Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 57: Fight to the Death
Enjoyed this chapter. Nothing cuter than a cub Gus & enjoyed everyone's reaction to them changing. I've really been enjoying how you've been portraying Jennifer, she just rolls along w/ any situation. Sort of a nice surprise to see David show up. I say sort of due to he's not one of the good ones but nice surprise w/ how you incorporated him into the story. I just didn't see it coming. I should be used to you flawlessly adding new & "old" characters to your story but the different ways you're bringing in the "known" characters is still surprising me! I'm a little behind w/my reading but I will be caught up by Sunday, if not before! Off to the next installment.....
Author's Response: Thank you Susan very much for reviewing my chapter. I love you guys who take the time to say a few words each chapter. It makes me so happy to know I've entertained you enough to do it for me. I'd add more vampires but Ann Rice refuses to let us use her characters in fan fiction; she thinks it hurts the sales of her books; well what ever. Love to hear from you girl!
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son
Great two chapters. Gus seems to be precocius. Yeah, "good seeds make goods crops". The last title makes me smile because it's just what my father always says, word for word (Love, pa). Thank you for this good time, JT. I go for this long weekend but not without my laptop. That way, I'm absolutely certain not miss your updates. Sea, surf, sun, sex and story. I'm a happy boy in a happy 's' world..;). Good weekend to you too...
Author's Response: You make me remember my happy days many centuries ago living in San Diego and surfing too. I was in my early twenties and got out of the Navy and lived there. Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm working on the next chapter which is sort of a transistion chapter setting the stage with details for the future. Have fun and play safe dude.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son
In the review to Gina you said Tom Adams and I think you mean Ken Arnold. Great story JTS.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've been up all night and did make the name mistake. Thanks for pointing it out.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son
I so love little Gus! Looks like Justin's school is getting bigger and bigger. So love how they've taken to protecting runaways and unwanted kids. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Gus is cool. The new Pittsburgh campus is 12,000 beds. The NY campus will be 6,000 beds. SF is to be determined but Dracula gave him a billion to play with. Since he took in hustlers and homeless this wasn't new. Tom Adams was new to town and hadn't heared of Sunshine's campus for gay boys and girls yet. Thank you for reviewing Gina.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
loved the NY crowd coming for a Pitts visit. Baby Gus cat in the forest was a great storyline.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Vikinglass24 deserves credit for Gus in the forest. She has great ideas to add to the story.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son
Really cool chapter Love the cats
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing George.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 62: Romania
I get the feeling this bashing is going to really make Justin mad. Thanks for the real fast updates JT.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review George. Justin gets right on the problem fast.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 62: Romania
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you girlfriend! Things will get interesting back in Pittsburgh now.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
Hello you, I followed your advice and I extended my night reading the new chapter... So, short night but hey, it's so good ! Anyway, I had decided not to go to work today... I enjoyed these two incursions into this environment that I'm not too familiar. I smiled 'cause Justin is very smart... Our two lovers can now take some ideas to this world. Lucky boys !!! Again, thanks a lot
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing myhazel_eyes. Shhhhhhh! Don't spoil the plot! Hehehehehehehe!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
to be honest, this BDSM Master/Slave thing is annoying.... and I don´t like the way justin acts.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing rose and giving me your opinion. Justin started out being a slave since the first chapter. The BDSM universe is only one of many ways it can be performed in. Brian and Justin won't get into it that deeply but will learn some things within that universe. This is not turning into a BDSM story per say but will touch on some things from that world. Our lovers are very much different and won't go all the way into it. It's only a small part of the story.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
I have been away for some time having a grand old time but I am back and looking forward to catching up. I have missed it.
Author's Response: It's good to have you back gerri and thanks for reviewing. You have many great chapters to enjoy. I've been writing like crazy.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
very smart Justin.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing alys. Justin's brilliant and has learned more what makes Brian tick thus he can get Brian to do things now he didn't know how to do before. Things are looking up for our lovers.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp
look forward to seeing how Justin takes all this info.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review alys. Justin is getting better being in his role now.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
hihi I'm grinning with Justin Woww wonderful chapters, thanks for writing so fast. I'm totally hooked to the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny. I'm delighted the story pleases you.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
LOL loved the ending of this chapter! So like Justin, topping from the bottom, love it! Loved the back and forth between b/j too. Very entertaining, and educational.
Author's Response: I worked my buns off to get those two chapters just right! BDSM is complicated to explain on the basic level because there is so many levels to it to be explored it's hard not to go into the advance stuff while teaching the ABCs. So much happening now; Brian thinks pain is painful but Justin knows its erotic; Brian thinks domination is going to hurt Justin but he knows it will build Brian's confidence and it shows Justin Brian loves him to lead him; Brian thinks electricity play is shocking into submission and Justin knows it make you have orgasms; Brian thinks bondage is excessive and cruel and Justin knows it's liberating; finally Brian fears BDSM will kill his love and Justin knows it will increase the love and bond they have. Every couple who explore BDSM have there own experience unique to them. Not everyone does it the same way. There is mild, medium and hard core BDSM play. All of it is 90% mental, and only 10% physical. Brian only sees the physical and Justin has the mental down pat and wants to play the physical to increase his knowledge. Justin has his hands full training his Master for a while without letting Brian know he's being trained! I love this shit! Been there; done that; got the t-shirt and wore it out! Once you learn the lessons of BDSM you don't have to play again if you don't want to. Simple. Thank you so much for your reviews and support into this delicate subject not all will enjoy. Our boys will play mild/medium BDSM.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp
absolutely loved this chapter. Very precise in the explination of what it means to be in a M/s relationship. I'm very happy to see Justin falling into the slave role. It will be interesting to see how Brian's training goes.
Author's Response: Justin's a born natural like a duck to water. Brian's the bashful Master to start out with. I love your reviews Gina and I was thinking of you writing these chapters.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
This stuff is so mental. I think Brian has a phobia against taking charge and giving commands. They both have all the information they need but have to get their act together. At this point Justin is more on top of things than Brian who has doubts compared to Justin's confidence. Brian needs time to digest his new knowlege and decide what kind of relationship he and Justin will have. Dracula saw through it all and gave hints to both of them. This is really deep reading.
