justin. i don't think young is the direction for emmett to go. will be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you, see answer above
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
I loved it! More when you get a chance, please! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Hea Girl! Love to hear from you. I'm working on the next chapter now and speeding up the time a bit. I'm so happy my story still pleases you and your support means so much to me.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
I'm sorry I haven't commented earlier. I really like this story. It's very interesint and well thought out. I recomend you find a Beta, it makes the reading experience better, though.
Author's Response: I have had many readers perfer faster updates of new chapters with a few flaws compared to slower updates with perfect chapters. I am seriously considering the help of a beta when I find someone who can work quickly with me to not delay bringing my readers the quick updates they are now expecting from me. I'm very pleased you like the story and I too have enjoyed your work. I hope to find the time to read more as studying other writers helps with with ideaa and techniques to work with.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 25: Cajsa’s Decision
Excellangt chapter. Hope Em and Andy work out, or someone for Em. Love how Justin talked w/ Cajsa. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
Hey JTSecrets ! I love what you did in this chapter, the twist you gave to the Ideas !!! I just find its not clear enough the moment that the couple leave NY to go back to Pittsburgh! I had to read that part twice to realise they were back home. But maybe its just me. Great work! The half turning idea to possibly cure Justin is awesome !!! Keep it up JT! Jersey :))
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll check the story an perhaps add a transistion paragraph to make it clear. The flu plot came from a reader's idea. I'm dealing with a cold too which helped. I'm working on the next chapter.
Reviewer: um (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
I really don't mean to nit-pick, and I am enjoying your plot etc. But do you have a beta reader? They would catch some of the grammar and spelling errors. I am really not trying to be bitchy, so please don't be offended.
Author's Response: I don't have a beta reader now. Most of my readers have preferred fast chapters with a few typos comparied to slow perfect chapters. I'm using an older version of Word that is horrible for spelling and English corrections. Since this may be a much longer novel I may get a beta as one reader has offered to do it. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
this was a great chapter. all is well except for cajsa. maybe justin can give him a message that will help him change his mind.
Author's Response: you are such a mind reader! next chappie half down; waiting for my sleeping pill to kick in and found your review. love u girl!
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
Ahh poor justin and cajsa, being so sick, and all those innocent ppl dying. Brian should have just turned justin and he would have been better off. oh well. great chapter, can't wait for some more...
Author's Response: Been better off? Thristing for blood, not able to feed brian or be his hot blooded lover? No able to make babies? This way Justin has all the advantages of being a vampire without any of the negatives. I respectfully must disagree with you. Thanks for reviewing and stating your opinion too. I'm going have to get some sleep before finishing the next chapter. Everything will work out.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
Oh no, that's not going to bode well if Cajsa turns. He's too rash and immature. I fear for his and Jordan's relationship . So happy Justin is better and Brian didn't have to turn him! Great, scary!, chapter!
Author's Response: Gotcha! A wonderful reader gave me the basic idea and my gerbil took off with it. Thanks for reviewing again. I'll try to make another chapter today if my eyes stay opened.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
Cajsa, just do the partial turning you idiot! I love this chapter! More when you can. Love ya man! XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Heah! Have to have a bit of drama for the story! Love u back!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
What a great idea using the s.flu, glad Justin 'recovered' quickly, loved the 1/2 turning idea. Looking forward to see what comes next. Glad you flu left so quick.
Author's Response: TheraFlu is amazing stuff. Thanks for reviewing. And I only got a bad cold. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
That was good shit to read. Most excellent story line.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
Wow! You evil evil writer you. How dare you sneak us a cliffe. Great chapter and I can't wait for the followup. I got a wicked fever reading it.
Author's Response: New chapter is up now. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: Gene (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
I looked for new chapters before leaving for school. This one is looking very serious. Kind of a damned if they do and damned if they don't catch 22 scene. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Poor Justin and Cajsa. And the other humans in NY dying. I take it the swine flu inspired this chapter?
Author's Response: My own cold and the swine flu plus a fan's ideas for the story made it possible. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
OH SHIT! IF YOU KILL MY JUSTIN I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU PAY. NEXT CHAPTER SOON JT OR ELSE! heheheehehehe
Author's Response: Don't sweat dude. I love Justin just as much as you do.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
Well that is scary for Brian poor Justin on the brink of death. Looks like we are going to move into another level with the Secui Verto turning. Look forward to the next chapter, cheers Chris
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!!!! I do a happy dance with each new one I see. Over a 1,000 people have read the first chapter and nearly 300 are regulars but only a handful take the few seconds it takes to make a review and encourge a writer. The next chapter is almost finished as I stayed up all night just for Justin and Cajsa.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
oh my god! that is just cruel leaving it like that. I thought you liked me. Please get a new chapter or add to this one soon. The suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: type type type type soon type type type.........thanks for reviewing and rating.....type type type type....
