Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For How Sweet It Is
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2015 06:39 PM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

Oh! I like the way Brian described Justin. I never thought of that. Justin is really everyone in one...and more. :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 07:16 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

I always felt some of the family didn't want to see Brian happy, but I always hoped he would get his happy ever after.  I hope he does with Justin in this fic.  Fingers crossed.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2014 01:10 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

I like Brian's reasoning.  Maybe there is hope for this relationship.



Author's Response:

Definitely lots of hope

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 05:29 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

:)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

"the perfect mask; it had protected him for a while, but, unfortunately, over time, it had come to own him." Loved this very insightful line!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

Love that Brian is actually thinking about what Justin is to him and how he fits in his life.



Author's Response:

He really is, though it's freaking him out a little (as you'll see in the next parts)

Reviewer: tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

adorable though a little wow for this to be what brian is thinking... so soon anyways.  keep it up!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you found this part adorable!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

Amazing chapter.... I like that Brian thought about how his "family" fit into his life and what role they each played... and that he saw Justin fitting in as combination of all their roles .. PLUS.. someone he could spend his life and grow old with..... I think your muse was right on target... lol...



Author's Response:

Awww...my muse will be glad to hear that :)

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

A hopeful Brian, what a beautiful thought. You're right about everyone policing his behavior and keeping him in that little box. Brian needs to break free and be brave.

Author's Response:

"A hopeful Brian, what a beautiful thought"

I couldn't agree more!

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

more more more .........................



Author's Response:

:) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

I love this glimpse into Brian's mind, the way he's recoginizing his friends' influence on his life and how Justin is radically different, and yet, someone who fits perfectly in the empty spaces in his life. :D



Author's Response:

Brian actually started noticing that when he and Justin were talking about Brian's ad (when they met)...so this is just an extension of that :)

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

-Someone…he could see himself…maybe…possibly…growing old with...- *sigh*

I love this thought of Brian...now he have to tell Justin...and Michael and Lindz listen...unbeknownst to Brian.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed Brian's musing :) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

nice chapter. wasn't thrilled that brian inadvertently tried to hide justin's belly walking through the door, but he made up for it with his thoughts alone.



Author's Response:

He didn't. He just wanted to hold onto Justin. It never occurred to me that someone would see what he did that way

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Defining Justin (aka, the Diner, Part 1)

nice to see Brian coming to terms with his feelings. Now l hope he can express them to Justin, and I hope the rest of the family wiill support him. Though knowing Lins and Mikey, I don't think they will. Like Brian said, they wanted him the way he was because in thier heads, if they couldn't have him, then no one should.

I liked this chapter.  Gave us some deep inside to Brian's thoughts not only on Justin, but on his life. 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked being in Brian's head for a little while :) :) :)

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