Author's Response: Nailed it! Thanks for reviewing George.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 59: Vacation
Love the daddy's being all domesticated with their children! It was great to get a little history on Dracula as well. Such a great character! (My family is also from Romania. Think I'm related to dracular? :-)) How exciting this club sounds! I'm very much liking your venture into the bdsm world.
Author's Response: I think you'll love the Boot Camp chapters. Thanks for reviewing and being my fan.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
That was cute, but I understand where Brian is coming from. I think the slave classes can help Justin but I think Brian is already a good Master. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: If you go back and re-read Dracula's last comments; he tells Justin to train Brian because he isn't ready to be a proper Master yet; Justin hears it (between the lines); pulls the emotional sad card, and forces Brian to take charge and order him upstairs for sex. Dracula says "the BDSM universe is mainly to train the master to be wise!" He says it in a way it flys right over Brian's head but not Justin's. Justin learned how to top from the bottom and support and train his Master. The mis-conception many have about that world is the Master is in total charge; the opposite is the reality when the slave is totally dedicated and SMART! He can run the show until the Master is ready to play and perform his role in the learning experience of the BDSM universe. If you remember slave Angel taught Justin how to manage his love; and Master Superior set the new Masters up for a lesson in love for if they can't manage it yet; or if they blindly follow his harsh teaching to surpress it; they don't deserve to be a Master. Things are not what they first appear to be in the BDSM world. Rule number 1: The slave is the real Master but he never admits it! Have I lost you yet?
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp
It was a bad day for me at work. I just came back and I find my comfort : 4 superb chapters. I locked myself in my room with my laptop and I read. I loved intensely. Good work, thank you (and thank you for always taking the time to respond).
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing the chapters! I was posting the newest one as your review came up so be sure you see it all. It's all up now. It's Brian's turn to learn.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp
Just when I think I know where the story is going you shoot into a new direction that creates a new universe within a universe. I've never learned so much about the BDSM world and you never wrote about sex! This was an amazing chapter crammed with interesting details making me wonder where the B/J relationship will evolve to now. Can't wait to read Brian's training.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review George. Most people have no idea the mental involvement of the BDSM world and most have mis-conceptions of that universe and what it tries to accomplish. Brian and Justin are learning about it and have not made a firm commitment to live the lifestyle totally; they can take parts of it to enrich the life they have on many levels without being total BDSM committed to each other. One of the revelations Brian learns in his training is that Justin is mostly already trained! There is a major flaw in the BDSM world that Brian discovers right away in the next chapter making the lifestyle wrong for him and Justin to commit to it completely.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
I totally loved this chapter. I'm glad that melanie is gone, at least out of their life.. And Gus changing into a baby kitty is so cute...
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Lesley. This was a fun chapter to write.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp
Love it! Love it! Love it!
Author's Response: You're welcome slave....I mean reader! hehehehehehe
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 59: Vacation
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you girlfriend. It sets up where the plot is headed to.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
no not really. hobbs is a fucking scum bag, he should die. i hope he dies.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review anon. This is an alternative universe story with out of character behavior. Expect the unexpected.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 57: Fight to the Death
Loved it! I also loved that Jennifer didn't have a problem with having 2 shapeshifting sons and 1 shapeshifting grandson. I also love how brian and justin act towards Gus in jaguar form. so cute!
Author's Response: I'm rather fond of cat families myself. They are so adorable to me. The story needed this chapter to establish the new band, announce the new CD coming out, the extension of adding straight kids at Sunshine High School, and other details. Thanks for reviewing me girlfriend.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
LOVED!!! Kitty Gus, too cute! Loved everything about the chapter! By the way, I JUST noticed the addition to the banner! How long has it been like this?! I noticed Justin's eyes right away & can't believe I had noticed the felines! Hope you're getting enough rest & thanks again for sharing w/ us.
Author's Response: The banner is about 5 days new. Thanks for reviewing and rating this chapter. I so love to hear from you everytime. I slept a good 15 hours and so I'm up now and writing the next chapter or two if my hamster stays on his wheel inside my head and spins out the details.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Excellent chapter, very pleasant. Mel is not going to appreciate being throw out, toss in her ass like that but she deserved it. She's an absolute jerk. Gus is not a f*****g object that gives up somewhere because we don't like it any more, it's a baby boy, for Christ's sake ! Linds is better without her. "Better to be alone than in bad compagny"
Author's Response: Thanks for your review myhazel_eyes. Wow! This chapter really hit a home run with my readers if the reviews are any indication. I did put a lot of work and research into it and got baby details from my partner's Mom. I hope to create the next chapter today. I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
ups, and here I though Mel is kind of nice in this story. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing rose. This is AU and I mentioned OOC in the story description. There's a good chance Lindsay won't alone very long.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Totally LOVED this chapter! The cats and their baby kitty! How adorable! Loved how you had Brian explain the difference between his relationship with Justin, and hers with Mel. Perfect. Also, I was glad to see they had agreed before hand that where the baby was concerned, Brian was not Justin's Master. Justin would make decisions concerning his baby on his own (though I'm sure he'll consol with Brian on all things out of respect) Glad to see Mel out of the picture, (though I worry she'll seek revenge) In one aspect I understand Mel's point (understand, not agree) She didn't know the baby could be born with shifting powers. If she did, she could have said no. Though she's a piece of shit for not wanting a 'defective' baby, (by her description) she still had the right to know if it were possible. Then B/J and Lins would have seen her true colors before. In the end however, it's good Lins is no longer embraced with her. Again, excellent chapter. descriptive, colorful and packed an emotional punch. Hey, what can I say? I'm a sucker for 'kitty' families. lol
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comments Gina. I worked hard on that chapter to get it right on many levels. I just see things are different somewhat for straight and lesbian vamprire/embraced relationships compared to m/m. Nickie my banner maker first gave me the idea and then vikinglass24 came up with it again out of no where and I had to agree a kitty Gus was adorable.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
loved the visual of kitty Gus and the daddies. Glad Lins got out quick.
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing again. Every review is important to me. I'm happy this chapter entertained you.
