Midnight Whispers
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Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

I liked this leap in the future. And I like to see the boys stand up for the oppressed...I like too what Diamond became. He ‘s too cute. I just hope that Misha forgave him after 10 years ... If not, he's even more spiteful than me and that's saying a lot !

Waou, I like a lot here...

The hamster seems in good shape ... ;)

I go to the next part



Author's Response: Casja cooled off years ago; I failed to mention it.  Later you see moving changes for everyone. Sweeping changes are about to unfold.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 79: The Days After

I just made a marathon reading of the last chapters (79 - 82) and now, I'm about to do the marathon comment of any chapters that I had failed... Yeah, I needed a little time ‘cause my love broke up with me after two years and that's all my fault... It's hard, we work together and he's my brother's best friend...

Anyway, here my comment

The phoenix reborn anew to live again (well, just like me)... I'm glad that Brian reopens the Babylon. It's true, it's a strong message.  

Thank you for this beautiful chapter, JT



Author's Response: You are becoming a new favorite reader myhazel_eyes. Sorry about the love changes for you. Maybe the next one is just going to be better. I so happy to read your reviews.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

hmmm.... kinneyville.... great idea....I like it. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you rose for your comment. The vampires love Kinneyville; the regular people of Georgia are about to freak out. This is going to be a town like none other in the world.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

Love the direction this story is taking.  Our boys grandfathers!  lol  Love it.   Great update

Author's Response: Thank you Gina for your comment. That's the kind of feedback a writer needs to move forward.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

I just want to say i sooo love this story and i don`t want it to ever end, I have even started to read it from the beginning again.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess

Author's Response: What a compliment! Thank you Buffytess! If you read about 250 words a minute you only have 19 hours of reading to go so far. God only knows how long the novel's going to be; I'm not short of new ideas. How do you end the story of a city of vampires who never die? I might create a series of the plotline in the future before creating a million word epic novel that will frighten some readers away from trying to read this story in the future. I've always loved long stories; one of my major complaints for other writers is longer chapters please! Thanks so much for you comments.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

hehehe, leave it to brian to have a city named after him. this chapter was hilarious...i loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing Lesley. Georgia won't know what hit them!

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia

I really like were the story is  going. A town of vampires is new to fiction to my knowledge. Great idea JT.

Author's Response: Thank you George. I thought it'd be a new idea too. I see lots of possibilities with this.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 81: Reunion

 

Wow... This chapter not only answered alot of questions but was funny.. Justin as a 17 year old grandfather who notices  Gus's date has big breasts!! priceless.....



Author's Response: Thanks for your review BluvsJ. They are important to tell me the story is going in the right direction for my readers. I just posted a new followup chapter too.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 81: Reunion

great chapter. love the interactions with everyone. molly wanting a baby.... daphne straight to the point too wants a baby.

Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing. Lots of new things coming to Georgia soon and yes many of them will be alive!

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 81: Reunion

This was such a cool update catching up with everyone and so cool new babies maybe on the way ... Later

Author's Response: Thank you very much KAYLIN for your review. The baby parade has only just begun.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 81: Reunion

Lovely chapter. Haha Lee and Gus straight. Love the reunion. And more babies to come.

Still laughing ... poor Lee passing out ... wil he say yes to Daphne?



Author's Response: Yes the boys are straight. Lee and Gus love girls. Diamond loves Bobby; and soon four new boys join the Kinney household. I wonder if Lee was imagining making a baby the old fashion way when he passed out? Something certainly took him down! Thanks so much for your review Marny.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

I like how descriptive you wrote about the new estate in Georgia, the villa, and your description of Dallas. It paints the story and makes for great visuals as I read. Diamond is such a little bad ass! Great chapter and looking forward for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing George and for your comments. I hope to write the next chapter tonight. 6/09/09

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

This boy is a true diamond:-) He's fathers must be soooo proud

Author's Response: Thanks for the review monica. Diamond is a special boy indeed and has enriched their lives very much.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 69: Rogue

Just amazing w/ everything you keep coming up with! Can't wait to see what they find.....

Off to the next installment before bed. I love this story!

 



Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for again taking the time to give a chapter your review and comment. I hope the story continues to entertain you and I get to hear from you again.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

Great chapter! Love Justin in action, great press conference!

 Moving right along.......



Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting each chapter Susan. Each little review really counts. I'm so happy the story pleases you.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

Love how you introduce characters & they end up being a perfect match for one of our already established characters! BRAVO for Em. Hope we get some of him & his new mate. Hopefully, embraced mate!

