Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: part 16

Sometime brain can act like a two faced bastrad jerk.....why in all B/J story justin had to be nice when michael act like an /is a jackass to him. Justin still should be carefull with brain untill brain can prove himself to be a true friend/lover.

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: part 16

Hi,

Terrific story.  This last chapter ended just when it should.  Yep it was time for lunch.  So much information and so much sadness and hurt, a break was well timed. 

 

Brian to accept Justin as he is.  He said he would now he has to do it.  True it will take just a little getting used too.  Well maybe a little more than a little.

One of the first things I would like Brian to do is to help Justin contact Molly.  With Brian and a brotherly relationship with  Molly and Brian’s extended family, Justin could have the life he so wants and  deserves.

 

Michael?  I guess even if I begged you wouldn’t be able to write him out of this story.  Ok, ok, just kidding.  He certainly is a jerk.  I do think that Justin’s and Brian’s description of his behavior is far too kind.

 

Craig?  You can bury him with Michael.

 

Thanks for the story.  I have been following it from the beginning and  finally had an opportunity to stop and say hi, and to again thank you.

 

DavidR

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Brian and Justin will help each other to end their londliness. And, we'll see what happens with Michael, Craig and olly.

Yoli