Reviewer: DUH (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
Actually Jane, you are incorrect. The author request reader reviews so opinions are in fact asked for. Not all reviews are going to be complimentary. A good author shouldn't expect them to be and should be able to implement criticism as a tool for improvement. Please don't swear at me too....
Author's Response: I love all my reviews; roses and tomatoes. Thank you.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
RL has been crazy here too... But I finally found enough time to comment on this chapter. I knew the family would be there to support the young mother in this difficult time... Tiffany must now take it upon herself for her children.
The story is really beautiful. I love it ... Keep the job, you do it so well...
Big kisses for you, big hug and a little peck on the lips for Mr Hamster with a caress from the tip of his ears to the very end of his tail
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza; love to read your comments. I could write a book on the crap this past weeks has been for me. I do have 1/2 the next chapter done. Me and Mr. Hamster are thankful for the love.
Reviewer: Alec Frazier (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
I like what you've done with the story. I was the one who suggested that the next step for Frank, Shawn, and Peter's relationship was double penetration. The reason why is because I believe that in a three-way gay relationship it could very well be the epitome of love. I hate to talk shop, but I have inferred (perhaps mistakenly) that you don't know what double penetration is. It is when one man takes two cocks in his ass at the same time.
Author's Response: Thanks Alec for clearing that up. I remember being much younger and trying that and it was damn hard to do. It is erotic no doubt.
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
I am very sad...... but glad that they have a very strong family unit to cope with everything.
Brilliant.
Love you
Author's Response: Pardon the delay answering; RL has been nuts lately. Thanks complicated for commenting.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
I'll miss Hunter. I like the idea of the young ones taking a stand and doing an interview.... as Brian would say 'free publicity', hopefully nothing bad happens around this Baptist bible thumper junk. ;-(
Glad you're feeling better Mr. Hamster!!!
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster is happy to be up and running again too. More on the boycott soon. Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
The family is gathered around Tiffany. It’s the support she needs to progress and not to sink into despair. She has her daughter and the unborn child, she must move... They will be the driving force for her.
I’m longing to see the counterattack against the Baptists. Between Jerry and Brian, they’re going to have a terrible backlash
Superb chapter
Big hugs
Author's Response: Hopefully Tiffany is young and will recover quickly; as you say she has to think about her kids. We'll have to see what the PI's can dig up on the Baptists. Hugs back!
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 181: Coping
Love the story, as usual.
Possible typo, Mark says: "I want to invite Mom and Roan to come stay...."
It should read "I want to invite Tiffany and Roan to some stay with us..."
Mark would not call Tiffany 'Mom',
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know about that; I've made the correction. I had Zack on my mind at the time I was typing. I'm delighted you like the story.
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