More drama! What a cliff hanger. HA! One good thing w/ being behind, I don't have to hang!

Heading to the next chapter..... 



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and review Susan. Em will still be around albeit in the future.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

This is so cool I love the last 2/updts was wondering if Diamond is going to find someone to Embrace .... Later

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing this chapter KAYLIN. Diamond is too damn adorable not the get a mate soon.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

 

It's great  to see everyone in the family become so close over the years.. but what happens when Gus and Lee are older than Justin ?



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing BluvsJ. The age differences will get interesting for sure. 

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

Just caught up on this story.  Wow, lots going on!  Like the 'cape crusaders' defending gays everywhere.  Loving the Diamond character, and loving how B/J have fallen into domestc blis.   Great job.  This story is filled with new and exciting adventures.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing Gina Marie. The boys are a big part of the story now as they grow up.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas

yeah for our super heros.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment alys. Once in a while the boys feel moved to act against injustice.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Days After

I like how you show family and plot development at the same time. This is pretty much a transistion chapter and I foresee a shift in the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing George. The story is shifting ten years into the future next chapter.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Days After

I love this chapter with Gus and Lee. And Brian must definitely reopen Babylon.

Looking forwards to the next chapter



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and comments Marny. Babylon will be reopened. Our story moves further into the future now with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 79: The Days After

Loved it! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting VG24. The hamster isn't tired yet so who knows?

Reviewer: Elsa Rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy belated birthday - I've been without internet for a few weeks - it's taking me some time to catch up with the story - as usual the story is still spell binding and well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the belated birthday wish Elsa Rose! It's just as good as on time. Sorry to hear about your internet but glad you're back and can enjoy all my new chapters (well new for you). I greatly appreciate your review and comments.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

I love were the story is going in the plot. It moves quickly with much detail and real life issues involved. I'm curious what new poweres Justin has. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you George for reviewing. Justin's existing powers are stronger and there will be some new stuff to. Thank you for your comments.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 65: Ten Months Later

Ah, that was sweet. A nice, easy-going, relaxed installment.

Really enjoy just the regular "day in the life of" chapters. This chapter helped me unwind from work today, thanks.

 



Author's Response: Thank you Susan; I'm delighted you liked this chapter. I have to keep the plot moving along. More excitement to come for our favorite lovers.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

HA! Brian's ending words sum up my review!!

Thanks again.

(I have SO much catching up to do, and I'm looking forward to it!)

 



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing Susan. Each comment counts and means a lot to me. Enjoy the story and please continue to review as you read. Your feedback is vital to me being inspired to write more.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

 

Just a quick off topic question... Did Emmett ever get embraced with the bartender.. I think his name was Tony..  Justin introduced to him ?



Author's Response: Hi BluvsJ. Yes, Emmett is embraced but it got overshadowed by the kidnapping of a campus boy. They will appear later in the story.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

 

Amazing.. I love that Justin can turn down the heat.. so the S.O.B feels all the pain he deserves..

 



Author's Response: Thank you very much BluvsJ for your review. Justin's very powerful now as will be shown in future chapters.

Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

fry PK (Prechers Kid) fry... once again you've done it...here's a thought i just had, in early chapters Diamond pick Joey, and Louis because they look like brian and justin...hmmmm. and with the ringing in the ears couldn't  Diamond or brian licked them better? ooo kinky thought lol.

keep up the good work.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Nicole; I'm delighted to have your comments and question. I hadn't thought of the the boys looking like Brian and Justin. It just happened that way. The ear lick isn't a bad idea but the ears are very sensititive. I think the ringing was over the next day and the boys didn't need medical attention after all.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

way to go justin and brian... loved the way justin got rid of that bastard.. keep up the great work..

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to give a review Lesley. I appreciate the compliment.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. ...How to send all your vampires in the real world, Brian & Justin in the lead ? I hate these homophobic assholes ... I swear, if I could ...

My parents told us about Matthew's story. They had been much affected because at his death he had almost the same age as my brother (my age now).I wear all the time on me a badge with the wonderful colors of our flag. I'm proud of what I am. I'm in gays associations. We give talks in schools about homosexuality and homophobia.

In France, we haven't groups like Phelps'. And since 2004, we have a law against sexist & homophobic discrimination. 