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
you have to make justin get better on his own. the ritual may kill him if brian doesn't turn him fully. you can't let that happen. brian will be lost.
Author's Response: It's a paradox of a situation for them. If Justin doesn't come out of the coma he can't even drink the mouthful of blood. Medically speaking his condition is now grave which is between critical and dead. Thanks for reviewing. I hope to get the next chapter done tonight if my own damn cold permits me to.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
Finished the last two chapters. I've bookmarked this story will watch for the updates. I wonder how rich Emmett is.
Author's Response: Emmett is fairly new vampire and hasn't live long enough to build great wealth but he's comfortable at just under a million cash from his parents' estate.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
Each chapter builds on the last one. This one has so much going on. I like how the universe of vampires are so caring for each other.
Author's Response: They truly are a lovely bunch of bloodsuckers in my universe. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom
Michael's death gave me a chill it was so grapic and horrible. In this chapter the sex scene was very moist :)
Author's Response: maybe a towel alert was in order for that chapter :P
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
I liked this chapter very much. FYI Trump World Tower has only 72 floors but this is fiction so whatever. The double meaning at the end between Jordan and Brian was most interesting.
Author's Response: I didn't want to make anyone living in the tower a vampire! Thus a ficticious floor. Victor is too proud to admit he has a problem so he speaks double talk as he seeks help. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
Very interesting story going on. NY will be different for sure.
Author's Response: Justin has a way of leaving an impression on people. Thanks for reviewing again boi.
Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
Interesting chapters to read & a great conversation you made happen between Cajsa and Justin ! Excellent work JTSecrets ! Thank you and I hope RL is being nicer with you ! Take care, Jersey :))
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. RL has given me a cold so I can't say when I'll be up to writing another chapter for a while.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
Hot! You have delivered another great chapter. I look forward to reading more! I love how Justin is giving a couple who have been together for 500 years advice. That's ironic!
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. I'm fighting a cold and will write again when it passes.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
nice chapter. justin and brian should go to the empire state building together at night.
Author's Response: sounds like an excellent plan; granted!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
things are going to be changing in NY now that brian and justin are regular visitors. i think everyone involved will be happier. i like how the embraced took control of their lovers. nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review; the next chapter is more plot development of the lover's lives in New York. Justin will get the needed healing for his dareair and next chapter he'll be back at it again with Brian's huge assistance!
Reviewer: Brian Lover (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
More chapters! *grins* Great way to moralize a horny bunch of boys. Very neat plot going on here. Justin is so smart.
Author's Response: Glad to see you're still reading my story. Our Justin is not the typical blond by any means (and I never believed that crap anyway). I'm working on the next chapter now which is important plot details for the future of our lovers in New York. Thanks for your review Brian Lover.
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
orgasm, not orgasism or organism
Author's Response: You caught me allowing Word 98 to mess me up. Thanks for info.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
lol loved this chapter. It was just perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Gina. I'm glad you approve the direction were going in with the boys of New York. Justin is a breath of fresh air for a stale smoggy city. Jordan and Mark are thrilled with the new maturity of their boys. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
HOT! HOT! HOT!(This being said while drool runs down my cheek) This chapter was excellent. I love that you're introducing a sense of morals into their relationships. Thanks! MORE MORE MORE. Whenever you get a chance. Love ya! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: type type type type soon type type type type.....thanks for reviewing and rating again! type....
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
Damn that was hot!!!!!
Author's Response: I would reveal too much to say where the ending for this chapter came from! Thanks again for reviewing and rating boi.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
After reading ad nauseam fan fiction of Brian and Justin canon copy plots you can’t imagine my happiness to find this over the top wild story. It is so original and unique in details and the vampire Brian and slave boy Justin are too hot almost for the Internet. I have never posted a comment before but must let you know this is one hot, stimulating, story that grabs the reader making me want more of it. I have a hard time seeing this as only your second attempt at writing. Great work JT!
Author's Response: You're too kind Jane. I truly appreciate your review and hope you read and enjoy more of this novel in the making.
