Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17

Why oh why is this so hot?

"...Brian opened his eyes. The kid was incredible...kneeling at the foot of the bed, Justin looked at him with his best sunshine smile, completely naked except for a pair of fluffy white feather wings...His eyes went straight to the impressive boy’s erection which he, stroked absently. Brian heard the almost animal growl that emerged from his own throat, followed by the giggles of Justin..."My little naughty angel""

YUM

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: part 17

Naughty, but nice!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17

i sure hope that that's all justin has to tell him. is there nothing he hasn't tried to get over his guilt?  thank goodness for sister rose.

brian found his angel in justin's bed. sweet.



Author's Response:

Yes. Justin sure has been thrugh a lot. But you must think that he is really young and he was alone. Besides, he's an artist and of course has an artist temperament so, he goes from heaven to hell in an instant, Thank you for reading and commenting.

Yoli

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17

I love this story. I think you are truly a gifted writer. The story fit with Justin and Sister Rose. How Hunter got to know Justin and the rest of the family. I am truly looking forward to more chapters on what happens now.

I would love to see the family visit the mansion. I can just hear what Debbie would say.

Gus would love the house too!

Please keep writing.

Your fan,

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm really happy having a fan; like Justin would say Yeehah! However, I'm afraid you will have to wait for the story to continue. This was the last full lenght chapter; I'm only posting a short epilogue after this. But don't worry; this was the first story of a series and you will see the whole family reactions. I promise. Love.

Yoli

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