Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On
Poor Vance ! That’s was a close call. It’s time he cares about himself and takes his retirement. He’s too old for all this crap… All this stress isn’t good for his heart. Anyway, nice from Brian and Justin to come to see him...
Ah, the spies were caught... They were lucky to get a friendly guard. I got a very very angry brother but he didn’t tell our parents… (phew)…
Super, bravo
Mr Hamster did a great job, as the writter
Author's Response: Vance was lucky; 33% of first heart attack victims don't survive it. Kids will be kids; the guard handled it without making it a huge issue or making his job protecting the young boys harder by getting them against him. Thank you for the compliments!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On
I liked this chapter. The training continues, Gus and Jenna have even the opportunity to go on their honeymoon. Everything is fine except for the poor Vance. It’s right he deserves to retire. He must follow Justin's advice and enjoy his time... I loved the bodyguard with the little spies. They are lucky that the man is so kind with them ...
Superb chapter
Love
Author's Response: I have to fix dinner before answering all my reviews but I want to answer this one; you're the 1,700th reviewer! The next chapter's dedicated to you Ihintza. I'm delighted you enjoy the story. Love back!
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On
The training goes into full swing. The honeymoon happens and sounds like they had fun. Vance retires and I wasnt' expecting that. The spies get caught but the goon is cool and lets them off. Fun reading.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 170: As Time Goes On
I like this chapter.
What a price to pay to be a star. I think I love every minute of it.
Kid want to know everything & it is the right decision to gevi Zack & Devin a second chance..
To answer yor Q, JT.... I am from Malaysia. In my country, people living in the city rarely getting married so young, but in the village or "kampung" in my langague they still practicing it around age 15 years old not younger then that.
Author's Response: Thank you complicated. You live in a beautiful country. I hope the storms you get aren't bad for you. Thanks for commenting.
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