Reviewer: Gene (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
Great to find two more chapters up. Have to leave soon but wanted to say thanks for writing again so fast.
Author's Response: I have to make a better balance with RL yet still write often. Thanks again for your review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
nice chapter. all are safe and protected. poor craig. in for so much trouble and pain. ha!
Author's Response: Craig is soon in a world of trouble. Justin and Jennifer were giving the highest honor an embraced lover can receive from a vampire and barely know it. Molly sees the love between and wants to learn more about it for herself. Thank you so much again for your review and rating me. Readers who give me feedback like yourself motivate me to create for you.
Reviewer: FrankUSA (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
Great chapter with new information. I really like where this story is headed to. Take care of RL and keep kicking out great reads. Your writing a fanfiction classic and it's hot to watch it happen.
Author's Response: Is there such a thing as a classic in fandom? Thanks for the high compliment though. New chapter just posted and it's the longest one yet. Thanks for your continued reviews; they're important for writers to get.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
Excellant chapter. Loved the end, Jen talking to Justin about NY, the release from death rite for both Jen and Justin and the explanation from Brian as to why it wasn't done publicly. Hope you enjoyed your break. We missed you.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
A good writer can't stop, It's in your blood dude! Thanks for coming back to life.
Author's Response: You make a valid point. I get antsy if I don't write. Thanks for reviewing and rating again.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
That was fantastic. I love the love of family you put into your stories. The Pittsburgh coven reminds me of my Rivendel family. Without them, I wouldn't have family but my little sis. Also the sex was nice and romantic in this chapter. I can't wait to read more but please do it when your able and not when you're sneaking. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Our lovers continue to find new ways to love each other. Vampires in my AU are very family orientated with each other. I'm not really sneaking around on Muse; it's impossible to hide with his Soloflex gym in the same room with my computer. I've gotten enough RL issues settled to have some time to write tonight. Thanks again for reviewing Vikinglass24; I'm always delighted to hear from you too.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
Very glad to see a new chapter posted. You added more details making this universe more real for the readers and continued the story line at the same time. It is good Debbie isn't hurting about Michael's death. Thanks for giving us a new chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you George; I feared too much sex and not enough story plot would make for a boring read soon. Don't worry; Brian and Justin won't slow down for the next two hundred years! :P Thanks for reviewing and rating me again. It means a lot to me.
Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
"Staff" lol good one
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: RCA (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
I like this story it's different w/ a bit of originality. I'm with Curious Reader though, this chapter would've kept me reading if not for the borderline racism, since 'dark meat' is barely good enough for even the wolves.
Author's Response: Actually it was the straight vampires who did not want them. As said in the previous review it came from a common statement in the gay world. I agree the term "dark meat" has a negative quality and will remove it.
Reviewer: curious reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
whats up with the "dark meat" comment and Justin laughing? I would think that you as the author and Justin, as your character, would be above such tasteless humor. Guess I was wrong
Author's Response: The term dark meat is from an inside gay joke as it is a phrase saying "I don't sleep with black people. Justin laughed hearing they were going to the wolves. I agree the comment is tasteless and will change it.
Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
Hey, The last few chapters have been INTENSE dude! :) First, the orgy in NYC...hot! Michael's execution... brutal,but totally deserving.I'm glad he's gone, and can't cause any more to Justin or anyone else! The robbery at the diner... I found that funny, how B&J just overtook the bad men. You said you're taking some time off, well we will miss you while you're gone. But good luck with RL stuff. Come back soon though! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing; will be back soon.
Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
Hello JTSecrets! Still like it ! Its nice to see what happens with other couples and how Brian and Justin's are involved ! I'm wondering if there is anything that could threaten Justin's life since he is so powerful(despite a vampire) ? Do you plan to use more of his mind powers in the story ? How long as it been since B/J are together (for me its been 2-3 weeks...) is this right ? I'd also love to see Brians reaction with Justin's painting of them... And, and, and... I'm buzzzing with questions, LOL! Keep it coming ! Jersey :))
Author's Response: They are pushing a month together. Yes to the mind powers. Justin threatened? Maybe. Thanks for reminding me about the painting.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
Once again an excellent chapter. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank u so much! I started the next chappie but my eyes are getting heavy and my vampire won't let me have any more life force tonight so I have to sleep. Will try to bring you more tomorrow. Love u girl!
