Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

Claire is such an idiot. John was great standing up to her. The sex was hot and the scene with Kent and Claire had me going there for while. Fun read.



Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster is glad you liked it.  :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

im glad claire got put down.  great chapters. thanks  deb



Author's Response:

Thank you very much deb; I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.  :)

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

I love sundays when they start that way...

Well, go back to comment. Claire is a bitch. At least, Joan had tried to understand with the help of Debbie. Claire hasn’t even that intelligence. She bites the hand that fed him. Brian found her a job, paid her house… She’s useless. She is not worth bothering with… Brian is right to throw her out. John will stay with Brian, Justin and Peter.

Excellent

A big thank you to all the good times

Big kisses



Author's Response:

Claire is at the middle years when some women go nuts not to mention she's a controlling attention seeking freak. She runs her mouth without thinking and this time she didn't get away with it. Big kisses back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

Claire is really unhealthy... She makes no effort to move closer to his family. She doesn’t even to force herself to try. She has no love for his brother or his children. She deserves to finish in the gutter, really ... What bitch!

John is wonderful and courageous. He assumes his coming out against his mother. Brian can be proud of him.

Superb chapter, excellent work. You're the best and so Mr Hamster

PS : Hi, hi, hi… Gex went back to bed. He seemed a little uncomfortable in his jeans



Author's Response:

Funny you mentioned finish in the gutter...

Brian and Justin are very proud of John. He and Kent make a wonderful addition to their family in Malibu.

Thanks for the Twitter on Gex; I love to hear my story causes happiness.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

greate updates i want to read more soon.

Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

I wrote half the next chapter before sleeping last night and today. I should have it finished soon. Hugs back!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

hopefully the bus ride home will be educational for claire. glad john stood up to her.



Author's Response:

Brian did give Claire enough for a coach seat on a commercial jet home. It's not much more then a bus fare anyway. He threatened her with the bus to slap her down and it worked. John's a strong boy and very smart too. The new lovers give Brian and Justin a new project to get excited about; teaching them how to get rich in real estate with some help. Claire's misfortune has only just begun. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

Claire never learned, did she....     But John did  ;-)



Author's Response:

Claire gets to learn the hard way; John gets the easy way. Life goes on. Brian will tolerate much except wasting money. Claire fu*ked up big time and doesn't realize it yet.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 154: Showdown

Good job John.

Another stupid bitch. Bye, bye Claire.



Author's Response:

She's Joan's daughter; she can't help herself being a royal bitch. At least Joan wasn't stupid; just misguided by religion. I felt it was canon the way she was always such an attention freak like at Jack's wake crying constantly and the funeral graveside. There is still the theory that poor emotional bonds with a wise mother leave young boys looking for greater emotional attachments like them find with a boy and not a girl or woman; IMO. If a boy can go either way it can push him to the gay side very easily especially if he's cute! He gets more offers to play!

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