Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
I was surprised by the jump of 3 years, but enjoyed the tour of Mark's Island.
J won his bet about Peter, Shawn and Frank. Frank sounds like a nice kid, hopefully the trio can handle a long term threesome relationship. It should be ok as long as they handle their expectations of each other. Curious how the rest of the family will respond (especially explaining the relationship to the younger ones as they've only seen couples in their midst).
I'm also wondering how Linds has behaved in these intervening years?
Good one and on to the next...
Author's Response: I have to make time jumps to keep the story moving or I'll take a lifetime writing a lifetime of B and J in this story. Gus and Devin will be told he's a good friend and won't know any better. Lindsay was ok for a while but that changes as you'll soon see. Thanks cakdg for your review and comments very much.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
YES… I LOVE IT ! Franck seems to be a good boy. He’s lucky. Peter and Shawn are lucky. And I know he’ll leave with them and Brian, Mark and Jerry are going to lose the bet. This is exactly the chapter I needed today.
Thank you, my love
I enjoyed this chapter
Author's Response: Frank is a doll and very nice. I had fun writing this chapter very much. Love back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
Brian and Justin join Mark and Jerry at the Island Resort and me, I join my moms and Gehexan for the big breakfast (but we're not the last still missing my elder brother, his boyfriend and Tomas. Txabi, my husband and my dads left to hunt mushrooms in their secret spots…)
After three years, this gay paradise is a real success. They will all spend some quality time and especially Peter and Shawn. Lucky boys… Frank seems an adorable boy. I'm sure they'll be good friends.
Superb chapter
A tons of kisses for you and your little mate ...
Author's Response: I have to make time jumps to keep the story moving forward. I'm happy you liked the chapter. Kisses back to you too!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
Ohhh...... Young blood. Hot!! Hot!! Hot!!
Love it! Love it! Love it.
Lucky Frank.
Mr Hamster, hope you getting your Hamster time on the corner(wink, wink)
Kiss, kiss.
Author's Response: That was a fun chapter to write indeed. Mr. Hamster blows you kisses and sends his love.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
'hang up the boys spurs' cute
Author's Response: You caught the metaphor of a hired gun slinger and a hired stud. Thanks alys.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 122: Three Years Later
Mark's Island sounds fantastic! It really is a gay paradise. The sex with Frank was a very special treat for us, and I hope to learn more about the island and more hot three way sex with the boys would be very nice. If they don't take Frank home I will. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I might get out one more chapter tonight and it will have what you ask for (you read my mind). Thanks for commenting.
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