They say "God hates fags" but I think God hates even more people like them. This chapter is my wildest dream, JT 



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments myhazel_eyes. We have such a group in America but they are mostly all mouth. I was careful not to use their real name or location. I want to point out that this group is not normal. We have lots of good churches and Baptist churches that preach love; not hate. Thanks for your comments and review.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

i love them, when they are bad :-)))))

Author's Response: I so love the bad B/J team too. Shades of Rage and JT only vampire style. Thanks for your comment, very much monica.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Loved it! Payback is definitely a bitch. I love that Justin can slowly burn something now. The punishment fit the crime. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you VG24. I'll write the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 78: Eastboro Baptist Church

Great update ... Brun baby burn disco infurno ... Later

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing the chapter KAYLIN. I appreciate your comment.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 77: BOOM!

Ok I just caught up with last updates you did I love this so much more plez and I hope Justin gets to fry whoever did this ..

 

Later hope you had a good b-day and many more.... Later  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting KAYLIN. Glad to hear from you.

I'm working on the next chapter now, and I hope to have it up later tonight.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 77: BOOM!

I liked it! I find it interesting when you give Brian and Justin reasons to be all tough and payback is a bitch!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you VG24; you so know me!

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 77: BOOM!

Ok, I'm again on a rollercoaster ...! This morning, a wonderful chapter and now this one, the hint of apprehension... and me, my head is full of questions. In fact, no, my whole brain is a big question mark. Who ? Why ? 

You are great, JT...so great..I collect all the patience I can until the next update ...Please more crystal for the hamster



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting myhazel_eyes. Snort! The hamster is kicking in now.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 77: BOOM!

ohh no. thank god noone was badly hurt.. at least of their bunch i mean.. great chapter

Author's Response: I'm delighted you like this chapter Lesley and thankful for your comment. Working on the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

 

Great chapter... Alice is something else.. she's totally nuts...but is still  smart enough to try and cause trouble !!!   can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting BluvsJ. Your review and feedback is important to me. I hope to get the next chapter out later tonight.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 77: BOOM!

why are you doing this to me... every time a read an beyond great chapter..you leave me hanging wanting more....whyyyyyy. the store is sooo good you got me reading it on my cell on the bus on my way to work in the morning. i almost missed my stop twice. i need some more chapters.... pleeease.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting nicole. I'll write tonight at least one more chapter. I update really fast so there is little delay for my readers. You can see the start date of the story (about 6-7 weeks ago) and get an idea how fast I truly write. I only write one novel at a time giving the story all of my attention. Please comment again; the feedback is inspiring and important to me.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 76: Alice in Wonderland

Very beautiful chapter ! I'm mega delighted that Alice be in better mood... She's now a happy mom. This puts me in good conditions for today ‘cause tomorrow, in France, it's mother's day and we have to buy gifts. (and my moms are very hard to please :) )

"Did we as parents make our boys gay in some way Jennifer?" Ah, the eternal question...What my parents have done wrong with my sister because she is straight? Pfff......;) 

and I loooooooove « the thight diaper theory ».. can I reuse it, please ? Please...



Author's Response: Thanks for the comments myhazel_eyes. I liked that chapter too. You may use the tight diaper theory until somebody wins a Nobel Prize for discovering the cause of homosexuality was over tightie diapers!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 76: Alice in Wonderland

sniff sniffllll  beautiful chapter. wish more parents would get a clue ;-(   love how the boys welcomed her and Jennifer too. Look forward to Alice cameo apperances.

I've really loved reading your fics, like your rose colored yet visonary glasses. Keep on writing the beautiful stories....ths

 



Author's Response: Thank you for your review and comments alys. Always a delight to hear from you. Rose colored? Blood sucking vampires, wild amazing sex, intense BDSM scenes, horny kids...yet; sounds pretty rose colored to me! Hhehehe. I'm delighted my story is good for you.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 76: Alice in Wonderland

I loved it! I look forward to reading more chapter!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this chapter VG24. I had to end the Alice matter and add new details for the plot.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

glad they're helping D's mom, hopefully she'll appreciate it and not fight the boys abt D.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review alys. What happens with Alice will be in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Stupid bitch. She's only asking for trouble, by taking on brian and justin. She's insane. I have no sympathy for her whatsoever..

great chapter by the way



Author's Response: Thanks for your comment Lesley. Alice is still not mentally stable.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Well, the head is really affected.... I feel no mercy for this woman. Too bad for her if she chooses this path, she's going to get into trouble by attacking Brian and Justin. She'll lose everything.