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
very erotic and this was just the frist chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you sub; I very much value your opinion. Enjoy the ride; Justin does!
Reviewer: FrankUSA (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
I was surprised to find more chapters so fast. Great action, sex, and storyline. Watching for more.
Author's Response: I aim to please! I can't get another chapter tonight, getting sleepy again but tomorrow I'll get her done. Thanks for your repeative reviews they mean so much to me.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
Can't wait to see how weekending in NY goes for our boys with the other tenants on their floor. Yummy chapter.
Author's Response: I might get three chapters done today! Just started #3. I check online from time to time to see the hits and rapidly approaching 8000! in only 8 days. (does funky chicken all over his office holding his self like Michael Jackson) The next chapter takes care of dinner at Debbie's, Justin's Liberation ceremony (in Latin), and a heart to heart talk between Justin and his Mom. The following chapter will have the next trip to New York with some interesting developments. Let me say Justin bitch slaps the most powerful embraced boys in New York and they love him for it. Thank you for your continued reviews that mean so much to me. :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
it must be heaven for justin to have such hot sex on a daily basis. steve will learn in time. ted needs to talk to brian so brian can teach him the vampire ways.
Author's Response: Just added a final paragraph to this chapter:Never a Dull Moment. Thanks for your reviews and ratings.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
fun fun chapters. anything jennifer needs to know justin can tell her. anything ted needs to learn brian will teach him.
Author's Response: I very much like your ideas. Readers often help me develop a story. Thank you.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Great chapters as always. keep up the great work. Am still loving this fic..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley! There will still be hot B/J sex however I need to build the plot some more. I want to balance the story with sex and adventures. Our boys have to come up for air sometimes (at least Justin does :P )
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
You know every morning when I wake up the first thing I do is check for updates from you!!! I don't want you to burn out, but reading your story each morning makes my day complete. I do hope EM will meet someone who wants to be embraced by him. But I'm torn because I do love that he has his boys..... Anywho keep up the great work, hope you have a lovely day.
Author's Response: I love hearing from you. Ok, a hot twink top is around the corner for Emmett. You'll love it I promise! Thanks for reviewing and rating it so makes my day.
Reviewer: Brian Lover (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Latin is the sexiest language there is. That was an amazing chapter with the turning and the embracement complications. I love how the story isn't all sex but has a detailed interesting plot happening. Thanks for the quick chapters. Every time I log on I look for a new one. I'm hooked too.
Author's Response: I'm nuts about Latin myself. Thanks for reviewing again.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom
Loved the sex in this chapter. You have one wild imagination and keep coming up with new ways to tickle my privates :P More, master, got to read the next chapter now.
Author's Response: Fans like you who review often warm my vampire heart :) Thanks for staying with me boi.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
I loved it! Get some sleep and then feed us some more! Love ya!
Author's Response: How's my best girl today? I'm half way writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Gene (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Wow! I got way behind on chapters and just read them all. This story has me hooked wanting more. Lots of hot action with B and J and the story has interesting things happening in it. I've known boys like Cajsa who get messed up with too much sex and it's so real how you tell it. The sugar daddy can't handle it or fix it. Typical gay problem and you tell it like it is. The comparison of running into a burning building to save a dying child is so true. You don't want to but you feel you have to so this is why Justin lets him feed to connect with him to save him. Great plot. You have added two more embraced couples now, Paul and Ben and Ted and Steve to add to the story line, and of course Jordan and Cajsa makes three new couples. Lots to keep track of. Thanks for the very rapid updates and new chapters. Wish I didn't have to work and could catch them as you post them. I'm looking forward to more chapters JTSecrets.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review and rating me. Cajsa is all too familiar in the gay world for real. Embraced lovers will be like human lovers with problems and growing as couples. Writing the next chapter now. Thanks for repeative reviews Gene.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Another chapter this am, loved it. Love the coversations between Paul and Ben. Loved the turning of Ted, and the subsequent help by Brian during his embracement problems. Love how you've made Ted not the butt of everyones jokes like the show kinda did. Hope Em has fun with his harem, maybe he can find a bear familar to be played with by. Hugs, A
Author's Response: I always like Ted; he's closer to my age and he's educated. I like to add vampire details to make the universe more real for us. Emmett is a sweetheart and will never be lonely again. He wants to be a submissive but a bear won't cut it for him. He really is loving his Twinkie diet very much. Thanks for your constant reviews, they warm my vampire heart!
