Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
Gus did the right thing sharing these painful moments of his life with Jenna. She will be a great comfort for him. I love Brian in this chapter. He’s clear in his warning to Lindsay… I hope she will understand the message. Anyway, Gus doesn’t want to see her. He’s still the most directly affected. And now he has a family to protect.
Jerry is great. He’s one who knows to handle the art of manipulation
Super Chapter
Author's Response: Gus is very close to his wife and wishes to hide nothing. Also, Gus is struggling with the Lindsay issue and it isn't over yet. Hugs!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
Jenna knows now about Gus’mother. Brian is very threatening in his talk with Lindsay, but he has good reasons for setting the record straight. Jerry is wonderful. He handles very well the careers of his young actors. He acts masterfully with Disney. I love it...
Excellent
Kisses for my favorite writter
Author's Response: I don't think Brian would really hurt Lindsay or he would have already done it. Jerry knows the business of Hollywood and how to make the deal. Kisses back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
It is so fun to read this chapter.
I like Jerry push some button, before he accept Disney offer for the boys.
Good job Mr Hmaster.
Big hugs.
Author's Response: Mr. Hamster takes a low bow. Jerry's a smart man and now plays hard for the gay team. Big hugs back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
Jerry is a very smart businessman. The boys get a great opportunity with Disney making big bucks. Kinnetik is rehired by Disney. When do we learn the sex of Gus and Jenna's baby?
Author's Response: Glad to see you reading again; I wondered about you. Next chapter the baby's sex is learned. Thanks for all the comments.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
As I read that Disney dumped Kinnetik because it was owed by two gay men I expected Jerry to curse him out and hang up but he did better - he upped the price for Zack & Devin by 3 million each and Kinnetik is re-hired. That was great.
I'm really enjoying reading about all of the combined children and lovers - and how their lives are going to develop. This could be a never ending story - how great it that.
congrats to you
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments Jane. If I keep getting chapter reviews I'll keep writing even a longer story. It's up to the readers to show me their continued interest for the story to go on. (hint-hint everybody)
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
great chapter, hope linds fades away... grandparents rights....
Author's Response: It wouldn't be a story without a bad guy or two! Thanks for commenting alys.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 172: Surfing Boys
I don't know about the 'parents' accepting an offer without talking to the kids first. If I were one of them, I would not be too happy about it.
Author's Response: They're 10 year old boys who really love acting. However they have to agree to the project before the parents sign them up. The parents know the boys well enough to know they will want to do the Disney project since they enjoy acting so much. The parents worked out the best deal before telling them about it. No contract was signed until the boys agreed they wanted the project. Thanks for commenting.
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