I look forward to the next chapter. This was great, like always 

(For now, it rains here, so no surf... I'm going to work instead but I take my laptop with me :D) 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review myhazel_eyes. Yes, Alice isn't running on all cylinders so to speak. I've seen lot of rain too this year.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

Great chapter! Alice has no idea who she's messing with. She's fucking stupid. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

P.S. Jennifer is a much better mother for Diamond. I hope you write about more interactions between Diamond and Jennifer.



Author's Response: Thank you VG24. She is a mess no doubt. Jennifer is wonderful and their will be exchanges with Diamond soon.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202

Hey Honey, don't stop ! I read this chapter in the middle of the night and it's true I haven't commented on. But I really enjoyed it.

I loved Jennifer. She's wonderful.

However, the beginning of the chapter is quite...HOT, I preferred to go to bed immediatly afterwards. I know one here who was very happy to be awake in his first sleep. Don't be angry but that was my priority. :D

And now I just get up, I will read the next chapter taking my breakfast.

In a moment, my comment about 'Taking care of Mum "



Author's Response: I truly appreciate you taking the time to review the chapter myhazel_eyes. I'm glad the chapter 'entertained' you.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 75: Taking Care of Mum

I love the talks between Brian and Diamond holding a sleeping Justin with his precious heartbeat.

It's good that B/J are taking care of Diamonds mom. But at the end grrrr I hate her.

* knock knock *  you can't stop writing at this point, hurry hurry. Just kidding take your time. Your always fast.



Author's Response: Thanks Marny. Alice is a sick puppy and will be the subject of the next chapter. I have to get some sleep thus a small break in time until the next chapter is posted.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202

Hihi I can't stop reading, after reading this chapter I ran to ch75. Now back here for a review.

I like the bdsm scene, but I'm glad Brian is a vampire so that he can heal Justin's wounds immediately. I don't like marks on Justin's beautiful body.

I so love Jennifer, she has a big heart.

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Marny. Glad the story pleases you. Vampire powers have their benefits. They don't play hard in the dungeon very often; just once in a while.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son

Love Justin taking care of business. Oh, how I enjoy the Jaguar family! Another enjoyable installment.



Author's Response: Thank you Susan. I very much love to hear from you.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202

Glad the Tucker-Taylor family is so positive and welcoming to Diamond. Goes to show sometimes its the family you choose rather than who you're born to that is you real family.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment alys. It takes a family to really raise a good child.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202

This last part was so sad.  My heart clenched when diamond asked, "Why didn't my mother love me?"  so sad. I'm so glad he's got Jen now.

LOVED the BDSM scene! *grin*



Author's Response: I am so grateful Gina for your review. Over a hundred hits on this chapter and only my beta commented so far. I thought I really messed up and was contemplating the final chapter. If I don't get a few reviews then I begin to think my writing must suck now and the wind is taken out of my sails. You probably saved this story. Thank you.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 62: Romania

LOVED cub Gus w/ the doctor, too cute!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Susan for reviewing the chapter. More good chapters are waiting for you.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 74: Gay Vampire Parenting 202

Oh, that was so sweet! I just had one question: did mel come back to the family? the reason I ask this is because you mentioned that mel would cross-examine the boy and it made it seem like she was back with the family. I loved this story and the last part almost made me cry, it was so sweet. I love how you're portraying Jennifer. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: After Lindsay and Mel broke up, Mel went back to Pittsburgh and got her old job back. Slowly she rejoined the family at Debbie's house. Over time the hard feelings passed and everyone is sort of friends now. She realizes she messed up and respects Brian and Justin more than she fears them. They could smash her like a bug and she knows it and doesn't do anything to provoke them. She may or may not be at Debbie's house depending if she wants to avoid Brian and Justin. Lindsay's back in New York with Gus. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

great how Diamond is fitting in. Glad Misha and Diamond are still interested in Diamond's wellbeing even if he can't live with them.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review this chapter alys. Dracula and Misha care about Diamond but Misha was almost raped so he's very afraid of the boy vampire right now. In time he'll get over it. The next chapter is almost ready.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

wow ! you write very fast. i love it .

Author's Response: Thank you monica. I'm working on the next chapter now. I type about 50-70 words a minute so what slows me down is thinking and designing the sentences. The plot's already outlined when I start. Please continue to review so I know I'm doing the story justice and entertaining you. It really motivates and helps me write. Every review is important to me.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

Love it! Love it! Love it!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you very much girl. Next chapter is on the way. The visit to Jennifer's house.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 72 :Gay Vampire Parenting 102

I loved this chapter! I love the family aspect most of all and that Brian and Justin really want to help Diamond. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved it girlfriend! Thanks for reviewing.

