Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 26: Cause and Effect Is a Bitch, Part 1

I could feel it. The pressure was dropping, the wind picking up, the water rising, and wispy strands of clouds passing overhead. A hurricane was coming, but I had no idea from where and thus what hatches to batten down. Of course, it happened a lot sooner than I expected and was a lot worse than even I imagined.

Very nice imagery & foreshadowing! :)

And the fact that a blow job blew their cover - hilarious! :)

Author's Response:
Your review got me beaming :D :D :D

I'm happy you liked my use of the BJ

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 26: Cause and Effect Is a Bitch, Part 1

so what else could go wrong? all mikey's fault. should have stayed away. either from the loft and definitely the jeep.

Author's Response:
I always think Mikey should stay away...

:) :) :)

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