Reviewer: Alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 54: Second Chances
loved that daph got embraced, hope she hangs around? or visits lots from Italy. Glad CH got embraced. Like happy endings.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Alys. Daphne and Marcus will be back; Marcus is very much taken by America.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
great chapter. good backround on CH. Hope he gets reembraced, in Italy.
Author's Response: Thanks alys; we will have no more problems with Chris Hobbs. He is embraced in Italy now.
Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
ohhh wauwww Gus can shift in a baby jaguar kitten .... wonderful chapter hihi goodbye Mel
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny. I'm delighted the chapter was good for you. I hope you stay with my story and I try to update very fast and often serveral chapters quickly.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 54: Second Chances
Nice. Love your including Daphne into the story more.
Author's Response: I love Daphne! Thanks so much for your review and rating.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Oh, that was beautiful! I love that Gus can shift into a baby jaguar! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I love kitty Gus too. I hope I don't have too many Mel lovers out there. Thanks for reviewing girlfriend.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 54: Second Chances
YEA!, I've only just read the very first paragraph & I'm really happy Chris didn't kill himself, just wanted to let you know real quick. Now I'm off to read the rest of the chap! So far, so good!
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. Your on a roll now Susan don't slow down now. I count on you guys to let me know if you love it.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
OK, I don't know if I'm coming late to the party, but Chris should live. When I read he shot himself I actually said out loud, "Oh, no..." He didn't want to hurt anyone, he's just so distraught over losing his love. I guess I'll read on now to see what happens. I wanted to write this before going forward so I could answer it honestly. Thanks again for another good installment.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You can catch up now to the story. I'm about to post chapter 56 in a few minutes. the title is changed from a previous spoiler on review: "GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY".
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 55: Boy Auction
Thank you so much for all the updates. You are posting the new chapters so fast and i love every one of them. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: I'm so grateful for all the reviews and it motivates me to produce and entertain you all. Thanks very much Buffytess.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 55: Boy Auction
nice chapters. i am so loving this story. it's nice to see everyone incorporated into one story..
Author's Response: Thanks Lesley. I'm very happy you like it. Thanks for the review very much. SPOILER ALERT!!!!!: Next chapter is "BAD KITTY/BAD PUSSY" (Gus is born)
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 55: Boy Auction
Back from work and it's not 1 but 3 chapters waiting for me...All equally great as the others...Happy for C.Hobbs, for Daph', for the future baby and the parents. It's great, my evening will be great...JT, you're sooooo great ! Next chapter ? Waiting....You know I'm addicted and the king of impatience (spoiled child)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing myhazel_eyes. I'm so happy you love the story. If I can keep my eyes open (big IF) I might get another chapter done today/tonight. Maybe is all I can promise right now. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 55: Boy Auction
Loved it! MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: One boy per bidder please. I'll get you a front row seat at the next auction. Thanks for reviewing and rating the chapter girlfriend.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 55: Boy Auction
The Cullens, Gus, New York, Uber Tower, Sunshines Houses, etc. This story has so much going for it. I LMAO reading this auction chapter. The story is over the top on so many levels. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks for you review. I try to make a story complex and interesting. When I was young I was in a boy auction once in California for chairity. It was loads of fun and it made lots of money but nothing like how much a vampire will spend. The auctions really happen and everybody wins. Thanks for enjoying my story.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 54: Second Chances
Oh my god! I loved this chapter. Thanks for the romance. I think Daphne is perfect for Marcus! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I enjoy expanding on the Twilight universe and stay true to Myer's vision. They fit so well with the Embraced universe. It adds a new depth to the story line so I can keep it complex and interesting. Thanks for reviewing girlfriend.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
Shame his name is Chris Hobbs because it would be good to spare him but I think he should go. I am not sure if I base that on the Chris Hobbs in QAF or not lol.
Unfortunately it is going to bring more trouble and strife to Justin and Brian if he dies.
I am still enjoying the twists and turns of this fic
Author's Response: First sorry Joni for no answer I hit the wrong button. Thanks for reviewing. Thank you bksbracelet for reviewing too. I so love to add a chiffhanger every now and then. The result is going up in the next few minutes. I'm delighted you love my story and took the time to review me.
Reviewer: Joni (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
Great chapters JT. Love Gus, the kitties, and you have me worried about Chris now. Looking for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
Love ya!
Author's Response: Love you back! Thanks for the review and rating girlfriend.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
Just got caught up with all the new chapters. I love were the story is going. Adding Gus, and the Cullens is great for the story. I thought Justin's punishment of death was harsh until I read Hell Week and then it made sense. Hobbs sounds like trouble and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great writing JT. The cat sex was really hot too.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing George. First let me correct a prior answer to someone "I'm GLAD the sex and the story entertains you." I forgot the word glad in my answer as I was just awake and not all on the planet yet. Working on the next chapter now dealing with Hobbs. I'm very happy to see your review and know you're still with me.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
Great job, as always! oh i loooove this story!The sex was extremely hot hot hottt
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing monica. I'm the story and sex entertains you.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
Excellent chapter, so hot....and then, the cold shower, Chris hobbs. What roller coasters !!! (Moan) This is not a good sign and I feel a little anxious (especially when you ads in your reply to Gina Marie that is a very bad news). You keep me in suspense, I'm too impatient to read more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and compliment myhazel_eyes. I'll try to get a chapter out tonight. I had to slept thus so late answering reviews.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
Another great chapter. Love how the Cullens are involved. Reading those books, love how you've entwined them in this story. Excellant how Justin is being a good boy to Master Brian, respectful but playful, very Justin like.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this chapter alys. I'm a big fan of the Cullens too. Justin is going to be a very good boy and even more powerful soon.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
First...3 days of fucking! OMG! LOL Will nothing wear those two out? Chriss Hobbs? You know that can't be good news! Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Well the boys had some catching up to do going without for a whole week: Justin needs his regular loving to be a happy boy. It seems the more powerful they become the more they can and want to do in the bedroom. Hobbs is bad news; very bad news. Thanks for reviewing very much Gina Marie.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 52: Love Me Master
Excellante!