I'm working on a new chapter now to be posted later tonight.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

I am very happy for Diamond. After reading this chapter, I feel full of love in this house in Pittsburgh. Full, full of love

You're great, JT

PS : Keep the hamster under crystal, It'll be in rehab after the end of this story ;)

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter. As a gay boy you might understand the special needs of Diamond at this stage in his life. He's surrounded with so much love now he's walking on Cloud 9! When I asked my hamster to stop blowing it he said he was working on his weight problem. DUH? Must be a first for that excuse huh? hehehehe

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

I just want to say that i really love this fic, and i really admire you because you write so good and i really hope to read much much more of this.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Buffytess. It really helps to get the feedback on each chapter to know the readers are pleased. The hamster in my head might have snorted an ounce of crystal he's spinning on the imagination creative wheel so fast and working on the next chapter now (I don't use; it's a metaphor). I hope to get at least one more chapter written today.

Reviewer: Feroza (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 73: Gay Vampire Parenting 201

I really like Diamond and I'm glad that he's being adopted officially by brian and justin. keep the updates coming! lovin' the fic!



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this chapter Feroza. Your reviews tell me what I'm doing right. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know Diamond is a welcome addition to the Kinney household. He's going to be a very interesting young man.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 72 :Gay Vampire Parenting 102

So much I was especially touched by the exchange Justin / Diamond,  so much I appreciated the exchange Brian / Diamond in this chapter. Communication is the main thing. Brian and Justin will make excellent guardians in the expectation that Dracula agreed (and I think so because he also loves this child )... And then, Kelly could become a kind of big brother, the age difference isn't so big between them. I loved it 

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing myhazel_eyes. A writer always is worried how a new major character will be accepted. The reviews are critical to how the story goes. I'm delighted Diamond meets with your approval.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 72 :Gay Vampire Parenting 102

sounds like Diamond will be okay. Hope meeting Molly & her vampire will be a positive experience for him.

perhaps dracula wants a son though? so diamond will eventually return to him & misha when he is not so messed up.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing alys. Next chapter coming soon. Dracula would love to keep Diamond; Misha on the other hand....

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 72 :Gay Vampire Parenting 102

This story just keeps getting better and better.

I love the conversation between Brian and Diamond. Wow parents of a teenager vampire boy.

I'm so hooked to this story, please more.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing the chapter Marny. Remember he's a gay vampire boy. They require special handeling and care. I'm working on the next chapter right now and should have it up in a few hours. I'm very happy you like Diamond in the story.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

naughty little vampire :-)

Author's Response: Little Diamond is a hand full! Thanks so much for reviewing monica.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

just speechless, this chapter is so beautiful writen

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing Marny. I too was moved writing this chapter.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

Loving Diamond in this  chapter. Poor boy.  I think Justin is just what he needs. I have a feeling I know who Diamond was fantasing about while jerking off!  lol

Great chapter



Author's Response: Thank you for the review and comments Gina Marie. We don't need three guesses to find out who his dream boy is now!

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

I found this chapter simply splendid. However,  I needed a little time to write this comment ‘cause...waouh, the more I read the exchange between Justin and Diamond, the more I had a knot in my stomach and tears in my eyes. After reading this, I talked with my father.  If I'm today this stable young adult, thanks to the support that I received. Until 12 years, I lived with my moms then they left me to my dads where  was already my brother. Without their sacrifices, a siblings with hands as big as Justin's, I could fall into a downward spiral. I had a little trouble managing the « atypical » family, my sexuality, teasing, rejection, my rejection too ‘cause I was hurtful sometimes... To be a normal teenager, it's not so easy... Vampire teenager,  I dare not even imagine what Diamond is experiencing

Sorry for my long comment but...A lot of emotions.

A beautiful description... Thanks



Author's Response: The highest compliment you can give to a writer is to say "it touched me". We usually don't realize the work it takes raising a child until we are much older and for many not until they have children. I would say you're lucky to have 2 moms and dads. That's a lot of love to get from twice as many people. Thank you for reviewing and enjoying my story.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

i loved it! i hope diamond turns out right

Author's Response: Thanks VG24! What can I say? He's a new vampire teenager with a lot of issues but he has a very smart Justin to bring him around. Like Justin told him: "It won't happen overnight but you will get better." I should dedicate this chapter to a very young boy I knew back in the 70s named Matthew. Now that was a basket case but he turned out just fine in the end. If you take away being a vampire this is his story.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 71: Gay Vampire Parenting 101

great how justin & brian can help drac out. especially to help heal a child.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing alys. Sadly this is a real life situation I've seen before. Gladly it turned out ok. A lot of my writing comes from memories.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy, Happy Birthday to you!! Hope you enjoyed your day! 