Reviewer: Jacko (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Just read the new chapters and its so hot. :) This is a great read and I'm looking for more. I like how you show what happens to each person, and your details of truning and embracing were good to know adding rich detail to the story. There's enough plots to keep it interesting and hot hot sex to keep it steamy. You got a winner here JT.
Author's Response: Thanks Jacko! I'm happy to hear from you again. Writing the next chapter now and should post it later today.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom
Another excellant chapter. Love'd the dialog between Molly, Tucker, the boys and Jennifer. The sex was pretty great too. Off to bed now.... stayed up waaaaay too late, definatley worth it. LOL
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a fun chapter to write. Working on the next chapter and perhaps it's posted when you wake for your reading enjoyment. Thanks again for reviewing me.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom
I loved it! That one was excellent because you should us how the embracement was going with Jennifer and Tucker and Molly's reaction to it. I love it! I can't wait to see when Molly gets embraced. 90% of Pittsburgh is going to be so protective of her. I look forward to more.MORE MORE MORE! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I'm delighted you loved it. Molly has a few years but a hot foxy vampire boy is in her future and she will be pleased. Writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: ann_kim (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
After reading some of the reviews; I thought I would comment which I don't do often, this is my first Vampire fic and it's good...don't let anyone, discourage you, my best friend hates Lord of Rings ...and that's also, true for alot of other GOOD story lines. I am enjoying this story and I bet many more who are not commenting but reading are enjoying it as well!!! A story which gets this many people to review it, well it's a GOOD READ, it moves people to speak!
Author's Response: What a very kind review, thank you so much. I've slept and I'm about to create the next chapter tonight. I hope to continue to please you.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just caught up on the last 2 chapters, boys in NY and Mickie's end. The NY storyline is excellant, I can't wait to see what new twist happen because of the boys new friends. Very HOT chapter. An apt if gory end for Mickie. Very graphic. Hopefully this is really the end for him.... don't see any more twists with him. I love reading between the lines and seeing what is coming. I agree w/ moonshadown women.... rather you exceed S.King, he's too predictable that's why I stopped reading him long ago. Loving your stories. Hug the partner if thanks for sharing you with us! A few hours sleep too.... I'll try to wait patiently ;-) A.
Author's Response: That's definitely the end of Michael. Writing the next chapter after catching up on answering reviews. Muse is on the Soloflex gym right now clanging away. Hug delivered with a kiss. He likes this story too and helps with kinky sex scene ideas. I didn't know he had such a naughty streak in him. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
UH, I LOVE IT!!!!!!IT'S HOT AND STEAMY!!! MMMMMMM :-) i love your naughty imagination ;-)
Author's Response: I must have been a nympo in a prior lifetime :P Thanks for reviewing,
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
I am really enjoying this fic as I did your other. At the moment I have been very busy *winks* and hope to get through more of it very soon as I am loving every word.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear from you again. Writing the next chapter tonight. Thanks for reviewing and rating me too.
Reviewer: ali (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just wanted to let you no that i'm loving your story, it's the first vampire fic i've read, not really been interested in them before but yours has me hooked!! The sex is hot and the death scene of Micheal graphic .........great writing!!! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. I hope to get better the more I write. :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
For anyone who thinks Brian is sharing Justin for wealth study the final lines of this chaper and READ BETWEEN THE LINES. Hint: Real estate and Units or Embraced Lovers Justin's CREAM is his WISDOM. Justin is just sticking his toe in the flesh pot for Cajsa to grab on to so they can save him. “Brian, you and I have real estate business to discuss.” Cajsa went back to sucking Justin’s cock. “As long as my embraced isn’t on the table, we very well can.” Brian said firmly. “Cajsa, save that load for me boy. Oh course Brian; I wouldn’t think of it.” “We are interested in becoming neighbors with you Jordan.” “If my kitten can get a cup of fresh cream from time to time, my unit has your name on it free and clearer.” “As a lover of a kitten myself, I would be cruel to deny yours his wise nourishment.” Brian said grinning. Justin smiled and shot a massive load again into Cajsa’s eager mouth. The boy held the load and passed it to his master in a kiss. Then Cajsa went back to loving Justin’s delicious cock some more. "I don’t require a grand palace; just a simple unit perhaps with an east view would be wonderful.” Brian said. “That’s not accurate Brian; your unit is on the other end of the building identical to mine.” Brian looked at Cajsa sucking hard on Justin’s cock and grinned. “Yes, our units do have a lot in common Jordan. We are very lucky vampires.” Jordan extended his wrist again for Brian to feed his ancient blood and Brian began to take his second massive load of power. Justin smiled wickedly and blasted the little boy’s mouth with a drowning load of his honey sweet seed shooting cum out the boy’s nose. Cajsa groaned in erotic happiness. (Which embraced boy is learning to smell the coffee first by cream of wisdom?" “Welcome to your city Brian; New York is at your feet.” "And at my feed. One of our units will be changing." Both vampires laughed. I hope it clears it up for some of you.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
Oh my darling. Ignore those jealous queens! They don't know what the hell they're talking about. I've been reading stories here for years now and I can honestly say, yours are some of the best; original, entertaining and full of some of the hottest B/J sex I've read in a while. I look forward to coming home to see if another chapter is posted. Keep writing love!