Author's Response: Danke!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 51: Gus
Oh my god! I ****ing loved that chapter. MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: Thanks H. I'm glad you liked the changes I did.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven
Reposting last entry because I messed up on the grammar in my answer: 'Damn my copy/paste failed. Sorry Anonomous but I'm glad you posted a review and thanks for your interest. I messed up taking it down. I'm very sorry for that.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 51: Gus
Glad to see Brian is going to have a baby! Gus will be a nice addition. Also glad to see Justin has a better understanding of his and Brian's relationship, though I'm still uneasy with Brian telling Justin they are equals at home, but have to pretend otherwise in public. "we must always show you are under my control." Show? So Justin isn't really under Brian's control? It's just for show? and after Dracula trusted Brian to control Justin so he not harm himself, or other vampires. Sorry, but I feel that is a betrayal. Equal lovers, yes. Shared respect, yes. But the truth is, they are NOT equal. Justin is still human, yet stronger than Brian. He has the ability to kill Brian should Brian ever piss him off enough, or if any other vampire pisses him off. Brian having control of Justin is what EQUALS the relationship out. I hope you're not changing the dynamics of the characters to please some people. You should always stay true to your own vision. As writers, we can never please everyone, we can only be true to our art.
Author's Response: I promise Gina their relationship will be exactly as you discribe. It is not just for show! Like children are taught how to act in public so is Justin made aware how important the impression he gives of himself to other vampires is very important. The equal relaxed status at home is a lover's equality but Brian is the Master. Justin will never challenge it again. Thanks for reviewing and I'll make it more clear in future writings. Dracula taught Justin how to act. He can love Master Brian and argue with him in private but he must always show respect in private and in public but much more so in public. When arranging equal terms for the new baby Gus, Justin reconized his status with Brian and ask for an equal parental agreement above the master/slave relationship. That tells you Justin and Brian know their respective roles and will follow them. Thanks again for your great reviews.
Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 51: Gus
Wonderful job JT, thank yu so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing stellakinney. I'm very happy the story entertains you. My mental hamster is on his wheel spinning out more Embraced details. When Gus hit him, the wheel almost flew out of my ears.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 51: Gus
Hey, there. Just wanted to tell you I'm still with you. I like the story and anticipate each chapter. I look forward to seeing Gus :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing edom. Gus should make a very happy addition to the B/J household. He's going to be one dynamite kid too! Let's just say Justin's seed is like Superman now and imagine the offspring from that.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
Had to laugh about their bed looking like a crime scene. I've never torn a mattress, but I did have a four poster bed which had a post come down and give my partner a black eye...it was an exciting interlude in more ways than one! Laughed again when the delivery guy couldn't get out of their place fast enough when discovering the bed destroyer was a really big kitty! lol I'm a little concerned that during B's conversation with Vic that J's firestarter ability is now so famous. Will this knowledge make him a target of fearful vampires? Ok, I get that J would need to apologize or do some form of penance for disrespecting B publicly. However, I don't understand this final punishment for J and why so late in the game? If the disrespect was considered such a 'crime' it should have been addressed at the time it occurred, not after they completed the mission where they needed J's powers. Also, if J was considered such an emotional, loose cannon why allow him on the mission at all? IMO Dracula, Jordan and B all bear equal responsibility for the power that J now possesses. In fact, it was Dracula (even after the disrepect incident) who still encouraged B to continue building J's strength. And Dracula is the oldest and supposedly wisest vampire? I beg to differ! They are all equally culpable and therefore equally deserving of punishment. Or are vampires exempt (especially old ones)? Curious to see where this is going...
Author's Response: Thanks for your review cakdg. As long as Justin is stable and under Brian's control vampires will respect him but not fear him. The problem wasn't so much the crime Justin did but his attitude as an equal with Brian. Brian gets punished to0 in the next chapter. Making Justin poweful and training him go hand in hand. Once Justin's ideas to attack the Volturi were accepted he calmed down. They dealt with the emergency first, as vampires have all the time in the world to train an embraced lover. The next chapter should make it clearer.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
A great chapter. That both Justin and Brian learned something is the best. As the saying goes it takes 2 to tango, it takes 2 to make or break a relationship. I felt Dracula was very fair in the secrecy about the whole trial. Those there can support B&J, but B&J will not be shamed by the event, nor will other Vam/Embraced couples expect a 2nd chance either. I look forward to seeing just how their lives change. Loved the visual of big blond kittie sleeping the night away.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing alys. Brian suffered much more than Justin did that week. Their love will be far greater now for this experience. A kitty Justin is so adorable!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
Um...excuse me?! You did not just kill Justin? There's got to be some kind of twist right? You can't kill Sunshine! Please!!!
Author's Response: Brian said in the chapter he and Justin had something to do for a week before going to Pittsburgh. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
what the hell? okay i know you are going somewhere with this , so i think everything will turn out alright, at least i hope it will.
Author's Response: It will be alright. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
First, I know Brian is not going to end his life. :-) Well I hope....But what a great lesson to Justin! Dracula conveyed my concerns beautifully. Justin does have too much power, and must be made aware of the 'responsiblity' that comes with having such power. I Love how Brian made him write down how many things could go wrong if he disobeys an order. He even tells Justin that he would always discuss things with him and respect his wishes. But to go off the handle like Justin did, and in public, was not to be tolerated. I didn't even catch that Justin did not refer to Brian as Master in his apology. Good call on Dracula's part. I think Justin is about to learn a valuable lesson. And I'm glad to see Dracula can imprision Justin on command. Justin IS a treat to vampires because of his volitair emotions, and his strong powers. His heart is true though, and his love all powerful for Brian. This lesson will be good for Justin. Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: You are spot on with where the story is going. This is training time for an embraced fire starter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
whooooa, what a cliff hanger. a great idea about the trial though. kinda fast on the verdict?, suspect there is more to it than just this chapter... ;-)
Author's Response: Justin's is being taught a few lessons now. All will work out; I love Sunshine too much to bump him off; it wouldn't be story without Justin. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
What? It's a Joke? Justin is gone? Oh no no no please...