I just started chap 63 & noticed a message from the author! 

You deserve any break you want/need, we will always be here waiting for your next installment or next story!

(Your birthday gets a 10 rating!) 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Susan very much! I had a super birthday.

Enjoy the new chapters. Always love to hear from you.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee

Excellent as usual!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you VG24! The next chapter is underway and Justin shows his true colors and wisdom.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee

Boy do you know how to push the envelope and go where no writer as dared to go before. Diamond Applebee is a very complex character. I can see 8000 years of wisdom failing Dracula dealing with this young vampire boy.

I read the review you did for my hazel eyes and realized you set the plot up for some major wild stuff happening. Try not to get kicked off the website. The story is too good.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review George. Didn't Brian say to Justin in the first season I think: "You're not an artist if you don't get arrested." He he he he!

I'll stay within the rules of this website hugging the legal lines all the way.

Diamond will be a handful but Justin has very big hands!

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 70: Diamond Applebee

Too cool! Great great chapter. I expected this new update and I wasn't disappointed. Justin is full of kindness and it's a good thing for these kids.  And Diamond is the most luckiest of all. I'm happy for him. He is so young. A big big thank you 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review myhazel_eyes. 

Sympathetic characters are the secret of many good writers, for example: poor orphan mistreated Harry Potter, innocent naive bashed Justin Taylor, clumsy loveless displaced Bella Swan, heartbroken Romeo, etc. The more likely I grab the emotional purse strings of the readers the more likely my story is really successful. For Diamond Applebee to have a chapter named after him tells you he’ll possibly be a major character. He’s barely 13 so he looks and thinks like a 12 year old boy. He’ll never get older or bigger. His voice will never change and he’s a vampire. How do you parent a 12-13 year old horny vampire boy? Who can he ever embrace with? Who would want him and be a decent man? Dracula will need Justin’s wisdom with kids like never before.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 69: Rogue

Hey great to see you back!  Great chapter.  I wonder who this vampire is that turned Andrew?  More intrigue coming up I see!

Author's Response: Thank you Gina for your review.I'm almost done with the next chapter and should have it up online later tonight.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 69: Rogue

Oh hell !!!! SUPER GREAT CHAPTER. I read it before going to work, my week gets off to a good start. I look forward to the arrival in London and the rest of the aventures.

I hope you enjoyed you day off.

PS : I love my name too ;). Gehexan (Gue-he-chan) is 'Thanksgiving' in Basque. My sister's name is Ihintza which is 'dewdrop' and my brother, it's Otsoa (O-tcho-a), which means 'wolf'. My parents have shown imagination !!!! 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this chapterGehexan! I had a super biirthday and couldn't wait to return to writing this story. I'm working on the London trip chapter now and much is wrong in the biggest city of the UK. I hope to have it up online for you later today.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 69: Rogue

****ing Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm sorry that Justin got bit, though.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewingVG24. Justin's ok and raring to get to London and get the bad guy.He just messed up a good turtleneck sweater that didn't fit him anymore so no great loss.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 69: Rogue

Thanks for ending the cliffhanger so fast. Happy birthday and glad to see a new chapter so quickly. Looking forward to going to London and catching this naughty vampire.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing George. Working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy Birthday!!!

Hope you have a wonderful day!!!



Author's Response: Thank you for the birthday wishes camm. I'm having a great day! Going out to a dinner and movie tonight.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

Excellente!

Author's Response: Danke!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

well than, happy birthday and have a wonderful time.... :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you Rose

Reviewer: Birthday wishes (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

I hope you have a special day with your loved ones :)Chris

Author's Response: Thank you very much

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

hi,

happy birthday. wish you have a great day, years.

luv your story so much. keep up the good works.



Author's Response: Thank you for the wishes and comment very much

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy birthday to you !!

i will be waiting faithfully for the next chapter.

have a nice day Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response: Thank you Buffytess. Dreaming the next chapter now.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp

I'm coming late to the party, again! Thought I could catch up, hasn't quite happened.....

Good chapter, really liked the conversation w/ Dracula & the end was too funny! Leave it to Justin, he knows exactly what's going on.