Author's Response: Thank you! I just added a different ending to Full Moon Michael... If over 6,000 flies say my shit's good, what else do I need? (Over 6000 read hits in under 6 days) I have to write or I'll become a serial killer or some shit if I try to hold all this in my head (just kidding).
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
I have to admit I'm a sucker for reading other peoples reviews and I love that you comment back! I know people are busy but not enough authors actually do that imho... Anyway I just wanted you to know you haven't lost me, and I was very aware you weren't going to start whoring out the Boys.... But in saying that I think I might be slightly more twisted then I realized, because when I was reading how they punished Michael I couldn't stop laughing. Actually it was more a OH MY GOD *GASP* and then a giggle of delight. I'm afraid my girlfriend now thinks I'm crazy *sigh* Okay I think I've rambled enough (forgive me)
Author's Response: I try to leave clues where I'm making it a mystery read. For example: Justin says "I'm really fucking hungry now." and violently bites his bacon into--as a symbol of him planning to bite off Michael's you know what. I do stuff like that all the time. I did add more clues to Happy Death Day showing the boys are on a mission to save the whore Cajsa who Jordan is too soft and lost control over 500 years. Either some readers thought I was just making Justin sell out to have sex with others or I think I had an anonymous troll or maybe a little of both; valid readers and a troll. It's the usual MW mystery and happens often. I hope not to have feed the wolves or ants for a while; I want a happy story but the cries for Michael's head could not be ignored. Oh my God! Why am I still awake? I'm such an internet junkie now. Cheers!
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
OMG. I totally loved this chapter. What a messy way to go, but michael deserved everything he got. will wait patiently for next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Lesley. I promise a more fun chapter next time. I can't believe I'm still up but I checked my computer one more time and found your review. I added corrections to Happy Death Day to make the plot more clear. Gotta crash now. Hope to write tomorrow if RL allows it.
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
Geeze - shades of Stephen King - you are sooooo a gay man -
Author's Response: Thank you God! A real signed member reviewer. It's been a strange night Moonshadow Woman with a repeative problem different name signer not a member. To even stand in King's shadow is a very high honor. You are too kind and you could not have reviewed at a better time to pick up my spirits. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
The writer has this review box to share comments or to explain a story. Brian and Justin are very much in love and it will not change. They are powerful and wise, and are expanding their relationship to networking with good people and help each other. I don't feel the story has anywhere to go if it's only about smut and violence. I strive to give the readers the sex reads they want and a good plot to enjoy with a meaning. I've learned a valuable lesso tonight not to assume my readers understand my hidden sub-plots without enough clues. I've written so much graphic the real plot got lost along the way. My only excuse is I'm new to writing as this is only my second story to attempt. I hoped to expand to realities of real gay living in this story. If it proves not to be popular I'll stop writing it. Where I got off track: Without explaining it in the story Justin and Brain become friends with Jordan and silently agree to help him with Cajsa who is too deep in the NY embraced sex scene. Brian is not encourging Justin to join it but to rapidly understand it. Justin will not change his principles he will in fact change the scene in NY. I failed to leave enough clues to show the intentions outright. It's a fine line to create a good story without giving it away too soon. I may have failed by only making the sex look important and making it look like Justin and Brian were going to whore around now. I failed to hold my own plot line. I'm learning and will accept my mistakes and try to do better for my readers. Thank you.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
I almost lost my cool and spoiled the story. My bad. Justin will save Cajsa. If you like the story please trust me to make a very good ending of developments. Sometimes we do things for the geater good and Justin is doing that with Cajsa. I removed the statements almost spoiling the story. I've been up almost three days bringing readers fast updates. I should not have lost my cool.
