Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2018 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
great
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
Shouldn;t be too hard. Ditch Brandon. Get Brian.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm surprised Justin didn't freak when he found out Brian has a son. And Jack...good? Huh. Sounds interesting.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2014 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, yes! I already like this.
Jennifer trying to find a partner for her son...sounds like somehting she'd actually do.
Reviewer: Sai (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2014 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hey, I loved the idea, and the story begun great, but the ending was so short and confusing.
I mean, why does Brian apologize?
Isn't it unfair to him that Justin actually never decided?
And why did he forgive Justin's cheating?
I think it needs a little bit of rewriting, anyways, it was quite interesting
Thank you
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
Another GREAT story! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
Can't say I'm unhappy! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Brian.... :(
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 5
Funny! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love the scene in the diner. Brandon, yuck! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
A little grossed out about Brandon, never liked the character or the actor that played him. Looking forward to the next chapters, which I'm off to read now! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOVE! Guess 'll be using that word a lot!! :)
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read this 1st chapter a while back but for some reason didn't read any more, Im going to now though! Wonderful start! :)
Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 8
i soo liked the idea of your story and i also like your style of writing, but i find it kind of sad, that you write so short, because you can't really get into the story! so would you write a sequel?
Author's Response: I know... I'm sorry for writing stuff so short. I'm always trying to make the stories longer but somehow it doesn't work *grin*
A sequel? Hmmm who knows but first I'll have to finish my other stories and my new one ;)
HUgs
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
yay thanks for finishing your story it was great...
I really really loved it xD
Jill <<33
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 7
When are you going to update this story... I can't wait to read more xD
Author's Response: Hi ;) I'm sorry I forgot to post the final chapter on MW but now I did Enjoy reading
HUgs
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
Nice chapter xD
Jill <<33
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ohhh me like this story :P
Honestly it sems like an awesome story xD
Jill <<33
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm having a hard time feeling much sympathy for Justin's situation. His mom set him up on the date, but he chose to date both guys and basically abuse both their trust. He's prety much getting what he deserves.
To be honest I'm more interested to find out more about Jennifer, Jack, Brianm and their interaction. Jennifer has obviously had a change of heart about the acceptability of the Kinney men or at least one of them.
But a really great original story that isn't afraid to make one of the leads less than perfect.
Author's Response: Hi ;) I'm glad you like it so far and yep... Justin is kinda shitty and so on
Anyway i'll write a bit more about Jennifer and Jack in the next chap and a bit more Brian / Gus ;)
Hugs Tina
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
What a mess!!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
ich hoffe es kommt bald ein gaaannnnzzzz langes update.... :-)) rose
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
It was just a matter of time when this would happen. I could feel Brian´s hurt and now we ´ll see if he gives Justin a second chance.
Thanks for writing, Sunny
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
BRIAN...pick Brian!!! ;)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
the first half was adorable. the second half, heartbreaking. brian fell for justin and now thinks justin was just using him. that's painful for them both.
brian won't give justin a chance to explain. if he does choose brian while brandon's away, it won't do any good.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
:o :o what...you can't do this to us...i hope your up dateing right theis second.
Reviewer: ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 5
omg! I have to know whats going on!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
very funny :-)) rose
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
I like this story...but...it seems as if Justin wants his cake and eat it too... and Jennifer sounds like a cross between a pimp and a stalker!!! lol.. I can't wait to see how this turns out...
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
loved the diner scene. daph's right. he better make a decision soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
justin's turning in a slut lol. two different men in two days. what a choice to have to make. brian vs brandon. i want to know more about brian and why he has gus and why does he have jack babysitting.
Reviewer: Draccone (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
I remember watching that movie...because I said so...and I really enjoyed it. I'm happy you wrote a fic with Brian and Justin with that situation happening to them. I can't wait to read more. I am really enjoying this. Update soon please. Later, Tay
Author's Response: Hey Tay ;) I haven't heard from you in ages. How far are you with your fics? I'd love to read something of you soon again hehe
I'm glad you're enjoying this so far and I'll try to update soon again if I find some time ;) Maybe tomorrow... I have to watch my grandma ;)
Kiss Tina
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
great couple of chapters. brian was cool, not sarcastic, pretty factual. now justin... dating and sleeping w/ 2.... can't be good. mommy needs to worry not so much who he's dating, but rather sleeping w/. ;-)
I see fireworks ahead. great story. love the twist that brian is friendly w/ Jack and they're watching gus. would love more backround on brian and family.
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
now i'm super curious!!!!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, Jack's human in this story...nice!! While Jenn is flipping out that Justin is dating the wrong guy, he's seeing the loving/doting dad side of Brian.
I hope she doesn't mess thing up too badly for them. She's so hell bent on him being with Brandon.
Reviewer: anon47 (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Is there a chapter missing? One moment Justin is bumping into Brian in the street, and the next he's going out on a date with him. To me the story is missing some crucial information; or are we to assume that Brian followed him back to the diner and realise he was Jennifer's son and then laid in wait to ask him out after she left?
Author's Response: I'm sorry that it's so confusing but you'll read what happened in the next chapter ;)
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
such a great story i hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really hope you will be able to continue with this story. You have me intrigued and I will definitely be looking for more chapters.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
again, i'm so liking this. jack if nice and understanding, brian is happy and gus is there. justin has found the right guy.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
i think this one is going to be fun.
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm happy that you had time to update this story!!! I've just love it and I've really liked this chapter. I always love reading about Gus, Brian and Justin together and I hope that you'll be able to write more soon =)
Reviewer: jemy (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
a very intiguing story! please I want more - soon!!!!
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
great first chapter
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh this is priceless! I need to read more!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
More please!! What a twist with Mother Taylor trying to find a suitable partner for Justin.
Reviewer: kb2011 (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like the way this is starting out can't wait to find out more
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
what i think is that u should soooooo keep going wit this like always i so love ur stories
Reviewer: lovesqaf (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
hey... you've got me hooked on this already! i loved 'because i said so' and i can see its kinda like the film (and if your other fics are anything to go by... this will be way hotter than the film!) great first chapter - can't wait for more! *hugs*
Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Is this kind've like 'because i said so' the movie? I like what you have so far and am very interested in seeing how you continue it.
Author's Response: Yep you're right. I just loved the idea of that film but there'll be some changes in the story line I promise ;)
Hugs Tina
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