Author's Response: Justin's is being taught a few lessons now. All will work out; I love Sunshine too much to bump him off; it wouldn't be story without Justin. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Me (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
I have enjoyed your stories up until now but if you are killing justin then there is no reason to read anymore.
Author's Response: Justin's is being taught a few lessons now. All will work out; I love Sunshine too much to bump him off; it wouldn't be story without Justin. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Me (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
I have enjoyed your stories up until now but if you are killing justin then there is no reason to read anymore.
Author's Response: Justin's is being taught a few lessons now. All will work out; I love Sunshine too much to bump him off; it wouldn't be story without Justin. This is just intended to scare the shit out of Justin. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
WOW that was unexpected
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Justin's learns a valuable lesson here. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 49: Goodbye Justin
Oh my god! This was an amazing chapter but please don't kill off Justin. I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Vampires take their punishment for embraced humans very seriously. Sunshine is more powerful than they are. There is an exception to the vampire code in this situation: Dracula the judge can override the vote. The question of Justin's life is now his to decide in a matter of seconds. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
loved catching up on the last couple of chapters. Loved the cat scenes. Also loved the Cullens so watched the moved. Just got their books. Can't wait to see how you use them more. I think training will be good for Justin. Its necessary as yourself and many reviewers have mentioned. Look forward to reading abt the training, sounds like you've had 1st hand experience here. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now. Brian begins the training slowly and makes Justin do some serious thinking. I really appreciate you taking the time to review alys. RL has me a bit busy but should have a new chapter completed and posted within 48 hours at the most.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
I look forward to the training. Justin has way too much power, like you said, he could incinerate Brian! If his and Brian's relationship is not that of Master/Slave anymore, as some other reviewer suggested, then that needs to be established in the story. But the stroy started out as M/s. Even if that means the slave has more physical powers. If the relationship is to remain M/s, then Justin does need training and I'm glad you are addressing it. Otherwise all that "Yes Master, I'll do anything you say (as long as I agree with it) doesn't ring true. If you want to make them equals, but if not, I love the training idea you presented!
Author's Response: Sorry for the name mixup in the earler review Gina. I've been up over 48 hours and not all together when I was typing. Justin very much enjoys and obeys the rules of M/s with Brian. This was a very different situation when he was emotionally on the edge with fear and a desire for revenge. Boys will act out of character when deeply upset and mentally unstable. At times like that they need understanding not discipline. Still Justin needs training and it will begin in the next chapter to become more mature and follow some ground rules when he doesn't agree with a command. It's worth noting that never has Justin spoken out this way once in over a year with Brian. Thanks for understanding the direction of the story. There will be techniques of mild BDSM in the future but nothing heavy. There are things of that lifestyle which are positive and others that are not. I'll not use degregation, excessive pain, sex sharing, etc, in my story. Thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
Oops! Forgot the rating slider in my last comment.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate every valid review I get. The story is approaching 400 reviews which will make history on MW.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
Another Ewww! worthy death scene...funny I didn't mind so much, it had a very pretty jaguar in it! I agree with B's assessment of J's behavior. I didn't feel that J was necessarily disrespectul, as much as it was the heat of the moment. B confronted J with his plan about the upcoming trip to Italy in front of everyone. I think he left the floor open for J's response to occur also in front of everyone. J had a better plan, he wanted to avenge the attack on his son and protect B as well. Yes, J is embraced, but he is equally powerful. Why wouldn't he go? IMO because of J's capabilities/power, I don't think B/J could have the 'typical' embraced relationship anyway. They would never be average and I look forward to their journey. Loved the visual of the two vocal, sensuous felines getting it on. Very hot! Edward's reaction to his brother's reaction to B/J cat sex was funny. Was Emmett a little bit jealous? After all, our boys didn't need to 'destroy a house' (ref. the Cullens chapter) to have really steamy sex! lol. Another great chapter...looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a lengthy smart review. Even with Justin stronger and more powerful like two men in the military the higher ranking man is in charge and the lower rank must obey orders. The military rule is obey first, ask questions later. Justin will learn to follow that rule. He is still only an 18 year old boy in a barely 17 year old body. He has much to learn before being an equal with Brian. The sub plot in the story is Brian is whipped a bit and gives Justin too much room to run in. He too has to tighten the belt of control for Justin's sake. Emmett just has a bit of attitude on him. He's really a good guy with a big ego, and the man you want with you in a fight. I'll try to produce a chapter tonight if RL permits me to.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 46: Volturi
What an exciting chapter! I'm glad Dracula is on their side and he's family too. I laughed so hard at the part of dustbusting the ashes! *g* I concur with the battle strategy and with all of the powerful allies they have I can't wait to read the next chapter. So, that's what I'm going to do!
Author's Response: Thanks much cakdg. The best chapters (IMO) are to follow. I'm glad my attempts to add humor worked for you. Please let me know how you like the next chapters too! I love to see your reviews as you're one of my best readers.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens
Sorry I haven't read/reviewed for a few days, RL the last few days has been both a pleasure (celebrated parents' 56th wedding anniversary on Saturday) & a pain (on same Saturday a neighbor was doing some yard digging/demolition and took out both our phone lines and therefore my internet connection--dratted man!). The line finally got fixed late today. Can we talk withdrawals? Anyway... I laughed at Lee's first word/thought transmitted to his Mom & Dad, how appropriate and with the oldest vampire living present! *g* Loved the vampire teddy too! The Uber Tower is getting such august tenants! I haven't yet read the Twilight series, but the Volturi kind of sound like the Mafia of the vampire world... OMG there's another Emmett?! Well, Aunty Em is one of a kind, but this could get confusing if they both appear in the same chapter. Fun how J was able to take down Emmett Cullen a few pegs. Never underestimate small humans, especially J! lol. I was surprised at how easily the Uber Tower was breached, would have thought security would be better than that. Look's like Bella's shielding powers are going to get a workout! Great chapter, lots to take in. Going on to the next!