Author's Response: I'm writing in an area I've personally seen determine if some boys live or die. I got too emotional with my own story. I hope you can appreciate the gravity of the plot and overlook my tired emotions. Thank you.
Reviewer: Ash (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
That was horrific. I thought there weren't going to be any detailed scenes with Justin/other - that last chapter was so un-hot it did nothing for me. I dont know if I will continue reading as it seems its going in a direction of Cajsa/Justin sharing even if it is only seed bjs. I must admit I liked it better when Justin only wanted Brian and Brian didnt want anyone touching Justin. It might only be bjs but it still has lost something now, they have let others touch them and its just lost a spark or something and it wasnt just one bj its going to be a repeat thing so yeah not my idea of a good read. Everything else was great
Author's Response: Only in the beginning does Justin allow this. He changes the boy and later they become just good friends. I'm spoiling the plot. Trust me people. Read the previous answer to the last review just before this one. If you were gay you would understand this.
Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
I just got caught up on all the chapters, wow so much is happening. I am not liking the Cajsa/Justin stuff though so I will skip those chapters in future.
Author's Response: I can't please everyone Joey. Justin will be a very positive influence on Cajsa and could not change him with out being close to him. If you were a gay boy or man you would better understand the importance of networking for gay young people. Cajsa is a whore now looking for something he needs and Justin will show the error of his ways and give him what he needs. It's going to be a very important relationship and these two couples B/J and J/C or going to be very powerful together in the future. It would not happen without Justin helping Cajsa. In history empires were created and wars were fought over because of the hearts and love of beautiful boys.
Reviewer: FrankUSA (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
I just got caught up with you. Super end to Michael, I cheered at the fire ants-they burn for hours. The orgy in New York bordered on being illegal in at least 37 states. :) I'm bookmaking this story and waiting for more, like one reviewer said this is like some really addictiive good dope. You got balls JTSecrets.
Author's Response: It's so clear when a gay reader reviews my story. Dreamy eyed girls don't have a clue how we queers make shit happen. Hang in there because I'm losing some fluffy readers and need your gay support to stay strong on this sight.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
OMG so violent! I'll have nightmares after reading that! Please, more fucking in the next chapter! lol It's much more pleasurable to read! (Did I mention this story was addicting?)
Author's Response: More hot love to follow. Had to feed the ants first. Remember it's only fiction. With over three hundred steady readers your not the only one hook on this story!
Reviewer: Jacko (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
HA! This is some good shit. Loved how Michael died, ants suck. Wish I was at that NY orgy.
Author's Response: Fire ants hurt worse then yellow jackets. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
Forgot to review this chappie. Loved the orgy scene. Cajsa a little whore boy and a half; he's such a slut! A multi-million dollar condo in NY for some kittie cream is a very good deal!
Author's Response: See how far a vampire will go to please his embraced boy? Cajsa is a slut big time but it's ok in NY for the embraced to play dirty together. He is the most powerful embraced human in NY until Justin arrives.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
LOVE Cajsa and Jordon. But I have to tell you...MY ass is getting sore with all that fucking Brian is doing to Justin! LOL
Author's Response: As one who once was a happy bottom with an older lover many moons ago, I assure you we can take it with pride!
Reviewer: Brian Lover (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
I hate Michael, always have and this was a great chapter. Not too graphic but sick enough to be excellent. I'm looking for you next chapter with hunger for more of your story.
Author's Response: Late tomorrow, gotta sleep soon.
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
Fire ants! That was wicked dude. I loved it.
Author's Response: Yeah they really hurt big time. That's why they're called fire ants because a bite is like being burned for minutes.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
That was ****ing excellent! I loved it! MORE MORE MORE!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
well given to one who deserved it.
Author's Response: Excuse me; I see now you had not read the Full Moon chapter yet. There was over 3 weeks until the next full moon and the boys had plans to go to New York. Thank you so much for your reviews.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
fun chapter, but i wanted to see the way a vampire who killed an innocent got his just dues. i'm not crazy about cajsa, seems sneaky to me.
