Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
"Michael opened his mouth. But he was unable to say anything. Brian's eyes chilled him. His friend had never looked at him that way. He left the loft as fast as he could. He couldn’t believe it, the fucking blond kid had beaten him once more."
Ha! Michael you idiot! Your screwed up thoughts almost convinced Brian to shut down again, but Justin is too hard to resist.
That "fucking blond kid" will alway beat you!
Thank goodness Brian came to his senses in time.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Yay Brian. He hesitated and paused to listen to Michael, but in the end he did the right thing - sent Mikey away and pleaded for Justin to stay.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Oh! That was close! Mikey almost ruined everything... but Brian is finally coming around and Justin is too stubborn to let Mikey win!
Great Chapter - I'm excited to learn what mystery Justin has been hiding! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. Mikey wanted to separate Brian and Justin, because he knows that Justin is not like every other guy for Brian. But the blond is strong and stabborn and he really loves Brian.
Yoli
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Brian will alway belive other bofore he belive justin it's like he can't think for himself it's sad
Author's Response: Yes. It's really sad. But that's what happen when a person suffers from child abuse as did Brian. It usually destroys one's self esteam. Thank you for your comment.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
yes i think it's time for brian to know all about justin.
i can't believe that brian almost let him walk away again. all because of michael's jealousy. good thing he found his wallet or again he would have lost.
good chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Brian's insecurities could have cost him Justin. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
I love this story. So, please keep are writing.
I too am in suspense about Justin's past. It is a great mystery. I am glad that Brian is sticking up for Justin. Also, I am not truly a favorite of Michael during the show and even in all the stories I have read at this website.
I have loved the couple of Justin and Brian.
So, please keep the story coming. You are truly a great and wonderful writer.
Happy Spring!
Debbie
PS. I would rate this over a 10!
Author's Response: Oh. Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm really glad that you are ejoing my story that much. All the mysteries about Justin's past will be revealed in the next chapter. Hugs.
Yoli
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