Author's Response: So sorry to hear of your RL issues and glad they are over. I had a bad storm knocking out my internet for a day and it was horrible! I'm so glad to see you back online and enjoying my story. Constant reviewers like you are gold to us writers and inspire us to produce for you. We truly love to read all the reviews; well I sure do. Thank you so much for your detail review and rating of this chapter.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
Oh my god! You never disappoint me do you? I loved this new chapter. Your writing in this story seems to get more animated. I love it. I like how Marcus got his revenge for his wife's death. Thanks! He deserved to see the one who killed his wife burn. I loved the jag sex. I was laughing my ass off during the whole thing with Emmett. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to the next chapter. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: First I want to say secretly Dracula wanted Justin at the battle. He enjoyed the dynamics of the unique relationship of probably the most powerful embraced lovers alive with Sunshine's amazing powers now. They have transcended the tranditional vampire/embraced lover role to a whole new level. That was for you Gerri. I've been up two days and my mind is failing me a little. Also Justin was a borderline emotional wreck after seeing someone almost kill his son and learning the top vampire wanted him dead. Brian was showing great wisdom not attacking Justin's bad behavior in front of the Count who totally understood why Brian didn't discipline him...YET! Vikinglass24 thanks so much for your review. You were a major help brainstorming with me some on IM. I'm very grateful for the sounding board before I write and you have fantastic ideas mostly. Readers like you and Gerri make the writing process so much fun I forget how much work it is. I love you guys.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
I liked the cat sex, but was disappointed Brian didn't at convey to Justin more 'seriously' the severity of his actions. Of course Justin was justified in insisting he go fight, and was very instrumental in bringing the bad guys down, but like Brian said, they could have discussed it in private. Instead Justin disrespected Brian in public. In front of the Count even! Not cool. He was way to lienient with Justin. He critized Jordan for being to lieniet with Casja, but no where in your story does Casja disrepect his Master in public. He participated in orgies, but Jordan never told him he wanted to. Justin directly disobeyed an Order his Master gave him, and in front of a legend. The count. Some punishment, IMO, should have been dealt. At the very least, a strong reprimand and show of displeasure, was warranted. Brian never mentioned his displeasure at Justin, and I don't believe Justin understands how it must have looked disobeying his Master in front of others. Please don't take this as criticism of this story. I love it, as you know. Just stating my opinion on how Brian handled this particular situation. Being a bossy bottom is one thing but taking charge is another. again, like Brian said, Justin could have argued his point in private, and even made the decision to go against Brian, in private. It was his son after all. Doing it publically, to me, deserved 'real' punishment. And then forgiveness.. :-)
Author's Response: Before the punishment is over Justin will be wishing he got a severe public reprimand. The boy is headed to Boot Camp gay style. Thanks so much for your review; and I seriously here you. I spent about 1000 words inside Brian's head. Remember he's dealing with an embraced lover who is more powerful than most vampires. He could toast Brian's ass! Not that he would do it. Justin needs training and understanding. Thank you (this is not the first young man I trained :)
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 47: Load Up
Oh my god! I loved the chapter! You have never disappointed me! It's fantastic. I love the whole jaguar idea. I can't wait to read more. Love ya, XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Here kitty kitty kitty! The cats will have so much fun when they get home later. Thanks for your review Vikinglass24; me luv u.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 47: Load Up
So loving this! let the battle begin! Oh, and I hope Brian doesn't forget to punish Justin for disrespecting him in public. I'd love to read that scene!
Author's Response: I screamed when I saw this review. I'm so happy you're still reading my story Gina! Brian hasn't forgot the incident but he wants to take care of the Volturi before getting mad at his embraced. Brian realizes he has given Justin way too much power in their relationship. Brian thinks his boy needs discipline queer style later on. (woops! spoiler alert to late hehehe) Thank you so much for your review Gina.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 47: Load Up
woah, great chapters. can't wait to see them take out the volturi..,.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Lesley. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 47: Load Up
Darn you write fast and a good quanity too. Other authors post a few hundred words and your chapters are always thousands of words long. I like very much where this story is going. Dracula, the Cullens, the baby, now facing down the Volturi has me eager for the next chapter. BRAVO! The jaguars are genius too. More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you George for the review and rating. I don't watch the word count; I just belt out each chapter as it happens. I could do 10,000+ words a chapter but it's a bitch to post chapters that big on this site so I have to keep the scale to about 5,000 or less. My hamster has been spinning overtime on his imagination wheel bringing you the new developments. Next stop: Volterra Italy!
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Oh yes darlin the MFM was realistic, especially to those of us blessed to have sampled it. I really, really, admire your writing style and wait in eager anticipation for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Carlly. It means a lot to me and I hope to hear from you again. I stayed up to make the next chapter so you didn't have to wait!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 46: Volturi
Oh my god! I love it! MORE MORE MORE. I was hoping you would maybe allow Justin and Brian to take out Renata(Aro's shield, weaker than Bella) and Aro. I would love to see that. Please!
You never disappoint. I look forward to a new chapter.
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: How's my favorite fan today? I'm so glad you like the new developments of the story. You might find the next chapter very interesting too. Thanks so much for always being here for me and "Embraced" with your reviews.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens
Great chapter. I loved how you incorporated Twilight into the story. i hope nothing happens to anyone, except the volturi. can't wait for some more..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for reviewing. Ah yes; more of the evil Volturi will be part of the story soon.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens
Ha, ha! How could you?! Good writing, leaving us with that!! SO looking forward to the next installment. I haven't read the Twilight series so I really don't have a clue with all the references but I'm sure most people have & will enjoy you adding them to the story. Very clever..... Just amazing how you have this unfolding in your head. I've always been in wonder of creative people, especially writers. One of my professors had tried to explain how she had thoughts & scenarios in her head that just needed to get out & she had to write. Now, maybe she was just crazy but I've always thought that would be pretty cool but could also be frustrating at times. However it happens w/ you, I'm just glad that we get the benefit of it & get to enjoy your talent.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating Susan. You don't have to know Twilight to enjoy my story just accept the new characters as I introduce them. All you needed to know was their powers. I've described the background details and it's enough to follow the plot line for Embraced. I hope you like it.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens
Oh my god! You can't leave me hanging like that. It's so wrong. But I loved this chapter. I love how you included the Cullen's into your story. I love the Twilight series. I now look forward to the new chapters even more.