Author's Response: Have you ever been bitten by a fire ant? Trust me that was a very bad way to die. Casja is brilliant and talented. He manages billions for his master. He's honest, but just a little over-sexed. Justin will be a very positive influence on Casja. When our lovers get sick of Pittsburgh they have NY to play in now and don't have to deal with their coven's crap when out of town. This new NY friendship is positive. Trust me.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
Over 6,000 read hits in under six days. Thank you readers for showing me my story interest you. I have to sleep now and will bring the next (happy) chapter tomorrow. ~JTSecrets
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
Oh my god! That was ****ing hot! You love ly man you. MORE MORE MORE. But don't tire yourself out. I like you and your stories too much to lose you(I mean this in a purely fag hag kind of way. In my opinion I would be kinda like Daphne in a way without asking my friend to sleep with me. That's a little weird.) Look forward to more. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Just took care of whinny boy and now headed to eat and sleep.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
That was hot! MORE MORE MORE. Are you going to write more on this chapter or leave it like it is? Whatever you do is fine with me. Can't wait to read more. The part where it's all clumped together, makes it a little hard to read though, maybe if you get a chance, could you fix that part? It would just make it easier to read. Love ya lots! I await more of your fantastic story. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: You were reading as I was posting it. It's all fixed now. I may go back and beta it again though. Please over look the typos. I gettng tired.
Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just read all the chapters and have to say....WOW. This is a very good vampire fic, I usually stay away from these fics but yours is too good to stop. I am so anti Michael it's ridiculous, I need and want him dead. I also can't shake the feeling that you have some shocks, surprises or something cooking in the background. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I promise an interesting read. I won't do anything stupid like kill Brian or sometime. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In
After reading your responce to my review of TFOBJ I was very pleased to hear you where going to write another. You could not imagine my happiness to see this here tonight. I love Vampires, always have. I find them hypnotically beautiful and mixing that with B/J sex and love is almost too much for a fangirl to bear, but I will give it a try, lol. Let your young man know I am so sorry for taking his time from you (hehe, not really), but make sure you keep time for him too, hugs, Gerri, xxx.
Author's Response: I'm a big fan of vampire stories myself. I have to sleep one day soon and so their will be a break in writing then but I hope to belt this one out really fast like the last story. I will attempt to push the envelope of gay sexual erotica so my nasty fans can enjoy the B/J smut. In my youth we didn't have HIV to worry about and free love was for real. Someone is helping me with ideas to spice up this story so I'm out of the dog house for now. Out of the mouths of babes...
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In
Now I have to go to my room and lock the freggin door! I got some wood to cut; damn that was hot! Memories are flooding me as I read this sh*t. I don't doubt ur gay now.
Author's Response: What!!!!! YOU thought I was ghost writing as a gay man when I was a girl? Boi cut me some slack. Vampire master Brian and slave Trell Justin have only scratch the surface of their sex play. This story is going to be smokin hot!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In
You lovely man you! Once again, you wrote another hot and amazing chapter. MORE MORE MORE. I love that Brian is so in love with Justin and I can't wait to see what is so special about Justin. Please give me more soon! I look forward to what you write. I have to say though that this is 10x better than The Future. There's just something about it that enthralls you and doesn't let you go. The future is excellent too, but this one is better! Please forgive me if that last part upset you but I promised myself that I would be honest with you. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: This is only my second attempt at writing! How can I be upset? It's the highest compliment to say I'm getting better. I'm beginning to learn you nasty girls love to read out over the top mad wild sex! That was something I didn't like about the show QAF. They did not show the reality how f***ing burtal we make love. The harder, faster, even painful sometimes; we totally love it. When I was much younger I was bi and girls went wild when I gave it to them the gay way. If you watch us have sex for real you might think it's rape, but you can't rape the willing! :P I have an appointment this morning out of town, but I hope to write the next chapter this afternoon.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I love you! Oh my ****ing God! In Brian's words, "That was ****ing hot!" I love the whole vampire background along with how Justin becomes embraced. That was inventive. I also love how you combined one of my favorite type of stories, vampires, with one of my favorite couples, Brian and Justin. MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response: I love to hear from you. You're like my biggest fan! I took some of your vampire story ideas and added some twists of my own. I going way back into my history remembering my hottest lovers to help me create the wild sex scenes of this vampire/boy trell combination of B/J. The second chapter is almost ready for posting. Please keep up your reviews. Love you girlfriend! ~JTSecrets
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Damn that was hot...or cold rather? *giggles* Can't wait to see where you take this one!
Author's Response: Congrads! You got my cherry for this story. I'm slamming a 5 hour energy extra strength and heading into writing the next chappie now.
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