Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forever Yours
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

Aww! My baby had his first date! Very cute and such a gentleman! Good for him!



Author's Response:

It helps to have rich dads too! hehehe

Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

Ah, first girlfriend… It's a great moment in the life of the teenager. Gus seems to have found a nice girl with Jenna. Justin is good advices for this first date. I like the talk with Brian and Justin.

Super Chapter



Author's Response:

Gus is very mature for his age. The magic between Brian and Justin is what makes their relationship so great for us. Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

This was a fun chapter. I was always interested in karate too. The date was so 14 years old and perfect. Gus and Jenna are off to a good start.



Author's Response:

Having a date at Gus's age is all about just having fun and getting to know each other. Thanks for your comments Dave.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

Hi, Jenna ... Welcome in this beautiful story.

Gus is a wonderful boy. I love this emerging love story between the two young. Jenna seems to be a nice girl. Well, Gus is now a young teenager. His parents are going to deal with  this change. But they are lucky because Gus is enough brilliant for going through this transition. I don’t know if his parents will manage this first love. In any case, they are good advices (Brian with Peter and Justin with Gus). In 10 years, I hope Gex will help us with Txabi and later Maialen. After all, he is preparing for his master's degree in child and teenager psychology ;)

Big hug for my favorite writter and his little friend Mr Hamster



Author's Response:

I woke up to find your comments; what a great way to start my day. I hope to do Jenna and Gus justice in my writing. Gex is studying an interesting major. Big hugs back!

Reviewer: Sake (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

I was so excited when I read this.  My name is Jenna!!!



Author's Response:

I always loved that name. Thanks for commenting Jenna.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

As always B gave Peter good advice...

I loved the teasing and easy conversation between Gus and his dads.  His first date! Sigh, they grow up fast don't they?  It seems like it was just yesterday that Gus was seducing a girl friend with half a chocolate bar.  *g* 

Jenna sounds nice and Gus deftly handled the question about his mother.  What is happening with Linds anyway?

Another goody, on to the next...

 



Author's Response:

This was a fun chapter to write. Lindsay is awaiting trial for drunk driving and has all but gave up on Gus now living out of state. She has been told she has no legal recourse regarding Gus or visitation. Thanks cakdg.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

I like how Gus handles the talk about his mother with Jenna.  Rather going into the whole mess, saying that his mother was a surrogate was a good way to handle it.

By the way, what is going on with Linsay anyway???



Author's Response:

Gus is very clever and has no need to spill his laundry with anyone. Lindsay's out of the hospital and waiting trial; her attorney is delaying it as long as possible. She has given up on seeing Gus since he lives in Malibu now which really pissed her off and he didn't say goodbye before leaving. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

aaaaaw gus's first date.... aaaaaw. love how he answered the mom question.

Author's Response:

Gus dodged questions about his mom by bringing up the movie star Mark next door. He's learned a few tricks from his dads. Lindsay's still a sore subject and he hasn't had any contact with his mother in many months. Thanks for commenting nicole.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

Thank you for the dedication. It's make me feel good.

A kiss for you JT. A kiss on top of your hed Mr. Hamster.

Take care.

Big hugs.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for being there and commenting. Readers like you make it fun to write the stories for you guys. You carry the ones who don't review; otherwise my interest in writing would fade. Big hugs back and Mr. Hamster still has a thing for you only.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

loved gus and jenna



Author's Response:

He does sound adorable huh? Jenna's smart to hook up with him; he's a good boy. Thanks for commenting alys.

Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 132: First Date

I love this chapter.

Gus is straight & Brian trying to pull his leg. LOL.

Gus is a gentleman, and I think he is in love.

Love you.



Author's Response:

Gus is very bright and it would take more than that to get to him; he's very comfortable with his father's bullshit. Love you too and thanks so much for commenting complicated.

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