Love ya lots!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: The Cullens do bring a new angle to the story. Things are heating up at Uber Tower soon. Thanks for reviewing and rating the chapter my darling Vikinglass24. I always love to read your reviews.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 44: Kiernan Ayden Lee Kinney
i just want to say that i soo love this story, and i am always looking for an update beacuse it is so unpredictable, you never know what is going to happen. so keep up the good work you are doing with it. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review Buffytess. I'm delighted you like the story. hugs back.
Reviewer: Me (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 44: Kiernan Ayden Lee Kinney
This story is amazing. So many twists and turns. Can't wait to read more. B/J stories where they are only with each other are the best.
Author's Response: Thank you Me for reviewing and rating. More new things next chapter. I'm very happy you like the story.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Brian drank from legendary DRACULA. That's impresive!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing monica. More interesting vampires are going to show up next chapter.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 44: Kiernan Ayden Lee Kinney
I liked that Mark was acknowledged for his bravery in front of his school. Such a nice reward too, he truly was deserving. Nice detail about his Mom becoming den mother, too. I'm kind of glad that J didn't win the painting competition...nobody wins everything in life. IMO It would be rather boring too, with nothing to challenge you. Do embraced who discover a new power master them as easily as J has, or is he special? Loved the baby's name as it is inclusive of all of them. Dracula, good one! I'm wondering what his blood infusion will do to B? Will it just accentuate the vampire powers he already has or something more? Also, what would it impart to J when he takes the drops of blood? Can't wait to find out... How exciting, they're mommies & daddies now! I'm also wondering what powers he will manifest and how soon. Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
Author's Response: The baby will show one of his powers next chapter. The new powers Brian and Justin get will be just in time to save lives in their family and their children involved. Yes, another child is moving in to Uber Tower; part of a very well know vampire family with a taste for animal blood. HUM......? Wonder who they might be? Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 44: Kiernan Ayden Lee Kinney
Oh my god! I loved this chapter. I like how you introduced the first vampire into the story. I look forward to reading more about Dracula and his interaction with Brian and Justin. Can't wait to read more!
XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing me vikinglass24. Reviews are the major reward for an author working to entertain the readers on this site and far too few people take the time to say a few words. You are so kind to do it and it means so much to us. I'm glad the direction of the story meets your approval. My story is nothing if the readers aren't enjoying it. Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 42: Menage a Trois
Oh my god! You can't leave it like that! That is so wrong. I loved the chapter though and I can't wait to read the next one. MORE MORE MORE MORE XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: It wouldn't be good fan fiction without a cliff hanger now and then! Next chapter tomorrow and thank you so much for reviewing me Vikinglass24.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 42: Menage a Trois
whew.... I need a nap after that. Excellant visuals.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and compliment alys. I aim to please you.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 42: Menage a Trois
Well Well Daph, who knew she had it in her.. great chapter..
Author's Response: Oh she had it in her all night long! hehehehe Thanks for your review; they mean so much to a writer.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
You included Daphne...thank you!!! She took the news about J's new life rather well, but then again what's not to like? And as she is discovering there is lovely eye candy all around. IMO I don't think J would watch her any more than he would watch Molly (only if he had a concern for her safety). She struck me as being more the voyeur than he was anyway. I don't think she'd have a problem watching B/J (just like the rest of us), but I don't think she'd appreciate finding out he'd watched her. I always thought that they told each other everything and if he watched, I could just imagine J letting something slip along the lines of...'Jeez Daph, I can't believe you did XYZ, didn't it hurt?! Lol. They always had so much fun gossiping about their lives (especially their sex lives) and everyone elses, just as most best friends do, I wouldn't want to see that change. I can easily see them comparing notes the next day though. *g*
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Justin will not watch and they will gossip; thanks for the idea too.
Reviewer: Jas (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
Justin should not watch, he should spend his time more productively, like spending time with Brian.
Author's Response: Thank you Jas for your input. I'm really listening to you. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
I don't think J should watch. That way J and Daph can dish about it the next morning.
Author's Response: You guys are so full of great ideas! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
Justin watching would be abit weird so my vote is no for Justin watching. It would be good if it was written from daphne's pov.
Author's Response: Good point and you're not alone with this line of thinking. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Justins boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
The B/J sex was hot! Count me in for Daph gettin it good; she may never want a straight guy again. Can't wait to see where you take this next.
Author's Response: Looks like it's Daphne's lucky day! Thanks for reviewing boi.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 41: Daphne
I don't care if Justin watches or not as long as I get to watch! LOL Some hot stuff! Great chapter.
Author's Response: That's three votes now. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 32: Nine Pints Low
getting shot, that was a suprise. an excellant 2 chapters. Sounds like Justin for all the new pianos and $ is still very grounded. loved Em w/ Tom and can't wait to hear more about the boys home.
Author's Response: I like the boy's home too. Em is such a mother hen and perfect for the job and he gets to scope out the new boys and young men for a lover; he has his reasons :P
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
Ha ha Ellen, you are so funny. I know I havn't reviewed in a while and I am sorry sbout that. I have been a busy slave girl and been very tired, so by the time I am falling alseep at my computer, writitng reviews is too hard. I couldn't help myself tonight as it s just so great this fic and I am loving how it is going.