Thanks for sharing...... 



Author's Response: Thank you Susan for your review. I like that chapter too.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

Oh my god! An excellent chapter!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you much VG24.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

The opportunity is ideal for sincerely wish someone so special to be warmly filled. Here are my whishes of happiness, health and joy in quantity for happy days. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROBERT !

Enjoy your day off... You deserve it.

Kiss,

Gehexan



Author's Response: Thank you very much Gehexan. I love that name.

Reviewer: FEROZA (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

HAPPY BRTHDAY!

Author's Response: Thank you FEROZA!

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

Good boys ! Justin & Brian are my heroes. I loved this chapter. Always so perfect... It's a real pleasure to read

Author's Response: I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

happiest of birthday wishes.

Author's Response:
***500th REVIEWER!!!***
 
The next chapter is dedicated to you sjmpets3.
Thanks for the birthday wish!

Reviewer: Sandy (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy Birthday

Love this story.  Always waiting for more. 



Author's Response: Thank you Sandy. Should have the next chapter up tomorrow.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

HAPPY BIRTHDAY fellow Gemini.

Great chapter, as a parent I think I would do the same as J. can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment. All parents could identify with Justin in this situation.

Reviewer: ali (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Have a very Happy Birthday and a wonderful day!!

Thank you for such a brilliant story I am seriously addicted. x



Author's Response: Thank you very much ali. I'm delighted the story entertains you.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy Happy Brithday day may you have a very special day and many more ....and thank you for updating will awite more ...new fan ....

 

Later Maria 



Author's Response: Thank you very much Maria. I hope the future chapters continue to please you.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

I said it before ... a very happy birthday .. Hope you have a couple of great days ... I'm also gone for a couple of days ... (hihi happy that I don't have to read many chapters when I get back)

* kisses *



Author's Response: *kisses* back at you and thanks for the birthday wish. See you in a couple of days.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

I love it. I hope this story never ends.

Hihi bad Justin. Even my two little girls know that it isn't nice to raise your middle finger.



Author's Response: Thanks Marny. This will be a very long story.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

When I read the title first a thought they would kidnap Lee or Gus. Later in the chapter I thought of Justin ... but he is to strong ... But one of the young boys is terrible too.

* runs to the next chapter *



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

Alright Justin. You go boy. i loved this chapter.... this story is so awesome...



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing Lesley. I liked writing these chapters very much.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

happy  birthday to you!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Monica!

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 67: RESCUE !

yeah! brian and justin to the rescue!        Oh! i say this once again- i looooove this fic!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm very happy you like the story and thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy Birthday!

Hope you have great day!

I just love this story and hope you are planning to write more for it or another one in the future.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Enjoy your days off!

Debbie



Author's Response: Thank you very much Debbie for reviewing. This story has many more chapters to go as it will be epic in length. I appreciate your kind comment.

Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!! I hope you have a wonderful Birthday, enjoy you deserve it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the birthday wish Brittani. I appreciate your comment very much.

Reviewer: qafkathy03 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

Happy Birthday!!!!

You certainly deserve a couple of days off-it seems to me that you work full time on this story alone , and as a faithful and devoted reader, I'm checking for more every day.

Enjoy, but don't forget all of your readers, waiting for the next chapter.  

Thanks for sharing with us.

 

LAter, Kathy



Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for your Birthday wishes Kathy. I'm retired and do write full-time. I'll be back swinging real soon.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING!  We'll miss ya.

Author's Response: Thank you Carlly. I appreciate your comment very much.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

oh no! poor boy:-(

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing monica. I just posted the next chapter RESCUE! I hope you enjoy it and comment again.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

great how Em got his boy. love how J wacked B when he was 'naughty'.

Author's Response: It took sixty something chapters but finally Emmett is hitched. Brian's a closet slave at heart. He messes up on purpose knowing he will get punished. They have a very interesting BDSM relationship with the lines blurred of M/s going on back and forth. Thanks alys for your review.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

Ok first off I want to thank you for writing this I love it so much I finally have reached this last updates you did I hated having to stop wish I could have read through but you have to sleep ....this is wonderful you are doing a ausme job can't wait for more ....

 

Later Kaylin 



Author's Response: Thank you very much KAYLIN for leaving me your review. I'm always happy to see a new name in the reviews that inspire me to write for you.I should have the next chapter up this afternoon Central time USA.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

You and these damn cliff hangers! Hurry up and end this suspense.

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter right now George.Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

Sorry.. It's not a simple anonymous for the last review. I just forgot to sign me. 

