Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
Sorry for not reviewing in awhile. Had a family medical emergency and rushed out of the house without my laptop. I'm back home now and can settle in to read my favorite story. I have to catch up!
All the boys had a lot of fun ringing in the new year.
Linds is slipping. Gus is a smart kid, but he hasn't really been exposed to emotional manipulation on a par of what Linds could be capable to get what she wants. I mean he knows about his own abuse by her in the past, but does he know what drove her to it (that she has/had a thing for B)? I think the more that she is thwarted in controlling the situation with B and Gus, she will keep slipping.
Interesting details on the island...737 acres can have many microclimates and the beaches on each side of the island can be totally different. It makes sense to have a thorough understanding of the island before making any decisions about the resort.
Another goody, on to the next...
Author's Response: Welcome back! I hope all is ok in your world now. Linds is certainly on a slippery slope again. Gus can read his gut and know something's wrong. He doesn't know about her thing for Brian however; too much information for the kid. You're right about the size of the island and the many environments. Thanks for commenting and enjoy the new chapters cakdg.
Reviewer: Myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
Justin throws himself completely into the project. Knowing his seriousness, he will take all criteria and all possible informations into consideration for the safety of guests. The idea of the harbor isn’t so bad.
Gus is right to talk about Linds with Justin. If Brian knows, Linds can say good-bye to her right of access.
Good chapter
Kisses
Author's Response: The harbor is a must have due to huge waves especially in the winter time in Hawaii on the north islands where there island is located. Gus is smart and sick of his mother's shit. Kisses back!
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
Tonight, we’re waiting for Gex. Because of strong rainstorm and huge floods in the Basque Country, his train has been stopped in the neighboring département. Tomas left to pick him up. So, in the meantime, I comment on the latest chapters that I read.
The project gets under way. Justin is totally invested in this product to the point of putting the fly training off until later. The idea of a harbor as protection is a good idea.
I want to slap Linds in the face…
A great job,
Big love
Author's Response: I hope Gex is ok. Let me know. Lindsay gets worse over time. Big love back!
Reviewer: complicated (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
Ohh... can't wait for the resort.
Gus is very good. He is mutare beyond his age.
Sorry if I make not sense, I am so sleepy.
Love you.
Author's Response: You're making perfect sense. Get some sleep and the chapters will be waiting for you. Thanks and love back.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
hope linds listens to gus and doesn't drop off the sanity wagon.
Author's Response: She better or she could lost all visitation of Gus if she pisses him off. Thanks alys for commenting very much.
Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
i can see it now linds if going to f*&& it up for herself... at this point she's f(*& herself over first abuse.. now thinking the one you abused and lost custady of will come back to you as if nothing happen.. please
at this point linds please mess up i never thought i'd see the day mikey was smarter then linds wooow
Author's Response: Michael had some sense beat into him; Lindsay hasn't (yet). Time will tell if she screws herself. Thanks nicole.
Reviewer: Dave (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 121: Initial Research
Very interesting information about Hawaii. I'm looking forward to the resort and the island when they get done.
Author's Response: The weather is very important how they design the resort, the huts, etc. Thanks Dave.
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