Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
Justin has such a soft heart. I think that is part of the reason Brian cant resist him. Brian feels emotions are the most vulnerable part of you, and Justin always leads with his feelings. Brian respects that and regrets when his ususal ways hurt Justin. He wants to protect Justin, from himself, but more intensly, from the rest of the world of fag haters and anything else that can cause Justin pain.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
thank goodness for father ralph. at least they'll get the time to talk.
ben and hunter need to learn to rely on each other since michael is out of the picture.
Author's Response: Yes, they will talk. We'll see if Brian is really willing to change and if Justin can trust him again.
Yoli
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
Yep, I agree too. Brian is a top Ad. man. He would know how to sell something, especially himself. Bringing Gus along to see Justin was the perfect prop. Very clever writing. How could Justin resist two Kinneys’. Impossible!
Things have gotten so much better. In the prior chapter everyone was miserable. Everything now looking up, except for Michael and who cares?
Thanks for the story, I am enjoying .
DavidR.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment. Yes, things are getting better, but Brian and Justin's relationship has never been easy and this story isn' finished yet.;)
Yoli
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
I loved the way you had Brian bring Gus knowing that Justin loves children to help ease the difficulty they are having after Brian kicked out Justin on Monday night.
I really think you are a gifted writer. I am looking forward to finding out more about Justin's past. Plus, their relationship together.
I have not been a fan of Michael's. I like Ben and Hunter and sort of feel sorry about them having to deal with a whiny Michael.
Again, please keep the story.
Debbie
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. You know Brian is a talented adman and he knows which buttons to play in order to sell a product. This time, himself.. And don't woorry I'm going to complete the story
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
I'm glad Justin agreed to go with Brian & Gus ... it's not much, but it's a start! :)
Author's Response: Well. He's very hurt and doesn' trust Brian completely jet.
Yoli
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