Author's Response: My favorite dyke had to show up in the story! Glad you're back and reading; the next chapters get very interesting indeed. Thanks for reviewing and rating; me luv u girl!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 31: The Curse of Fame
Oh my god! Why did you do that for? You got me crying love. Please make it better soon! That was way too sad. Please make that asshole vamp die a very horrible and painful death at Brian's hands! I still love you but that's the first chapter to make me cry at the end instead of smile. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response: The injury is very serious but Justin is very strong. I'm writing the next chapter now and will end the cliffe asap. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 31: The Curse of Fame
justin getting shot was so sudden and unexpected...cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Life for the famous is not always a bed of roses. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 30: Don’t Share Master’s Love
Loved the song 'Don't share Masters love' and Loving this story! I must sound like a broken record lol
Author's Response: I'm so honored for such a fine writer as yourself to be enjoying my second attempt to write. I'm a big fan of your work too. If you're a broken record it's music to my ears! Thanks again for reviewing and sharing your feelings.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 30: Don’t Share Master’s Love
Oh my god! I loved it. I can't wait to read about Molly being embraced. I think she'll be really happy. My love, you have not disappointed me yet. I can't wait to read more. Love ya! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Hi sweetheart! Good to see you still with me. Things for Brian and Justin will move pretty quickly now since he has became a star with problems that come with fame. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks again for reviewing and rating me.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 30: Don’t Share Master’s Love
enjoyed the private NY concert for the vamps & embrace, love the frank discussion some of the vamps will have with their embraced. Ellen and the scenes of her show were great. can't wait to see where the 15yr old vamp & Molly heads. I would assume too young to embrace, but start as penpals etc. perhaps the young vamp could be 'adopted' by Tucker? enjoying your story. Love were you mind goes.
Author's Response: Thank you alys. Your energetic review fuels me to write more. Molly deserves to be happy and for the teens they are of age to be together if it works out for them. I like the adoption idea very much. Considering the vampire is stuck at 15 an exception for early embracement may have to be considered if they love each other. Just have to wait and see how it goes. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 30: Don’t Share Master’s Love
only in brian and justin world does happiness glow.
Author's Response: Send me an email of ideas you may have to spice up the story with angst, conflicts, tragedy, dangers, etc. I ponder the meaning of your review; I hope you have happiness in your world sjmpets3. My story shows a reflection I have with my mate which hasn't been with one argument in MANY MONTHS. If you find my story lacking something I'd love to hear from you. Thanks again for your review and rating.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
WOW what a life Justin has, his talents seem to be just getting better and better. Brian will have to work hard to keep everything safe and grounded for Justin. I like the correlation of real life people that you are weaving into the fic. It shows the complex world we live in these days of how privacy is a special and difficult to maintain :)Chris
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. Justin's vampire powers are mostly creative in nature and some surprises coming up.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
I couldnt stop reading. this is a really addictive story like another reviewer says. late for sleep but had to say you have a new fan. I am going to read your other story too.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
Nice to read that Ellen is one of theirs. Great chapters as always. Waiting patiently for some more..
Author's Response: I hope to put the next chapter up today. Thanks again for reviewing Lesley.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
I'm not good w/ reviews but I do want to let you know I've been enjoying this story & I feel so spoiled w/ all of your quick updates! Love that Ellen is one of them.
Author's Response: Susan you wrote a great review! Welcome to my world of queer vampires and embraced boys who love them. I much appreciate you taking the time to tell me.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
Oh my god! I loved it. I loved that twist with Ellen. That was neat. I can't wait to read a new chapter. Love ya! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: hehehehe! glad to make you happy girl. ellen makes the perfect lessze vampire, smart, beautiful, rich, powerful, ageless, tacky, classy, and of course almost pale white skin. thanks for reviewing and rating again; me luvz u.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
great great great!
Author's Response: Me tickled you like it. Thanks for reviewing and rating again.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
Ellen is a vamp~? LOL Loved this chapter. This story is so addicting~
Author's Response: Thanks Gina! I love Ellen so she had to make an important appearance in my novel.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Excellant ch29. Love how close the community is, Ellen D. ;-) can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much alys. I'll get up the next chapter tomorrow; me getting sleepy now.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
The story was too good to stop and review. Loved the sex at Babylonn. Michaels death was cruel and so much fun I got goose bumps reading that. The NY details are interesting and makes for a comples plot.
Author's Response: You left so many reviews!!!! Allow me to just answer this one for all of them so far. I greatly appreciate a new reviewer. This is how writers know we have an audience and then like our work. You taking time to leave several reviews is very nice and raises my review count showing new people my story is worth reading. Please continue to do so if you wish to. I would answer all your postings but I'm dead on my rear now and headed to the bedroom for some well deserved R&R&I :P Welcome to my universe of vampire love QAF style!
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
that has to be the most wildest sex scene i've ever read in fiction on line. (fans herself harder and harder and harder) i felt every pentatrating word of it. far out JT!
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
I can see Craig as a sicko perv. Great story line. I wish my boyfriend has this the tongue in this chapter :P
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven
I like how justin just moved right in. In this chapter I see Ethan as bad news. Good details.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
That was so hot. On to next now.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
Man you write fast. I take a few days off and find tons of new chapters. Just got caught up with the story and really like it alot. This is intellegent plot work mixed with very hot wild sex scenes. Your writing is improving the more you do. The character's are so real like and beliveable. I like your versons of Brian and Justin more than QAF versions. How long do you plan to make this story?
Author's Response: Had so many reviews to answer this morning I missed yours; me sorry for that. Thanks for the compliments for I'm a work in progress as is my story. This story "Embraced" will be of epic length with at least 70 chapters if not more. I'd rather make one long novel than several short ones in a series. Thanks again for reviewing and rating me.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
Me like! I can't wait to read more. Hopefully sometime today! Pretty Please! Love ya! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Me luv u 2. type type type type, working on it; type type type type.........
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
Now that was a truly good read - love how the story line is moving forward - erb
Author's Response: Words fail me expressing how much your review means to me. Thank you!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
amazing that nothing can ever go wrong and everything they touch turns to gold. no worries, no unhappiness.
Author's Response: Oh there is a shoe falling soon...thanks again for reviewing and rating; me loves u girl!
Reviewer: ta2d.angel (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
I am really enjoying this story, and Am loving the way the characters are portrayed. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: JOY JOY JOY !!! (Does happy dance in his underwear around the office) I so love it when someone new reviews my story; you made my day. Reviewers are very important to us writers and let us know our hard work is apprecated. Please enjoy the story and review each chapter it only takes a second and means so much. I hope to have the next installment chapter up later today.
Reviewer: ali (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 27: Mortality Strikes
This story just keeps getting better and better....awesome!!!!!! BUT what happened to chapter 28 I no i read it before I went to bed
Author's Response: A friend wasn't happy I used his first name in the story so I agreed to change it. I'll be up shortly; sorry for the inconvienence. Thanks for reviewing.
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