Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Ah, McLaren is dead. That's all this pervert deserves... Lindsey will have to cope alone. And she met Claire. With her, she will be able to view things from a different angle

Very good work

Big Love

Author's Response:
Things will improve over time for Lindsay. Love back!

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

An expeditious settling of scores for this Mister McLaren. Speed, efficiency ! Jerry and Ricky work as a dream team (Army of Shadows)... Lindsay and Claire become friends, lost souls meet. Fortunately, Claire is loyal to her brother now otherwise this association could be disastrous... Brian and Justin are now well up on the danger which has threatened the kids. Vigilance will be even more effective.
Excellent chapter

Big hug

Author's Response:
Jerry and Brian don't mess around where the kids are concerned. Ricky knew who to get and what to do without saying a world about it. The guy was such a sleezeball nobody gave a damn either. Big hug back !

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Jerry does not mess around where his kids are concerned. Claire and Linds was interesting too.

Author's Response:
Jerry's one tough cookie where people he loves in concerned.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

Jerry, smart man.

Glad Claire and Linds had their talk. Hope Linds takes it to heart.

Author's Response:
Jerry's a complicated man; Lindsay will not make trouble.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 176: House Cleaning

WOW!!!

Bye, bye pervert.

Hope Bri will be ok. I want him around a long time too.

Good job.

Kiss. Kiss. Kiss

Author's Response:
Funny how the man could be taken out and no one ever said a word about it to make it happen. No conspiring done; no crime, and nobody knows who did what. Glad you liked the chapter. Kisses back!

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