Author's Response: Hehehehehehehehehehe! Hit me with all the reviews you like. It's music to my ears!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

I'm waiting the next development with anxiety and impatience

Author's Response: These kidnappers have to be the dumbest crooks alive to mess with Justin. I should have the next chapter up this afternoon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !

Hey... I thought not so soon ! Well, I'm not ready to go in the water... ;). I wanted to read this one before. I'm happy for Em. I hope Don is the right one... After reading the last paragraph, the water is going to me a lot of good... The waves are beautiful. Once again, thanks a lot 

Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm glad you like it and it's really cool to get feedback and comments. They inspire me to write more for you.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 65: Ten Months Later

I just wake up and I was very happy to find a new pleasant chapter. Now that I took my dialy dose of 'Embraced', I'm going to meet my father on the waves and practise longboard with him. Read you soon....

Author's Response: Thank you very much myhazel_eyes for reviewing again. You always make my day and I just posted a new chapter. Watch out those rip tides dude.

Reviewer: complicated_identity (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son

hi,

what a wonderful story. luv it so much. can't wait for the next chapter. keep the good works.



Author's Response: Welcome to my world complicated_identity! Great to see a new name in the reviews. I'm delighted you like my story and I hope to continue to entertain you.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 65: Ten Months Later

I wish I had a Learjet. Loved the chapter and party.

Author's Response: Maybe Justin will share his Lear if you let Brian bite you! Thanks for reviewing George.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 65: Ten Months Later

great chapter

a happy birthday tomorrow, wishing you all the best



Author's Response: Thank you Marny.  I'll be 39 (again).

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 65: Ten Months Later

Wonderful darling, Wonderful!

XOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thank you! I aim to please.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

Interesting.......I didn't know anything about BDSM stuff.  

I like how Justin seems to have learned from the class & should be interesting to see how Brian's class is coming along.

Again, interesting..... 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and rating this chapter Susan. I'm always delighted to hear from you. I hope you enjoy reading the new chapters.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

wow, what a hot chapter.... i am loving this story more and more everyday i read it..



Author's Response:

 Thanks Lesley for taking the time to write me a note and review this chapter. I'm very happy you liked it.

Correction of last review answer: I really love your review.

Thanks again to everyone who reviews this story. It's inspiring.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

F*****g hell ! You put me in a damned state with this one. It was hot, hot, hot ! My evening get off to a flying start but me, now, I have to take a cold shower, or put less tight jeans or dive headfirst into the Atlantic. My vampire lover is going to roll his eyes once again 'cause I'm totally aroused after reading one of your suggestive sex scene. JT, you're the best... 

Author's Response: Thank you myhazel_eyes for the standing upright hard compliment for this chapter! I'm off to work on the next one now. I really your reviews.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

I agree with Brian.  That was fun 

:-)



Author's Response: The bashful Dom is beginning to open his eye. Who wouldn't want to be a Master for a sub like Justin! Thank you Gina for your review.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 59: Vacation

Very cute with cub Gus & Lee. I thought Lee was around two for some reason but I guess I got a good year ahead of myself!

Sounds like next chapter is going to be interesting w/ Boot Camp! 

Make sure you're getting enough rest, don't want you getting sick.

 



Author's Response: Thank you Susan. I'm going to sleep tonight and work on the next chapter probably tomorrow afternoon. I spin a lot of detail of the BDSM universe for embraced gay vampires. I hope you like it.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

HOLY FUCK! I got to change my shorts.

Author's Response: He he he he he he ! Sometimes the shortest reviews are such a compliment. Thanks George! I hope the girls like it too.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101

Hot!

Author's Response: Brian's learning his boy likes it rougher and it turns him on to no end. Thanks girlfriend!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son

Love it! Go Gus Go Gus!

Author's Response: Nice kitty kitty! Thanks girlfriend!

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 63: Like Father Like Son

I´ve never reviewed before and I apologize for that dearly. It´s a wonderful story and very well written. I admire people with fantsy and you surely have plenty of it. Unfortunately for me you write faster than I can read so I´m a bit behind. But everytime I see you updated I get excited ecause I know there´s still more to come and to look forward to. Thanks for writing this story and the banner is one of the best I´ve ever seen.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response: I am so very honored you took the time to give me a review. I cherish everyone of them. I too once read fanfiction but when I became a writer I realized how important feedback and reviews were to the author. I write lots of reviews now. Even a couple of words each chapter counts. Thank you!

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